~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010 - Page 98

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Posted: 15 years ago
good but dont make rahul nmuski's relationship complicated
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Posted: 15 years ago
G8 part n i am happy that finally RN got married and Naina gave a lot of importance to Muski's opinion that's what called a good start of a true relationship.
update soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi dear
How r u???
Wat a gr8 jhatka is dis last update..Raj n Naina got married ..Wow👏👏👏
I was so glad to read dat...
Will Rahul n Muski b able to solve their problems????
Do update soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part!!
thanks for the pm!!
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
when are you updating? it's been forever...:(
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Posted: 15 years ago
The update was beautiful.... Naina and raj have the perfect wedding that they deserve...the vows were perfect... please do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

sorry for disappearing like that last week...have been in too much of a mess in life....

anyhow fatiny has reached its end....was considerin writtin 10-12 chaps more....but in the given scenario i cant...we'l be wrapping up fatiny soon !!..
i'l update 2mrw !!
luv u all !!
tina !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Naina stood there happy as ever.... next to her husband... Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhwat.... when she saw Rahul entwine his fingers with muskaan and muskaan smiled.... naina smiled .....she knew things would get better....
Raj-Thankyou all of you !!.... If i m here today its all because of you ....
*pause*
Raj -- (emotional ) ... Rahul tu ...
Rahul held his tears back and hugged raj immediately..
Raj-Mainey tujhe itna kuch sunaya...itna kuch...i mean....phir bhi tune meri maddad ki .... rahul main tujhe thanx bhi nahi keh sakta...i feel so freaking guilty..
RAhul=Oyee raj bas !!.... bahut ho gaya....
Raj broke down crying..
Rahul-Please Raj...sab kuch bhool ja....
Raj-Nahi rahul...kaisey bhool jao ...
Rahul-Kya kiya hain maine?....kuch bhi toh nahi ... woh aaye kya aaj ... nahi aaye na.....kya fark padta hain ..
Raj-Rahul ..
Rahul-Jaaney de na....jo wada naina se kiya tha woh rakh to nahi paya...woh aaye toh nahi ..
Raj-Aaye nahi lekin atleast apney gussey ko bhula diya....naina ko maaf kar diya....mujhe accept kiya...
Rahul-But maine toh promise yahan lana ki kiya tha...i am sorry naina....main tumharey parents ko nahi laa saka..
Naina sighed....why did this topic have to come out ...
Naina-Rahul... tumney jo bhi kiya....
Naina dint want to cry ..
"Naina"
A voice echoed behind her...
She turned around shocked....
Naina- Maaaa....
Everybody looked.....yes it was her.... and behind her was her father....
Naina frooze..
Naina-Baba....
There were tears in his eyes....
He opened his arms..
Naina started crying and ran into his arms...
Both of them were sobbing....
Rahul smiled....smiled thru his tears...yes they had come...his promise was fulfilled...
Muskaan looked at him ..
Muskaan-You did it rahul....you did it ....
Rahul nodded and looked at her ..
She placed her head on his shoulder ....
He wrapped his hand around her waist...
Naina-Baba...
Baba-Mujhe maaf kar dein beta....pagal tha main .... apni iklauti betike saath maine na jaanye kya kya kiya....uski shaadi bhi ....i m sorry beta...
Naina-Nahi baba....aap sorry kyun keh rahein hain ...please aap sorry mat kahiye...aab chaliye woh dekhiye ....raj hain wahan...mera pati...aapka damad..
She walked to raj ..
Raj looked down ..... he dint know what to say or do ...
Baba- Rajveer beta..
Raj looked up at once...tears in his eyes....beta..
Baba-Humein maaf kar doon ...
He folded his hands in front of rajveer...
Rajveer immediately stopped him ..
Raj-Nahi uncle...aap yeh sab ..
Baba-Kitna galat tha main ..... andha ho gaya tha....woh toh rahul ne meri aankhein khooli.....rahul ka woh rudeness woh gharey khotrey words ne hi mera dimag khola....mujhe pata chala main kitna bura hoon....please beta mujhe maaf kar doon ..
Raj-Nahi uncle...aap please aisa mat kahiye....
Baba-Naina ko khush rakhna beta..
Raj nodded....
Baba-Chalo...aab rona dhona bandh karo .... sab log .... aaj tumhari shaadi huyi hain ..... acha din hain ... jao naina ko le jao .....
Raj smiled...
Raj-Chalein naina???
Naina nodded smiling...
Raj-Thanx rahul buddy !!..
He went and hugged him ..
Rahul-Anytime raj ...anytime...
Raj-Chalta hoon...
Rahul-Hmm..wedding night ... finally .... oops not so finally....officially sounds better..
Raj blushed...
Rahul-Enjoy your night !!... Sleep well !!
He winked at Raj ..
Rahul-I know thats something exactly your not gonna do .... dont sleep for a freaking minute....enjoy raj !!...
Raj nodded..
Raj smiled annd turned to muski ..
Raj-SOrry beta...for everything that happened coz of me....and coz of me you and rahul....you guys ....i ah....just..dont know..i mean uh ..
Muski -Bhai please....its ok ... you still cant discuss relationships with me ...
She said smiling..
Raj nodded...
Raj-I m sorry ... and thanks a million...go and enjoy with rahul....just get back with him normally...i dont want to see both of you like this....hmm ??
Muskaan nodded....
Muskaan-You enjoy with bhabs for today... tommorow the gang is coming....you'l get screwed anyway !!...
Raj-I missed all of them man..
Muskaan-Me too ... but we dont really have a choice....they have exams..
Raj-Cha...if you were not my sister you wouldnt have got permission to bunk the exams..
Muskan *puppy face* brigadier chandok .... mere bhai ki shaadi hain ... please sir...i cant miss this...mere bhai ke alawa mera hain hi kaun sir ??..... unki shaadi mere zindagi ka sabse bada din hain ... i want to be there with him sir...in his happiness..please sir !!
Raj laughed and smacked her arm...
Raj-Keep smiling...
Muskaan nodded....
Raj left ...on the way spoke to rahul in a low voice...
Raj- Keep her happy tonight !!.... but remember you dont have official rights ok .... she is not your wife....
Rahul nodded..
Rahul-Things wont go that far...dont worry .... its a long night for both of us...me and muski... have a lot of talking and sorting to do ... no scope for romance raj .... be chilled...
He said sadly..
Raj-I wanted to say that you dont have official rights....but if you guys make up and stuff happily....then screw the rules...i did .... 😉
Raj said seriously..
Rahul-Raj what the hell are you talking ???
Raj-I was kidding...dont even think about it .... mr grewal ..😆😆
Rahul smiled and sighed..
Rahul-Now that sounds like my captain ...
Raj-Just take care of her... keep her smiling..
Rahul-I will do everything i can ...
Raj-Just be with her .... hold her close....trust me she doesnt need anything else....
Rahul nodded..
Raj left with naina ....
Rahul-Ah muskaan...woh uppar pura saman pada hain...we'l have to go and clear it up ...chalein ?
Muskaan nodded..
Rahul-I hope you dont mind uncle....
Baba-Nahi nahi ... no problem carry on ...
Rahul-Thankyou uncle...aapka aur aunty ka room wahan right main hain
Uncle-Thankyou beta..
Rahul-Ah aur uncle...mere sareey rude talks ke liye i am sorry ... but mujhe sirf woh ek rasta nazar aaya....sweet talking wouldnt work....aur kuch bhi karke main chatha tha ki aap yahan hoon ... naina ke sabse bade din ke liye...
Uncle-Its ok beta...main samjhta hoon .... i am thankful to you ..
Rahul smiled -- Sorry aunty...aapse bhi aggar kabhi kuch..
Aunty-Its ok beta...no problem....
Rahul -Hum chaltein hain ..
Rahul and muskaan turned to go ..
Aunty - Muskaan .... bahut acha ladka chuna hain tune....teri shaadi par hum zarror aana chahengey .... naina ki shaadi ke liye waqt par nahi pahunch paye...lekin tum bhi toh beti se kaam nahi hoon ..
Muskaan turned around....
Muski-Aunty aap yeh kya keh rahi hain ??
Aunty-Natak mat kar muskaan....raj naina ke maine ek pal main pakad liya tha...yaad hain na tujhe ??
Muskaan shyed away ..
Aunty-Chal ab jaa...saman saaf karney ...
Muskaan blushed and left with rahul ...
Muskaan-Oh gawd rahul...tumhe bhi koi aur reason nahi mila kya..
Rahul-Sedhey seedhey keh deta kya....muskaan upar chalo romance karna hain ..
Muskaan blushed !!
Rahul-Ab chalo... humara room humara wait kar raha hain ... raj ne mujhe permission di hain ki hum ek room main reh saktey hain aur warning bhi di hain ....ki tum meri patni nahi hoon ...
Muskaan smiled..
Rahul-You know what he meant na ...
Rahul pulled muskaan realy close and shut the room door behind him ...
Rahul-You dont know what he meant...wait i'l tell you ..
Muskaan blushed...
Rahul-He meant i can be with you in the room .... but you know ... he meant that your not me wife....and in india there is a rule that you cannot
He paused..
Rahul-That you cannot make love to the one you love before marriage...and your brother doesnt want me to make love to you before our marriage....though he did that with my sister ....
Muskaan turned tomato red...she looked everywhere but at rahul ...
He pulled her closer..
Rahul-I ev craved for you muskaan... even i hate being away from you .... it was all for naina...i owed her that much .... i am sorry ... i overlooked your needs and all in between ... my night shifts and my disaapearance ....i used to go to her house only every weekend to speak to uncle....i m sorry
Muskaan-ITs ok rahul...i love you thats it ...
Rahul-I love you too muskaan....
She placed her head on his chest...
Muskaan-Rahul can i ask you for something..
Rahul-Hmm..
Muskaan-Kiss me...
Rahul looked at her..
Muskaan-Now and here...kiss me ...
Rahul smiled and obliged !!..
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Raj sat on the bed next to naina.....she looked freaking nervous and scared..
Raj-Naina...why exactly are you behaving like this..
Naina-ERr...i dont know..everybody has beenn saying so many things about first night and all ... i am scared..
Raj-This is not your first night naina... practically speaking..
Naina blushed...
Naina-Shh !!... this is only my first night...and this is how i have to behave...
Raj smiled ... his nautanki naina..
Raj-But i know you really are scared..
Naina pretended to be thinking..
Naina - Thodaaaaaaaaaaa sa
She said like a kid..
Raj smiled....
Raj held her hand...
Raj-My love.....dont be scared... i wont do anything you dont want !!... IT WILL ALL BE WITH YOUR CONSENT ....
Naina saw the naughtiness in his eyes and smiled...
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sorry for disappearing like that last week...have been in too much of a mess in life....

anyhow fatiny has reached its end....was considerin writtin 10-12 chaps more....but in the given scenario i cant...we'l be wrapping up fatiny soon !!..
comin to this update...havnet proof read....soorry !!
luv u all ..
tina !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part...!!! 👏
Finally uncleji ko samaj me aaya...!!!!
Rahul has been too much for everyone...now its time he does something for Muskaan and himself...!!! 😉😉

Take care, everything will be sorted out...whatever mess you are in..!!!😃
Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
damn cool
finally their first offical night
part was superb
update soon

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