~My Only Desire~ Part13-pg107 NOTE pg 113 17/07

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#111

JJ wat timin..reserved :) *edited*

had to run to get smg..m bck! neways..luved d update..you did a fab job wit the whole..thing..leavin d house..contemplatin the consequences nehow..goin 2 d rest..anticipating..d wait..and ten dissapointment..ahah knew dt was cumin..bt ten it was a surprise..wen tey went 2 d studio and..actually saw him...ahah!! those thoughts...were brilliantly potrayed..dt was super gurl!!
i recollected a scene id picturised bfr..for smg related..ahha!! ya yaa!!

grt goin!! :D luv d flow!!

nij =)

Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago

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Huma

@HS.KaSh

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#112

wow jia superb update..............liked it a lot

it was an amazing experience to read it......especially ridz's thought it was sounding like as if happenng in real

excellent .................i hop ridz wud not faint when she'll shake hands wid arman....hahhahahha lolzzzzzzzzzzz

chandni

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#113

reserved

*edited* third dats pretty bad!!!!!!! 😭😭 still dee u r awesome 😉😉😉 !!!!! i mean i cud soo imagine u doing all dis here!!!!! 😆😆😆 at long last our hero makes his gr8 grand entry 😳 !!!! gosh u portrayed deyr excitement to meet our greek god so flawlessly !!!!!!! all dose butterflies in d stomach n d weird feelings sooo true guess dat wud b d case wid every crazy fan about to meet him !!!!!!!

but d disappointment was pretty bad well i say wat wud happen if KSG actually cums to some hotel near ur place wat wud u tell aunty 😉😉??????? okieee cuming back as dey say every dark cloud has a silver lining dey finally reached d sets!!!!!!! god dee wen wud u do dis???😳😳😳 n den d chaos n taddaa his musical voice calling ramu kaka!!!!! oohhoo why all kaka's are named ramu i dun understand??????? 😆😆 okie am just in a very typical mood dats why ......

Looking every inch of the Greek God I had imagined him to be. Black and red combination of shirts, his trademark dimpled smile and his mischievous eyes, I found myself lost in the admiration of the ebony luxuriance of his lashes, the smooth olive planes of his hard cheekbones above the roughened skin of his jaw line and the pure masculine beauty of his wide sculpted mouth

aahhaa u imagined him in ur fav black n red combo well he does luk lethal in dis particular shade dee!!!!!!! 😳 ur decription of his absolute flawless features left me amazed !!!!!!! gosh i was so mesmerised n was like i dunno wat u wud do if u met him well i kind of know dat 😉😉 but if i get dis chance i wud have shreiked n u know my usual volume is alreday so high pitched his eardrums wud blow off hearing my pitch 😆😆😆 still u have to leave us hanging in d mid way didnt u???? OUCH dee cont soooooooonnnn naaa puhleeezzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!

loads of love

aravi

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#114

luvd d way xplaind in detaill
all r conditionz wld b lik dis only if we eva saw ksg
brilliant dearr..
update soon

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#115

amazing update jia👏

yay! ridz met armaan😆, i wonder what she's gonna say?

u[ate asap😳!

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Fabulous part, just loved it, pls continue soon.

Kashish

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tannvi

@Badtameez_Dil

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#117

jia just read ur this ff

its absolutely amazinggggggg

very different & interesting story line.......

its that we all fans relate 2 .............loved reading it

& ur 2nd part is superbly amazingggggg

hope u will continue soon

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

Hey Jia ... first of all the concept is thrilling. I mean I can imagine almost any gal around in Riddhima's shoes. Head over heels crazy for Armaan aka KSG. And you actually putting all these emotions in words. I mean what was that stunned reaction from Riddhima when she sees Armaan or her disappointment of not finding Armaan in the restaurant. God cannot be so bad ... just making one Armaan 😭

Waiting to read on and dream such an event ... 😳 Am sure I'll kidnap him (may that be just for 10 mins). But for that, may be I'll have to reach a state where I cannot remain sane without meeting him. And with you people around, I see that approaching a bit too soon. Ha ... never mind my blabbering!!!

Cheers,
Suvarna

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#119

wow jia...great part hun all the fluttery jittery butterfly in the tum reactions the gush of disappoitnment n yet the hope to tryy all over again....it was all very well portrayed...

n the hero makes an entry at last...wow this is a such a fazed tale....like u read n know it cant ever be n yet u read on wondering if dreams cant come true ever!

kudos girl, it was all dam dreamy n good!

Edited by spln - 16 years ago

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mahru

@mahi4u

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#120

hey jia

awwwwwwwww.....................
dat was a rellllllyyyyyyyyyy sweeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeee prt 😉😉😉

luvedddddddddd it

cont super sooooooonnnnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

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