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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome update..I love the last para very much..please if u dont mind pm me d next update link..

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Posted: 16 years ago
tumne kya kiya piya
i've read frm starting again
i lost my track comepletly
but loved reading it frm starting again
i should say that 1st part was the cutest
very excited abt nxt part
sam- love at first sight
mayank realised this but dind;t know y he said by god
haha totally interesting
n the best was nupur saying "woh kitna pyaara ldka hai"
cont .. soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.b

tumne kya kiya piya

i've read frm starting again
i lost my track comepletly
but loved reading it frm starting again
i should say that 1st part was the cutest
very excited abt nxt part
sam- love at first sight
mayank realised this but dind;t know y he said by god
haha totally interesting
n the best was nupur saying "woh kitna pyaara ldka hai"
cont .. soon
thanks for the pm

Hey di..Thanks 4reading & commenting🤗actually me was also reading Ff 4m be start,was correcting some gramatical & spelling mistakes😆😳
But i hope u liked it di..& yup me'll cont it soon🤗🤗
Thanku..🤗
Love u🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Kash-Monayafan

Awesome update..I love the last para very much..please if u dont mind pm me d next update link..

Thanks a lot sweets🤗'll pm u..& thanks 4reading & commenting😊
Love
piya.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: piya2025

Hey di..Thanks 4reading & commenting🤗actually me was also reading Ff 4m be start,was correcting some gramatical & spelling mistakes😆😳
But i hope u liked it di..& yup me'll cont it soon🤗🤗
Thanku..🤗
Love u🤗

y not
i liked it a lot
that's y im waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ Kavya di- aww dats really sweet of u di🤗I'll do it :)🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part -5

mayank said by god! abhi maza ayegha.. yes!He was very happy @ d time nupur come der..

N-Yea paghalo jaise barbara kyu rahe ho🤔
M-arre tum!😛Nhain kuch nahi..class nahi jana hai kya..😳chalo..(slowly) yea v kahi v aa jati hai..
Mayank left 4class..

Nu-By god!Suna toh tha abhi dekh v lia ladko k dimaggh unki ghutno pe hota hai.hhhah!🤪

Whole gang in d classroom..

M-Hey samrat..
S-hi..
M-kya hi..haatna..😛
S-kya..kaha hattun!😛
M-i mean mujhe baithna hai..😃
S-toh aise bolna..

Mayank sited besides samrat😊

S-Hand on his head..Uff!..
M-maine toh pahele hi kaha tha az ghar chal te hai..class bunk karte hai..per mera koi sunta kaha hai..😳😕
S-Looking at mayank..hmm.. u r right😕Toh chale..
M-abhi kaise..Shukla aa jaegha na..😛
S-tu abhi sukla se kab darne lagha..abhi chal ..
M-per kahase..😛
S-mere sirse..🤢darwaze se.. shukla abhi aya nahi hai
M- oh ok.. chal..😆😊

Ghunjan noticed all this & she was giving some ajeeb ajeeb expressions to herself..Nupur enter in d classroom..

N- arre tum dono,kaha jarahe ho,class nahi karni hai kya😛😊
M- nahin..woh samrat ka sir thoda dukhraha hai,so we r leaving 4 home.😊
N- arre issmein ghar jane ki kya baat hai..main hu naa.. ek min mein thik kar dunghi by god.. tumhe pata hai maine na mere nani se..
(samrat's hand again on his head,Mayank stoped Nupur)
M-arre baas!Thodi toh break le lia karo..nahin toh kamm se kaam break de toh diya karo..😛abhi uska sir bohout dard mein hai aur bechara tumhare nuske jheel nahi payegha
N-By god!Bohout muh faat ho tum !😵
M-kya karron!sayed tumhara hi assar hai..abhi humme jane do,isse pahele shukla aa jaye..
N- huh,toh jao na maine kaha roka hai..

Ghunjan called nupur..

G-Di..
N-ha1Ayi..!Give mayank a tough look..By god😡& left..
M-(looking at nupur)By god ki maharani bolti hai toh chup hone ka naam hi nahin leti..Chal..abhi tu kiske intezaar mein hai..😛
S-(Looking at Mayank) abhi tak toh tere hi intezaar mein tha..
M- ahh!.ok..haan..main kaha kuch bol raha tha.. chal..

Both went 4 home..

At home..Armaan reached at home 4m office..Riddhhima doing some house work..Armaan comes & huged her 4m back side..

A-Emm..hi basket..
R-Armaan..tum..😊hi.. per kya karrahe ho,sodho..😊
A-nahin,aise rahene do na..(He was so tired,it was like his all tiredness left him when he hugeed Riddhima,His tiring smile has also giving him pleasure)
R-haam? aise hi..😊😆(Trunned back toh Armaan,she's still in Armaan's aram)Chalo fresh ho jao..tum thak gaye honghe na..😊
A-(Finally he left riddhima) haann!bohoutttt😊
R-ok ..phir fresh ho jao😊main khana lagati hu😊ok..😊
A-Hmm,,jo tum kaho basket..(Giving her a pick on her check)..[after few sec..] Basket Sam aur Mayank aa gaya kya..
R-nahin woh dono toh abhi tak nahi ayye 😊

At that moment Mayank aur samrat entered..Samrat was looking very tired & mayank was like main kaha issk becch mein phaass gaya😛(😆)

M-Hi didi.. hi jiju..😊😉
A- hi sale,(Hugging Mayank)..Riddhima smilimg,,
A-toh abhi app apne darsharan derahe hai.. yaar tera hi ghar hai kabhi aabhi jaya karr..😊
M-Jiju.. apko toh pata hai na.. hum ladki wale ladke walo ki gharka pani v nahi peete but huh dont worry khana khane zarror aa sakte hai😆😆😆
Both Armaan riddhima laughed.. Mayank as well..Armaan gibe Mayank a hi5..😊samrat was still silent..
M-aise hi jiju..woh padai,college aur mere mom ki datton se fursaat mile fir toh main kahi ayun,jayun naAz sam ne kaha,k didi ne bulaya hai toh see,im all here😃
A-Haan!Accha kiya😊..(Now atlast looking at samrat..) Arre samrat tera college az..(Armaan noticed his bro looking really tired & a bit sad)
A- Sam..kya huya..😛
S-(suddenly hear his name he was like huh!what!)huh!nahin.. toh..kuch nahi bhai.. baas! sir mein thoda dard hai
Ri-(Very tensed)[looking at Mayank & Armaan..] Tum dono v naTumhare baatton mein maine iss per dhyan v nahi dicoming near to sam,putting her hand on hid fourhead-Sam..kya huya..Vukhar toh nahi hai na..
S-like a sweet kid just laid down his head on Riddhima's shoulder & said-Kuch nahi bhabi.. baass !thoda thak gaya hu
R- aww mere baccha!
A- arre toh chal jaker fresh ho ja.. aur kuch khale.. u'll feel better😊
R-haan!sam.. zaldi se fresh hokar necche aa ja..Dekho toh kaisa haal ho gaya hai..
S-Finally smiled,hugging his sister-in-aw & said to her bhabhi-App chinta maat karo..i'll be fine.. abhi fresh hokar ataa hoon😊
R-u sure na..(holding his hand)
S-yes..😊
R-ok fir jao..
Sam left..
R to mayank- abhi tujhe kya invitation chaiye fresh hone k lia..ja naa😛
M-Di..app hamesha mujhe dantti ku h..jata hu na.. hey sam ruk..main v ataa hu.(b4 leaving he said in Armaan's ear-jiju apko kuch mazedaar baaten batani hai..abhi ata hu)
Armaan understood nothing..Riddhima ask to Armaan-yea kya bolker gaya..
A-mujhe nahi pata..bola akar batayegha..😊

Every1 on dining table..

R- sam tu mere paas akar baith..main tujhe khila deti hu..😊To mayank- tu wohi baith.. tere toh main badhmein khabar leti hu😡
M-(sitted besides Armaan) Jiju,yea di hamesha aise hi hai kya..😕
A-ha yaar,kabhi kabhi toh mujhe v aise hi daat deti hai..fuu(Both laughed & gave each other hi5)
R-haas ku rahe ho app dono..aur tu mayank.. mamma ne phone kiya tha.. tu raat raat bhar kaha raheta hai(on d other hand she 's feading samrat[Sho sweet]}..pata hai mom kitni padeshan raheti hai..
M- yea maa v na..Di.. apko toh pata hi hai..mom choti se baat per aise chinta karti hai jaise world war 3 start hone wali hai.. app chill karo..(& he startted eating)
R- Mayank ! baatt ko badal maat.. thrusday raat ko tu ghar raat k tin baze aya tha.. aur mom ko bataya v nahi..toh woh padeshan nahi hoghi kya..
M- di woh toh main..😕(Armaan stoped mayank)..Arre tum dono v na.. ladai ku karrahe ho..Riddhima,wih abhi baccha hai.. abhi party nahi karegha toh hai 50 saak ke umaar mein karegha🤔😛😊
Riddhima- Armaan tum..😛
A- aur tu.. sale sahab..aghar bahar jana hi hai toh mummi ko batakar jani chahiye na..then she wont be tensed 4 u & u can also enjoy the party😊
M-ok jiju,i wint repeat my mistake again😳per abhi di ko bolo datna bandh karen by god..😕😳
R-Tu..😡
A-Riddhima...😊
R-ok..(suddenly something distrack Ridhhima's attension)Mayank yea kya kaha tune,,?
M-what>(eating)
R-BY GOD!😛😳😕
M-(was like ehh!not again) but some how he maneged to get ride away 4m his di 4saying dat word..he said..

M-mere sodho.. di.. apko pata hai ,apka debar bada ho gaya hai😆
S-(he was so accha baccha till now,but he screemed.).What!😛
M-chalo finally kuch bola toh sahi😆accha pata hai di az college mein do new girls ayi hai..aur az zindaghi mein paheli baar samrat ne-The honest & gentelman samrat ne,unki kichai kari..
Armaan-😛
S-what!Dude, r u mad..what r u saying😳😛
M- aur kya.. tune Ghunjan k sath jo kiya woh bata du..😉😆
S- Bhabhi plz isse chup karkeko bolo.. he's lieing..😳😛maine kuch nahi kiya.. i swear
R-oyyr bandaar.. chup ho jaa tu..
Armaan & Riddhima both together said in mayank's ears's-(slowly)

"waise lya kya" (😆😆😆)

samrat- app dono v..He left 4m der by making a sad face..like a lil kido😊

M-arre sam..ruk jaa yaar nahi batata kuch v😆
AR-Sam..ruk..
R-tu bhi na bohout kichai karta hai bechare ka..😊😆
M-😆Di,main kya karroon..yea itna chup jo raheta hai..but yeah today he did surprized me..
(He told eveything to AR what has happened in college)

A- oyye hoyye!Basket..mujhe toh apne din yaad aa gaye*sigh*
R-Tumhe toh sab kuch mein apne din hi yaad atte hai..its nothing serious guyz.. anyways me off now..u guyz carry on..i'v to finish my work..To mayank- aur tu.. zaldi khana finish kaar..aur az yehi ruk jaa..😊maine mom se permission le lia hai..😊
M-ok di😊

Riddhima left..
Armaan & Mayank together- Jo v kaho..kuch toh baat hai..kyu😈(Two devil smileed)😉

Samrat in his be roon..wearing a white kurta wid a white pant..

Thinking abt what has happened today in college,what he did..
He comes newar to window..off d light of d room..Moon's light touching him. soft wind blowing his hairs..& he said to himself..

Kaal college jaker usse fir se maffi magh lungha..per woh mujhe maaf toh kaar deghi na😊

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Ok guyz this's d 6th part of this FF,hope u all 'll like..comments r really appriciated..sp plz..if u liked this part or my FF,plz after reading leave ur honest comment😊

Love u all
piya.
Edited by piya2025 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great part! Love the update! Continue asap!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Piya partner!That was fantastic..Read ur FF a few weeks back..but never commented..Its superb yaar..Love you for including KaSh as well..The latest part i superb..the interaction between the whole family is really good!Waiting for more Sajan scenes from you!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: *Adorable_Anu*

Piya partner!That was fantastic..Read ur FF a few weeks back..but never commented..Its superb yaar..Love you for including KaSh as well..The latest part i superb..the interaction between the whole family is really good!Waiting for more Sajan scenes from you!


Thanku Anu partnner🤗I'll update soon & yes sajan scenes r coming in next update😊In this part there were not sajan at all+not much samrat's dialoug's as well..bechare ko maine chup karwa diya😆but in next part there 'll be sajan n samrat😊
Thanks 4reading a7 commenting partnner🤗🤗
love u

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