~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh gr8 work Tina Luved the UD...Rahul as awesome as ever
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was really bomb😆😆😆, bahut hi blasting episode tha 😉😉😉and i feel ki har baar baat karte karte Raj aur Naina aur jyada kareeb aate jaa rahe hain😳😳😳. Rahul is indeed a good friend😃😃😃, Mujhe Raj ka raat me bahar khade rehne ka kaam bilkul silly lag raha tha😆😆😆 are yaar aaya tha to bahar kyoun khada ho gaya us ko bell to bajanai hi thi na, stupid guy. 😆😆😆
Us k baad watcman ne bechare ki haalat buri kar di bilkul😛😛😛. Raj n Naina have an understanding which is more than frndship😉😉😉. They are really look like hubby n wifey😛😛😛. Raj understands Naina so well n vice versa😉😉😉. Raj k liye Muskaan bahut tuff hai jab ki vo usi ki sis hai bus us ko samajhna bahut mushkil hai. Raat bhar Raj n Naina baat karte rahe Naveen k baare me😊. Naveen was truly darling😳😳😳 , i love his character. Kash Naina k mom n dad Raj ko maaf kar dein jaldi hi😕😕😕. Rahul bhi shock tha ki kaise Naina ne maaf kar diya Raj ko😲😲😲? Baat karte karte subah kar di aur Rahul ko bhi pareshaan kiya😆😆😆. Finally ab Ms. Naina Singh Ahluwalia Mrs. Naina Singh Shekhawat ban jaayengi jaldi hi.😳😳😳
want read next update asap. 😊😊😊
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
It was really gr8. I enjoyed it a lot. Luved the sleeping room part. rahul is too funny. But RAJ is sumthing really awesome. Well,Pls UD soon. It was really nice.
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Posted: 16 years ago

@shaina
thnx!!...rahul is indeed a sweetheart!!....well rahul toh har waqt humare raj aur naina ko tease karta rahega....thats how it is...but its sweet na......naina doesnt noe ki shayad woh khud itni lucky hain!!..well bout navin's girlfriend and sheetal and all ab ke liye no comments.....ud padhti raho... :)..

@suhana
thnx a lot!!...thnx for understandin also dear!!...i will decide on updates....i am jus wrkin it out..wld let u noe soon!!....hehe!!..i purposely kept the name as the bomb....it jus striked me and i said perfect!!....you'll noe bout navins gf soon!!....aagey aagey dekho hota hain kya..
@lipi
thnx a lot dear....thnx for pm'in the readers as well!!...
@rituka
thnx a lot!!
@soumya
thnx a lot!!....poor rahul..i agree...its a huge shock!!...and as for the link part i will ask her but nevertheless another idea just type fatiny on to ur google bar and you can find it...i do that generally..lol!!
@anshu
hehe!!...i noe poor rahul shocked wid d bomb!!.....hmm..lets see....you wanna noe soon??.....nono its not ritu...i can tell u that much!!... :)...
@bhavini
thnx......awee...no muski..sorry dear.....i will bring her back....shes on strike..lol!!...shes not ready to shoot!!...lol...definately soon!!
@deeya
thnx a lot..i understand....but thnx for leavin a comment...long or short i do appreciate it...thnx!!
@dazzling_glory
thnx a lot!!...hehe!!.....i knew u all wld think its d normal bomb...but this one is unusual na!!....hehe!!......i was a lil low wen i typed that part...though it was real long back!!....so u noe depends on the mood smetyms....hehe...queen of balmer!!....
@star
sry dear..lyk i mentioned hvin probs wid d pm part.....thnx a lot!!
@prerna
thnx a lot..i will!!
@sea_nyx
thnx a lot!!....poor rahul!!...hmm it does!!
@sam
thnx a lot sam!!....i promise more of rahul nd muski...i noe ur an rm fan na!!..and nowadays sajan nd mayur.......ryt na?
@vertika
hehe!!...bingo...batoon main yeh log kareeb ho rahe hain!!.....humare raj ke liye kuch bhi impossible nahi hain,,,that too when naina is wid him!....hope so woh raj ko maaf jaldi kar dengey......lets see...naina kya banti hain aur kya karti hain??
@sumaiya
thnx a lot!!.....rahl is indeed funny!!...and smart at de sme tym!!.....i will!!...
Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Rahul, Naina aur Raj teeno k teeno poore nautanki company hai.😛

To ab Naina ji Mrs. Naina Shekhawat, ban ne waali hai vow g8!👏

Poori raat baith kar baat kar rahe the dono aur subah kab ho gayi pata hi nahi chala.😉

Hope so ki Naina k parents Raj ko jaldi hi maaf kar dein.😃

update soon.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

maine abhi is ko padha all parts.

Nice fic ⭐️n i liked that Naina forgot Raj so soon 😛and now the main story will take place😊. Naina will be Mrs. Naina Shekhawat now😳. Raj n Rahul both r too funny.😆

Loved this concept yaar.😉

update soon.

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART-8
"Welcome to KMA"
Rahul looked at Raj with disbelief!!

Rahul-Raj tujhe ho kya gaya hain????

Naina-Rahul hum duno ka satth rehna zarori hain!!..isliye bas ek bar bhaiya innocent prove ho jaye...phir hu

Rahul-Oh toh tum bhi isme hoon?😡

Raj-Rahul

Rahul-Raj tu meri baat sun....i am dead sure yeh tera idea nahi hain!!......raj....well jis raj ko main janta hoon us ke liye life is a one time relationship connetion...long term and all that...tum hi toh kehte the na!...phir!!....Raj be practical.......tum shadi ke bandhan ka mazak bana rahey hoon!!...aggar tum naina ko apna life partner manteyy hoon and sware by to take care of her then marry her....yeh shadii 6 mahiney ke liye and all that bhool jao!!....wats gotten into u!!...🤢🤢

Raj-I noe Rahul...but this is the way out...

Rahul--Oh please Raj...are you trying to say there is no other way out...just give me a break.....try i am sure there would be some way....

Raj-Rahul...you tell us what should we do

Rahul-Dekh Raj the point is...i dunt want you to get into something you will regret later.....you noe what a marriage means raj...you knoe it...why do you want to make a joke out of it...think about it raj..i m not with you in this....if this is the plan count me out...raj proving navin innocent on one side and your principles on the other..how on earth did you even agree...

Raj hung his head down..

Rahul-See Raj..Its your call....i dunt mind..do whatever you wish...but if i were you i wouldnt do this...i wouldnt make a fool out of the most purest relationship and ritual...sorry Raj....but if your willing to really marry her then go on..not all this contract shit....thats my opinion...if u still feel your right go on...

Sense prevailed on Raj and Naina....they were wrong!!...

Raj-Uhh..

Naina-I guess Rahul your right!!

Raj-Pata nahi maine yeh kyun nahi socha...

Rahul-Its ok Raj......relax....tum naivn ko lekar kuch zyada hi hyper ho rahe hoo...eventually you'l prove him innocent....is ki wajah u cant miss out on your principles!...i wont let you!!

Raj nodded!!..

Naina-Lekin aur koi tarika nahi hain!......aggar main kma join bhi karti hoon...toh student-teacher relationsip uh...u noe wat i mean!!

Rahul-Waisey tum logogn ko relaionship ki kyun paddi hain!!😉...but no problem uska bhi solution hain

Raj-Matlab??

Rahul-Well...tune hi toh chetavani di thi...ke yeh doctor hain...specialization in psycology!!....bas she can join kma as a psycologist!!.....😊

Raj-Brilliant!!....yeh maine kyun nahi socha!!😛

Rahul-Us ke liye akal chahiye hoti hain!!😆

Rahul was laughing!!😆😆

Raj-But...Naina ka koi army background ya training nahi hain!!....

Rahul-Areyy yaar!!...chodo na!!...psyco ko army training ke kya zaroorat!!...woh bhi bc ke academy main!!...

Raj-Its veery important!!😕

Rahul-Uffoo suman hain na!!😉

Raj-Ohh yea!!.....shit woh bhi bhool gaya!!😆😆

Naina-Suman??😕

RAj-Haan suman....ek ladki jo rahul par puri latto hain😆😆

Naina-What??😲

Raj-Hann...she luvs rahul!!😊

Rahul-Raj pleasee!!!!!!😡

Raj-But rahul usse pasand nahi karta....but luckily shes Bc 's daughter!!..hehe!!...jab bhi humme BC ko patana padta hain..hum rahul ko bolte hain...rahul ki baat suman se hoti hain...aur BC apni pyari beti ki baat talte nahi hain!!.......naina Welcome to Kma!!😊

Rahul smiled!!😊

Rahul-Well....faculty to faculty relationship chalta hain na!!😆😆

Rahul was laughing!!

Raj-Friendship zaroor hoti hain!!😊

Naina agreed!!!

Naina-So captain see you at the academy.......12:00 hours sharp!!

She immitted those army people!!

Raj laughed!!😆

Raj-Navin se kaffi trainin le hain!!😊

Naina-Well.....acha woh academy mein sara din woh boring uniform pehna padega kya???

Raj-I guess....but since tum army se nahi hoon....you might be an exception!!

Naina-Thank god!!....but why will they recruit me....

Rahul-Woh sab main manage kar longa!!...you chill!!

Naina-But😕

Rahul-Raj isse samjha!!🥱

Raj-Naina...relax...kaam ho jayega!!😉

Naina-ok.!!

Rahul-Lekin Raj tune soch kaisey liya ke toh naina ke saath jhuth muth ki shadi nd all that!!

Raj-I dunno!!

Rahul-Tune socha hain Muskaan kya kahegi??

Naina-tumhari behen ryt??

Raj-Hmm....ask rahul bout it....before they were very good friends.....now and all muskaan gets real wild on him for nothing!!

Rahul-Main batata hoon..

Rahul got up and immitated Muskaan

Rahul(as muskaan)---

" MR.Rajveer...oh Captain Rajveer...apney achanak shadii kyun ki?...kahan hain woh?"

Enter Naina!!

"yeh mujhe theek lag rahi hain...koi mental disorder hain kya.....aapse shadi kyun ki"

Raj was laughing😆😆😆

"wait wait...i knoe...you got her pregnant or something.... Rahul was rolling on the floor!!...and so was Raj😆😆

Naina-Itni buri hain kya woh??😕

Raj got serious

Raj-Pata nahi.....gudiya thi woh meri....meri choti behen....bahut karreb the....phir achanak kya hua nahi malooom...she started drifting from me...bahut door....and now i think she hates me!!

Naina the typical psycologist

Naina--Lekin koi to karan hoga??😕

Raj-Pata nahi naina....i jus dunno...but abb Muskaa aise hi....stubborn rude weird.....har waqt ukhdi ukhdi rehti hain

Naina-Tumne pata karney ki bhi koshis nahi ki.....ridiculous!!..

Raj looked at her sadly!!

Raj-Bahut pata karney ki koshis ki....but muskaan aur bhi durr chaalti gayii!!

Naina understood!!

Naina-Aggar tum chahoon toh I could help...i mean aggar hum kabhi milte hain toh you knoe...i mean

Raj-Samjhta hoon naina...

Rahul-Naina please!!😡

Naina looked at him confused!!

Raj-No Rahul....shes right...my sister needs medical help...psycological help!!

Raj was sad😭

Naina-Raj please...iska matlab yeh nahi ki shes mad or she needs help...its just that maybe kuch hain uske mann main and she cant share it with you.....it could be anything...dont jump to impractical conclusions...

.psycho woh nahi hota jo kisi pagal ka ilaz karta hain....psycho woh hota hain jo ek aadmi ko kisi tough situation se bahar nikal sake...aur aisi kuch baatein hoti hain jo shayad ek behen apney bhai ke saath share nahi kar sakti!!

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It was sunday night time for Raj to return!!...

Raj-Okk chalta hoon.....

He hugged Rahul

Raj-Take care!!

Raj looked around..Naina was not there!!..He wanted to see her before he left...but then....meanwhile rahul called out perfectly understanding raj's face...

Rahul-Nainaa........... raj jaa raha hain!!😉

Naina appeared!!

Naina-Bye Raj..take care!!...

Raj-Bye Naina...take care!!

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The next 2-3 days were hectic for Raj.....and so for rahul...workload so too much!!

On Thursday at about 5 after finishing his classes Raj entered his quarteers very tired!!...he relaxed for a while and decided to call rahul to know about the further programme!!

Just then an orderly came and told him that there was an urgent meeting!!

Raj decided to call rahuul later...and went to the ground..

He saw all the cadets and faculty!!..

Bc entered!!....

Bc-Aap sab soch rahe hongey ki iss urgent meeting ki wajah kya hain...well ek bahut hi important reason hain......aaj kma mein ek nayee faculty member ka swagat kiya hain maine!!....aur assha rakhta hoon ki aap sab bhi unka badi thom dham se swagat karengey...aur unhe yahan par acha mehsoos karwangey....naki ek new comer jaisa!!.....please meet Kma ke nayye Faculty member...Ms.Naina Singh!!....Jo ek psycologist hain!!..😊

And jus then Naina stepped in...

And raj was shocked!!.😲..bowled over!!..naina!!...right here in the academy...looking as charming as ever....in a beautiful blue saree...plain blue suited her!!...😉

Raj was speechless...naina's eyes looked only for him...the only familiar face....she found him....absolutly stunned!!

Bc-Alright Ms.Naina main aapko aapke coleagues se milwa deta hoon...taaki aapko koi problem na hoon...aur cadets se aap class main mil sakti hain

Bc-Meet Captain Abhimanyu Rai chahuhan!!

Abhui stepped up...and shook hands!!

Bc-Yahan ki infirmary incharge...Dr.Shalini

Shalini stepped up

She shook hands too

Bc-Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat!!

Raj stepped up and shook hands!!.

Naina tried to hide her smile....he was still shocked!!😲

She was introduced to everyone

Bc-Appka quarters saaf kar diya jayega aap chaliye!!...Captain chauhan lead the lady please...

And off went naina with abhimanyu!!

Raj heard the cadets murmur!!

She's so beautiful!!.

Raj smiled..he remembered his academy days.....

And he walked to his room!!..

Half an hour later!!..

There was a knock and he went to get it!!

There she stood smiling!!

"Helloo Captain...actually i was wondering if you could show me the academy round...you knoe i m new here"😊

Raj smiled

Raj-How about some coffee before that

Naina smiled and went in!!

Raj-Yeh sab

Naina-All thnx to rahul...tumhare janney ke baadd usne sab double speed main kiya..😊

Raj smiled

Raj-Bata diya hota ki aa rahi hoon

Naina-Bata ti toh tumhara woh heart-attack wala chehra nahi dikhta....you were really shocked werent you!!..😆😆

Raj smiled!!

Raj-Waisey saree main.ahh sari tum par...ah you knoe sarre main bahut achi lagti hoon.....kabhi pehle nahi dekha so even more shocked!!

Naina smiled

Naina-Thnx!!..but dont expect me to be wearing them all the time....i had just this one....woh bhi rahul ne force kiya so maine pehna.....😆

Raj smiled....
Raj and Naina had coffee.

Naina-So captain......academy dikhayangey ya nahi??😉

Raj-Sure...chalein??

Raj and Naina leave..

Raj shows her the entire academy....a perfect guide...in between remembering some of his memoris with navin....the stopped at the mess...

Raj-Chalo I'll show you the mess....the most happening place!!

They enetered and our gang was sitting!!

Huda-Arey woh dekh...apney captain sir lag gayye...us nayi janani ko impress karne mein!!😆

Aalekh--Ayee sala....woh usko academy dekha rela hain...aapun ne unko dekha...kabhi activity room main toh kabhi court room main...woh usko academy dikha rela hain...aur yaad rakh uski behen idhirch hain!!

Muskaan-Whatevre!....mujhe kya fark padta hain wo jo bhi karein!!..

Tanvi-Badi ajeeb hoon..apney handsome bhai ko kisi ladki ke saath ...uff!!...hes so cute!!😊

Muskaan dropped her spoon!!..

Muskaan -kuch aur baat karein!!

Yudi-Okok chil!!

Raj came there with naina

Raj-Cadets!!....apki nayii psychology teacher jaise aap jante hain...Ms.Naina singh...main bas inhe academy dikha raha tha...socha aap sabse bhi milwa doon!!....

One by one Raj started introducing the cadets to Naina...Naina took just a moment to note something about each one!!.....

Well that was her habit...and now profession....She made cerain observations about each person!!...

When she met Muskaan she was determined to find out her problems.....she knew it was ver tough....but not impossible...and she was here to make it possible...she owed that much to Rajveer!!...She made a promise to herself that she will help him in this!!

The end!!

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Well that was part-8....yet another twist....shes not coming in as Mrs.Naina singh shekhawat....well...when all of you started assumin it that way i felt bad.....coz like i said the parts are already typed...so i couldnt change this important aspect.....so for all those of you who were expectin that sorry..!!...take this one as a pleasant twist...

When i thought of the story even i was for her becoming his wife and they eventualy falling in love....but then i found this way more better.....hope you all feel the same after reading the upcoming parts!!

THE UPDATES!!
And for the updates I have decided on Wednesday's and Saturday's...So you guys need to jus check this thread out on every Wednesday and Saturday...And the page no of the latest update can be found on the first page of my thread....and the fic could be found by typing "fatiny" in your google toolbar......simple na!!
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Luv tina!!

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Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

@varshita
bang on!!...teeno ke teeno nautanki company hain!!...lol!!,,,,baatein ho hi baatoon main ishara ho gaya!!..lol!!...der was sme song lyk dat na!!

@desaiprachi07
thnx a lot...and welcme to this new fic dear!!.....yes indeed now d stry moves to the main part!!.....but widout naina being mrs naina singh!!....thnx..!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
aapne toh kamaal hi kar diya ....its rocking1...rahul was rit.........

gosh raj just frgt everything looing at naina.........

gr8 updt
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Dear
Update was just too gud..I think this was unexpected but still its a gud idea infact really cool..I loved it so Naina will b the new psycologist..😃..Rahul indeed has a much better idea..n yes marriage is a really sacred n dis contract marriage n all will not fit in that category.
Raj was dumbstuck after seeing Naina in the Academy dat too in Saree.He was fumbling here too.
Wat is Muskaan's problem..Hope Naina solves it soon
Do update it soon👏👏👏
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago

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