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Nausheen Khan

@Veronica4eva

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Posted: 19 years ago

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hey guys..i knw my fan-fic aint gettin 2 da pint n i promise dat da nxt part will change ur mind(in a gud way)!! 😃 luv ya!!

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nabeeha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#612

allrite, i am waiting to be brainwashed!!! 😆

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Nausheen Khan

@Veronica4eva

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Episode 24:

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Suddenly a car horn beeped. Kripa and Angad moved away from each other.
Man in the car: "Excuse me. Can you please move your car or drive?"
Angad: "O.k. we're going anyway."
Angad drove off. As he was driving, he and Kripa didn't talk. There was complete silence. Finally they got home (Khanna house).

At Khanna house:
When Angad and Kripa arrived at Khanna house, they were very silent. Naina opened the door.
Naina: "Kithni der lagadi. Anyway, Kripa look who's here?!"
Kripa looked and was surprised to see her parents sitting on the sofa. Kripa ran up to her mum (Gayathri) and hugged her tightly. When they let go of each other, Gayathri said to Kripa that she and her father (Suryban) have come to collect her. As soon as Kripa heard this, her face dropped. Angad suddenly got a touch of loneliness. Kripa didn't want to argue and say that she wanted to stay with Angad because she thought that Angad would think she loves him. So Kripa agreed of going back to her own house. Gayathri told them that her and Suryban were going to leave now and said that they will send a driver to go and collect Kripa after she packs her bags. After Gayathri said this, she and Suryban left from Khanna house. After they left, Kripa went upstairs to pack her bags, Angad went after her.

In Angad and Kripa's room:
When Kripa entered the room she was going to cry, but then Angad came in the room so Kripa had to stop her tears. She went to the wardrobe and got her clothes out and put them onto the bed. Angad helped Kripa pack her bags. After Kripa had packed her bags and was going to leave, she looked back at Angad and said the words that changed his mind.
Kripa: "Angad, over the past weeks, you've meant a lot in my life. You've made me laugh, cry and even get angry at you. But I know it's going to be hard for me to admit this but...I'm going to miss you."
After Kripa had said this and was about to leave the room, she softly kissed Angad's cheek and said bye to him.

Hope you like it
Veronica

Ps
Angad gets Kripa and tells her that…

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago

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Nausheen Khan

@Veronica4eva

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Posted: 19 years ago

#614

sry itz short
😭 😭 i woz busy again!!

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Chandini

@Chandini

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Posted: 19 years ago

#615

HeY!

That was so gd yaar! ur story is awsome MUGAR

You update once a week :O and move the story forward one scene 😭 yeh to na insafi hai - this is soo not fair! 😭

Please update more often - I mean hols even started today ( guessing ur studyin n do get hols at easter time and even if ur working everyone gets hols this time of year!) So I put forward a request pllllleeeeaaaseee update sooooooner and longer!

readers of the story back me up - maybe if enough of us ask she'll say yes! 😉