AR FF~Set Ablaze~ part-14 page-110 28/07 - Page 34

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okay bfr i say nethin...i absolutely luved d way put d 3 together....profoundly done..luved it!!

d whole...ridz-samuel act...u got me wonderin for a whilt ter...bt dt was another killer...d whole scene btn d 2..sexy!! ahhah m nt surprised..at ridz behaviour..bt i luv hw u takin in..!!unexpected bt all d more thrillin!!
and ten d girls talkin..lol i lke dt line..."...lets move" was it..haah!! bck to armaan n d girls lol..i was smilin throughout..i dunno abt ne1 else...bt i cud totally..c myself ter..in dt room...i was so part of it!! thanks krats!!;)
tht was beautiful and vry sweet gesture..!!gladdddddddd....!!
almost 4gt...did john hurt her??? u left a cliff yaarrrr...kya toh bhi!! ahah

luved it...totally!!🤗

She says shes my friends,
says we are close buddies
when i think of her...i know she means it..
she reminds me of being like her more ways than not
a lot of myself, mirrored back to me.
A simple but touching thing she did today,
you hear? you can read and maybe see too..
she pulled my chords..so indifferent..unusual
and yet i am smiling..calm and content
unaware of the cause or the purpose
i know am happy today..for many a reasons
but one of them surely is 'coz of her.

nij~

ps...cnt say enuf for d 3..:) yes! juss mde dt up...so u better koe it!!

heres smg i found sumwer in ma pc..lol!!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JEJit716A4w [/YOUTUBE]

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reserved....kratz hun will be back!!!

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oki me here for the essay...u know wat i was like telling myself after u posted and i reserved that i shud totally refrain from reading ur part....it happens so strongly u know when i read the mindblowingly (as u say 😆) amazing updates i lose track of my own like completely...n i told u il read it later too, for the reason same lolzzz....but thats the whole thing, will power over temptation to read, hahaha um such a loser for it, i cudnt not read it n then bang, i was regretting it with each passage, n like telling myself stop here n read later n all....but well it dint work, i read the whole thing....😕

dam kratz i was like not breathing n blinking for some several tons of seconds before i recovered....not just from the end of her in a pool of blood and all, that i think i kind of expected when neena told her the man was dangerous, i had a hunch u wud end on a note somewhat like the one u did, hehehe genius minds think alike 😆 n genius minds in love with the same charater def think alike 😆

oki so wat left me like outrightlu baffled as i said wasnt just the edn, infact less that but liek bits n pieces of the part on the whole....the samuel scene was so intense, like the shot i guessed was one coz she confessed her feelings n all, but the real scene...o boy....but now she already half dead, hopefully he wont lash out next at our girl, this had to happen she was playing with fire, but the greatest impact of the samuel scene was how much it affected ridhima....i thot the way u portrayed that was incredible!!!...n the song later..hehehe i was laughing n singing!!!😆 (i lovvvvvv this ridhima, for several reasons not quite obvious,.....but i love her nonetheless!!)

the doggie scene...aawwwww kratz i just cudnt keep my urge to like reach ut into the imaginary film running before my eyes as i read the bit and like cuddle the two of them...aaawww i live dogs sooooooooo much....n well, u cudnt let me be smiling too long lolzzz, every bit of this uodate had a lose end u left for us to wonder abt thi cud be no exception now the dogs get mad at the lady herself...hehehe...in a way i was so glad they did, i wud have almost disliked the usual of them loving her coz they wr armaans dogz n she was ridzi!....😆

oki oki...my bhashan pretty much don, but i shud tell u what i loved most abt this update...i cud relate nothing here watsoever to anything or anypart of u know wat....i mean also having been able to like see the comparison was awsome fun, i only just realized after this part, how much i wud miss onto ur creative thinking if i cud correlate each bit, this part had like out of the world yet such obviously regular fitting ideas falling in place perfectly, regular i mean they wr obious to have happened...n un expected coz i just dint see anything in this part coming...dam....wat an update...i was trulu intensity struck for about an hour, i refreained from writing my own part then, just went down to cook n eat to kill the rising gut feeling hehe...please kratz u gota update asap hun...will be totally waiting!!!

👏 lov,

nj

ps: did i forget to mention, it was my fav part from u ever...thin k that was kinda obv from my essay!

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wow! thats a gr8 part...silky nd luci are cute :)

amazing part
lool armaan loves his dogs...so cute
really cool how you described the relationship between armi n luci & silky and even the personalities of each dog...was great
omg ridhima ko kya hua?
has john got sumink to do wiv this? if he has hopin armaan finds out n batters him lol
as always fab part plzz update soon
waiting eagerly to know wot happend to ridz...

Hey krati...i'm soo srry 4 nt commentin 4 soo lng..busy wid skool lyf u noe..

OMG WAT A PART DEAR!!

fantastic... very well written...too gud...