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Posted: 17 years ago
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You didn't have to but it sounds good to me!!!!😃 I'm glad you're here so does that mean you're updating the other one right now?!!! 😍 I have to sleep soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Update #1
The story starts at khanna mansion in America. The mansion is shown, six huge bedrooms, massive garden, swimming pool, huge launge, dinning room, kitchen, study, everything was massive. It wasn?t that easy to get such a big bunglow in America but if you have money its possible, and anand had a lot left by his father for both his sons, and soon they both invested and made the empire huger, then they decided to open up businesses in America as there is a lot of money in America and that what they done, so anand had to go to America to handle the business their and also extended it more 7 years ago his brother brijesh past away, he tried to return but it wasn?t so easy to leave everything and go back so he went every 2months to visit his mother and bhabi.

Okay now lets continue, the house is shown its 5am in the morning and we can hear someone doing pooja really loud.

Kanya: oh god, Mom is back with her pooja, I need my beauty sleep! [she covers her ears with the pillow, really annoyed]

Harpal: [banging his head on his pillow] is it necessary to do all this soooo early in the morning??

Kanya, Natasha and harpal go to college while pooja is done with it so she does whatever she wants. Most of the time she struggles to give her scripts to Hollywood directors and tv directors which are always rejected.

Pooja: [wakes up hears the sound] mamma sings really well eh? [and goes back to sleep]

Natasha hears her mother and gets up, Natasha wakes up early every morning then goes down and does arti with her mum. Then she has a shower and goes jogging. At about 6:30am.

College starts at 8:45am so kanya and harry wake up at 7:30 as they need time to dress up

Natasha just came back from jogging, its already 7:45am, anand and pooja are sitting at the dining table, pammi is in the kitchen making breakfast.

N: good morning dad! Goodmorning di!

Poo & an: good morning!
Poo: jog kaisi rahi? How was the weather outside?

N: it was great I feel so much better, and the weather was damn hot.

An: chalo beta breakfast karlo,

N: jee papa, abhi ayi, just have to shower with cold cold water.

An: theek hai.

She goes to the kitchen,

N: hello mum, What are you making for breakfast?

Pam: oh, tu agayi beta, chal jaldi tayar ho ja, tere favourite aloo ke parathe banaye hain,

N: WOW, awesome, main abhi gayi aur abhi ayi! Love u mum!

P: [looking at Natasha go and smiles.]

Natasha comes down, then in a few minutes harry and kanya also come down.

Kanya is on the phone, arguing with her friend about what she must wear.

K: monica, I already told you that I am wearing a pink mini skirt and white top you cant wear the same colours as me, you better go and change! Okay will see u in a bit.

She comes and sits on the table, harry also sits.

K: morning everybody!
H: how was the jog nats?

N: it was good,

A: kanya, yeh tumne kya pehna hai, beta?

K: dad, its fashion just chill.

K: MOM! Where are you??? We are getting late!

P: arahi hoon!

K: oh im sooo hungry!!

H: me too!

Pam brings the food.

K: oh no mum, parathas again??? You know I don?t eat parathas! They are sooo oily, ewww.

N: wow, parathas, can I have one.

H: ya me too, love your parathas mom.

Poo: mom, main yahan sabse badi hoon, mujhe pehle.

A: I think tum bhool rahi ho, im the eldest.

Poo: oops, sorry mum, dad first, then me then nats and then harry.

P: sab ko milega, itne hyper hone ki zaroorat nahi hai.

N: mom, aap roz roz thodi na parathe banati hain, ke hum itne utavle na ho, u know we love the Indian food.

K: hello, main bhi yahan hoon!

P: yeh le tera cornflakes aur juice, patanahi kyun yehi khati hai, kabhi kabhi parathe bhi try karliya kar.

K: thanks mom, but im happy with my continental.

They all eat breakfast and leave for college. Harry goes in his motor bike and kanya and Natasha go in the car. Natasha is driving as kanya keeps herself busy putting makeup and doing her college homeworks.

K: hey nats did you finish the bio home work?

N: haan, long tym!
K: wow, can I copy it?

N: kanya, you are impossible, is time pe copy karegi?

K: haan, waise bhi college pohochne mein 10min to agenge, tab tak ill just copy it.

N: tu na, mujhe bhi phasaye gi,

K: please nats, please please. You know it?s the last homework of the year and I don?t wanna get shouted.

N: okay, it?s in my bag.

So kanya takes the homework and copy?s it. They reach college.

K: see ya later sis,

N: bye!

Natasha parks the car and takes her bag and turns to go to the class, but there is someone their.

N: Vik! You?re back

She goes and hugs him

N: I really missed you!

V: Me too, I missed my chatter box, no one to chow my brains you know.

N: ya ya, I have to tell you so many things, this whole week whatever happened. Oh im so happy!

V: oh god, double chatting, I think im gonna die.

Oh sorry didn?t introduce vik, well here goes.

Vicky aka Vik: played by mohit malik, He is natashas best friend, Natasha shares everything with him, she loves chatting with him, that?s why he calls her chatterbox and she calls him mr. bhoolakar, because he forgets everything, except when its about Natasha, he went to India for a week, and now hes back,

they both go to class,

N: guys!

Natasha had lots of friend all mixed whites, blacks and Indians, she would chat with everyone but her closest friends were, riya, shruti, aliya, rahul, piya, akash and vik. They all were like a gang they would be together for lunch and outings. They were quiet a few Indians, but these were the decent ones, not into bad habits like drugs, smoking and drinking.

Kanya also had lots of friends, but she was too bossy so basically she never had any true friends, all her friends were whites, because she considered herself to be one of them, she had a boyfriend too Peter. He was the longest one ever, hes with her for 2 and half weeks, its unbelievable because no one can stand her for more then 3 days. All her friends only hang out with her for money because she spends it like water.

Now back to the story, it?s December and college is ending for the year, its only few days for college now.

The whole day goes, with all the usual. The bell rings for home time, Riya, piya, alya, shruti, rahul, akash, vik and nats are standing together.

V: everyone, as u all know vik is back after a whole week and today is Friday night so I want to take all my friends to party, so you all have to come! I?ll come pick all of you.

They all agree and go home.

Harry is not yet back, as on Fridays he only comes back the next morning around 4am.

Kanya and Natasha go to their own rooms and have a shower and change.

They both come down for their mid snack as they don?t have proper lunch in college, they come home and have it.

Pam: kanya, Natasha khana tayar hai!

They both sit on the table. Its only them

K: Nats, what have you planned for today?

N: oh all of us are going out with vik.

K: oh yeah, hes back, waise yeh vik bohot cute hai!

N: ya, but hard lucks you know how he is.

K: ya, whatever, lets get back to business, I needed some money. [whispering]

N: What!

K: slowly, you don?t have to scream!

N: But Dad just gave the pocket money on monday already finished?

K: ya, actually I bought some gifts for my friends.

N: kanya tu dada ke sare paise tere un stupid doston pe loota deti hai, its hard earned money you know you should atleast think, I mean $1000 dollars spent in 4 adys, tahts too much!

K: I know, I wont do it again, please one last time.

N: that?s what you said last week.

K: please nats, you are so sweet. Otherwise I cant go out with my friends tonight only for today nats, please!

N: okay, but this is the last time. How much do you need?

K: about $500.00

N: what! [shouts] I mean what [now whispering] 500 dollars are you crazy?

K: come on nats, please!

N: okay but this is the last time, im giving you my savings.

K: thanx sis, you are simply the best. [she kisses her]

They finish their food and go up.

Kanyas room.

N: yeh lo, but mind it this is definitely the last time, okay?

K: thank you soooo much, ur the best.

N: it okay, [starts going]

K: nats, please help me na, I cant decide which dress to wear.

She shows her two dresses.

N: kanya, itne revealing??

The two outfits are as follows:

http://topcelebritiespictures.com/images1/katrina-kaif-01.jpg

http://thebollywoodzone.com/blog/images/2007/06/katrina-kaif.jpg

K: what, are you mad this is nothing you should see Angelina whats he wears that?s too revealing and btw its fashion just tell me which will look nice?

N: they both look aweful, wear any!

She walks out of the room.

K: oh god, give her some dressing sense, please. Just little bit.

She gets ready she wears this outfit and hair also the same as the link.

http://topcelebritiespictures.com/images1/katrina-kaif-01.jpg

Natasha also gets dressed wearing the following skirt and top but with a jacket. Her hair is also as the link.

http://www.fantom-xp.com/wallpapers/75/Unseen_Katrina_Kaif.jpg

she hears the horn and sees vik, she runs and tells her mom and goes out in the car.

For the next update please comment, we still need to meet ranbir, so everyone hurry up get commenting! Hope you enjoyed it!

xxMwahxx

Edited by nadz_J - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
good part and put some sense in to kanya i mean like after she meet ranbir she will change like weer salwaar kameez and be a normal girl like she was in kit because i hate this type of girls soooo much
i feeel like pulling there hair and slap them 3 times
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
great update
plz dont make it a love triangle b/w RanKan and Nats lol
continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
gr8 part
thnx for the PM
cotinue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
your intro is interesting...... waiting for the next update. i like your new title too. reminds me of the song........ dil tere bin kahi lagta nahi waqt guzarta nahi, kiya yahi pyaar hai, haan haan haan yahi pyaar hai....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
great nice intro
update soon⭐️
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
its a brill start... but i think you shud have made nats the modern one...
i can't seem to imagine Kanya like that
but hey i loved it
pls continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
i luvd it! kanya is so annoying! nats is so sweet!!!!
spate22 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
Wow!!!! This was very long!!!!😆 However, this story really pulled me in!!!!😃 It was very well-balanced!!!! I think this story is very interesting!!! Kanya is very different in this story but I have a feeling that Ranbir will that special someone to change her into someone better?!!! Am I right?!!! Or Ranbir is just like Kanya?!!!!🤢😆 Is this a love-triangle between Kanya, Ranbir, and Natasha?!!!😕 Please do update really really soon!!!! I want to read more!!!!😉
Shreya

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