Jeevan Saathi- AR-Part 5 Pg.1 | 11/25/08 - Page 17

Hey .... a cool ff. I read all parts today. Loved the pain you have demonstrated in part two. Especially, this bit ....

Hey Anita, I read all the rest of the parts. I thoroughly enjoyed each of them, and I am loving the way you are taking the AR interaction forward. Good to see all those feelings piling up inside them.

Part 3 was fun to read with Riddhima's nervousness and anxiety during the interview. The bit about her head spinning like a washing machine was particularly interesting.....liked the analogy a lot!

Part 4 was again totally fun with all those bolly like things happening between the hero and heroine; power breaking, heroine getting afraid and hanging to the hero, awkward feeling and all.lol Still was fun to read, with your words playing the magic again.

Part 5 was very good like the others, Armaan has already started to feel the mermerising magic, and has started comparing Riddhima to Anjali. Its nice to know that but I somewhere feel that it might be a little harsh on Riddhima for him to feel attracted to her only coz she reminds him of anjali and nothing more. If he tries to search Anjali in Riddhima, that's not going to be fair on Riddhima. She has her own charm, and Mr. Hero should realize it sooner or later. Well, I have no clue what you have in your mind, so I won't comment about this any further.

Awesome work as usual. You are undoubtedly doing justice with the story and the characters and its no less a pleasure to be catching up every time you update.

Love!

awww i really pity armaan

i just found this ff today.. and read it!! LOVED IT!.. i love the concept.. you described armaans emotions and pain so well..it was something i could sense while reading it.. so glad he has friends like rahul and muskaan... OMG!! his and ridz encounters were soooo funny.. she is always bumping into or spilling things on him.. the bedroom scene with iron and darkness was so funny.. he is starting to have CLOSE encounters with ridz.. and she reminds him of anjali.. wow.. wonder if she will be ble to make him fall in love agian.. well eyah she will.. but i guess how she does that will be interesting to see.. cant wait to read the next part.. if u send pms... please add me to the list.. thank you.. take care

Seriously, flawlessly written Anita!

You've seem to place every description into place, that it just comes out so beautifully!

And Rid'z meeting!....Wow....Armaan is seemingly catching every detail of her!.

Memories of Anjali flooded his mind as he gazed intently at her. Why was this girl reminding him so much of Anjali? It was as if her each gesture was connected to Anjali…Armaan closed his eyes briefly as he recollected a precious moment with Anji.Hmmm I really want to noe how you will convice Armaan's character to love Ridz.....really interesting situation here...

"I've fallen head over heels for you…Every aspect of yours, I've fallen in love with… The way you blow away the hair that lands on your face when you work...and then getting irritated by the consistency of it, you end up tying your hair…the way you search for the pen you write with," he chuckled slightly as he continued, " only to find that the pen is sticking in your hair…the way happiness spreads all over your face when a task gets completed…the cute expressions you make when you're deeply involved in work…the way—".........Dude......even I was moved.......O.O SUPERB PART, the best paragraph I've ever read.

Armaan's hand's went up on an impulse, and grabbed the pencil out of her bun, letting her hair fall freely. Whoa.......Is Ridz Armaan's Angel!?

Superb part darling! Btw Eid Mubarak!

-NAtasha

hey great part!!!!!!! loved it!! cont soon n thnx for the pm!tc!!

hi anita