Hiiiiiiiiiiiiii guyz here's th updt
sorry for delay😛
sum fan rplys will be done later
and plz..along wid comments ans th two questions below
Loud cries and shouts could be heard outside andheri police station?"nahi I didn't kill her..main kuch nahi kiya!!aaaaahrrrrrrrggggggghhhhhhh"
Benji was hanging upside dwn on awodden stick..and a police constable was hitting him continously wid..iron rod?
INS"bol..y u killed her???[thad..one more blow]
B:..aaaaahh?I din;t I saw her dead and calld u
INS:acha?khud marte ho and?[more blows]
B:[screaming and crying wid pain..blood oozing out..frm..nose]..i said ..main kuch nahi kiiya
INS:oh really??[raising his hand to beat agin wen sum1 yeeld at him]
"ROKO!!!!AAP BENJI KO AISE NAHI MAR SAKTE!!"
benji sumhw managed his eyes to see in th direction of th voice and he smiled weakly and th dearest wrd escaped his mouth"samrat???"
sam and mayu were standing in th police station..and starring at th inspector.
S:hey,hw dare u gv him 3rd degree..hun!!!u hvn't proved his guilty?
INS:so???
M:toh ..apni bakwas band karo aur yeh notice pado[showing him sum papers]
Ins:yeh kya???no 3rd degree orders!!
S:ab apka hogaya toh main apne dost se miloo
Ins:[in marathi]A..soda..tyala!!kamal ahe paisa asel tar kahihi kartat!![oi!..leave tht guy,gr8..money can do all sort of things!!]
Sam and mayu run inside th cell and wid out wsting any second..sam juss helds benji tightly in his frndly hug..tears flowing frm his eyes
S:benji!!tu tik hia na!!yeh sab kya hogaya yaar!!
B:[gluping dwn his saliva and wiping th blood frm nose]sam yaar!!i didn't kill her main sirf uski avaj suni aur..
S:janta hoon..tu darr mat..mayank ne aur main shehar ka best lawyer donda hai!!
M:[placing his hand around his shoulders]haan benji..u dn't worry!!chalo ab kuch khalo.ma ne khana bheja hai for ya!!
S:do..main khilata hoon benji ko..
After feeding benji they leave for their homes
[next day,at mayu's place]
M:maaaaaaaa,jaldi..mujhe samrat ke saath us lawyer ko milne jana hai?
MM:mayu!!!ati hoon beta..aur sun..nupur aur gunjan ko bhi saath leke jana
M:haan ma..nupur toh kal raat se dimaag kha rahi hai..jana hai jana hai
MM:acha!!aur tune kya bola??
M:kya bolu??uski baat kabhi na maan kar chalta hai kya??
MM:wah!!!!aaj kal badi baat man ne laga hai nupur ki??
M[getting alarmed]ma who?.
MM:mmm bol mayu
[door bell rings]
M:mayank aya hoga..i mean samrat..main chalta hoon[on his way to door whispering to himself]..mayank..FOCUS!!!!!!!!..ma ko pata nahi hai abhi..sambhal..lekin jaldi batana pdega!!
S:hey mayank..chalo..nupur gadi main?bhaut chila rahi hai tumhare naam se
M:samrat!!! Dhire bolo..ma an gng..
S:byeeeee aunty!!
MM:byeeeeeee mayu!!byeeee samrat beta!!
[on th way..they are stuck at a signal]
M;ohhhhhhh yaar.yeh signals bhi na!!
N:bahut ache hote hain!!..kitna kuch dekh ne ko milta hai?gadi main baitkar
M:nupur,late hota ahi uska kya???
N:aree haan!!main toh yeh bhul hi gayieeee[puuting her hand around his arms]isliye toh tum jaise REMINDER se pyaar kiya!!
In th fron seat,gunjan is pacifying sam
G:samart,main ne god se pray kiya hai?benji jaldi chut jayega?dn't worry
S:tumne bola hai toh jarur?god wish poori karenge?
[signal is on]
as sam is abt to move his car,sum sprt car cutts him in way in wrong direction and sam has to put breaks suddenly..wid a jerk
S:oye,andhe!!!!!!!!dekh kar chala
Th windows of th car..cum dwn..and a very weird kind of guy pops out and smiling wickedly says"soory dude"he was very weird..wearing funky t-shirt,chains around his neck,waering cap,..total..freak!!
S:sorry!!hun!!idiot..kya..hogaya hai sabko..
M:samart..jane de yaar..we are latecum on lets go!
They reach th lawyers chamber..and ask at th reception counter for..mr.pratham kapoor
Th girl tells them to go to th 5th floor,4th door to th right.they all go there and sit in fornt of th door wid name plate."PRATHAM KAPOOR" on it
[After..3hrs]
Mayu has a hard time controlling nups as she is gong to th windows constantly to observe th top view..bcoz she's got bored w8ng for..nearly 3 hs?as there was sum client inside.
Then th door opens and their turn cums in
S:[entering th cabin]..hello sir
P:[his chair's back facing them?a very stern voice..gvng impression of a very..to th point lawyer]..heloo..sit!!!.samrat and company right???
S:ya..actually..sir we are
P:did I asked??
S:no!!..arrr I mean
P:talk wen I ask?hmmm..case of murder?[stil his back facing them].benjamin..right??nt guilty..buh still caught???
S:yes!!
N[whispering]mayu yeh kaun khadus hai?
Mnupur..chup baito bahut acha lawyer hai..he neva..lost any case
N:haan mujhe toh gone case lagta hai!!
P:really lady???is it so[and he turns around]
And to shock of everyone esp sammy..he was th same weird guy..they met on signal..he was there..pratham kapoor..th lawyer?smiling oddly to all of them wearing th same weird clothes..and chains..
All together:tum???
P:haan main!!
S:u'll fight thcase??
P:hmmm..samart!!!!..heard a lot abt..u..as far as ma quetsion is there..u'll see it in court am capable or nt..hey lady[refering to nups]?u also see..am totally gone case ya kuch baki hai!!!..i dn't like hate words frm cute ladies like u!!!
M:[bitting his teeth and balling his fist]..main bataoo wot I think????!!!!!!!!!!
P:kya??
N:chalo mayank.we''ll go?
They all cum out?
S:chill mayank!!lets see wot ths dumb piece does in court!!
M:he was?.i didn't like wot he said to nupur..
S:true!!!and his getup..eewww?pagal hai kya??
M:nhai lawyer hai!!!!
S:u bet!!!
Next day in court
Al are seated in seats..mayu,nups,gunji,sam,w8ng for pratham?
Th judge enters..and benji too is brought in wid police?he looks at sammy wid hope..and sammy smiles gvng him alook of dn't worry?and benji's eyes yet again search sumone..th one he wanted to see evr since he went in jail?no she didn't cum to meet him once?and was nt there evn today..she was nt there,rhimjhim?
[back to mayur and sajan]
N:pata nahi yeh gone case kahan hai
M:true!!!lagta hai..apne chains main..atak gaya
S:I hope he cums on time..
G:he'll samrat..trust god!!
Just then sumone enters dashing..to th doors.all look at th direction of noise..and there he was..buh?wot was he??
in a grayish-black pant with a fresh ? crisp white shirt and....and adorning a lacy tie, he seemed to overlook the entire convocation. His gelled hair only enhanced his professional manifestation
[back in th crowd]M:pura..bandar lag raha hai!! Idiot?
pratham knew that he was late as he clucked down the aisle. But ? After a respectful bow, elicited permission to begin, he began-"I apologize your honor, for the disrespectful delay that I have caused.. I would like to inform that I would be defending Mr. benjamin in this case. I wouldn't mind if opposition would like to begin"
th opposition lwyer was sum sulking old man..Mr.chawla and he began
C:ur honour,Benjamin is..guilty of th murder?he was caught on th sight of crime?wid th dead body .there's nothing tht can save him?tht's all ur honour
P:[getting up for his turn]?ur honour?well ma fellow lawyer..is saying tht..[suddenly searching for sumthing..in his pockets..]am sorry ur honour?just a second ma pen is nt found..
[back in th crowd]M:kya??pen???..is he mad??
N:mayu!!chodo na!!u said he th best!!!
M:haan !!best pagal!!
P:ur honour..ma pen is very expensive and juss a min b4 it was here..dono..now where it is..[searching fot it frantically]
C:here!!mr.pratham..ur pen..[he picked it up frm his side of table and gv to pratham]
P;oooooooo..so u stole it hun!!
C[awstuck]..wot???mind ur language??
P;y???just nw u gave it to me !!u are hvng it in ur hand..tht means u stole it!!
C:wot rubbish!!!!.just bcoz am holding it doesn't mean am th culprit..
P:BINGO!!THEN HOW DID U SAY THT MY CLIENT IS TH CRIMINAL JUSS BCOZ HE WAS THERE AT TH SITE OF CRIME????
Ur honour..benjamin was there?buh..he din't murder elora..he reached there wen she was already dead?
Back mayu,sammy ,nups,gunji all were amazed th way he twisted th story..and hw did he knw all ths?wen did he talk to benji???
C:buh ur honour?.
P:ur honour I ddi ths tupid act..buh ths was th only way I could prove..tht my client should nt be accused till its proven?..
..nw I would like to ask sum question to Benjamin
benji?ammm I can cal u tht..can i???
B:yaa!!
P:ok,benji?tell exactly wot happened tht night!!
B:tht night after we all danced..i was bit thirsty..so I went to drink water..th cooler is situated juss besides..th wall separating th girls loo frm,th corridor,i heard few noises..like sumone was quarreling.i thought I'll leave it,bcoz I dn't like entering into others personal matter.and then I suddenly heard aloud noise of a blast and then a loud scream
P;ok!then??
B:then I ran to th loo and found elora lying dead there.!!!i was shocked..then I calld police?
P:ok!!!wot was th exact scene wen u reached there..i mean..ddi u see anyone running??
B:no!!..i saw elora..was lying on floor.wid boold all over and agun lying beside her!1
P:u touched th gun???
B:amm..no buh I pushed it aside wid my legs!!
P:tht's f9!!
Ur honour..as th gun was nt touched by benji,th finger prints of th actuall criminal must be there on it,I request u to plz isue an order of balistic report.
Tht's all!!..u can take frm here Mr.chawla!!
C:benji?wen u saw..her lying on floor or her screams y didn't u go..and asked for sumone's help?
B:I ..arr?.i
P:objection ur honour..my client answerd tht..he wa shocked?
J:objection sustained
C:ok then I too deman ballistic report!!!
J:I order to hv a ballistic report..!! th next hearing on Monday!!
P:thank u honour
Sammy and all of them rush towards..benji who was again taken back to police station?
S:benji tu darr mat..next time u'll be out!!
M:haan benji yeh pagal..i mean yeh lawyer bahut acha hai?
B:rhimjhim??
S:arrr..even we hv nt seen her?frm tht day..nt picking up our phones too..
M:u dn't worry me and sammy are gng to her place ths eveng
B:byee guyz!
G:benji?.am fasting .manat magi hia..bhagvanji se..for u!!dn't worry
B[chocking]..thanxx gunjan
Benji goes away and as they all turn..back they seepratham standing..there..for them wid th same wicked smile
P:so lady[looking at nups]//wot u think nw??
N:by god!!
[mayu cuutts in]
M:we both think u are gud!!nw wot next??
S:yaa dude u were cool hun!!!
P:hmmm..next is a plan?.i was wondering..did u notice..since..elora died?no one frm her side came to claim her dead body..strange!!!!!!! and who's ths rhimjhim???
S:she's afrnd..may she's in shock?so ddin't turn up??
P;tht's bad sign?she may be suspected
M:wot????are u,,,
N[grabs his hand]?he means y??
P:well it haapens..mr chawla may do tht..tel her to be there next time and yes..meet me in evng all of u..i hv aplan!!byeeeeeeeeee
guyzzzzzzz.u all musst hv noticed tht ths thread is gng to finish son..complete..150pgs...so me and meela hv aquestion
1]do u want us to continue..by opening a new..i mean second thread of..crazy luv???..th same story..will conti..and will hv link to th previous thread..no new story..buh loads of diff twists
2]should we hv it open??or juss fro me and meela??
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ans these questions guyzzz!!!
we need to take permission tooo
and yes my pm has aprobs wen i pm too many ppl so plz bear wid me if yaa dn't get it on time..😛
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