"She's my angel" i thought that was very sweet....I love the way you took time in describing the outfits... Armaan and Riddhima are such a sweet couple... i like how his eyes were always on her durrin da dance..and he wasn't that possessive and gave her permission to dance with some next random dude....and then at the end he came to dance with her :D
I don't like how Maria's dad was staring at Armaan...kuch na kuch zaroor pak raha hai. Hope Maria doesn't come inbetween their relationship ...buh hey.you said only 5-6 parts left :D .... i don't think your evil enough to post a MAJOR twist, when there are few parts left ...unless you decide to take a leap or Maria seroiusly screws it over. .... I think they should tell Maria about their relationship..
ne wayz that was a great part...keep up the great work buddy :)
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