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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

oki um here sooner than i claimed in the PM...great part Jia...n welcome back, u wr mighty missed, which isnt hard for u to guess, we were quite open abt it lolzzz

so the flashback is finally done, boy for once u making me hate this man, i thto i was incapable of anything but falling for...but oh well..ur experimenting with the character its a whole new side, n i think ur pulling it off well...so kudos!

personally he better do some outa the world, if i was ridzi (pray i never be the her as in the fic) but id swear off the chance of a second ever....the guy just pulled off too much for a comeback, but he will i hope in the fic...just make him good enuf, he such a detestable jerk for now.... :(

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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Awwww Jia it's so sad I really feel for Ridz as much as I like Armaan I really dislike him here, how can anyone be so cold and heartless. I am glad Ridz found a friend in Rahul who was able to help her succeed. I hope you don't make Ridz forgive Armaan so easily and thanks for the PM can't wait for the next update, good to see you back in actions!

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#63

yikessss!!! thats.. cruel, very very cruel... I guess they were too immature to solve out their problems, but then again, Armi was DRUNK, pfffttt.

anyways, awesome part as always Jia, when're u updating Armour of love?

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Flawless babes

Love Supermodel Kat lol

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Woow! such bitter emotions expressed that ended everything!.....written beyond believable!

Now i'm really anxious wht will happen next!

-Natasha

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

awwwwwww that part was sooo sad! i feel soooo bad for her!!! cant wait for ur next part!

Avanti

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

amazing part

poor ridz had to deal with alot but im glad she has fullfilled her mums dreams.

cant wait 2 see how armaan tries to win her back.

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

OMG!

What a edge of the seat update..Seriously Jia, I got to hand it to you! I'm in awe with the way you sequenced and described the flashback and how it coincided with the present! Well done Jia! 👏You did FULL justice to the part--and the best part was that it was long--which made up for the delay in not updating..lol...I pray that your exams went well! It's glad to see you back on IF! = D

Armaan is such a😡 ---only bad words coming to mind--lol...How could he do that to her...Was fame that important to him that he ignored his lady love...His love grew weak as he rose to fame..Wasn't this the same Armaan that would get possesive about her and would not want her to suffer? Fame really did change him..Poor Riddhima, I could feel for her...I LOVED this Armaan before this part...I thought he made a small mistake, but I was wronged..lol...Armaan dissapointed me...He's going to have to gain my trust too as well as Riddhima's...Brilliantly penned Jia! You did an awesome job with portraying emotions..👏

Yesterday would have been 9 months exactly and she would have felt part of her in her arms…her own baby…the life she created would have been playing in her arms……

So sad...I was moved by this line so much that tears brimmed up in my eyes..I was cursing Armaan..lol...😭

"That's your place, poking in my affairs, questioning me? No sweetheart you are living in my house, on my expenses. Infact your very existence is because of me. How dare you question me? If I had not supported you, you would be somewhere in the dumps cursing your existence." He walked out and stepped down as she lay still on the floor lowering her eyes. Tears did not just come now and she felt empty, void and totally numb. The pain could not take her away from the numbness.

Armaan totally lost my love..lol...It's really disgusting seeing this side to him...I can't believe he would do such a thing..Awesomely portrayed!!

Riddhima is right..She shouldn't trust him again after all he did for her...

Great part Jia...Nothing was confusing...

Continue soon..update AOL soon too! = D

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Anita

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#69

OUCH dee where happens to b my PM ????????😭 how could u do dis to a poor soul like me 😆... hehe i seem 2 have lost it wid xamz rite over m head stilll welcum back after d xamzzz u a happy n free bird nowww.....

newaz u were so damn rite!!!!!!! i mean i'm hating d armaan here like nething!!!!!!! i dont have words to describe wat i feel!!!!! man hez such a jerk cum freak cum nerd cum git 😡😡 awwww... u made me say such harsh words 4 armaan datz how sad as well as bad 😆😆😆 OMG poor ridzy it was actually tym dat she put her foot down!!!!!!! but armaan cudnt get nemore worse den already i mean itz was disgusting🤢!!!!! i mean firshht she quitely swallows his link-ups n den he has d nerve to tell her dat she n rahool aarghhh....pervert 😲😲 n den he pushes n ven she struggling wid sooo much pain he LEFT HER ALONEE......... hehe u noe i 'm thoroughly disgusted rite now ek toh no PM n den such a saddy saddy part 😭😭😭 u reduced me to tears dee!!! poor ridzy naa but 4 a change rahool a perfect gentleman 😉but wat i cant help blving is dat all dis is a flashback naa😕 dat means after she lost d kid due to his rashness😡 he had d gutz he lock her up in d roon again n be such a pessimist uffooo dis cant get ne more horrible...... now dey will meet again😕!!!! letz c wat u have in store😆 but dee puhleezz armaan should make it up dis tym i mean if he wants her to accept a beast like himself again he better prove worthy 😉😉 but i really cant c how in d world will dat happen...... luv ya😳 aravi