Originally posted by: spvd
Hey dear am so happy u posted the next part………………..very nice part and very interesting also……………….swayam will never change and never will stop himself from getting insulted…………………poor him……………yash and laughing at chah and his cute irritating acts were very nice and lovely………………wonder what swayam is planning that hes quiet now……………….oh this yash na feel sorry for chah she was at the listening end……………..first time yash is shouting at this extent at chah……………..good that prerna told chah to tell her feelings and chah too is now looking for the right moment……………….cant wait for the moment yash will and chah will their love confession…………..this lalit na he always has problems and unhappy with whatever happens in the house…………….what does jurrath and begairrat mean????????? And trishna is really more than I thought…………maya is very much better when compared to trishna…………….the lady is really ugggggggghhhhhhhhhhh………..but in many places u haves typed the wrong names……………sorry for the critic but in one place instead of swayam u have typed yash and in the end prerna slapping trishna u have typed chah…………….check them…………cant wait for the last part and also the union and all's well part……………..regarding the next part it will be yash chah race to remember and their love confession………………lalit feeling guilty and left alone and realizing his irreparable mistakes and swayam thrown out of the house and yash and chah love and romance and happy ever after life……………….hope am right with all the guess………………cont soon dear……………and I don't mind the long long extra long part………………..
And about the one shots or short shots or a new ff well I would want a regular time to time updates dear with limited gap in between………choose which ever u feel will be possible without a very long gap…………….and my wishes for ur cousin………….
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