Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: monikaseth
wow welcome back sangeeta miss you so much .

Great twist I wish kripa will know ab simons dirty games and wont hurt angad .

Angad is gona mad after this i am sure and more then hurt , its sad for both ak bec some how kripa is in love with him from her deep heart.

I wish there is no missunderstanding between ak .

Awesome update .

Thanks Monu....I missed all my AK fans too😊 Let's see what decision Kripa takes after the dance. Who is playing with whom??? Aage aage dekho kya hota hai😉

[quote=ttimpy]omg thats a a massive twist.......and what a part bheegi.....u really take the cake.................................. i just cud never envisage such a turn in the story.....but i loved that line where Angad wished he knew less women as he cud not even make out their voices now.lolzzzzzzzzzz[/quote]

Thanks ttimpy....I am making sure all my AK fans are still alive and kicking😆

[quote=sea_nyx]wow kahani mein twist and WHAT a twist....all this time i thought angad might prove unfaithful at the last instant and to find out it's kripa?!! it's almost too much to process....

i mean i did think somewhere near the beginning that the simone track was extremely cliched and in any other writer's hands would have felt stale and scripted but to find out that it was in truth scripted b/w them is too much.....have to say though the way simone walked in precisely before kripa was going to unwrap her *destiny* was extremely kekta-ish....lol

thanx so much for the pm

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Thanks sea nyx...u know when i had originally planned the story, it was supposed to be a straight forward love story with cliched plots but I soon lost interest in that story line and that's when I took the road with twists and turns when some of u started having motion sickness too😆 and even complained that they could not understand where the story was heading....so now u know why I had introduced all those mysterious phone calls from Simone, Kripa's early confession of her feelings and her chacha's statement that "kripa tho star ban na chaahti hai'😉

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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Sheetal

@sheetal00

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#882

i cant belive dat this a game

pooor angad

it wil b a shocker to him

n*e wayz great but short part

plz continue soon

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#883

reserved!

Yay glad to have u have updated this FF of urs!

I was wondering when you'll be updating it =D

And my…..what a twist you made woman……Kripa itself is guilty herself as well?!....and SIMONE!.......my jaws literally dropped…..I was like whoa you've completely turned the tables here Diz'!

Omg…..just thinking about the next part is just heart breaking!!!!!!!

Awesome come back Di'z

Natasha

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Tanasha

@tanasha1993

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#884

omg bheegi di

that was such an unpredictable twist

i still cant believe that it was all a drama

even rhea...poor angad will totally shatter

when he finds out everything...he really

changed but maybe this event will

make him revert back to his usual

casanova self again since he really loved

kripa but she sorta cheated on his feelings

sigh simone is taking it too far now..like

everyone deserves a chance to change for

the better but she is just filled with

vengeance at the moment...but is rhea really

angads daughter or simones and joshs?

anyways do cont as soon as u get the time di;)

and thanks for the PM too

love

tanu

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#885

Originally posted by: **~SoniHinnU~**
thanks for the recap....loved how u included every detail but made it breif at the same time!!!
i think angad heard simones voice....and maybe he wont recognize her...and say bad things to ehr again instead of apologizing...i hope not!!!
and does kripa know naina???
omgddd i have a feeling if she dusnt open it nw...something bad will happen!!
omggg i have a feeling simone was never really ill...was this all a drama to get revenge???
omg nooo kripaaaa...wat da ****......i cud never imagine she wud play with angads feelings:(
omggg this was all a play :O:O:O:O pooor angad hez gonna die!!!:'(
so rhea is not angads daughter???:@
i hope rhea isnt in the game:(
omg she wont see the gift....kripa plzz dnt do this....u can still bak out of it!!!
y such a short part???

Thanks Hinnu. The recap was for me too as I had forgotten some details myself. I hope it helped the other readers too. The part was short because of the recap😕 I will try to make up in next part😊 Let's see who all is playing games with whom😉

[quote=vennelachowdary]oh bheegi superb part.....

i expected something gonna happen from the last part.....

but u gave very big twist......loved it ......

continue soon...[/quote]

thanks dear....let's see what happens next😃

[quote=kvn1983]waoh di🤗🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing di😍 whole story is changed😲 omg😲 everything is planed😭😭😭 i wish kripa truly him❤️ like he loves her❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ but di 1 thing i must say😳 ur fablous di😛 ur having a god gifted talent😛 plz di just for once😍 try it di😛😛😛 plz plz plz i know if u write any love story book☺️😍 its going to be most popular in the market😛 i m 110% sure di👍🏼👍🏼 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉[/quote]

Thanks Nidha. You are so sweet 😊😊...I am honored that u feel I should write a book but I feel I have miles to go before I can even think of doing that....but thanks for ur confidence and lovely poems as always👏

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#886

thanks for the pm di

great part

simply an unexpected twist

poor angad would be left heartbroken and shattered but nw since its clear that everything was staged by simone...so does it mean that rhea is not angad and simone's daughter?

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...anshu...

@...anshu...

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#887

hi di

nice twist never believed dat of krips i guess she will open d package after all dat drama nd see dat he really loved her

bt is rhea on in all dis 2

i jst cant believe dat

neways di thanx for d update

anshu

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mahru

@mahi4u

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#888

hye di

wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was a hella TWIST😲

krips ambitious wowwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

grt prt👏

cont super sooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

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javeria

@humza1

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#889

hey its a terrible twist these reality shows such a cruel i hate them kisi k aansoo bhi cash karte hain..............oh back 2 d point ye simone such a dirtyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy no 1 big v kaheen ki .............n kripa y u r doing this puppet show......................................... i really felt bad 4 angad n kripa poor luver

nice update bheegi wid strong script as usual

thnx 4 d PM

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: vallanki
Why did you give us so short update???????

and you leave us in themiddle of the story and leave??? Continue soon.

Dying to read the drama aftr the performance. We know the performance will be good..

Can't see Angad broken😛 I know you will brake his dreams....tit-for-tat- he deserves it..but you know I'm like kripa ..believe in forgiveness😆

So, Josh is good man here...but bribing kripa is not good...we suspected misthy, anittah..but prithvi, rhea are also involved in this too...interesting...all r sympathising with Simone..as per kyph she stand in no good books but you made her good and made Angad bad...

continue soon.

thanks Vallanki. short update had a long recap also😃 I know u can never see angad heartbroken but imagine how many hearts he has broken all his life😭 kuch tho sazaa milegi usey bhai Let's see how forgiving this Kripa is😃 No one is good and no one is really bad in this ff.....u know how i like gray instead of black and white😉

[quote=angad-kripa#1]

Awww Bheegs!! Tht really shoked me!!

Poor Angad.......and i guess Kripa.

WOAH! Rhea must be a gud actress or sumthin,

So Simone dusnt have cancer? Oh well she smokes, she'll get it soon.

LOL/. Cont soon and u better pm me, :)

Harji[/quote]

Thanks Harji....I am sorry if i forgot to PM u...will do so next time. Only time will tell who one should be sorry for and who not😉

[quote=rima791]

well first of all welcome back!

just W-O-W!!!

i am so shocked yaar!!!

i hope kripa doesn't do this!!

poor angad!! rhea is involved in this too?? can't believe that

its like every1 is ganging up on angad, all at once!!

why such a short updaet, oh well hope you give the next update like your regular ones!!

do cont soon when you can

thanks for the pm

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Thanks Rima...good to see AK fans again😊...yes this update was short becaus eof the long recap...next one will be longer😃

[quote=sheldev]Hi Sangeeta;

First of all thanks for the PM...Great to have this FF back on....Love it...😉

Woah OMG...what a twist.. 😲😲certainly never expected this...Kripa is doing an act with Simone..every single one of them is a part of this game..wow...that's something....You certainly know how to keep the reader at the edge of their seat Bheegi...👏Kudos to you..excellent...

Bechara Angad..I know what he did to all those women was wrong but this game against him is like wow..I am shocked....😲😲 I wonder how his is going to feel after the competition...yikes...😭

The recap was excellent. Thanks for doing that. I had forgotten some of the story but your recap helped alot so thanks for taking the extra time to do that for us readers...👏

Please update soon..I am eager to know what happens next...Thanks dear...Excellent, mindblowing, fantastic update......Simply superb.....

Shel[/quote]

Thanks shel....loved all ur compliments😊 and yes, I like roller coasters😆...at least in my ffs. The recap was meant for me too as I had forgotten some details myself. let's see what happens next

[quote=nimrah]God! Its so good to finally read this FF!! 😆 And to finally comment on it too! 😆
Thanks for the PM firstly.. Enjoyed reading the recap... And now back to the part.. OMG Simone is fine and is rich! 😆 and its all a plan to humiliate Angad?! Aww I feel soo sad for him and goodness Anita,Mishti,Rhea and Kripa? All are involved in it!!! Poor Angad yaar.. He has seriously changed yaar! Hope you update a longer part so that all my questions are answered! 😆 Waiting for the next update! Small but a great update! 👏[/quote]

Thanks nimrah. Good to know that there are still quite a few AK fans on this forum😊...yes Simone is a rich woman but still wants revenge...aisi auraton se bachke rehna chaahiye😡 I will try to post a longer update next time and answer a lot of ur questions😃

[quote=namelesssr]Even Rhea has a role to play... that's downright exploitation 😡 And Kripa is doing all this for money and fame... doesn't make her any more human than Angad once was 😲[/quote]

Thanks sup...as u know my characters are seldom black and white😉 BTW, like ur avi....where is this place?

[quote=angadzgirl]

Awwww di...welcome back....miss so much....

di its great twist......hope Kripa doesnt do this...n wish Kripa will know about simon dirty game.....hate her so much...😡

So Reah is also involved in this??????

poor angad.....i feel bad for him....dont want to see seperate Angad n kripa....😭

di thanx for pm...🤗[/quote]

Thanks shweta....missed u all too😊...let's see who all are involved and who all are majboor😕

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago