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Posted: 16 years ago
WOW!!!!!!! this part just rocked.. loved ridz interaction with atul and omang.. and atul notices how great she is and all... one thing.. is omang smoking.. ughh.. not good!! i ABSOLUTELY loved the meeting room scene.. amazingly penned down.. i mean he notices every little thing about ridz.. her facial expressions and all.. and i totally admired ridz courange in there.. she blew me away.. and loved everyone's reaction in the room too.. all shocked.. but what got me the most.. was armaan's reaction.. he was impressed by her.. and he didnt get mad.. i thought that everyone's reaction to armaan not getting mad was sooo hillarious.. they were so surprised.. and then ridz reaction.. when it sunk in what she had done..
i loved the office scene.. where he first comforts her.. but then starts teasing her again.. and him noticing everything bout her.. he realizes what he is doing.. and says stop.. hahah.. dont stop armaan.. htink about her.. and only her.. lol
aimeee... i can keep going on.. but srsly.. awesome part.. love the direction of the story.. missing vibhi and yash tho..
take care and hope you update soon.. thanks so much for the pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago

heeyyyyy amieeee it was a fantastic part!!!!! i alwaz adore AR conversation!!!!!! itz so cute n amusing esp ARMAAN d way he annoys d hell out of riddhima i really amazes me but srsly speaking i dont like luaki ka halwa hehe but ridzy isnt afraid of armaan n well he does treat HIS PA differntly frm others but seeing ridzy wid minnie n harsh i get to noe shez still so innocent n actually a BABY n poor armaan will have to TEACH her many things !!!!!!!! okieee i noe am getting a little cheesy buit cant help wondering how will actually deyr LOVE take shape?????? connttttt suuupppeeeerrrr sooooonnn.............

luv ya

aravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

heyyyy

Okayyy finally I've finished reading da whole ff nd da latest part..

Must say u have word on dis ff a lot nd gone into detail….

Luv reading and didn't get bored once…

Ridhima's past is jus tooo sad…feel so sorry 4 da girl…buh atleast now she's lluvd by everyone…

Nd Armaan past iz sooo sad aswell…da boy went through so much…nd hez still alive…hes emotionally strong we can see..cuz of da hard work he does…buh

Wiv girls…mn Im soo depressed..i feel lyk killin both does girls who played wiv Armaan…

I hope he doesn't fink dat way about ridz…

Hmmm he has started finkin bwt her..buh always tke it off…buh ridz…nt yet…

I wonder who will fall 4 who 1st

Dis ff iz gonna b real interesting…

I hope dat vivek dude wont come in da picture agen..talk about disgusting mnz

Da criket scene was really funny…typical Armaan ini..hahha…

Glad he didn't shout her ridz…she sooo cute mnz…wen she askd da Q 2 rahull…lol…dam innocent..

Thnx 4 da pm

&& update soon

Luv ya…Bless

Ridz,

.x.

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part please update soon
xoxo
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey aimee..😊
atlast i got the chance to leave a comment....
both the parts 33 n 34 were gr8.👏.👏.👏
loved both of them equally.😉.😉.😉
part 33:
loved the chemistry both of them shared with kids.😃...
i loved the cute bickering they shared.😆.😆.riddhima behaved exactly like me...even i dont know how to play cricket....why didnt u make riddhima open her eyes????😡how long is the wait..😃..
i loved the ending...OMG!!!!!riddhima n armaan dreamin abt each other.😳.😳.😳.oh man!!!!!!
part 34:
armaan shouting at omang....is it coz omang did not take his medecines properly.😊.😊.
loved the part b/w riddhima n omang...atul was so cute as in 'Lauki ka halwa bhi banta hai?'.😆.😆.😆i love halwas especially lauki ka halwa is my favorite.😊.😊.😊
i loved the part in the conference hall...our intelligent n sweet riddhima.😃.
last but not the least the convo b/w armaan n riddhima in his cabin.😳.😳.
he surely does love teasing riddhima.😆.😆.😆.😆
has he unknowingly fallen for her??????????😍

on the whole..an awesome update.👏...
gr8 job...

waiting for ur next update.........😊😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
WHOA! i hav been reading ur ff frm two weeks nows and just coudnt finish it! but i finally did ur an awesum writer and i just love ur ff!! cont soon and plz pm me??
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks Sanjana 😊

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

absolutely adorable, but i think it's time ridz grew up a little don't u? just a suggestion, don't take it the wrong way, after all ultimately u are the writer

Hi Friend 😊
Thanks for d reply. Riddhima is grown up, its just she has never been into a relationship with a man and always lived in a protective environment. So i guess she is opening up slowly. I dont know about the rest of the world, but i have mentioned a few times earlier, her character is somewhat inspired by one of my real life friend. And i am going just by her character. I most heartily appreciate your comment, but iy willhelp if you elaborate it a little further what u mean when u say Riddhima needs to grow up. If u could please PM me.

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

awesome yaar...........very nice part.............

loved it di...............
thanx for pm

Hi Yogitha 😊 (Please forgive me if i m wrong with your name, i m very bad with them)
Thanks for your reply dear.

Originally posted by: Robin_M

very good part aimee! am really enjoying the interaction between armaan and ridz! the bonding between ridz and omang and atul is sooo very sweet! glad they like her too!

and the way she spoke her mind about the project was awsome! she is very smart and confident! i really like that! no matter how innocent she is, when it comes to work, she is on top of it all! good going girl!
and it was funny to see everyones reaction to armaan not being mad at her! i guess shes a good inffluence on him!
and hes starting to think about her more! awwwwww even tho its not romantically, he enjoys her company, he likes teasing her! i think its very sweet. their jodi in this is very innocent, and i find that very refreshing!
hehehe ridz threatening harsh and glaring at him was so funny! that whole scene was very cute, shows how naive ridz is, just like a kid! shes adorable, wanna give her a big hug!!!!!
really liked this part, continue soooon!

Hi Robin 😊
Thanks for the appreciation dear. Riddhima is opening up. I know a friend who is just like she is. My friend is also an extremely shy and innocent, but when it comes to work, she is like Zooooooooooooommmm... So all credit goes to her i guess.
Yep Armaan is slowly and unknowingly falling for her.

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

ohh verry nice

ok i have challenge for u
by the 21st of novemeber (which is my birthday) u have to make AR at least friends...
are you gamie??
it would b a gr8 birthday pressie
and must say all the business stuff u made ridz say was so realistic...
felt like i was watching tv and some show was on...
hehe
thanks for the pm
Sonia

Hi Sonia 😊
😆 Alright now u have found another way to drag me to jump over. Nice way of getting things done. 😃 I cant promise you whether they will be friends by ur Big Day or not as i havent finalized anything yet, but just to let you know, something is gonna be changing within next 3 episodes. And of course thanks for your lovely response sweety.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: janu1610

Aimee' its really a'cute part.Relation in between Omang & Ridz are growing. Atul is also comfortable with her. Only Armaan has to know about her green eye Angel.nice part !!!!cont. soon but before that get well. Hey u may surprised as i am new to u but i am silent reader of ur ff .LOVE ur ff.
''''''''''''LOTS OF LOVE

Hi Friend 😊
Welcome to my FF. Thanks a lot for the appreciation. I will be posting next part soon. I am very happy to see u here friend. Hope u stick around.

Originally posted by: cute_trish

Hey Aimee nice part.Loved it.Lauki Ka Halwa part was amazing.ooo so our Riddhima has the courage to speak up.What Minne said is right Riddhima is just harmless.Noww i come to AR i knew it Armaan can never stop teasing RIddhima.Over all the part was MINDBLOWING😳

Hi Trisha 😊
Thanks for the reply dear. Riddhima speak a lot i guess, especially when Armaan is around 😃.

Originally posted by: sadique137

hey aimee

fantastic.Armaan will never stop teasing her
hope Riddhima goes to Armaan's house on Diwali
also oping to c very interesting Diwali
please continue soon

Hi Shamla 😊
I guess Armaan's naughty nerves becomes active as soon as he sees Riddhima around.😆. Hmm u need an episode on Diwali, i was thinking of skipping it as most of u want d story to rush. Lets see what can i do. Thanks for the reply sweetie.

Originally posted by: hipreet

amazing part

it was hilarious in the end................poor ridz.....she is so innocent
cont soon

Hi Harpreet 😊
Thanks for the reply dear. Yep Riddhima is innocent.

Originally posted by: saridena

hi aimee

thks for the pm dear
awesome yaar
armi is think abt ridz and again he stops himself
mang and ridz relationship increased and even atul
ridz is very talentd ha she saved a lot of money from getting wasted
minnie has harsh as boyfriend ha
update sooooooooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya

Hi Soumya 😊
Hmm, now Armaan is being pushed towards her by his heart, while his minds is trying to hold him back. Lets see who wins here. Yep Minnie and Harsh are going around. Thanks for the reply.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey aimee
awesome part yaar
very cute
the way ridz spoke was like wow
but i like omang-ridz n atul bond
its very homely
loved it
update soon

Hi Prerna 😊
Thanks for the reply friend. I am happy that u could feel that homely environment in it.

Originally posted by: suv.patki

Hi Aimee, thanks for the PM. And a real long update. I liked it. Quite a many things happened ... but unfortunately I was not able to tie all the events together ...

1. Dusherra and Zayan and Falak accompanying Armaan to Ashraya
2. Bit of Minnie and Harsh.
As always, waiting for next update soon.

Hi Friend 😊
Alright, i am happy that u have asked to clearify your confusion. Here i go...
1. Earlier i had a few scenes and almost an episode dedicated for Dushehera which would have had kids and oldies from Ashraya, Zayan, Falak and Armaan. The episode was actually to make Zayan (who was getting spoilt and rebel coz of his bad company) realize the importance of parents & good companionship, but since most of my friends here want the story to jump over, i removed it all. And if you remember the episode were Khans were introduced, in that episode Armaan had asked Naazneen that he will take her kids to Ashraya for some celebration or so. Thats i it was just a paragraph to make sure people dont think that i have forgotten that thing.
2. Minnie is another character just like Armaan and Riddhima's family here. She is not a big character, but some things will be pushed with her help in future. And for Harsh he was to be introduced someday as for Minnie. You can say that they are the characters added to create situations to move AR's relationship ahead. But since, i believe if you place a character in your story, it deserves to get atleast some breathing space of its own. Thats what i did to Minnie and Harsh.
I hope that makes things clear for you. in case u have any more of it, please feel free to ask. I would love to reply.

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh👍🏼 its really an awesome one⭐️ superb😊😉 so sweet😛 so omang😊 and atul😊 like her so much😉 and even armaan dont get angry😆😆 and he likes his sense of ability😊 to find out mistake in project cool😍 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Kismat do pal mein badal sakta he INSAN, Per jo INSAN ko badal de wo kismat nahin hoti, Apni kismat pe rota wohi shakhs hay jisko, Sajdon me rone ki adat nahin hoti."



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Hi Nidha 😊
Thanks for the reply and for such wonderful goodies too. Once again you have given me a colourful bunch of TULIPS. Thank you sooooooo much sweetie.🤗 I guess you can feel the change in Armaan. If yes, u will fell it more in the coming episodes.

Originally posted by: meow23

i jus luvd it..
brilliant dear..
gr88 gng..
luvd every fact of it...
thnxxx, 4 d pm.. update soon

Hi Lakshmi 😊
Thanks for the reply dear.

Originally posted by: sneha0601

hey....
don't worry yaar... and get well soon.... hope ur health gets ok soon....

The part was amazing as usual... i really love ur writing style... its amazing.... and i loved armaan's reaction too... very well written.... keep up the good work...


Cheers!!!

Hi Sneha 😊
Thanks for the concern friend and for the appreciation too.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: samijan

gr8 part. continue soon!!!!!!!!

Thanks Samira 😊

Originally posted by: neha2005

thanks for the PM!!! its still a great update! cant wait for the next update! hope u get well soon!

Hi Neha 😊
Thanks for the reply and concern dear.

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey too good.........keep it up...thankc 4 the pm.....

❤️MONA

Hi Mona 😊
Thanks for the comment.

Originally posted by: sarazahid

that was seriously awsoooooooooooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue sooon

Hi Sara 😊
Wooahhh... thats a BIGGGGGGG one. Thanks for the reply dear.

Originally posted by: saira_1

amazing update aimee👏!

plz cont soon😳

Hi Saira 😊
Thanks for the reply. I will update soon.

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