AR FF~Set Ablaze~ part-14 page-110 28/07 - Page 65

Originally posted by: missypatel

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*edit* ......*yawn* man m so sleepy...and in d car...i koe hw i reached ma d day skool n ten lib..!! oh man i so didnt wanna read d part now...but cudnt resist...!!lol

oh man...ur driving anyways is mashah allah and now u trying sleep driving...if that's even a word but oh well...u better drive alone if u want to do things like that...leave that poor kid alone😡

wats up wit all of u..i dnt get it..its lke u all r tryna compete each other...m gettin to read less updates...buth worth a read...each time...and tey leave me dazed and unsure..of ma own feelinz and thoughts!

aight...to say it in a few words...luved d part krato!! *ouch*
d startin bit..d use of RJ..was a fab touch 2 d part...given dt...it really graced and flowed in such admiration i tell u ...it mde all d difference..:D bravo hun!! *clap*clap*!!

aww thanks nij hehe..i had been wanting to abuse RJ for sometime...it just helped me to it without getting the chappals thrown at me...and got them defended as well...lol
armaan...gettin her 2 see true feelinz of RJ...he kissed her??? likin was dt d 1st time? y? on an impulse?? so hed already known and decided in his head dt...she not juss a sumbdy to him...she means..smg...hmmm!!

hmmm...yeah welll...i built the moment there...
ridz...lettin d guard dwn..and i cnt think of a time even wen i know factz abt her feelinz for vivek..dt she kissed a guy...and felt dt essence of one..all d emotionz dt cum wit it....tey touched her passin through her tough self...d ridz dt i koe..uve build..she like vanished in thin air...it was contradictin...bt still extremely well thot of...its lke...her vunerable self...is suddenly out in d open..for d world to see..ohhh man..nicee!!

okay was that a compliment?? i can't decide..hehe...with u am never sure but ah!! i still love ur comments for exactly that reason...they push me to do better....
samuel...poor thin....lmao! no kratz i still dnt sympathize wit him....he was a nobody bfr and still iz...d frd he cud be for her...bt even dt she doesnt deserve....too bad for ridz!! monica-samuel scene was awesome..d mention of her feelinz and his understand for it..gud gud!!
thank you ma'am

ridz battle wit her own head...shes tryin atleast...she koes wat shes got to do...bt d feelin aroused in her...call for a storm..yayyy!!!
ahaha...exactly that

finally...AR...okay tey chemistry rocked!!yur strong use of words...exceptional! sumhw it gt feelinz headed dt it called for....it gve me gooseflesh..and i cud picturize tem..sexy flow..and hiz hunger still called for her approval :D ...d rite emotionz...dt was d biggest deal abt it..fab work krato!
okay stop using that!! but yah thanks soooooo much...m so glad u liked it...love ya

*cheers* again!! it was a brilliant update..!!

~me 🤗

That was a super-speed part ... so many things have happened and AR relationship has rose like a rocket. Whoo... let me catch my breath .. hahaha!!!

that was amazing

m new to ur ff and its really good!!!!!

cant wait for the next part

Originally posted by: aravi

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finalllly kratz this upadte was certainly a wonder i tell ya !! n the moment i read ur analysis of RJ i was in splits goodness but that was one hell of a description so totallt riddhima here n then here argument aith abhimanyu left both the guys stunned gosh the woman is lethal with words n opinions !!!!!

ahahhaha...i am always opposing RJ everywhere i go...like wenever me and my frnds have a talk about those legendry love stories and all...nd am always an antony and cleopatra supporter and the rest of the love stories really piss me off so this part was like venting out all my frustration..hehe...nd who better to do it than Riddhima Gupta....😆

aahha armaan was there to comfort her well he just knows the right spots n great he seconded abhi's opinion but then the intense pacification dta followed was commendable n the kiss aww well t was their first right???yeah she did give him a small kiss in the previous part but this one was the first real one n den it bringing back old memories n peculiar sensation in her time to open up to real love seems like !!!!!! armaan evoking emotions in her that were long supressed all it took was some gentle words n the emotions surfaced !!!!!!

yeah...it's always like that...the strongest of ppl are actually the easiest to reach out to

the havan scene well buddy seems like ugot something for this black n red combo heer i mean even in" In love with the enemy" in dat party she wore a balck n red combo haha...yeah u were smart to notice that...i love red and black combo and another one being gold and red combo.they my favorite....hehe u fav but goodness this combo looks deadly on KSG!!! armaan bruised his fingers well all coz of the beauty infront of him!!!!!! n the aftermath kratzzz the intensity was simply oozing out n outstanding!!!!! n poor sam ridz was pretty brutal with him ya!!! love hurts still hope monica is some help seems like neena was right thrghout!!!!!!!!

hmm...u rite there and am glad u liked that scene there...my cheeks got warm wen i was writing it...hehe

love

RV love ya Rv...thanks a lot for the comment

Originally posted by: kAsH_hOt2hAnDlE

krati diiii it ws awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeee........................so hottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt......it ws really hot 2 handle .ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.............dt ws da best part of ds fic finally armaaan-ridz r 1 nw....hope 2 c da next part soon.............................

-luv anu

Originally posted by: lollipops

OMGGGG KRATZ.... that was AMAZING.... i was sooo lost in it..... that was truly magnificant.... aww thanks so much Rav...am soooo happy you liked it

The whole Romeo juliet bickering at the start was fantastic.. Armaan's reactions to Riddhima and Abhimanyu's bickering were soo cute... 😳😳 Gosh finally... Riddhima threw it in sameul's face... I DUNNO WHY BUT I WAS LIKE REALLY GLAD...😆 i mean come one.. who does he think he is.. taking riddzy away frm armaan... lolz..aahaha...Rav the guy is in love with her yaar..ahaah...nd she is single in bold cpital letters...hehehe but oh well...i noone likes samuel here..hmmm aww i felt soo sorry for Monica.. poor thing.. she was really hurt..😕😕 like they say.. 'love the person who loves you if you can't get the one you love...' that so goes for sameul.. gosh.. men.. lolz...ahah...yeah she is hurt but she knew from the start that he is mighty smitten by riddz... Finally coming to the Riddhima-ammy part.. gosh woman.. you got some talent there... they could publish a collections of your fictions.. 😃awww Rav grl u made my day...ahaha...that's really sweet of you...dunno if they really that good but am honoured and glad honestly they are brill... 👏👏 the way you described thier union.. so pure yet so sensual and breathtaking.. hats of to you kratz...thanks so much...am grinning wide ok ok me iz stopping now... 😆 kratz.. me is waiting for when love takes over bdw.. i am scratching my brain thinking why Amar got arrested... plz cont soon.. all of ur ffs i mean...

Sorry Rav it's coz of exams that i can't continue all of them but will try as soon as my last exam also gets over nd bfr i start the prep for the main ones...

love you

rav

xxx

P:S you like eeyore?? 😆😆 ahah...yeah i love him...thanks a lot for this...saved it....thanks