Pyaar Ishq aur Mohabbat(AR)...Part 17 utd @ pg 73 - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bomarillu


Hi Sri,

Nice twist in the story,

But what i feel personally is, What he did was wrong what ever may be the reason.

First thing is, He brought personal relationship into the Business.
Second thing is, for the busines fights or for the talks they had between themselves, Ridhima had became the victim.

Inspite of knowing himself that, he fell in love with Ridhima he shdn't have come to a decision that he will marry someone else for the business sake or for the revenge 🥺

Anyway nice twist which was never expected so soon 👏

With Love,
Prathima.. ❤️

Hey Prathima........Thanks for the reply....
I know what ammy did was completly wrong yaar......and Ridhima had to become the victim of their business rivalry......hmmm anyways people do commit mistakes when they are angry in real life too.....So take it easy dear........😊
And about he falling for ridhima and all....it was just blooming and he was not committed to Ridhima officially......and he was so engraged that these sensitive feelings dint hit his thoughts at that time......😭
Finally the things which are not expected by anyone are called as twits...ha ha ha.....😉
Wait and watch for next part..........you will definetly change your opinion on Ammy for sure......😊
Once again thanks a lot for the reply.........😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
so cute!!!!!!!

With all sudden twists n flash backs!!!!!!!

soo sad ammy once again in hospital...

wht r u goind 2 do this its very interesting!!!!!!!!

make the other part soooooon!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

so cute!!!!!!!

With all sudden twists n flash backs!!!!!!!

soo sad ammy once again in hospital...

wht r u goind 2 do this its very interesting!!!!!!!!

make the other part soooooon!

Oh so sweet of u.......get well soon dear.....I will update the next part sooon.................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Miss Wow loved your update. I check this forum every day (at multiples times too) to see if there's an update. Hope you can update soon enough so I can have something good happen that day. :-)
Eagerly waiting for your update
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Hey Miss Wow loved your update. I check this forum every day (at multiples times too) to see if there's an update. Hope you can update soon enough so I can have something good happen that day. :-)

Eagerly waiting for your update

Hey Pushpi........Thanks a lot for your interest.............ya will surely update by today evening .......My 5th part will be dedicated to you itself.........😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kvn1983

plz continue it soon

Ya Nidha...I will...........but i am worried coz many of them replied in the begining but nowadays less replies so i am thinking.........many in PM list dont reply........is the story line very boring ...I dont know.........😭

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss Wow

Ya Nidha...I will...........but i am worried coz many of them replied in the begining but nowadays less replies so i am thinking.........many in PM list dont reply........is the story line very boring ...I dont know.........😭



its not like that story line is very much interesting its may be due to some people r busy and some r having exams so may be they read but not reply
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww such a sad part. i really like the story! please continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ Robin: Thanks Robin for liking the story line.......support me in the same way in future also.........
Hey Guys...here is the 5th Part................

PART 5

Archana holds ammy's hands and start waiting for him to wake up……Sunil just comes to the other side and starts carassing ammys forehead………

Rid: Sir aap aayiye mere saat kuch formalities poore karni hai….

Sunil and ridhima leave ……Atul comes into the ward…..fully tensed…..

Atu: Armaan……. Stands at the end of the bed……..Mom.. kaise huva yeh sab…….

Arc: Pata nahi atul…… us hadse ke baad apne kamre mein chala gaya …phir kab yeh bahar gaya…kaha gaya ….hume kaba tak nahi huvi……Jab us doctor ka phone aaya tab hi pata chala hume…she starts weeping……

Atu: Mom…..kuch nahi hoga ammy ko……royiye mat…….

He comes near archana and consoles her…..By then ammy starts murmering

Arm: Ridhima ….meri baat suniye….

Arc: Ammy ammy…….uto beta…….

Very exited and concerned………

Atu: Mom Mein doctor ko bulatha hoon…..

He Runs to get the doctor…..In nurse station……Sunil is filling some forms and Ridhima is helping him out….Atul comes running..

Atu: Doctor… Ammy ko hosh aa raha hai…..

Rid: Kya……Chaliye chalthe hai…..

She comes hurriedly to the ward….Sunil and Atul follow …… She comes near ammy to check Archana makes the way……

Arm: I am sorry….ridhima…

Ridhima is feeling bad for him ……. She wanted to console him………

Arc: Dekhiye na doctor……. kab se isi nam ko liye ja raha hai……..apne ankhe bhi nahi khol raha hai….

Rid: Maa ji….fikar mat ki jiye….behoshi ke halat mein hi yeh baath kar rahe hai.......yeh tho aam baath hai……

She is trying to hide her feelings…..and her identity as well

Sun: Koi serious baath nahi hai na doctor……aisi koi baath hai tho bathaiye…….tensed…

Rid: Sir aap kamaka parishaan ho rahe hai…………zyaada khoon jane ki waje se kaafi weak hai……..Meine already khoon ki bottle lagali hai……thodi dher mein hosh bhi aa jayega….aap tense mat huviye….

Atul is confused as to why was ammy taking ridhima's name again and again…….but he preffered to ask ridhima personally rather than asking in front of Sunil and Archana……

Rid: Maa ji ko leke jayiye aap……wo bohot tense lag rahi hai……unka is mahol me rehna teek nahi hoga…..waise bhi mein hoona yahan…

Actually she wanted some privacy with ammy……so she was avoiding them ….

Sun: Ammy is halath mein hai….hum kaise jaa sakthe hai beta?????

Atul knew there was something……..he thought of supporting Ridhima…….

Atu: Papa….wo sahi keh rahe hai…..Mom ko leke aap ghar chaliye…mein yahan ruk tha hoon….

Sun: Agar tum bhi yahi keh rahe ho tho teek hai…mein use le ja tha hoon….

Arc: Mein ammy ko chod ke kahi nahi ja rahi ………

Atu: Mom aap samjne ki koshish kijiye…….hospital mein ek hi ruk sakthe hai……aur ammy ko hosh aane ke baad kuch khilana tho padeka na…….aap jake uske liye kuch banake layiye…

He was conveincing archana like a baby…….

Sun: Maan jao archana…atul sahi keh raha hai…….

Arc: Lekin Sunil…..

Sun: Ab tum kuch nahi kahogi…chalo…hum ammy ke liye kuch leke aathe hai…..

He manages to take her back to home….She leaves with a heavy heart……. By then the nurse comes who was called by Ridhima……After they both leave…..

Atu: Doctor Ridhima …….. Muje aap se baath karni hai……….

Rid: Yahan nahi atul……hum bahar chale…..

Atu: Chaliye…..

Rid: Sister inhe hosh aaya tho muje inform kardijiye…..

Nur: Teek hai doctor…..

They both come out of the ward and start waliking in the corridor…..

Rid: Boliye Atul…apko kuch poochna tha……

Atu: If I am not wrong Ammy ne aap se hi shaadi ki hai ……isliye wo behoshi me bhi aap se baar baar mafi mang raha hai….Shayad wo isiliye aapka ghar aya hoga……hai na???

Rid: Wo……atul….mein…..

She dint know what to speak…..But her hesitation confirmed atul about everything as he knew in and out of ammy……

Atu: Tho aap Shashank ki beti hai……

Rid: Ji…..

Atu: Bohot gussa aa raha hoga na aapko….Armaan ne aisa kiya aap ke saat…..Fir bhi aap ne uski jaan bachayi…..

Rid: (In a irritated tone) Mein iske baare me baat nahi karna chathi hoon…..

Atu: Lekin mein aap ko batana chahtha hoon…..iski wajah kya hai…..

He narrates the whole flash back regarding the conversation between ammy and shashank…..

Ammy ko pata nahi hai ki meine un dono ki bat cheeth suni hai…yeh sab aapko isi liye bata raha hoon kyon ki….aapko haq hai….par……

Ridhima is annyoed as she had not let her feelings out till now…….so she speaks in a little high tone…they had reached the garden as well

Rid: aap bathana kya cha rahe Mr Joshi???? Ki aap ka friend bekasoor hai????Baap ne kuch keh diya aur uski saza beti ko de??????? In sab mein muje gaseetne ki zaroorth kya thi?????

Mere bhi kuch sapne honge….aur…..She starts crying again….

Atul could understand what Ridhima was going through……….so he spoke in a very soft and conviencing way to make her feel better…..

Atu: Ridhima samaliye…..mein yeh tho nahi keh raha ki Armaan jo kiya wo sahi tha……lekin usne yeh kadam kyon utaya uski wajah janna aap zaroori tha…yeh meri soch hai….Jo huva use badla tho nahi ja saktha……Mein tho itna hi keh saktha hoon ki aage jo bhi karni hai aap dono milke decide karlo….aage aap ke marzi…..

Rid: Sorry Atul muje aise baat nahi karni thi aap se…..

Atu: Its ok Ridhima…..mein samaj saktha hoon…..aap kis halath se guzar rahi hai….

Rid: Thanks Atul….I think we should leave now…..Armaan ko check karna hai…..glucose katam huva hoga……

Atu: Haan …chaliye…..

They both come into the ward……. Ridhima was right glucose was about to finish…..She removed the bottle….

Rid: Sister aap chaliye…mein ruk thi hoon….

Nur: Ji doctor….

The Nurse leaves…..Atul knew Ridhima wanted some time to spend alone…so he silently moved out of the ward as he knew ammy was in safe hands…..After while of staring session Ridhima started to think…….

Rid: Armaan ….. aap ne sahi kiya ya galat ….muje pata nahi …….. aur kuch samaj me nahi aa raha hai ki mein kya karoon……… sach tho yahi hai ki…humari shaadi huvi hai…..aur ise badla nahi ja sak tha…..Papa ko aap se aisi baat nahi karni thi…..lekin uski saza muje kyon…..Muje mangalsutra pehnathe waqt aapne ek baar bhi socha mere baare mein ki mera kya hoga is sab ke baad…boliye...

Remember she is just thinking all this in her mind………

While the whole thought process she was holding ammy's hand…….Now armaan was coming into senses……..

Arm: Ridhima……Ridhima……Muje maaf kardo……

While murmering this… he starts opening his eyes slowly……Sensing his movement……Ridhima releases his hand and moves away from him…… once he completly opens his eyes…….he realises that he is in hospital….he took no time to spot Ridhima in the ward……

Arm: Thanks…..muje hospital lane ke liye……

Ridhima dint react to this…….but she spoke….

Rid: Mein Atul ko bejthi hoon…..

Arm: Lekin….aap..meri….

She was out of the ward…She informs Atul about Ammy……Sunil and Archana are also informed about this…They were already on the way as they couldn't resist themselves..…Atul comes into the ward….

Arm: Champ …… tu yahi tha kya…….

Atu: Haan…..

Arm: Naraz ho mujse…….

Atu: Aur nahi tho kya Armaan ……tume pata bhi hai ki tumne kya ki hai???? Us ladki ke bhi kuch sapne honge …..ek hi pal me uski zindagi mein toofan kada kar di hai toone….Kyon kiya aisa Armaan…..

By Now Sunil and Archana were near the ward…….

Arm: Jaantha hoon mein…us waqt mein kuch sochne ki kabil hi nahi tha yaar…pata nahi kaisa junoon savar tha mujpe……bas Shashank ke baathein hi goonj rahe the ….

Atu: Jo bhi ho ……. Bugath na tho ridhima ko hi padega na…...

Sunil and Archana were in the door but hearing to the conversation they stood there to listen completely….

Arm: Haan meine itana sab kiya uske saat…fir bhi usne muje hospital laya ….. meri dekh baal ki…jab ki use yeh sab karne ki zarorath hi nahi tha…….

Atu: lekin Armaan tumne yeh socha hai ki jab Mom aur papa ko pata chale ga ……jo doctor unke bete ki dekh baal kar rahi thi……wo hi Ridhima hai tho????? Un par kya beethe ga……

Sunil and Archana got the shock of their life……..Ridhima also comes near the ward …seeing Sunil and Archana outside……

Rid: Maa ji aap dono bahar kya kar rahe hai….aayiye…..une hosh aa gaya hai…….

She takes them inside the ward……

I know there were no AR scenes in this part as well but I need some time......atleast 1 or 2 more parts to get the romance between them......hope you guys will surely give me that much time........so i need lot of replies......As many were asking for the long updates i tried making it long......waiting for your valuable feed backs............
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great yaar loved it. Update soon :-)

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