'Ankahey Rishtey' - AR FF(The End pg113) 11/07/09 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wow yaar superb prt yaar ye ash hmm how mch attitude she hs hmmm intrestng nd karan nd radhika bcm friends wow hehe he concernd abt her thts grt nd wow whole gang leavng fr lonavla grt yaar it wll be fun gud nd precap aisa kya hua jo itna shockd hmm cnt wait cont sooooooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏awesome update dear
update next part soon n thanx for d pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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when u r going to update rucha?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the PM! cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: saridena

when u r going to update rucha?

luv soumya



i'll next be updating on wednesday........

thankyou so much guys for takin interest in this FF..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey ur FF is realy gud i m looking forwrd to the next updat
i loved the bonding of armaan n radhika
n also her boinding with other intern espacialy adi
thnxe
do PM me when u updat next luv nruti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy.......awesome part!! can't wait till the next one!! plz cont soon and thanx fr the pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the pm dear...
it was a cool update... waiting for the lonavla trip now..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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In the evening at mallik residence…

Ri: buddy hum kahan jaa rahe hain…? Aap mere clothes kyun pack kar rahe ho…?

A: buddy hum lonavla ja rahe hain.. mama papa ko vahan thoda sa kaam hai fir hum bohot saare games khelenge..

Ri: (excited) hum naani ke paas bhi jayenge na..?

Hearing this ridhhima went pale.. It slipped out of her mind dat of all the people there, she will face her father too and dis was the last thing she wanted in front of ridhaan.. her son really loved and respected his grandparents especially padma.. But if shashank's rude talks made ridhhima cry or armaan frustrated then ridhaan would surely question, which she certainly was avoiding from last one year by not meeting her father face to face..

Armaan understood and walked to her..

A: don't worry jaan.. (with assuring look) everything will be fine.. you've been postponing it but you can't prevent it..

R: par armaan vahan kuch.. (with tear in her eyes)

A: trust me ridhhima.. kuch nahi hoga.. shayad tumne kabhi notice nahi kiya par ur father is really fond of ridhaan nd he wouldn't break ridhaan's heart I'm sure of it…

R: (smilimg abit) I hope aisa hi ho…


Next morning outside sanjeevni

Armaan and ridhhima were there half an hour early to look for the arrangements and recheck all the medicines and other things that are to be taken..

Ridhaan was sleeping so he was made to lie down on one of seats of the bus, comfortably.. As armaana and ridhhima went in for a few minutes to inform shubahnkar and Dr. kirti, the intern gang was there too…

J: hey guys.. ready for the trip….?

K: I hope ki kaam ke sath masti bhi ho…

Adi: haan yar.. wat do you think radhika…?

Rad: adi maine bataya thha na ki it's a really gud place… to masti to hogi hi…

Aa: yeah yeah..! Ms. Perfect.. knows it all…..

Rad: stop it aakansha.. I'm not in any mood to start it all again…

Adi: chodo guys lets get in the bus… guard was saying ki Armaan sir aur Ridhhima mam bhi aachuke hain..

K: ya guys lets get in..

Getting in they saw Ridhaan sleeping peacefully… All were a lil puzzuled as none of them knew who ridhaan was…

J: arre yar yeh kaun hai..?

Adi: pata nahi par hai to cute..

Rad: right adi.. hes so cute..😃

Karan smiled watching radhika smile… and brushing the small kid's hair lovingly as he shifted uncomfortably in his sleep……

Aa: tum iske sath itni attach kyun ho rahi ho..? you don't even know ki yeh kaun hai..? aur yeh koi bhi ho humare sath lonavla nahi ja sakta.. so it would be better if we wake him up and ask him to get off…

Rad: (angrily) don't you dare aakansha…😡... Look at him he's so innocent…. You hav all the bus for you to sit.. don't wake him up..

Aa: you are talking as if you'll take him to lanavla with you..

Adi: enough ash.. stop bothering radhika everytime okk…. She's absolutely right..

K: yeah I agree.. sir ko aane do then we'll decide kya karna hai.. (warning) till then ash keep away from him..

Aa: watever…

Soon AR enter and take their seats right in front…

A: so interns .. ready for ur first trip…?

All: yes sir..

R: okk then take your seats we'll get started in 5mins.

Aa: but guys wat about that kid..?

K: wait ash..! Umm.. mam there a sweet lil kid sleeping in the bus.. and we don't know him either to take us with him..

Inspite of the situation armaan smiled at their confusion and said..

A: don't worry interns .. that sweet lil kid is definitely gonna accompany us to lonavla and come back with us..

Aa: but how can we take with us some unknown kid…? We don't even know his family or anything..

R: (proudly) well then know it.. That kid is Ridhaan mallik.. Our son… okk now Ms. Sharma..

All of them were really surprised and aakansha was highly embarressed as she was asking her seniors to let their son out of the bus..

Soon they started their journey.. after 2 hours wen every1 was feeling fresh after their naps, armaan moved towards the back seat to check ridhaan.. only to find him wraped in Radhika's shawl and her hand on his head.. As if she slept patting him…

He simled at his innocent sister as she looked up at him….

A: (smiling) seems lik u've met ur nephew already haan..?

Rad: haan bhaiya.. hes even more sweet and innocent than wat you nd bhabhi told me..

Listening to this sweet sister brother convo Aakansha went into another shock.. she was not able to believe her ears.. Did she really heard radhika addressing armaan as bhaiya…? finally gathhering her senses again she exclaimed..


Aa: what..?😲 U are his sister…? (she was loud enough to startle every1 and wake ridhaan up from his sleep…)

A: yeah.. you hav any problem Ms. Sharma..?

Aa: Umm no sir.. I was just surprised coz she never told us anything..

Rad: that's bcoz you guys were busy cooking ur own stories…😡..

Adi: wow yaar radhika.. tu to chupi rustam nikli.. par I'm really happy to hav a senior's sister as my best frnd.. and now I can easily converse with Dr. Armaan as he is my role model..

A: (looking at rids) wow even I'm famous..

R: yeah yeah.. Well Aditya is he ur role model bcoz of his flirting or bcoz hes is gud Neurosurgeon...😛... (she said teasing both armaan and adi)

Rad: (giggling) bhabhi I guess both…😆.. (they laughed uncontrolably giving hi-fives to eachother)

J: hey guys I think we r getting left out…!

Rad: ofcourse not jai.. come join in.. you too karan..


Karan felt on cloud nine as radika called him to join in their conversation without even he exclaiming it..

So now all of the interns were having their friendly, teasing and healthy talks and aakansha was sitting there with her eyes closed and ipod on..

Ridhaan was getting all confused as hes never met the interns and he never got to meet his bua before…. So now sitting in ridhhima;s lap he asked her…


Ri: (cutely) mamma yeh sab kaun hain…? Main to inse pehle kabhi nahi mila…

R: right baby aap inse kabhi nahi mile pehle.. yeh sab bhi mama pappa ke saath sanjeevni mein doctors hain..

Ri: (looking at evry1 very inteensely as if scanning them while others kept quite for him to say sumthing) Mera naam Ridhaan hai.. kya aap sab mere bhi dost banoge..?

They all gave a genuine smile and took his hand one by one in a hand shake, where as when radhika took his hand Armaan exclaimed..

A: buddy yeh aapki bua hain…

Ri: (yet again confused) par aapne to kaha thha ke meri ek hi bua hain.. Radhika bua.. haina mamma..?

R: haan shonu.. yeh aapki radhika bua hi hain..

Ri: sachhi mamma..! (as ridhhima nodded he went towards radhika and gave her a sweet kiss on her cheek)

Radhika was yet again emotional.. she has never felt loved before and ridhaan was truly a charmer… she came out of her unpleasant memories as she felt a hand on her shoulder.. She was surprised to find that it was Karan assuring her that its just the beginning..

Later part of the journey they kept on talking while radhika was only talking to Ridhaan, who was really loving his bua's company.. On the other hand Karan pretended to be a part of the talking group but he was constantly staring at radhika, thinking that there is urely some sort of special connetion amogst them, par vo kisse baat kare..?

SO GUYS I HOPE YOU LIK THE PART.. NEXT PART WILL BE COMING SOON TOO...

PRECAP: SHASHANK'S ENTRY.. KARAN STILL CONFUSED.. MAY BE RIDHHIMA COULD BE OF ANY HELP...?

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey yeyyyyyyyyyyyyy wow yaar fantastic update yaar lovd it a lot yaar tht ash god sch a rude person nd adi nd ar wow grt hahahahah ridz ws teasng bth of thm heheeh nd ridhaan nd radhika wow bhua nd her nephew wow yaar nw pro is shanky cnt wait loadz of masti thy did during their journey wow cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont soooooooon
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