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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#51

waoh👍🏼 really an nice one⭐️ shasnak is impossible😡 but armaan so cute😊😊 he is in dream of ridhima😉😆😆 so sweet😊😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Jab hume unse mohhabat hui tab,
Unhe hamari mohhobat par shak tha,
Jab unhe ehsas hua hamari mohhobat ka tab tak,
Hum par kisi aur ka huk tha...!"

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Aimee

@Wild.Aimee

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Hi Sana Dear 😊

You know what Sana, the first scene between Shashank and Padma was very well put. I mean the conversational part was very realistic, coz i have seen people using the same words when they get into disputive mode, even though they dont actually mean it. Very good.

I loved the scene between Armaan and Arnav. Oh so Armaan was dreaming about Riddhima and took his brother as her...😆 Wow. Great. But whats this, it was such a small part.

Anyways update soon sweety.

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soumya

@saridena

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#53

hi sana😊

thks for the pm dear

nice parts (3,4)

i was so tensed that shanky will behave

omg he told padma to leave😲

😆hehehehehe armi is drearming of ridz and hugging his brother

update soooooooooooooooooooooon

👏

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Mini

@cool_pisces

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Hey Sana

This part was really sweet, wonder whts wrong with Shashank

Armaan's interaction with his brother was really funny

Thanks for the PM

Mini

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Sana

@sana20n

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

hey guys, part 5 is up... im sori bt i wnt b able 2 PM u guys 2day but wil try 2mrw... and also i have a lot of work piled up from uni so wnt b able 2 update, bt mayb nxt week... sori luv sana

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#56

part 5 was really funny

i really liked the way u showed how shubhankar and the boys were scared of keerti.

cant wait 2 read wat kirti does to them

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#57

nice part, like how they are all scared of kirti!

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swetha

@bary

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

so nice part is really enjoyable and thanks for pm

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Aimee

@Wild.Aimee

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Hey Sana 😊

Ok so Shubhankar and Kirti are Armaan and Arnav's parents. Uhhhh Shubhankar is scared of Kirti... so much like DMG 😆 The scene was really funny and wonderful. I loved reading every bit of it.

Sana your sense of portraying the scenes is getting better day by day. 👏 I loved it dear.