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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

heyy nihu!!!

kahan ho tum......update kab kar rahe ho????
we're all waiting for ur next part......plzzzz update soon

hiii janu..
am very much here..
am dwn wid fever jaan...so nt updtng....
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Posted: 16 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii guyz
and frnds...1stly thanxx for such a ROCKING feedback...
it only inspires me to wirte more and more...
am so sorry guyz am DOWN wid high temperature
i was unable move..so took time in updtng...
buh..ma next updt is gonna be a treat for you all i promise..
as promised to pragya..it'll be along sajan updt but but but..will be given to all sajan fans..wid luv ........frm mayur..
sajan and mayur..and benjhim..all will be there...
i hope you guyz..get wot i mean...
yeah frnds it's gonna be abig surprise....
hint:they are cuming back to coll...
@attractiveadya,sumi,komal,pragya.....i didn't quote u guyz...seprately...bcoz answerd u all in ths..hope u dn't mind...
I wanna thank u all for your support ,LUVand feedbacks..and cooperation......
am glad tht u all wid me...in am bad times....
will updt soon..in 2-3 dayz
gvng final touch to..th part..
LUV
NIHU
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi!
Wow I haven't visited here in MONTHS! We've reached 121 pages already! 👏...
Take Care
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Posted: 16 years ago
no yaar nihu but update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Nihu
I hope and pray that you get well soon. Take plenty of rest and take care of yourself.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey gyz here's th updt it nt up to th mark th time though buh a major ipm will be cuming up soon...so had to cut short ths..
SORRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
do read and comment..
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Benji is shocked and happy to.widout thinking further he moves ahead and..and tries to hug rimjhim wen..nupur's screams are heard frm a distance.."rimjhim?..rimjhim.."benji turned around only to see nupur..cuming towards them..waving at rimjhim..and followed by mayank..nupur cums and hugs rimjhim..

N:happy holi rimjhim?acha hua tum agayi?[and puts sum colcour on her]

R:same to you..nupur?[putting sum colour on her too..and turning to mayank]

M;ammm??main holi?who?

R:pata hai..nupur ne bataya tha?sirf tika kar rahi hoon..mayank..[and she to puts.sum on his forehead]

G;par tum achanak yahan???..tum toh apne ghar..gayi thin na???

R:haan gunjan?par mujhe phone aya tha..ki college REopen ho raha hai..tum sab ko kitna cal kiya..par sab ka cell out of network..isliye khud agayi..batane..ki parso se college hai?strike..over?.

ONLY mayank and gunjan screamed in happiness?"COLLEGE???????????WOWWWWWWWWWWW"

N;aree rimjhim?cel nahi lag raha tha..toh khud kyun ayi?yeh bad newz leke?

M;[looking at her wid an eyebrow raised]

N:mera matlab?post karti ..itni taklif kyun?

G:di..aaj nhai toh kal..coll reopen toh hota na..chalo..rimjhim..andar chalo?

All ths while..benji was only straing at her?slowly allowing th happiness sink in..tht finally she's here..she won't go away?won't vanish..she's very much here?he just lowered his head went near her and said

B:main tum se kuch kehna chahta hoon..

The voice answered."kya benji????aur tu kabse apne dude se aise baat karne laga..??

Benji looked up..and found samrat there?and found rest all walking towards hhouse?.

S;chale benji?.sab chale gaye!!!!!!!!!!

B:haan chal[wid a sad face..buh still satisfied she's here]

S:benji..aise sab ke samne nahi..yaar..raat main..akele main usko sorry bolna..samjha..??

B:kya???

S:mujhe pata hai?tu mujh se nahi..rimjhim se baat karne aya tha?

B:[smiling]dude!!!!!!!!!!! Tu sacha dost hai yaar..chal?.

Evening passed away in a blink.laughing,joking around,sharing gossips?and fighting over whether they should join college so soon..mayu ,rimjhim and gunjan..were..fighting..wid sammy,nupur and benji?but finally bauji took th final call and ordered every1 to go to coll..after eating food..everyone was heading towards their rooms?well it was appearing so..

Mayank was about to enter th room wen..he found nupz standing in th door stooping him wid one hand..

M;nupur tum yahan kay kar rahi ho??

N:aree mere bhudhu ram?yeh humari last night hai yahan..woh bhi tum books ke saath bitana chahte ho?.

M:[wid wide eyes]matlab????

N:chalo..mere saath[pulling him holding his hand]

M;yeh tum kya kar rahi ho??

N;vahi jo tumhe karma chahiye..par tum to?bilkul romantic nahi ho?ab chalo?

And she took him away?in backyard..

As were wlaking they heard sum whispering there..

M;nupur haath chodo?koi

N:sshhhhhhhhhhhhh?..mayu tum kuch sun rahe ho???

M:haan koi..hai..

N:chalo dekhte hain..

Tip toening slowly they went near the cow shed.and found none other than benji taking walks there wid rimjhim?

B:rimjhim?tum nahi janti..ab muhe kitna acha lag raha hai..u forgived me?

R:cumon benji?tumhara fault nahi tha?it was a bad time..

B:par still..

R:benji..plzzzzzzz kuch aur bole?kitna cute hai yeh sab?

B;[smiling]ok..yeh batao..

Here mayank smiled to..and nodded his head and said

M;yeh benji bhi na?!!! pura samrat ka chela hai?hia na nupur ???nupur???

N:[lost in looking at them?smiling cutely..slowly said] haiyeeeeeee kitna romantic hai..

M:kya???

N:of fo..mayu..yeh monnlight main walk?

M:kya???machar katenge toh pata chalega?romantic???

N:[making a faces]..tum kabhi nahi sudroge?.chalo yahan se..

Mkahan??

N:terrace pe!!!!chalooooooo

They fighting and arguing sumhow reached terrace..only to find it also already occupied..yaa sajan where there standing hand in hand..lookin at stars..gunjan resting her head firmly on sammy's shoulder..mayu was abt to leave feeling hsy but nupz pinched him and stopped to listen?

G:samrat..yeh vacation mera ab tak ka sab se best tha?hain na ???samrat???

Sammy stood,there gazing at stars with a strange expression she had never seen before. his eyes bit moisted..fade smile on his lips?

G:samart kay hua???tum???

S:janti ho chashmish?mujhe pehli baar itna pyaar mila..bauji ka pyaar,nupur ek pyaari behen ki tarah?mera care karti,mayank ek bhai..ki tarah..mujhe har galti baata ta..benji who toh mera sab se imp hissa hai..mere chote bhia jaisa?

G;samart tum???

S:janta hoon..pehli bar senti ho raha hoon..par..kya karo..chashmish..mera childhood..in sab relation ke bina gujar gaya?aur smarat kab cool dude sammy ban gaya..pata hi nahi chala..

[walking away frm gunjan]mere parents ne kabi meri care nahi ki?.main kya karta hoon..?? main khana khaya ya nhai???..main zinda hoon ya mar..

gunjan covers his mouth wid her hands and wispers"samrat..plzzzzzz"

slowly a drop of tear rolls dwn his cheeks?and he hugs gunjan and like a small baby pleades her

S:gunjan tum mujhe kabhi chod ke mat jan plzz main?gunjan plz..main ab phir akele nahi hona chahta..tum jab mujhe chod ke..yahan ayi toh laga main?main kay karo?main

G:samrat..shhhhhh chup.ho jao..samrat!!!

Gunjan wiping huis tears ,cupped his face wid her hands and said

G:smarat..main tumhe..kabhi chod ke nahi janungi?[then for making him smile..she says in a mock]tum kabhi bore ho ke bolo ge tab bhi nahi?shadi ke bad khud mujhe mayke main chod ke aoge toh..main phir peeche peeche aongi?.

S:kya????[breaking in to small laughs]

G:main tum se itna pyaar karungi?kit um yeh sab..buri yaadein bhul jaoge?I promise..

S:[he kisses her hands]

G:maa ki jaga koi nahi le sakta..par haan agar tum kaho..toh main tumhe loori ga ke sula sakti hoon?after all itni achi avaj jo hai..

And they both laugh together

Slowly Gunjan sits dwn and makes samrat sleep on her lap..and starts humming..her song.'kya hua yeh'?.

And sammy smiles lovingly looking at her?and closes his eyes?

Our mayur standing behind doors ..slowly start walking dwn stairs.. There were moments of complete placidness and suddenly both spoke together?"yeh dono made for each other hai na'?and laugh?nupur slowly walking further says

N;mayu tum jao?.in dono ko dekh kar samjh gayi ki pyaar..ke cute monets apne aap bante hain?yun jabar datsi nahi?main toh hoon hi filmy?.tum jao?soo jao..

M:haan par agar kabhi apne aap na ho toh..kisiko toh moment ko cute karma hoga na..kyun..imp yeh hai ki hum saath rahe?kahan??kaise??yeh sab nahi..

N:matlab??

M;chaloooo mere saath..

He takes her to the other side of th terrace?were abright full moon was shining above them?nupur was awestruck?th night was lookin simple yetr romantic?slowly mayu took out his ipod and said

M:main jyada kuch nahi kar sakta..par haan ismain tumhare fav luv songs hai..sab SRK ke ?hum saath sunege?yahan..raat bhar..ek dusre ke saath bait kar..

N:mayu tum yeh???

M:chaloo?aoo..

He makes her sit..and putts th earplugs in her ears and his as well..takes her hand in his and put on th song.."suraj ua madham.."

N:mayu tum jab aise romantic ban ki koshish karte ho na..toh by goddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jee karta hai tumhe?

And she moves closer..keeping th eye contact..smiling..

Buh mayu feels odd..he jerks back and says

M;nupurrrrr?gana suno na..

N:mayuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!

She smiles wid expression' yeh ladka bhi na'?and puts her hand around his arms and leans back to th wall closes her eys and they both listen th songs?.

Precap:mayu open th door of his house..and finds nupz wearing specs and th blue frill dress fo gunjan while gunjan is wearing th red dress of nupz wid ghungroos and pony..widout specs..saying "by godd mayu itni der door khol ne main"

luv nihu
i hv started apoems thread...plz do read and comment..i'll be really glad if u all could through it once.....
here's th link
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Edited by ILuvArjun - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
finaaly update kar hi diya THANKU!!!!!!!!!!! LUV YA
HEMA
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hemasharma36

finaaly update kar hi diya THANKU!!!!!!!!!!! LUV YA

HEMA

yaaaaaaaaa😳😳😳
do read and comment hun..missed u guyzzzzzz so much over here....missed writing too..
am doing a huge write up now....wid a big twist...hope u all will like it..
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Posted: 16 years ago
@NIHU nihuji embrass hone ki zarurat nahi hai ji lolz!!!!! btw how are u???? will surely read and comment missed u too!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nihu, awesome update, you are the QUEEN of ROMANCE, man you had me have my heart in my mouth all the time while i was reading it, each and every couple was sooooooooo romantic, the most pleasant surprise was mayank and his ipod and just them together so close was sooooooooooooooooo wonderful. it was just great, i loved each and every bit and each and every dialogue, oh gosh it was amazing. i lovedddddddddd it. It was just the best. God bless.

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