~:Dancing Days:~ (Mini AR FF) Finale-Page10-18/11 - Page 9

Wow lubna, this was a really touching short-story u had written up. Sorry not keeping up with your updates, but seriously babes 😆, wowers!

Just read all ur parts, and my, Riddhima in such confusing thoughts for Armaan, poor guy had it the worse! Can't believe she's been running away, from what?, A beautiful blessed life ahead. Superb Lubna, you have expressed each emotion on the spot perfectly, that it's flawless!

Really enjoyed the FF!

-Natasha

Originally posted by: samijan

gr8 part!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey lubs

awwwwwwwwwww...........

dat was relllllllllyyyyyyyyyy BEAUTIFULL prt

luvedddddd it

luv ya n tak care
mahru

Originally posted by: spln

lubiiiiiiii i love love love love u for this one....omg i cant blv i cried at a fic after like i duno how much time i cried reading something dam it...n i still am saying i love u for it.... wow Nj that was like the biggest compliment so far! haha usually if I make people cry they want to kill me, not say they love me 😆gosh that must be the spirit of ur armaan into me, saying i lov u to the person who makes u cry hahahaha....[color]red]😆😆That's definately Armaan in you! haha[/color]i loved it so much, thur every line when i frowned, frowned harder, grew morose n then cried i was trying to tell myself dont be silly naseem its a fic n then i was tellng the imaginary u lubi u insane woman they just kids how can they be in so much pain for juvenille love....Thats the thing NJ, no matter what age you fall in love, whether it be puppy love, teenage crush or full on lust! whoever's in it they always think its true love so feel like this... and lets not forget these are drama kids hehe everything they do is to the extreme so falling in love and feeling the pain would also be extreme right 😳but dam u the part still mattered too much to pay any heed to wat wud logically be ocrrect....lol goli maaro to logic hehe when in love who pays attention to logic 😆 in love non sense makes sense and sense is non sense 😳so this story was complete non sense yet it made soo much sense hahaoh my god oki this has to be abs one of the best fics ive ever read, n one of the best peices of work ever.....WOW thank you soo much NJ, im like smiling from ear to ear now.. hehe okies more then normal atleast, I think my cheeks have gone a permanent shade of pink from all these compliments... someone turn the heat down! 😆

one more time lubi, love u for this one...i hope u dream n dream n dream n dream many many years to give us such wonderful fics!!!😆 You mean i'd have to sleep non stop for this to happen 😃 no probs 😉

cheers n luv,

nj

ps: BAHAAAAA i want a guy like that too!!!!😆😆hehe you are definately a nitter! lol this isn't the nutters post hehe your updating the wrong place 😆

Originally posted by: magicgirlankita

ahem ahem

hey lubi di

ssup???????????howz ur manager

i m askin abt ur manager coz i m worried that he is going mad with u being arnd

hehehehe 😡 my manager is a dead man! The day after this update he piled on soo much work that it's taken me this long to find time to reply to everyone's comments... anyways your comments definately bring the smile back on my face 😳

lolzzzzzzzzzzzz😆

i hope he is f9 haan........he better be

well i was jst here to drop a comment buh then mah big mouth doesnt stop frm speakin sumthing else may be i seriously am nuts😆tummhe abh pata chala your mad? 😆mujhe toh bohot pehle se pata ta 😳

well back to square 1 now hmmmm ur ff has been simply amazing

and mind boggling

u knw wen u ended the parts.......thr was 1 thing in mah head constantly harassing me

yeah literally harassing me

what is gonna happen next.........this no.........that

i mean u captivated............enamored and u know ,u made me devoted to the storyAww thank you

well that u can basically tell was i that devoted or not

buh yeah

u r few of the writers who keep their readers hooked to the story and i luv that quality of urs stop now before I turn red like a tomato! my mums going to think I got burnt on the sun bed or something!

and omg

"Every second away from you was like a thousand deaths to me' I wanted to come and talk to you, but then seeing how my presence only caused you more pain I had to force myself to keep away from you, I resorted to following you around to keep my sanity. I knew I could never speak to you again, but I couldn't bear being away from you so I always kept a distance and made sure you never saw me. The number of times I stopped myself from speaking to you' scared I may say something that might upset you further. And then when you stopped coming to classes' I completely lost it; I went to every place you ever visited looking for you, I went by your flat several times and even drew up the courage to knock on your door one day because I needed to see you, and it was then that your neighbour told me you had left for good. I didn't know what to do' I stopped going to classes' every time I'd walk into class I expected to see you there' like the first day when you were standing near the window and the breeze was playing with your hair, making you look magical'and when I knew that would never happen again I just couldn't go back' I'"

this was the best part i mean the emotions are expressed so well that it makes u cry and i was crying like the last time and i enjoyed cryingI bought tears to your eyes? haha i though I only managed that by making people laugh haha now I know I just have to be soppy and people cry too 😃 hang on you cried and you enjoyed it? okies that's definately a sure sign of madness 😳

and u knw wat i think even if this is a short ff of urs this will remain in pplz mind till the very end

i mean atleast in ma mind

lastly i wud say ki plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

i knw z zyaada ho gaya buh still plzzzzzzzzz watch such good dreams and convert them to ffs

hehehehe lolzzzz😆

presenting for the first and the last time for u is a shayariYAY shayri! my fave 😃]

i mean last time in this ff thread

lubi di oh lubi di

aapne humko apna deewana banaya

aapne humko apna deewana banayameine nahi.. i know tum iss Armaan ke peeche deewane hogeye ho tum

hume shak hota hai aapna kya chakar chalaya

deewana banake paagal kar diya hume

deewana banake paagal kar diya humeyeh toh tum pehle se hi ti... i had nothing to do with this condition of yours 😆

rula rulake humare face gila kar diya apneMop lakar du?😉

aisa lagta hai aapki ungliyaan chum lun

aisa lagta hai aapki ungliyaan chum lunHaan haan i know you'll probably bite them off! stay away you pagal

par kya karun aapke itne dur jo hunissiliye mein khuda se shukur guzar hu ki im soo far away 😃😆

I'm kidding sweetu hehe that was a fabulous sher... par whats this? how come you havent done shayri before? hmm batao.. agli baar i want all your comments in sher style hehe should be interesting to see your pagalpan in sher aur shayri style 😆

lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😆

do temme how was the insane shayari frm an insane personality

lolzzz😆

luv ya loadslove you too 😃

@nkit@

Originally posted by: 268143

I waited till u finioshd n read it all in one go 😆 it was such an emotional story n i loved da way u made them meet in da end 👏

Originally posted by: meow23

dat waas a gr88 endngggg

Originally posted by: missypatel

i thought hard....maybe same as d pain tey bth were goin through...i still cudnt or ouldnt koe...y he luved her so much n y she was hurt by his doins..honestly I don't know why it hurt so much either 😕 but while writing thats the just the mood I got into and one sentence led to another and this is what it came out as... I was actually planning a completely different ending where there is no happy ever after but this kind of write itself.. strange hehe

that was brilliant..:)ter cudnt hve been a better way to say all dt he did n she heard....i luved it lubna!! =) you guys loved it then writing this has been worth while 😳

u koe ur a fab riter...share more of yur dreams with us...wnever u can..its an abs wonder readin yur ficz..it takes u through the clouds up and high...sailz you sittin on the imaginary rainbow...i feel like am alice..frm d wonderland..!! lol just don't get motion sickness hehe and compliments like this from another wonderful writer really do just make me wish I had a few more wacky dreams im willin to share with you guys 😃

luv ya for tis one..!!

nij~

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Lubna!

Amazing job well done on this short story! I had a gala time reading it..You expressed each characters thoughts and emotions so beautifully that it striked a chord in my heart! You should write short stories more often!!! 😆 your just saying that because you hate waiting for updates on the long ones 😆 I don't blame you! hehe

Aww I just loved this Armaan! haye I love any of these Armaan's on IF... I'm waiting for someone to write a story where you actually hate his character hehe

I'm glad that your boss stopped piling work on you! lol....Hope you enjoy it!he did for a bit... but then the saandh started it all over again 😡

Love, Anita

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

Yessssh! found it! aka reserved 😆

Wow lubna, this was a really touching short-story u had written up. Sorry not keeping up with your updates, but seriously babes 😆, wowers!hey no probs Natasha 😳 you read it, you enjoyed it, my jobs done 😃

Just read all ur parts, and my, Riddhima in such confusing thoughts for Armaan, she should visit confused.com 😆 okies bad joke lol but had to say it hehe my mum does all the timepoor guy had it the worse! Can't believe she's been running away, from what?, A beautiful blessed life ahead. I know! but then thats life... nothing can ever be simple naa, although of you stop and think it could soo be extremely simple Superb Lubna, you have expressed each emotion on the spot perfectly, that it's flawless!😳 thank you... i don't have any other words to reply to these commments... its wierd hehe i can continue writing like mad but when it comes to accepting compliments... I lose all words 😳

Really enjoyed the FF!

-Natasha

Originally posted by: swansea

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww lubna di

that was amazinggggggggggggggggg

sooooooooooooooooo cute

wooooooooow toooo gooood

swanzzy