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Posted: 16 years ago
nihuu awesome update i mean u rock yaar welll update soon because i wanna know the mystery luv u pragya
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nihu
so sorry for not replying for a while....actually i have had a very stressful week....the semester is wrapping up and so many presntations came due and finals are just around the corner. Luckily now i only have 3 finals to go...i hope i make it safe.
anyways, coming to the point, all three parts were absolutely awesome.....your very talented.
i loved the play...that was really very cute.....i laughed when sammy stood up and clapped at the scene where mayank was acting when sammy worked the whole day in the sun....that was so cute as he was so proud of his own work.
mayank is so not romantic most of the times but when he is, those scenes are just fantastic...i hope to see mayank more romantic in the future parts.
wow, a mystery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...this is quite a twist..i cant believe poor benji is the suspect....this will be quite interesting.....cant wait to read the next part.
keep writing!
kiran
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh god i mean oh my god
i was so much enjoying this update so romantic . i thought would give a long and sweet update but now too shocked.
benji can never kill someone.
do continue dear
i am so scared for benji

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nihu I wrote the whole comment and then by mistake pressed the backspace and my whole msg was deleted😭... so i am wrting it all over agian 😉
First of all Senny was right to call u Queen of romance and Ruchi was right on target with Masakali 😆😉👏..
and Yes as u said Miley Jab hum tum😃 😛👍🏼...
darling below is a pakistani pop song which suits ur whole update as well as r feelings of frnd circle in this forum ... so this is dedicated to ur update and to all r frnds...
Yaaron yeh hi dosti hai
kismat se jo mili hai
Sab sang chalen
Sab rang chalen
Chaltey rahen hum sada


Tootey na kabhi saath yeh
Chhutey na kabhi haath yeh
Apni to bas yehi dua...

Chaltey rahen ,hum tum
Yun hi badhtey rahen, hum tum
👏Khushiyon ke sung, hum tum sada👏

@ loved how everyone was pulling each others leg 👏

N:aree benji tumhe zyada tension lene ki koi jarurat nahi..mayank humesha ek hi expression rakhta hai?.guseewala or..ek hi word bolta hia..library!!!!!!!

B:yaar who ek aur word bolta hai..EXAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
🤗 so true ...........🤣🤣🤣
@ Loved how both Nups and Mayu were drolling at each other 😳😛😳
@ Loved Mayus" Babes." 🤣... Guru Samrats .. side effect ...😆😆 this was a great one 😛... just imagine original Mayu saying it😆 Nups will faint 🤣.. then she will say Mayu is really on drugs 🤣

@ Gosh Gunjan did Make Samrats day ... it was a wonderful gift ... what frnds 👏

@ and Mayu and Nups ... Ist date .. Nihu was it the one u pmd me ?? ... where mom came end destry the fun😆.... God that one was sooooooooo romantic ❤️...
I remember that ❤️...👏... Mayu is teasing nups on that ...🤣🤣.. first Mom ... now gang 🤣🤣.. ... HAAAAAAA Nihu that scene was sweet ........r dream guys remember ??😉
@ the whole song thing was tooo romantic for each pair it was done wonderfully ....👏
@ but then what happened yaar ... poor Benji .....😲😲... will the gang be able to save him 😲😲
Nihu do update soon ......👏👏


Edited by SanaSarwar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
AHHHHHHHH WAT a part yaar just loved it.
my god i got emotional yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: TINAMALHONTRA


HEY NIHU!!!....Loved ur update sweety👍🏼
Ok I just got ur pm...Thanks a lot for it....AND THANKS for ur dedication Love ya......🤗
and now let me get back to the fic.....
Firstly - Ellora is dead..🤢.what happened and Benji is supposed to be the killer...yeh khushi aur pyaar main is Ellora ko kyun lana tha aur voh bhi how did she die....I must say this is one phase u have never tried...but the way u potrayed it was awesome!!! 🥺
The highlight of the update most definetly the play....I can just imagine Mayu becoming like Samrat 😍 but i can't imagine Nupur not talking....and Gunjan aur Benji did such a wonderful job....must say kya play tha...
I heard that song....and to be truthful i really love that song and it fit with this situation perfectly....infact unka chupna, pyaar, ikraar sab jhalakta tha BY GOD!!! ❤️ ❤️Aur Dia bhi samajh gayi...very intelligent....
But still i can't help wonder yeh murderer hai kaun kyunki Benji toh nahi hai pakka😕....and poor Sammy apne Best friend ko apne b'day pe jail jaate hue dekh raha hai😭
Ab toh update even sooner karna kyunki I want to know ki how did that Ellora die!!!
Now to summarise ur update...kya kahu
SUPERB.....FANTASTIC.....MINDBLOWING.....AWESOME.....etc etc👏 after all sab toh use nahi kar sakti na agla update ke liye bhi bachana padega na 😉
Love YA🤗
Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

Ek Paal…

Ek paal ke liyeh hi sahi,

Ghadiyaan humko milli makmali, pyaar ki

Iss ek paal ko, jee le zaara…

Yeh lamhe phir mille naa mille,

Kho jaane deh sabhi duriyaan, faasale…

Aa dil milla le aur paas aa…

Phir kya ho, kya khabar

Dekha hai kisne kaal,

Aa raath rok leh, phir ho naa jaaye seher….

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nihu Hun

how r u? havent been on net much for past few weeks. but hope tht wont harm our partneship n moreover our DOSTI! neway GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR8888888888888888888888888 works! ofcourse u have took a new storyline, i can see tht but bura ye laga ke no pm discussion wimme?!!!! out of sight out of mind to nahi na?

neway
tc n keep it up!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hgrhr

Ahh...Nihu!..Nidhi janu

I saw the update before you PMed me....lol. gr88888 yaar..ma pm is nt wrking I must really be on the forum a lot!..yaa...
*reserved*
will edit after I read it just now. sure januuuuuuuu
EDITED
Hey Nihu,..nidhi januu 🤗
Firstly, thank you so much for including me in the dedications list!haiyeeee thankoo kyun bol rahi hai...tu hi toh meri dost hai... I wan't expecting it since I just started commenting on the fic!🤗chalta hai..der se aye par aye toh sahi...
Secondly,
OMG
Elora was killed!!?!?!?! haan re...didn't liked her...That was the biggest ever twist you could have added in the story!! awwwww I really like the twist though, it'll make it all the more interesting!thankoooooooooo
But Benji, why did it have to be him who got into all this....poor guy....sab se innocent wohi hai na...Samrat was devestated! His best friend...I think everyone got the hugest shock when he was suspected! yaa..it was hard 4 me too..ma fav benji
But of course he isn't the culprit.yaa januuuuuu...so who is it is the question running in my mind...!
Do you already have it planned out....?ofcource..pura case hi hai dimag main.. I mean the identity of the murderer...?..yep inculding th lawyer who'll fight for benji
Ok comin to the skit they organised...
Btw, why were you thinking of dropping the idea...? It turned out to be AWESOME!awwwwwwww You made me really want to see it onscreen!ooooooooo tht's sos weet yaa
I think the best part was Mayu saying "Babes".yaa tht was i always imagined...for fun.....lol....everyone was awestruck at how he played Sam!..hehehehhehe
I loved the whole play! gald to hear frm u januuuuuu lol...I bet Gunjan didn't tell anyone about the kissing part yaaaaaaaa...i gave them privacy in tht...so that's why it wasn;t incorporated!😉😉
Btw, I can't remember what happened on Mayur's first date....I read it loooong back ago....Why was Mayu teasing Nupur about telling the details...?? mayu had kissed nupu on her neck..4 th 1st time..and his mom had cum wen nupu was running away...😳😳
And the song you chose was so beautiful!awwwwww..tahnkooooooooo Perfectly matching with the moments. honoured u liked itEspecially the Mayank-Nupur one when he was hiding from her! Absolutly awesome!..thankoooooooooo a lot januuuuuuuuuuuu
I'm really excited to see what happens next! You'll tell na how Elora was found and why benji was suspected...and most of all WHY was she killed?..yaa i'll ans all th questions in next 3 -4 parts...
Uhhh...I can't wait for the next update!..will updt soon..januuuuuuuuu
Keep up the great work!..thankooooooooooooo
🤗
Nidhi..luv ya
nihu
P.S. I would've edited it sooner but I went back to watch the repeat of MJHT...😉😆hey me too hun..tht means u stay in india....me tooooooo

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: komal793

heyy nihu hiiiiiiiiiii komal

forgot to pm me.nahi janu..ma pm nt working...
but its ok.sorry😛
i reasd the part and its awesome.tahnkooooooooooooooooooooo...sos weet of yaa
pls continue soon and do pm me the next time...sure sab se pehle...
luv..luv ya toooooooo
komal.

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