pyaar ya inkaar ff p25 pg41 LAST PART - Page 19

tthat was mind blowing arwa......now veer will have a go at dharam go veer wohooooo!!!!

Hiiiiiiiiii Arwa!! 😃 How are you?

😛 well, thanks for the extra long update... its nice after a long time of absence, i always wanted to do that, compense wid long updates the long delays, but never cud.. 😆 anyways, ive been reading ur fic for the 1st time after many days, 😊 and got impressed. its really interesting, as always. 👏 i just knew it and told u in the firstest parts... yaad hei? 😳 😛 ok, my comment now: i dont know how sia-pari-bhim-antara-dharam-sakshi are all under the same roof... 😕 but that doesnt matter for me. so, dharam has finally changed! ⭐️ 👏 hurray!! ⭐️ 😃 😆. I like it, specially coz now sia is melting her feelings towards him, 😳 aaaw!! classical filmy scene, of touching hands... 😳 and getting embarrased.. luv it!. 😆 antara... negative... lol, last time i checked, she was just a plain character, neither negative, neither too positive, just one more... 😲 how did she changed? jealousy maybe? omg!! 😲 antaras going to be dharams maharani?... noooo.... chahe shadi bhi karle usse, but his hearts ruler is only and only one, sia. right? well, dunno wat happened at the mela... or anything... but liked when dharam softens trying to console sia wid his gaze, 😛 sia and family going.... where? 😕 i mean, to home.. 😆 but how much time did they spend at aryanagar? 😛

awww it's so cute dharam "just couldn't take his eyes off her"😍 luv it

Originally posted by: hiri

tthat was mind blowing arwa......now veer will have a go at dharam go veer wohooooo!!!!

esha

hey esha thanks a lot for the appreciation.

yes now Veer shall go and have a go at Dharam.

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

Hiiiiiiiiii Arwa!! 😃 How are you?

😛 well, thanks for the extra long update... its nice after a long time of absence, i always wanted to do that, compense wid long updates the long delays, but never cud.. 😆 - hey yeh i'm fine and gr8 to see u here after a long time. yeh i guess u can say it is a way of compensating hehehe.

anyways, ive been reading ur fic for the 1st time after many days, 😊 and got impressed. its really interesting, as always. 👏 i just knew it and told u in the firstest parts... yaad hei? 😳 - thanks a lot for reading it again dear and i'm glad u liked it.

😛 ok, my comment now: i dont know how sia-pari-bhim-antara-dharam-sakshi are all under the same roof... 😕 but that doesnt matter for me. so, dharam has finally changed! ⭐️ 👏 hurray!! ⭐️ 😃 😆. I like it, specially coz now sia is melting her feelings towards him, 😳 aaaw!! classical filmy scene, of touching hands... 😳 and getting embarrased.. luv it!. 😆 - well let me clear ur confusion then. Sia had come to Bhavanipur to help Bhim into cleaning and preparing Dharam's mahal so in that she meets Dharam. but this time she finds him changed and he invites them al lfor dinner at the mahal becasue his sister Sakshi requested. Now to the point yes Dharam is changing and the thanks shud go to Sia as it is her love which did it. hehehe i guess we always have to use the cliches here and there as it just is so beutiful to resist.

antara... negative... lol, last time i checked, she was just a plain character, neither negative, neither too positive, just one more... 😲 how did she changed? jealousy maybe? omg!! 😲 antaras going to be dharams maharani?... noooo.... chahe shadi bhi karle usse, but his hearts ruler is only and only one, sia. right? - she isnt exactly negative just grey shaded as she always hated SIa because of how Dharam gave her more importance than her. yes i gues it is jealousy. of course maharaj Dharam kee ek hee maharani hogi or wo hai Sia.

well, dunno wat happened at the mela... or anything... but liked when dharam softens trying to console sia wid his gaze, 😛 sia and family going.... where? 😕 i mean, to home.. 😆 but how much time did they spend at aryanagar? 😛 - oh girl seems like u haven't read the previous parts thats why ur so confused. Well its not due to what happened at the mela its wat happened with Agni. she found out his true colours through Dharam and now hearing abt him again made her boil but Dharam consoled her coz he has started becoming understanding. and now abt the leaving well they are going back to their house in Bhavanipur and not out of it. they are not in aryanagar right now.

😆😆😆 im feeling childish laughing at antaras attitude towards dharam-sia, (during their scene on the mahal hall.... when dharam tells that he likes her)... but cant help 😆

lol... its like, when wer watching some show/film, and the villain feels bad, coz he/she is loosing... 😛 but, u made a great job Arwa 😃 - hehehe it interesting to see u had a laugh at this serious scene. well it was meant to be a lighter one from antara's side. gr8 comparison.

chatrapur part comments:

wots veer doing there? 😕 once again, doesnt really matters, for me. 😊 😆 - dharam sent him there on business after Aryavardhan died

😲😲 ram sing has got veers letters for ananya...! thats.. oops... embarrasing... 😆 but veer must be more like... burning in anger, and confussion.. after all, he always loved ananya, and dharam always knew it... 😛

know the interesting thing will come when veer will demand an explanation to a recently attitude changed dharam... 😛 waiting for it..

and waiting aswell to know about ananyas state.. 😛 - yes Veer was outraged as he was bound to be na. he realised how his brother messed his life up. It sure wud be interesting to see so lets see how that shapes up.

bak to aryanagars mahal.

sia as commoner??.. 😲 😕 - its in bhavanipur and yes read the continued post below the previous one so u'll see whats going and yeh thanks i luved ur comments after a long time.

will have to read next part... but not now. 😊

till then, cya, hope u liked my comments. 😛 - yeh i hope u do get to read the remaining of the part and hopefully that wud clear the confusion. DO keep reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: pretty_angel5

awww it's so cute dharam "just couldn't take his eyes off her"😍 luv it

hey thanks alot for the appreciation. I'm gladu found it cute and luved it.

🤗Arwa🤗

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya

🤗Arwa🤗

I'm so sorry i couldn't comment on ur last parts...😭... But, i really don't get the time to reply nowadays😭.... lots of studies😊...

Anyways, i couldn't stop myself from commenting on this part...

It's too brilliant yaar👏👏👏....

I loved it alot, the situations in which Sia realises her love-👏👏

I'm so much excited for your next part...

And, also, for Veer's reactions after knowing the truth😕....

Do update soon dear😃😃

lovly update enjoy reading it sorry for late comment

Part 18

Open wounds

Sumaina

Next morning Ananya sat in her room with all the scrolls Veer had given her so far and she kept on reading all the lovely poems. She remembered those wondrous days full of love she had spent with him and tears appeared in her eyes thinking that this all was a farce. She hadn't heard from him since that letter of his farewell and now it had been months. She knew he wasn't coming back but she couldn't convince her heart to let go of the hope that perhaps one day he might return back to her. As she sat she remembered her moments with him.

Tum bin kya hai jeena, kya hai jeena

Tum bin kya hai jeena

Tum bin jiya jaaye kese, kaise jiya jaaye tum bin

Sadiyon se lambhi hai rate, sadiyon se lambhe huwe din

Aa jao laut kar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai

Aa jao laut kar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai

Her sisters came inside and began chatting with her. She didn't pay any attention but just pretended to listen to them when in reality she was only thinking about Veer.

Phir shaame tanhaye jaagi, phir yaad tum aarahe ho

Phir jaan nikal ne lagi hai phir mujhko tarpa rahe ho

Phir mujhko tarpa rahe ho

Is dil mein yaadon ke mele hai

Tum bin bahut hum akele hai

Aa jao laut kar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai

Aa jao laut kar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai

Later on she walked outside in the gardens still involved in Veer's thoughts. She tried but there was no stop to her running tears.

Kya kya na socha tha maine

Kya kya na sapne sajaye

Kya kya na chaaha tha dil ne

Kya kya na armaan jagaaye

Kya kya na armaan jagaaye

She halted and broke down on the bench as the bottle neck had to be released. Avantika was passing by and she saw her crying so came to her and comforted her. Ananya hugged her and continued crying.

Is dil se toofan guzarte hai

Tum bin to jeete na marte hai

Aa jao laut kar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai

Aa jao laut kar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai

Tum bin jiya jaaye kese, kaise jiya jaaye tum bin

Sadiyon se lambhi hai rate, sadiyon se lambhe huwe din

Aa jao laut kar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai

Aa jao laut kar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai

Avantika knew the reason and couldn't see her sister suffer like this day by day. She also wished that Rajkumar Veer returns back quickly and Ananya's miseries end soon.

Just then Sawri comes running towards them really tensed and desperate. She tells them something terrible has happened and they should come inside the mahal immediately. All three of them go hastily.

Shamghar

Sia came to check on Dharam and was glad that he had gained consciousness. She went by his side and smiled.

Sia: acha huwa ke aapko hosh aagaya warna ham to yaha darr hee gaye the

Dharam: Aap?(coughs) aap ne hamare liye itna sab?sab kuch kiya? Kyu?

Sia: ab yeh bhi koi sawaal huwa Maharaj? Maana ke ham aapko kuch ziada pasand nahi karte (sly smile and Dharam also finds it amusing but doesn't smile) per ham itne bhi patthar dil nahi ke aapko aise hee chore dete marne ke liye. Or wese bhi Aryanagar ko apne maharaj kee zaroorat hai to ham onhe kese jaane dete?

Dharam: aapne jo bhi kiya oske liye shukriya

Sia: Ab aise shukriya kehke hame sharminda mat kijye Maharaj. Wese dekha jaaye to hamne yeh hamare swart ke liye hee kiya hai (he gives her a confused look as to what can she mean) or nahi to kya?agar aapko kuch hojaata to phir ham kiske saath jhagharte?

She laughed and was really surprised to find a smile developing on Dharam's face. Something which was very rare to find and infact she couldn't remember at all seeing him smile since she had known him.

Sia: hame lagta hai maharaj ke aapki tabiyat sach me kharaab hai

Dharam: (becomes restless and tries to sit up) lekin?lekin ab hame to theek lagraha hai?kyu hame aise?

Sia: (laughs out loud) aap bhi na kitnee jaldi ghabraajaate hai. Ham to bus isliye kehrahe the kyu ke pehli baar aapko muskuraate huwe dekha to laga ke kahi aap theek to hai na

Dharam: (lies back down and stares at her awed by her innocence) Sia aap sach me alag hai. Aise mouke pe bhi aap ko mazaak hee sujta hai. Yehi baat to hame aapme pasand aayee thee

Both stare at each other dreamily and Sia gets lost in thinking that how Dharam still feels the same way about her even with her behaving so ill with him in the past. Perhaps she was too harsh on him and she shouldn't have said all that but at that time she was so angry and he also had proposed in an inappropriate way so what else was she supposed to do. She had expected him to never turn back towards her but when she saw him so changed in Bhawanipur everything seemed to change.

Vaid: Betee inhe yeh kaara pilaado, isse onka dard kam hoga.

She took it from him and then put her hand behind Dharam's head to hold it up whilst she made him drink it. All the time their eyes remained on each other as if trying to convey a message. Both of them knew how the other was feeling but didn't know how to put it in words and say it out.

Vaid: ab kesa lagraha hai aapko?

Dharam: ab hame bohat accha lagraha hai. (struggles to sit up) ab hame lagta hai ke hame jaana chaaheeye. Sab ko hamaree chinta horahee hogi Bhavanipur me.

Sia: (preventing him from getting up) yeh kya karahe hai aap? Abhi aapki haalat itnee theek nahi huwee ke aap chal phir sake. Aapko aaraam kee zaroorat hai or aap hai ke?

Dharam: dekhye Sia waha pe Sakshi bohat hee chintit hogayee hogi or phir upar se Veer bhi pohoch gaya hoga to hame chal?

Sia: ham sab jaante hai Maharaj per ham aapko is haalat me kahi nahi jaane denge. (sees he is really tensed) theek hai per ham aaj sham tak to yaha rehsakte hai na. Oske baad Bhavanipur lautjaaenge.

He agreed and then Sia let him rest and she went out again.

Veer hadn't reached Bhavanipur yet as last night there was a heavy storm due to which he had to stay back in the middle at a village. Now he was on his journey again hoping he would reach Bhavanipur by sunset.

It is sunset now and Dharam has managed to stand up now though the wound is still quite fresh but he is adamant he has to reach Bhavanipur soon and it wasn't that far anyways. So both of them sat off back towards the mahal and after an hour's walk they reached the village and then Dharam walked Sia to her house.

When they got their a frantic Bhim came running towards Sia and hugged her as he had become worried about her whereabouts since last night. He didn't let her explain as he had very bad news to report to her.

Bhim: betee aaj subhe hee Sumaina se sandesh aaya hai or bohat hee buri khabar hai.

He handed her the sandesh and then he noticed Dharam was also with her and his condition was quite bad so he apologised and offered him to come inside and sit down but he refused and then he saw how Sia's colour had drained from her face and he was confident that something was really serious. Bhim walked back inside the house leaving them alone.

Dharam: Kya huwa Sia, aap itnee ghabraayee huwee kyu hai?

She can't find any words to tell him so she just stands there holding the letter. He grabs it out of her hands and reads it with anticipation to find out the reason of her distress.

"Kesee ho Sia? Or chacha chachi kese hai? Hame pata hai ke waha pe sab kushal mangal hoga per Sia yaha ke bare me ham aisa nahi kehsakte. Bohat hee buri khabar hai Sia ke ham kya bataaeh. Aaj subhe hee hame khabar milee or hamne forun sandesh bhejdiya.

Sia, teen din se Bhoomi laapata hai. Khabar milee hai ke wo os yatra pe Agni or oske dosto se kuch ziada hee ghul milgayee thee or phir teen din pehle kissee ne Bhoomi or Agni ko ek saath jaate huwe dekha tha mele se bahaar per oske baad oska koi ata pata nahi. Aaj subhe jab hame yeh sandesh mila to osse sunke to maa kee halaat bohat hee buri hogayee or pitaji to sambhal hee nahi paaye per hamne sambhaaliya. Kaash Sia tum yehi hoti to pitaji kee himmat bantee. Pitaji to wo sandesh sunne ke baad hee nikal pare os yatra kee or on dono ko dhundne.

Sia tum jaldi wapis aajao yaha kyu ke tumhaaree bohat hee zaroorat hai.

Ananya?"

Dharam stopped reading and shut the sandesh aggressively as he couldn't believe this happened.

Sia: hamne kitna samjhaaya tha os larki ko magar osne to?(angry tears) bewacoof larki?itna bhi nahi samjhi ke wo jo karahee hai wo kitnee bari naadaani hai.

Dharam: Sia, hame lagta hai ke aapko forun Sumaina ke liye nikal na chaheeye. Aap sab ko jaana chaaheeye.

Sia; aap sahi kehrahe hai (looks at him and his condition is still quite bad) per ham aapko aise kese chore ke jaasakte hai?

Dharam: aap hamaree chinta mat kijye. Hamare liye baaki sab hai per is waqt aap ke parivaar ko aapki ziada zaroorat hai. Ham chale jaaenge.

Sia: per aise kese ham?

Dharam; hamne kaha na ke ham theek hai. Aap jaane kee tayaari kijye. Ab ham chalte hai.

He began walking away and Sia watched him leave. Once or twice he did stumble and Sia hissed and wanted to go and help him but she was helpless and had to control herself. Sia, Bhim and Pari all sat out to go to Sumaina.

Dharam reached his mahal and he was stormed by Sakshi's questions as she had become really worried when he didn't return the whole night. Then she saw him holding onto his wound on his stomach and panicked.

Sakshi: yeh aapko kya huwa? (helping him to his room and then settling him down on his bed) itna gehra zakhm kese laga aapko?

Dharam: aisa kuch nahi huwa, bus mamooli see chote hai.

Sakshi: maamooli see chote? Bhaiya aap hame yuhi behlaane kee koshish mat keejye or hame bataye ke yeh kese huwa

Dharam: dekho Sakshi ham kehrahe hai na ke aisa kuch nahi?(he remembers something and sits up straight) hame isee waqt koi zaroori kaam yaad aagaya hai to hame jaana hoga?tum?tum Aryanagar waapis jaane kee tayaari karo

Sia: (disturbed) lekin?bhaiya aap aise kese?aapki haalat aisee hai ke?rukye bhaiya

Dharam: (firm tone) Sakshi hamare saath ziada behes mat karo or hamare aadesh ka paalan karo. Ham jaarahe hai or kuch dino me waapis Aryanagar lautenge. Agar Veer yaha pohocha to ose bhi yehi kehdena.

Dharam didn't wait to listen to anything further and left still suffering in pain but he had more important things to take care of. Sakshi watched him leave and became really tensed about what was going on and she didn't get a good feeling but then again she knew she had no choice but to obey his orders.

Sumaina

Bhim, Sia and Pari reach Sumaina in the early peaks of dawn and as soon as they reach everyone seems to be awake and Ananya receives them. She is really glad to see Sia and then they all walk inside to see Nivriti.

Nivi: (seeing Sia and Bhim starts to wail) oh tum log aagaye. Oho Sia yeh kya hogaya, yeh kya hogaya. (Sia goes and holds Nivi and tries to calm her down) hame to pehlese pata tha ke wo Agni aisa hee hai per ham apni betee ke pyaar ke aage andhe hogaye or ab yeh sab hogaya?.(she cries out loud again) are ab kya hoga? Kya hoga?

She carried on with her frantics while all the others tried calming her down. Sia and Ananya knew she would just carry on as it was in her nature but Sia was more worried about her father who still hadn't returned. Where must he be and how must he be?

Meanwhile Dharam had been travelling around the villages around the place where Agni and Bhoomi were last seen and he knew where Agni would have taken her. He was well aware of his nature and he had done this several times but this time Dharam had made the decision that he won't let him spoil Bhoomi's life and he'll make sure they get married.

He had been travelling from the past two days and still he hadn't found them but he knew he was going in the right direction as many people told him that they had spotted a young man and young girl go in that direction. By the description he knew it was them and he had to find them before it was too late. Bhoomi was really young and she was not at all aware about Agni's evil intentions.

After some more travelling he was nearly there and he knew his jouney was about to end as he got the proper address of where the two were hiding. He arrived there and shocked Agni who felt as if his world just came to a stand still. He couldn't believe Dharam found them and now he would be doomed. At first he tried to prevent him from entering but Dharam had always been stronger than Agni anyways so he pushed his way in and made sure Agni knew who he was up against.

Back in Sumaina finally the maharaj returned back and Sia and Ananya received him. He looked really tired and worned out. They helped him settle down in the other room so he can be kept away from Nivi and her over hysterical cries.

S.M: Ananya?Sia?ab ham yehi kehsakte hai ab hamare paas jo tha ab wo bhi chalagaya. Hamaree bachi kuchi izzat bhi hamse chaleegayee?(both the girls felt really bad) to kya abhi bhi maharani andar hee beithee hai? (both the girls nodded in agreement) to ab hame bhi lagta hai ke hame bhi isee tarha apne kamre me band hoke beith jaana chaheeye or jore jore se chillake rona chaaheeye kyu ke ab to ham or kuch kar hee nahi sakte.

Sawri: pitaji agar aap hame is yatra pe behejte to phir aisa kabhi nahi hota. Ham aisee galati kabhi nahi karte. Abhi bhi agar aap hame?

S.M: (raised voice) aaj se hamne faisla kiya hai ke abse naahi koi is ghar se kisee bhi yatra ya mele me jaaehga or naahi koi sainik is ghar me qadam rakhega. (Sawri is really taken back by his outburst and bursts into tears. He calms down and touches her head) ab bus bhi karo. Dekho ham tumse waada karte hai Sawri ke dus saal ke baad ham khud tumhe kisee mele yah yatra pe lejaaenge. (after hearing that she cries even more as his father just declared she had to stay in the mahal until she was old enough)

wow that was brill my veer wasn't there most of tym anywayz gr8...