Bedtime FF: Sin Part 2 PG1 13/01

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#161

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

kat di thnxs a ton for the updating

OMG i soooooooo hate this duffer sumit

i fell realy for both of armaan n ridhima

i realy wonder that what does ridhima feel for armaan

now i will get very interesting how armaan will behave with ridz n al

thnxs a ton for ur updat

loved it sooooooooooo much

nruti

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lovelyyrose

@lovelyyrose

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#162

awww poor ridz i feel for her she is toy in summit hands but armaan how must he be feeling for ridz and she doesnt know about his state

cont soon
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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#163

OMG !!!!!!! gosh di u updated well i saw ur Pm n was like u udating yipeeeeeeeee 😆😆 andthen jia dee told me u alreday updated last nite and i was like 😭😭😭 and it was the same with all ur updates all i cud do was to grit my teeth and curse my broadband but wowieeee aftersoo many days we get to read an update that has the "kat magical touch" to it 😉😉

whoooossshhhh di had goosebumps n all blv me feel like killing summit right here the jerk how very insensitive of the nerd 😡 sheeeesshhh and poor ridzyy she doesnt even know anything two-timing and that too on ur wife it totally sucks and then armaan di feel soo bad for him he's so heart broken seems like kanta had anarrow escape he was all set ti kill her 😆 am sory di i noe the comment doesnt make muc sense but it is like am damn happppyyy today it's awesome 😃 wonderful 😃 applaudible 😃magical 😃heart-touching 😃 adorable 😃 and an absoltely delightful part 😆😆😆 and i sooooo Love dee for pestering u for this and u totally rock di!!!!!!
love ya loads
RV

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mahalakshmi Sathiyamoorthy

@mahalaksh2303

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#164

hey kat so finally u udated and i was inactive to catch it immediately..................😡

no probs i caught up with it now................😉

so sumit and ridz is married poor armi...................😭

so sumit is cheating on ridz and armi knows abt it wat is he gonna do....................😕😕

do continue soon waiting for tat.......................😊

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#165

Oh gosh i shud be the first and banggggg um last!!! Can it get more maddening!!

I write a long one, describing exactly wat i felt, u knw i can go on and on......darn and it all goes away showing me message not posted!! Arghhhhhhhh.

So coming back, wowwwwwwwwww is all i can i madam!! How do u do it??? Wrie these parts with so much perfection??? I mean not an emotion out of place??? How do u get each and every scene just perfect?? Each feeling just there, not missing out a thing??? How how how??? Hehe!!

It was brilliant, i so feel for Armaan, gosh poor guy! ahem ahem....the bedroom scene, the way he helps her with her attire was outstanding. Told u perfection queen, *sigh*

And him feeling for her, knowing shes being betrayed and yet not being able to a thing, Bi capping it all asking her to find him a bride??? Poor guy, and the worse poor Ridz, doesnt even knw wats happening!! Kat told u r an enchantress, just suck us deep into it, soooo artfully. Leaving me awed each time!!

The update was beyong excellence, better continue it soon, hehe!! Love ya!!

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#166

@ Jia - what you talking about i seee so many flaws in the entire part ???

Serious you know that i think i have a long way to got to ever think my stories are any good...

Love Kat

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Ananya

@_Ananya_

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#167

ooooh u updated!! Yay!! I really liked the part with the chunni and all. Stupid Sumit makes me soooo angry!!! Poor Ridz. Why did she marry him yaar?!?! Sumit should just leave Riddhima alone. Ridz has to find Armaan a girl when she's the girl he wants!! Lmao!! Very interesting. Do continue soon.

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: jia..
OMGGGGGGG Haila...u posted this????? Omg let me calm down....*Take a deeeeep breath* OMG......Love u ......ok i need to calm down!!!🤪

*Edit*

Ok now that was some intro lady!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG its like so freakingly outstanding....the way Armaan narrating his state....cant keep his eyes off from his lady love....😆

And wanting to be equal to her and prove himself....only to find her married....Ok u just got me a little more crazier on this then i already was.......😆 😆 How do u do this lady??? The intro is fabulous yaar....ok i am eager to see his ray of hope......thanks a million....🤗

Kept it short....u know the reason why...*Deep breath*😆

😆

Tumne mere dil ka sab kuch khul ke bo dia yaar!😉👏😉

Edited by jinil - 16 years ago

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#169

hey di
wow that AR scene was like WOW
loved it di
n then poor armi running away from ridz but baa is teming them up how sad
n that sumit argh hes such a ***********(fill it up)
update soon