Zindagi..Teri Meri Kahani(RN)urgnt nt pg116(29/10) - Page 83

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Priya
How r u???
Happy Navratri to u too..😊
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Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hii Priya...
Happy Navarathri to you too
Fabulous part Asusual 👏👏👏👏👏
Iss update ki shuruwat to tune bahut acche se ki lekin mujhe ending bilkul bhi acchi nahin laga ..tum ye mat sochna ki i dont like your writting style...wo jaha par tune end kiya na i dont like that ...ab ye kaunsi nayi baat hain?????? ..u always do like that ...aur main bhi har baar complaint karthi hun ye jaanthe hue bhi ki teri is bhimari ka koi ilaaz nahin hain
Chalo bahut hogaya meri bak bak ab commnet par aate hain ...tu ye mysteries kab solve karegi pehle wo mujhe bata ..baadh main teri update ki tarrif karthi hun ..yaar tu is fic ko start kiye kitne din hue ?? i think do saal se upar hogaya hoga..fir bhi tu ek bhi clue tikh se nahin dethi ...waise bhi meri dimag itni tez nahin chalthi ..ab mujhse ye suspense bardasth nahin hota ..jaldi kuch karo ,pehle naina ki pic mila us ghar pe ab Aasha jee ki painting waha pe kya kar rahi hain ,kya Aasha jee knows about jusrice kapoor???? ,,aur ye Aasha jee ka kuch ata pata nahin ,kab se wo gayab hain ,aur Amar ka death bhi kaise hua kyun hua tune tikh se nahin kaha. ..ha ur ek baat yaad aaya tune kya kaha fic ki starting main suspense sirf 15% aur romance 60% something like that na..mujhe to lagtha hain romance 15% aur suspense 60% hain is fic main...... meri baat maanja aur jaldi se sab kuch clear kardo ...tikh hain.
Naina n raj scene is so sweet tha yaar ..Aww naina jaanthi hain ki raj usse kabhi jhooth nahin boltha...ye donon aaram se balcony main sogaye the aur cute si pallo darr gayi thi ye sochke wo donon kaha chale gaye usse chodhke....lekin raj ne baat ko sambhal liya ...that really a lovely scene...palak ki sawal mama ko godh main utakhe apne story sunayi ..so hillarious 😆😆😆😆😆
the childhood scene is so nice ....pehle tune is ke bare main jhikar kiya tha na ab hamhe poori scene padhne ko mila.thank u for that ...Amar is so nice when he was small ,Raj kitna gussa horaha tha when alekh said naina is his girlfriend 😆😆😆😆
Raj neetu ki baal kaat diya aur usse kiss bhi kiya ..naughty raj ..sweetu raj cant see tears in nainas eyes ...isiliye usne neetu ki baal kat diya..aise kya hua tha ki nainas dad raj ki dad se bhi bina kuch kahe waha se chale gaye???
Laghta hain Alekh aur neelu ke bich main bhi sab kuch tikh hogaya
Loved the whole update n enjoyed a lot while reading it
chalo ab next part jaldi se update kardo ...me waiting
Edited by princessyogitha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

On seeing that naina is sleeping in the veranda even Raj goes to sleep with her. Akhir naina ke bina use neend thodi hi aati. Naina is surprised to see him there. Both of them sleep peacefully together.

Palak is angry with them for leaving her alone in the room. Dono Raj aur niana usse bade pyaar se manate hai.

The flashback was very nice. Raj had always been very possessive of naina. When alekh said that she was his girlfriend Raj got so angry.

Raj cannot see naina crying and so with the help of other boys he cut off Neetu's hair. His dad gets very angry on him and his friends for doing such a thing, but his father had to give in as naina went on a hunger strike to save Raj and his friends.

What has happened between Alekh and neelu?

The picture is indeed mysterious. Raj is surprised to know that Naina actually knows who has painted that pic. He is impressed by the analysis which naina draws from the picture.

Waiting to know what has made Raj this happy

Please continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt indeed...loved rn vute talk

and d flashback part was too good....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Good update dear.
Naina can sleep any where i think but i can never. Ab jab Naina yahan hai to Raj ko to vaise bhi andar neend nahi aane waali hai na to yahin aa k leta aur Naina ki neend bhi gum ho gayi ab.
Raj n Naina's childhood was really sweet. Sab se jyada mast tha vo scene GF waala. Jab Raj us bacchi ko apni GF kehta tha to Naina k liye us ne kaise baal kaat diye?
Bus isliye ki vo Naina ko pareshaan karti thi bol bol kar aur sach me Raj to Naina ki aakhon me kabhi ansoon dekh hi nahi sakta tha na. Saara plan us ne hi banaya aur theeno ne saath mil kar sab kiya par us ladki ko bhi tabhi jaagna tha aur jaag kar Raj ko hi dekhna tha.
Poor Raj sab se jyada vahi fasa na aur baaki k logon ne us ko hi sab se jyada punish kiya. Vahan bhi us ko Neetu itne cute lag rahi thi ki us ne kiss kar liya us ko.
But bachpan se hi ek baat to clear thi na ki Raj Naina ko bahut like karta tha. Un dono ka pyaar dekh k hi to Amit jee Naina se door nahi le jaa paaye Naina ko.
Dono k dil ne bhi kaha tha dono se jab vo itne saalon baad mile the ki jaante hain vo dono ek doosre ko. Pyaar to hai bus kaha nahi abhi tak Naina ne Raj se.
Palak bechari kitna dar gayi thi jab koi us k pass nahi tha to. But Raj loves her really so much.
ALekh n Neelu k beech ki bhi dooriyan khatam ho gayi hain. Raj abhi bhi painting se kuch dhoondhne ki koshish kar raha hai n Naina ki bhi help li.
Pehle to Naina ne bhi kuch khass nahi bataya but ab ye letter jo us me se mila hai n next thing Naina ne bhi bata diya ki Asha ne banaya tha us ko to may be kuch mil jaayega.
Hope u will continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
why r u not updating this ff.............plzzzzzzzzz continue soon cant wait to read more plzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
URGENT NOTE
Hiiiiieeeeeeeee Alllll
ek jaruri baat karna hai...!!! plz...meri puri NOTE padh ne k baad hi apna reaction dena...!!! us se pahle no galiyan n no daantna...plz...
main philhal k liye is fiction ko bandh karr rahi hun...!!! kyoun...??? yeh thodi si lambhi kahani hai...phir bhi bata deti hun...!!!
actually, maine is fiction ko start kiya tha october 2008 ko..aur maine IF join kiya tha sep 2008 ko...!!! tab...jab ki dost k naam par mera yahan par koi nahi tha...!!!
maine jab is fiction ko start kiya toh mere soch me jo kahani thi...voh ek Love Story thi...thode se twist...aur turns k sath...!!! par jaisa ki maine kaha ki tab main yahan par nayi thi...!!! toh mujhe is fiction k suruwat se hi baht kuch suffer karna pada...!!!
jo kahani maine sochi thi...voh main likh nahi payi...!!! kyoun ki...mujh se kaha gaya...ki 'yeh hona chahiye...voh hona chahiye...!!! aisa nahi hona chahiye...vaisa nahi hona chahiye...!!! is charc ko change karo...yeh karo...aur voh karo'...
main thak gayi thi...in fact IF chodna chahati thi...par us tym me Vertika mere sath hui...aur main ruk gayi...!!! par tab tak mere is fic ko main apne story se baht hi alag tarike se likh chuki thi...jo ki main nahi likhna chahti thi...!!!
na chahte hue bhi is fic ko mujhe suspence fic bana na pada...aur baht kuch changes karne pade...!!! jo ki main kabhi bhi nahi chahti thi...!!!
yeh baat sach hai ki koi bhi writer pressurize ho kar nahi likh sakta...!!! mere sath bhi kuch aisa hi hua...maine likhna toh suru kiya...par is fic ko us anjam tak nahi le payi...jahan main le jana chahti thi...!!!
jo kahani mere dimag me thi...us point se ab yeh fiction aur bhi jyada dur chala gaya hai...!!! main khud sahi feel nahi karr pa rahi hun...is fiction ko le kar...!!! mujhe pata hi nahi hai ki main kya likhun...kyoun ki yeh voh kahani hai hi nahi...jo maine kabhi socha tha...aur likhna suru kiya tha...!!! main is story ko itna tod-marod chuki hun ke...kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki yeh fiction meri hai hi nahi...
isiliye philhal main is fic ko bandh karr rahi hun...!!! par sayad kabhi main is fiction ko agar phir se aage badhane k bare me sochun toh jarur karungi...!!! lekin tab tak main is fic ko aur nahi likh payungi...!!!
aap sabhi se yehi req hai ki aap plz...is post par LIKE button press karen...!!! taki main yeh samajh sakun ki aap mere sath hani...aur meri baat bhi samajh rahe hain...!!!
Aur haan...abhi mujhe kisi ne bhi kuch bhi nahi kaha hai...!!! yeh mat sochna ki mujhe kisi ne kaha hai kuch...aur isiliye main yeh fic bandh karr rahi hun...aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...!!!
baat sirf itni si hai ki...yeh meri kahani hai hi nahi...jo mere imagination me thi...!!! na toh yeh voh RAJ hai...aur na hi yeh voh Naina...jise maine yahan par present kiya hai...!!!
meri kahani thi ek simple Love Story...jo zindagi k chote bade tufanon ko kat te hue aage badhti hai...!!! jahan do ajnabi ek dushre k liye jeete hain...!!! par meri hi galati thi...jo maine is k kahani ko is tarah se badal diya...!!! ab aage mujhe kya likhna hai...voh hi nahi pata toh main kya likhun...???
plz...mujhe samajhne ki koshish karna...aur ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena...!!! aur meri wajah se jo bhi HURT hue hain...unhe bhi main SORRY kah rahi hun...
love you all
Priya😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
oyee priii..dekh main teri baat samajthi hoon..& haan agar tu thode waqt ke liye is fanfic ko halt pe rakhna chahthi hai tho i'am with you..yaar being a ff writer i know kii kabhi kabhi kuch readers do not like the way the story is going & they request for a change in the storyline...i have experienced this before....lekin yaar i feel all it will take is a part or just two to shape it back how you want it...i feel kii bas agar tu ek ya do parts maximum likhegi tho the confusion in the ff will be gone & the ff will again become your ff...where you will feel from the heart that it is indeed you are writing... priii tu itni achchi writer hai kii bas if you want & if you truly believe then you can make this ff again as the sweet, simple love story, as you had earlier imagined it....i think that you are undergoing a writers block for this ff right now & i know how a writer's block can affect you...you know whenever i face such a situation i do not update my ff's a month or two, then when i sit to write the block does not exist & the writing comes with the flow... dekhh prii i'am not forcing you to continue this fanfic as soon as possible, all i'am telling you is that take a break from this particular ff for sometime & then return to it whenever you feel like it, because i'am sure even you would not like to leave your writing unfinished....aur haan prii, i don't know agar tujhe kissi ne teri writing ko lekar kuch kaha hai ya nahii, agar kissi na kuch kaha hai tho do tell us aur baaki hum par chod do....aur haan tu ek break le ZTMK se & come back with a bang shaping up the fic as your heart wants..lovee youu....🤗
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

oyee priii..dekh main teri baat samajthi hoon..& haan agar tu thode waqt ke liye is fanfic ko halt pe rakhna chahthi hai tho i'am with you..yaar being a ff writer i know kii kabhi kabhi kuch readers do not like the way the story is going & they request for a change in the storyline...i have experienced this before....lekin yaar i feel all it will take is a part or just two to shape it back how you want it...i feel kii bas agar tu ek ya do parts maximum likhegi tho the confusion in the ff will be gone & the ff will again become your ff...where you will feel from the heart that it is indeed you are writing... priii tu itni achchi writer hai kii bas if you want & if you truly believe then you can make this ff again as the sweet, simple love story, as you had earlier imagined it....i think that you are undergoing a writers block for this ff right now & i know how a writer's block can affect you...you know whenever i face such a situation i do not update my ff's a month or two, then when i sit to write the block does not exist & the writing comes with the flow... dekhh prii i'am not forcing you to continue this fanfic as soon as possible, all i'am telling you is that take a break from this particular ff for sometime & then return to it whenever you feel like it, because i'am sure even you would not like to leave your writing unfinished....aur haan prii, i don't know agar tujhe kissi ne teri writing ko lekar kuch kaha hai ya nahii, agar kissi na kuch kaha hai tho do tell us aur baaki hum par chod do....aur haan tu ek break le ZTMK se & come back with a bang shaping up the fic as your heart wants..lovee youu....🤗

Hey Suri...thanxxx yaar...!!!par tu meri baat ko thik se samjhi nahi...!!! na toh mujhe kisi ne kuch pucha hai aur na hi mujhe kisi readers se koi prob hai...aur na hi kisi ne mujh se kuch kaha hai...!!!
mere sare readers baht achhe hain...aur hamesha mujhe support karte aaye hain...!!! main tab ki baat karr rahi hun...jab maine yeh fiction start kiya tha...tabhi mujhe baht prob hua tha...aur tabhi mujhe is ke story ko change karna pada tha...!!! aur is fiction ko close karne me mere kisi dost ka koi bhi hath nahi hai...!!! mere sabhi dost baht achhe hain...
kisi ne bhi mujh se koi sawal nahi pucha...aur na hi confusion ko le kar kisi ne kuch kaha hai mujhe...!! kyoun ke meri sabhi readers ko mujh par bharosha hai...ke main kuch galat nahi karungi...!!! main toh un ki baat karr rahi hun...jo jabardast aap ke imagination ko badalna chahte hain...!!! aap ke storyline ko khud ke hisab se likhwana chahte hain...!!! varna tu khud hi dekh le...aaj tak kisi bhi readers ne mujhe kuch bhi galat nahi kaha...!!! voh sabhi mujh se baht pyar karte hain aur trust bhi...
aur aaj...is story ko main itna bigad chuki hun ke...kya likhun meri samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha hai...!!! isiliye main ise yahin CLOSE karna chahti hun...!!!
Thanxxxx n love u too dear...
Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
prii tho ek kaam kar na why don't you start 'ZTMK', all over once again... this time the way you want it...is thread ko close karke....saare parts ko edit karde & this time shape the ff as you want it, jaisa tera dil kahe...see i feel that if you start the ff once again then even you will feel as if tu dil se likh rahii hai....you can start the ff in a new thread & this time you can make it to a sweet & simple love story, jaise you had imangined it to be earlier..i think yeh idea work hoga....kyun priii tum kya sochthi ho..😊
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 14 years ago

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