Manzil (AR FF) Discontinued! - Page 47

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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
awsome part
continue soon
with next part


love
RIddss
-ArohaAngel- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww great story n part hun...update soon n add me to ur PM list please
-ialwayswill- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Simran This is Vaish here
So i just went thru u're FF in the past 2 hrs
And I just loved it
To be true i can very much connect with ur opinion about the whole society and women issue
And I love the way you've portrayed Riddhima....
And Armaan's feelings!
Oh btw Can u please chop off his ponytail? Its relli werid for me to imagine him like that :P
And Ispecially Loved this part
The way he wants to protect her off the glares and the way he wants to be with her
Oh my my some one may have told something bad...maybe about riddhima ? idk !!
Awwwwww It actually felt peacefull as u described to read him sleeping peacefully cuddling to her after a 'supposedly' bad night :P
As for Sapna i've loved her Character in this FF
I've always Liked Sapna but she had been very much less of use be it in DMG or in many FFs !
And Ohkay so am awaiting for Rahul to appear now LOL Muski bechari she cant be alone ;)
And Aww I love Padma and MIL
I've alwayz loved Armaan Padma scenes :D
Thanks for a wonderful FF

All i want to say is I love this FF...it in direct into my 'Favorites' Lists
Update As and when possible
Well i cant bee greedy to ask for update soo soon But still :P
Update as soon as u can :)

And Yes I want to say I just Hope Everything Turns out good in the future parts and the story moves as itis now !

All the Very Best (just felt to say hehe)
Take Care
With Love
Vaishu !

PS - My mozzila isnt working as of now may edit my comment with some emoz !

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Simran that was a long and much awaited update!
the part was fantastic! i can see the development of AR. poor Ridz she is so scared of falling for Armaan bcoz she doesnt want to be hurt wen she loses him wich hopefully she wont..... Armaan cnt seem to stay away frm Ridhima even after he reminded himself and her of the 'rules', he starting to fall for her but im sure it wil tke him time to realise that
anywayz thank u soo much for the long update after a long time and tnx for the pm - im addin u as my buddy so nxt time it wud be easier for u to pm me so plz accept
Edited by -Aliya- - 14 years ago
arzu-k thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum ff dear plz pm when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG just read ur latest update again, I luv the ending! It's so adorable n cute, yet romantic! Loved it... can't wait for the morning when he relised he stays the whole night cuddling her! Hoping for some romance blossoming between them =)

Update soon yaar!
Please pm me when u update!
x
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW ! A part worthing the wait.
I simply loved it ! It was the best part so far. Like you said the romance was more present than the lust here.
AR were just so cuuuuuute ! You're doing a great job with this fanfic' and especially with this part. Please do continue as you're doing it very well.

I'm looking forward to the next part to see the development between AR and who is this so called woman Armaan was talking about. Many ideas came to my mind but I think I'll just keep waiting to know the answer 😊

Thanks for writting. And if you're doing it, please pm me for the next part.

Love,
Laila
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey simran! so happy u updated this one after a long time! i was really missing it! very sweet and beautiful part! looking forward to more, continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

😆😆😆 UPDATE SOON 😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
ur ff is excellent. update soon

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