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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey

awwwwwwwwwww........................

dat was sweeeeeeeeetttttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeeee prt

luvedddddddd ittttttttt

cont super sooooooooonnnnnnnnn

luv ya n yak care
mahru


thanks mahru😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ superb😊😉 so sweet😳 armaan is impossible😆😆😆 omg he is so confident🤣🤣🤣🤣 that u should dream bout me😉 plz continue it soon😊😉

"na chaho itna k chahaton se dar lagta he
na ao itna kareeb k judai se dar lagta he
apki wafa per bharosa he
per apni kismat se dar lagta he."



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ superb😊😉 so sweet😳 armaan is impossible😆😆😆 omg he is so confident🤣🤣🤣🤣 that u should dream bout me😉 plz continue it soon😊😉

"na chaho itna k chahaton se dar lagta he
na ao itna kareeb k judai se dar lagta he
apki wafa per bharosa he
per apni kismat se dar lagta he."





thanks nidha😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey harika
gr8 chemistry b/w AR i must say ridz is quite naughty n so is armaan omg i was laughing like hell on that pinch scene lolz
gr8 part dear
um sorry for late comments had internal exams goin on
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey harika
gr8 chemistry b/w AR i must say ridz is quite naughty n so is armaan omg i was laughing like hell on that pinch scene lolz
gr8 part dear
um sorry for late comments had internal exams goin on
update soon


thanks prerna😊 i m happy i cud make u laugh
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Posted: 16 years ago
hiya harika!!
wer r u ??
u said u wud update it on evry sunday!!
hmmm...pls update na!!
cnt wait 2 read de nxt part!!
pls do cont soon..
luv u lts
crazy ashu
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Posted: 16 years ago
hahaha...m in splits now..look at poor ridzie...armaan ambani??? god!!!wat was dat!!!!lolz...
m just loving it harika...very very much!! please continue soon hun..
luv,
anu.
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Posted: 16 years ago
reserved for a couple of days
edit:
Hey Harika
awsome update hun
as always I read it on sunday itself ,but cudn't comment,was busy wid a few things
loved the part Harika,armaan ambani was hilarious
and her resistance to call him and dream about him for 5 nights in a row was cool
i liked the bit when u talked of her being a total different person at work,thats was so like me
wonder how this not coincidental meeting will turn out
loved the sequencing of scenes
again the language so simple but real,felt it all and couldn't stop smiling
fab part sweety
can't wait for another rocking sunday
love
Hina
Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
reserved...wohoo harika the part is here!


*edit*

wow...dam harika....u ytaking this like a pro..u delve into her thread of thoughts flawlessly, i can see myself as her, not just coz of blaring similarities, i think if i was a stark contrast to her i wud still see myself as her....such utter completeness of protrayal....i loved it....n then non chalantly u let extra chars fall in ...keerti, abhi...perhaps all non consequential....but just in case u need a fall back there are here now n well introduced...kudos girl, like i said u take it like a pro....

my fav bit was def muski's call cant wait for themt o meet, cheesy me!...but my fav line....its was about her sleep flying out of the clsed window she not knowing how n then it returning in the early hours of the morning....i can't tell u how n why...that line was such a catch....im so tempted to steal n use it somewhere, i possibly will be found e quoting it soon in some random part of my speech telling ppl abt a sleepless night of my own....it was just perfect....!

cant wait for next sunday already...dam its such an addicting spell!
Edited by spln - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Its superb
and waiting entire week for you to post your story is worth it

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