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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: jia..
Ohooooooo kya baat hai?? experience from first kiss??? ☺️😆 No wonder it was sooooooo greatly and naturally penned, *kidding* Hehe Simmy yaar u deserve much more of a praise, i am still fishing out words to praise u enuf, ur on fire as i said, jusy outstandingly talented.

But yea i agree with Kat, TOO SHORT!!! LMAP, want a longer one next time, loving this!! And btw i think i missed, his hair isnt been chopped right?? Or am i missing that point?? If NOT u better chop it up soon, LMAO

Aww Thanks Jia am touched😳 but ah the first kiss is always something😍

I know sorry for the short part, but I wrote in class yesterday and wanted to update before I hit friday, next part will be a long one😃

but kya yaar I was hoping to leave the hair 😆 I kinda liked his pony😉 next update will give a special mention to his luscious hair😆

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soumya

@saridena

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

hey

very interesting part dear

hmmm is ridz agreeing to accept armi other proposal

update sooooooooooooon

luv soumya

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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Catwoman
OMG leave his hair.... it be like SRK longish Hair😳

Hayeeee yaar I agree with you, I like Armi with a pony😳 like I said to Jia my next update will be long and will give a special mention to Armi's lustruous long hair😳

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simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: saridena
hey
very interesting part dear

hmmm is ridz agreeing to accept armi other proposal

update sooooooooooooon

luv soumya

Thanks for liking it Sou and yes Ridz is accepting the other proposal😳😉😛

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Sonia Sharma

@Sony_1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

i just completed reading ur FF. new concept, great work. 👍🏼

ridz-sapna conversation was soo funny. sapna seemed soo crazy. armaan and his moms conversation where he said "i am not a gay" was soo funny. i couldnt control my laughter.🤣 i am still laughing. 🤣

OMG ridz thoughts are so wild. she is getting too hyper😆

if the women didn't come to him he was going to have to break his pact and take her like he originally planned. - 😲 what did he plan😆

Relax Armaan relax you're just frustrated and in need of her, once you have her all this will leave your system and all will be good - armaan thinks he will forget her after he spends a night with her.😕😕 i dont think it is possible😆

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Hey ... ur parts end too soon. Please put a bit longer update. Going good. :)

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simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: sony_123
i just completed reading ur FF. new concept, great work. 👍🏼
ridz-sapna conversation was soo funny. sapna seemed soo crazy. armaan and his moms conversation where he said "i am not a gay" was soo funny. i couldnt control my laughter.🤣 i am still laughing. 🤣

OMG ridz thoughts are so wild. she is getting too hyper😆

if the women didn't come to him he was going to have to break his pact and take her like he originally planned. - 😲 what did he plan😆

Relax Armaan relax you're just frustrated and in need of her, once you have her all this will leave your system and all will be good - armaan thinks he will forget her after he spends a night with her.😕😕 i dont think it is possible😆

thanks for liking it and ah I had a blast writing the gay conversation, the image of kirron kher constantly popped in my mind. Agree with you about Ridz but come on she can't help, especially with her hormones going haywire thanks to Mr. Malik

Keep reading hope you enjoy it😃

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simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#128

@suv.patki - I know I am sorry I will try to post longer parts from now on

@samijan- good to see you will write another part soon

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 16 years ago

#129

wow! gr8 part :)

cant wait for u to cont again!

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#130

Hi Simran,

I got the link for this FF from the recomendation thread (wonder why I never thought of reading this earlier)

Really enjoyed all the parts till now, Ridz is such a distrubed soul, her dad passed away, husband married her for money only & left her, with no one to look after her

Sapna is sweetheart, that every girl should have, telling Ridz to lossen herself, & wnating Arman for herself, had she not had Amit, now thats a good GF...

The kiss was so intensifying...she didn't know what to do...how would she??

Padma asking Arman if he is gay? hahahah that was the best thing, any mom would be concerned, but this concern was certainly new to me, but good.

Both of them thinking about each other...awwwhhhh...so sweet

Hope you are feeling a lot better now, take care