My first Fan Fic : * And then they met*

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

PART 14 HAS BEEN UPDATED

PLZ READ AND COMMETN

THNK U

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1047560&TPN=2&#18749951

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Rashi

@Rash2cool

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

well dear..

ididn't commented..

i read upto..part 12..

i loved it..

itz too realistic...

n loved reading it..'

itz different..🤗

will read next two parts n comment..😃

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Part 15 has ben posted

plz read and comment

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1047560&TPN=2&#18885339

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niti

@junglli billi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

LOVED IT VEER IS BECOMING ROMANTIC DEAR>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Part 16 has been posted

plz read and comment

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1047560&TPN=3&#18894841

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plzzzzz read and comment...

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

hello Dvians!!

attention plz :)

well, the story is going so far and u maybe are waiting for the stage porgramm in the story ... it wont take much time know soon there will be the peformans on stage in d story

and to this stage programm i will make a vdo with 3 parts:

1st part

Dosti - DV

Sia's Entry

Shera's Entry

2nd part will be

Dharam Sia love

Veer Shera love

DS & VS dancing together

3rd and last part:

Agni with dum laga

Maseeha veer

dv VS agni

Dharam Veer title song

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ihv already maked 2 vdos of it, Sia's Entry and Veer Maseeha

well the Veer maseeha entry ihv used my own vdo which i made a few weeks ago....

i didnt upload the vdo with sia's entry ill make them together in parts so u can c them!

guys, i hope ur liking my fan fic, i dont get much commetn which feels me very bad! im doing the story more interessting as i can, and plz tell me what i can change in the story...

plz plz plz plz plz read it and do comments, qauz i need ur support

love

mahi =)

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Part 17 has been posed plz read and do comments

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1047507&PID=18484378&#18484378

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to part 17: well guys ihv shows in this part a big fight betweet rajat n harsh with a few bad words etc.

everyone know that rajat nd harsh arent like that and how i show mughda in the story as a Peacemaker !

its just a story, dont take it seriosly abt that im writing like this abt rajat harsh mugdha etc

if i hurt u im sorry

plz plz plz read and comment

Love

mahi

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

part 18 has been posted

plz read and do comments

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1047560&TPN=3&#18921494

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Rashi

@Rash2cool

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

hey mahi lovely update dear.....😳
i read last 3 parts upto 17 yesterday....😛
so got late here..
but i see no coments...😕
any ways..

I loved ur FF a lot...😛
atlast veer admitted his love to jassu..... i loved it n d style in which he admitted was so cute...😍

n abt mugdha a peacemaker..😆 😆😆
😆n harsh and rajat's character tooo u hav e potrayed very well....👏
👏loved all d dialogs and everything of ur FF..😃 ⭐️👏👏

BTW part 18 i'll read n comment afterwards...😳

here is my quota for u..🤗

Edited by Rash2cool - 16 years ago