Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99 - Page 10

Originally posted by: saridena

hi mahak sinha

thks for the pm dear

nice part

raj got confused bechara

update soooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

Originally posted by: rituka7

update was fantastic
update soon..........

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

wow gr8 yaar.........double role?/// seeta aur geeta...ah mera matlab naina aur vaishali..???? main bhi raj ki tarah confuse ho rahi hun....par is ka matlab raj hamesha se naina se pyar karta tha par fir vo karva chauth yaaad kar raha hota hai jab vo vaishali ke saath tha aur to aur usne usse wahin par sab ke saamne.................ah main to bolna bhi nhn chahti par vo to naina se pyaaar karta tha na fir vo aisa kaise kar sakta tha....ab ye mat kehna ki shaadi ke baaad ussse vishu se pyar ho gaya aur vo aaj bhi usse hi pyaar karta hai....aur hamaari bechaaari naina ko rulaaane ka koi mauka nhn chodta....bechaaari karwa chauth ki saaari bhi kehta hai khud le aaana......gussa aa gaya mujhe yaaar pehli baaar vo bhi raj par....kuch karo main to tension se uppar chali jaaaon gi....ud fasttttttttttttt

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

nice ud👏.cont soon......

Originally posted by: srojaleen

Hiiiiii vertika.....😊hope u r in a favbulous mood....honi bhi chahiye ....warna itni achhi ud kaise deti .👏

Nahi today i am in terrible mood.😡😡😡

thanx k tujhe hum sab par daya aahi gayi aur tune humara confusion dur kar diya.

kisi se pyar aur kisi se shadi ...bechara raj!!!!!!!😭😭

Thank u again.😲😲😲

waise raj k flirting scenes jyada achhe lage...kash ......yaar aise hi kuch scenes hote LRL main bhi....maza aajata.😆😆

to ab naina asliyat jan chuki hai.......aur woh bhi raj se pyar karti hai

Raj aur Naina humesha bus ek doosre se hi pyaar karte the.

aur sayad vaishali se shadi k baad raj vaishali ko like karne laga aur uski achhaion se pyar karne laga....aur sayad isiliye woh aaj tak use nahin bhool paya hai......😳

Vo pyaar nahi karta tha Vishu se vo bus apna farz poora kar raha tha aur ye baat jaldi hi pata chalegi tum ko. 😕😕😕

hey...vertika...this ud was just awesome......mind blowing....

well...mindblowing ...isliye k mind main jitne bhi confusion the na...... unhe dur karne k liye........!!!!!

ud soon.............PRIYA😊

Originally posted by: varshita

Hello mahak dear, 😊

the update was really awesome.👏

Naina aur Raj ki stork me kaafi dard hai but the flash back was really sweet.😭

Naina ko dekh kar Raj ek dum hi gul ho gaya tha.😆

Alekh vaise sahi time par aa gaya .😛

update soon.

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey Vertika,

5th fic of urs... oh my god !😲kaise manage karti ho yaar but anyways i luved this Diwali treat....😛it's looks really delicious.n different too.

thank u Namita.😛😛😛

waise about fic my reaction is Kaise kahe Hum 😕
i mean Naina n Vaishali Judwa !
Raj luv Naina......Naina luv Raj...
Raj got married to Vaishali.....
n he is weired behaving with Naina now when he luves her........
kya Raj aur Vaishali ke sagai par Naina nahi thi....kya Raj ne Naina se kabhi baat nahi ki is bare mein jab woh dono bahar ghumne jate the.

Naina aur Raj k break up k baad Naina abroad chali gayi thi aur vo lauti seedhe to bus shaadi k din.😭😭😭

n what's rong with Vaishali......

uff m totally confused....hope all confusion between Raj n Naina n also mine get cleared soon.....for that pupose u have to update sooooooooooon.
Haan jaldi hi khatam ho jaayengi confusions.😆😆😆

n once again Congrates for new fic dear....ur master at it now.keep it up.

Originally posted by: sharmi06

what happened to Vaishali? Did Raj start loving her? what happend to Naina in that time? how come he is married to Naina now? if Naina was his 1st love and now he is married to to her why can he be happy with her why can he take her shopping like he did with Vaishali? how come Raj didn't know the different between Naina and Vaishali?????????

Sab pata hai Raj ko aur pata bhi tha par vo pyaar bus Naina se hi karta tha par ab kuch ajeeb lag raha hai us ko.😭😭😭

hmmmmmm i think the person who is inside of Nainas; house is Alekh ..............

you have to clear lots of thinks other wise 😕

haan karni padegi aur mai karoongi bhi.

Good updata....... plz cont soooooooooooooon

Here comes the next update

"Kya hua kis ka phone tha?" Raj asked.

"Kya?" Raj shocked , "Aur tum akele jaana chahti ho." He questioned her.

Naina was silent, "Mai bhi chal raha hoon abhi." Raj said n taking his coat they both left the office immediately.

In his car Raj was thinking something. After being quite for at least ten minutes Raj said, "Naina tum ne aaj khana bahut accha banaya tha, I think ab tum ko khana banana aa gaya hai."

"Thanks," Naina said it only n smiled.

Raj was watching her face while she turned her face n started watching outside. Kuch yaad aa raha tha purana:-

"Kya tum ko khana banana nahi aata hai Naina?" Raj asked.

"Haan nahi aata simple." She replied naughtily.

"Yaar tum ko aana chahiye na khana banana , kya shaadi k baad bhooka rakhne ka irada hai mujhe." He said making a cute face. They both were sitting on a rock n it was dark around them.

"Actually mujhe kabhi jaroorat nahi padi na Raj, pehle to mom hain banane k liye agar vo nahi to di bana deti hai to mujhe kabhi jaroorat hi nahi padi na." she said n became silent, phir kuch sochte hue boli, "Par agar tum kaho to mai seekh loongi na."

"Dekho Naina jab tak tum seekhogi na tab tak mera to band baj chukka hoga na, now I hope ki pehle mai tumhari di se shaadi kar leta hoon tab tak tum seekh lena khana banana phir mai tum se kar loonga shaadi." He teased her.

Naina's face became serious she said, "Theek hai par agar meri di se shaadi kar lena tab mujh se shaadi karne ki dubara koi jaroorat nahi hai."she said with teary voice.

"Hey'.hey mai bus mazak kar raha tha yaar. Mere aur tumhare beech kabhi koi nahi aa sakta hai samjhi, milna to Raj aur Naina ko hai na koi bhi aaye beech me par last me Raj aur Naina he rahenge saath." He said try to make her mood light up.

She started sobbing n Raj couldn't take it any more, he hugged her tightly. "Mujhe chod k kabhi mat jaana Veer, tumhare bina mai nahi reh paoongi." She said still sobbing.

"Never Naina", he hugged her back more tightly now. He was pulling her into him with all his force. He kissed her forehead than her eyes, than her nose, than her cheeks, than her chin. He paused for a second when he was about to touch her lips with his, he saw in Naina's eyes which indicated him to continue. He placed slowly his lips on hers. It was a light kiss firstly but soon it became more heated, passionate n deeper as Raj started pressing his lips harder n harder. Naina got a small cut on her lips. It seems that Raj really wants more and more and he was not in mood to let her go.

Naina was enjoying the shower of kisses on her and she didn't stop him. He moved down n slipped straps of her top, he started kissing her shoulders with his lips n move towards her neck. Than he moved downwards n kissed her curves than down to her tummy which was clearly visible from her net top. He laid her n bent over her. He removed her top n started kissing her tummy. Naina was moarning a little. After kissing her tummy he move again upwards n saw her face. Her face was satisfied, it seems that she likes his way of loving her.

He started unbuttoning her top n Naina realized that she stopped him, "Veer yahan nahi." She had a request.

"Ok", he smiled stopped himself.

She smiled n pulled him to her n kissed him on his lips; Raj couldn't control himself making the kiss deep. He was rubbing his palms on her curves to get her aroused.

Tabhi Naina k phone ki bell ring hoti hai.

"Oh mai bhi kya kya sochta rehta hoon." Raj ne apne dimaag se apne khayal nikaal diye par Vaishali ko yaad karte hue kaha, "Dekho maine kaha tha ki mere aur Naina k beech koi nahi aayega to is ka ye to matlab nahi tha na ki hume chod k liye tum humesha k liye chale jaao. Mujhe pata hai mujh se jyada Naina tum ko yaad karti hai bhale vo kehti nahi hai kabhi kuch mujh se." He thought with teary eyes.

Yahan Naina jab ghar pahuchi to poore ghar me andhera tha. 'Ye kya hua yahan? Andhera kyoun hai itna?'she asked herself 'agar light gayi thi to generator chalana tha na Moti ko' she moved forwards n tries to open the main door. To her surprise it was already opened. 'Are ab ye darwaja bhi khula hua hai ye kaise?' she got more confused. "Moti kahan ho tum?" she called him but no response. "Kahan chala gaya ye?" she murmured under her breath.

"Moti kahan ho tum" Raj also called him but he also didn't find any response.

As soon as she opened the door all lights went on and "surprise".

It was Alekh who planned everything. "Alekh u''''" she screamed n ran behind him.

"E Naina ruk meri baat to sun '''" he ran behind the sofa and here and there in the room.

Raj was watching both of them. Finally Alekh stood behind Raj and said, "Naina mai bus tujhe surprise de raha tha dara thode hi raha tha tujhe." Alekh said.

"Teri to ruk''." Naina said but she was unable to catch him as Raj was also there.

"Naina ab jaane bhi do na chodo na'" Raj said.

"Nahi Veer tum jaante nahi ho is ko aur is ki shararaton ko mai abhi batai hoon is ko." Saying this she again tried to catch him. Raj noticed her calling him Veer after a long time so he smiled and but Raj held her both hands and said, "Ab ruko aur idhar dekho."

When he touched Naina her touch made him shiver n she stopped. Both had an eye lock. Alekh realized it n ran from there. He stood in one corner and smiled at them 'Bhagwaan kare tum dono ki jodi aise hi bani rahe Naina.' n he whistled.

It brought them both in reality n they parted.

"Tu wahan kya kar raha hai?" Naina asked Alekh.

"Bus apun tum dono ko romance karte hue dekh raha tha." He said n winked Naina.

Naina and Raj blushed slightly at his this statement but Alekh felt a different feeling on Naina's face. "Accha Naina ye bata Karwachauth hai do din baad to tune koi taiyaari ki ya nahi?"Alekh asked.

Naina looked at Raj and said, "Nahi vo akele mai kya kya karti to abhi kuch nahi kiya." she sighed.

"Theek hai ab tu chinta mat kar mai aa gaya hoon na apun sab dhek lega , accha sadi to le hi le hogi?" he asked again.

"Nahi Alekh saariyan bahut saari rakhi hain mere paas, to socha kyoun faltoo me paise waste karoon." She again made an excuse.

Par Alekh to Alekh hi hai na vo humesha se bina bataye aur bina kahe sab kuch samajh jaata hai na; us ne Naina ki aankhon me ek udasi dekh li thi par samajh nahi paya ki us ka reason kya hai par phir bhi bola, "Are aise kaise nahi bus ab mai kuch nahi sunooga kal hum chalenge tere liye saari lene aur baaki ka bhi pooja ka saamaan bhi le aayenge." He said.

Naina smiled at him n her eyes turned wet, she ran to him and hugged him tight. "Thanks Alekh, tu shayad mujhe sab se acche se samjhta hai."

Raj surprised first at her act but he couldn't see Naina in any other man's arms so he said, "Naina mujhe aur Alekh ko chai nahi pilaogi."

Naina realized something n Alekh too. Alekh smiled at her and said, "Dekh tere hero ko jalan ho rahi hai abhi tu jaa." Naina smiled sadly at him and left.

"Hello Raj kaisa hai tu?" he asked hugging him finally.

"Mai theek hoon tum kaise ho?" he asked him.

"Apun bhi mast hai bole to dhinchik". Fir dono baton me busy ho gaye aur chai peene k baad thoda rest le kar dinner karne aaye.

Raj apne room me tha jab Naina us ko dinner k liye bulane aayi tab Raj Vaishali ki photo dekh raha tha.

"Vo Raj khana'''." She looked him watching Vaishali's photo.

Raj looked at her and tried to hide the photo but Naina said, "It's ok Raj , vo meri bhi di thi aur vo thi hi itni pyaari ki koi use bhool nahi sakta kabhi. Maine khana nikaal diya hai mai aur Alekh wait kar rahe hain tumhara, jaldi aa jaana." She left saying it.

Raj realized her pain in her words for her sis. "Mai jaanta hoon Vaishali ki mai hi nahi Naina bhi tum ko bahut pyaar karti thi aur ab tum ko miss bhi bahut karti hai magar meri wajah se kuch nahi kehti hai vo." He said talking to her photo.

Idhar Naina ne apne dil ka gubaar ro ke nikala dinning table par jab wahan koi nahi tha. "Di I really miss u, pls wapas aa jaao mujh se Veer ka dard nahi dekha jaata hai tumahre liye."

"Naina , Naina kahan hai tu, dekh mai aa gayi wapas." Vaishali ne aate hi apni choti behan ko awaaz lagayi.

"Mai aap se kabhi baat nahi karoongi di." She said with fake anger.

"Kyoun baba maine kya kar diya ab?" Vaishali asked Naina.

"Aap ko pata hai ki mai aap k bina nahi reh sakti hoon fir bhi aap mujhe poor ek hafte k liye chod kar gayi." She was complaining.

"Are mai kya karti college k toor me jaana jaroori tha na. Par dekh mai tere liye kya le kar aayi hoon." She showed her a gift.

"Aap mujhe bribe mat do mai aaj nahi maanogi." Naina turned her face in another direction.

"Accha ye bata jab meri shaadi ho jaayegi tab kaise rahegi tu? Mai to sasuraal chali jaaongi na apne pati k saath tab kya karegi?" Vaishali asked her.

"Mai bhi aap k saath chaloongi wahan." Naina replied.

"Accha par agar mere sasuraal waalon ne nahi jaane diya tab?" she again asked.

"To ek kaam karoongi mai apne jeeja k saath shaadi kar loongi aur tab hum ek ghar me ek saath rahenge." Naina replied.

"Offo pagal ladki ." Vaishali laughed and said, "Aur agar bhgwaan mujhe le gaya apne paas tab?"

"Nahi di bus aise baat kabhi mat karna aage se mai naraj nahi hongi." She cried.

"Diiiiiiiii" she screamed.

"Kya hua Naina?". Alekh came running.

"Alekh di kyoun chali gayi mujhe chod kar batao mujhe, batao." She shook him with collars and hugged him.

Raj who just came after listening Naina's scream came down n found Naina hugging Alekh n crying.

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