AR Defeated in love 2 (updt part-26)

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Mini

@cool_pisces

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Posted: 17 years ago

#231

Hey Taira

This part was really gr, I loved it how both confessed their feelings although I must say Armaan has a weird way of getting back at Riddhima, I thought he wud punch the guy or something, but then again thts wht I like best abt ur ff, u manage to surprise us all the time with something different and unexpected. U know the song was the best part and u wont believ I had the song playing on my laptop at the same time when I started reading the part, had just downloaded it, its gr8, perfect song for the perfect situation. Too bad Riddhima got sick, hope Shashank does not get too angry on Armaan, waiting for the next part, and ya as for ur note, its ur decision, all I can say is tht u can never write anything which drags or is boring, so dont worry coz of tht, but pls if u do decide to bring twists, try to make them happy ones and not upset AR relationship.

Thanks for the PM

Mini

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123abc123

@123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#232

luved it great work alwys nice to read

finally ocnfession lool AR togthr

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Mona

@.:.MONA.:.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#233

wow loved this part......it is amezing........so cute ar secen i loved it......i hope shasank dont get mad and refuse their replationship becaue i want ar together.......hope nothing bad happends.......so continue soon......thankc 4 the pm.....

❤️MONA

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..Mira..

@..Mira..

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Posted: 17 years ago

#234

Yay they finally confessed! The confession scene was soooo good I loved it. I loved how u showed ridzy get jealous toooo...and the kiss and how he said nvr say my love is not true..just evrything was perfect!!
Aww I hope ridzy feels better soon. Hmm I love your fan fic ALOT..and i dont want it to end too soon but i think u should add a few more twist...hehe. Thanks soooooooooooooooooooo much for the pm=)

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Maulik

@patem031

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Posted: 17 years ago

#235

hey, tht ws so hilarious nd it ws fun readin dis amazin prt
wow, ridz's is a superb actor, cant believe she said tht nd the slap nd thn askin for icepack like nothin happened😆
atleast dey patchec up nw, thanks to rids plan
the bst prt ws the lst scene whn ridz started hittin arman nd rahul broke his camera, tht ws so funny, gosh really enjoyed dis prt
continue soon wid yur awesome prts😃

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Taira Rai

@Taira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: patem031
hey, tht ws so hilarious nd it ws fun readin dis amazin prt
wow, ridz's is a superb actor, cant believe she said tht nd the slap nd thn askin for icepack like nothin happened😆
atleast dey patchec up nw, thanks to rids plan
the bst prt ws the lst scene whn ridz started hittin arman nd rahul broke his camera, tht ws so funny, gosh really enjoyed dis prt
continue soon wid yur awesome prts😃

Thanks so much.

Am really glad you liked it....

Gonna introduce a new twist in the next part....

Hopefully you'll like thatt too

Keep reading

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 17 years ago

#237

omg that was tooooooooo good! wow ridz is one good actress! hehe she was sooo convincing! i really thought she was seriously mad at shashank! and wow mollie slapped her! hehe awww poor ridz, has a sore cheek!

im sooo glad shashank and mollie worked things out and are getting back together! YAY

the pillow fight was awsome, so much fun! HAHAH poor rahul has to suffer now, andy wont spare him!!!!

loved the part, continue soon!

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#238

hahhah!!

tht was super!!! luved R!! i knew she was a killer!! bt i cnt bliv A didnt koe abt it..poor thin!!

yayy!! grt update!! ohhh luved d rings exchanged too..lol Rz sucha sweetheart!! :D

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ttimpy

@ttimpy

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#239

this episode i really loved taira..............esp the pillow fight...........its so contagious...........whoever comes to stop gets involved in it and the masterpiece was that andy's camera is broken again........lolzzzzzzzzzz

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Sheetal

@er.Sheetal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#240

Hi Taira... Thanx for d Pm fren...

Wow... Andy is such a kid... i mean oneminute he was complaining against Armaan and next moment he was supporting him... Just like kids do, when they get the toy of their choice...😆

AR scene was really very-very sweet... dey both care sooooo much about each other...

Riddhima is really smart... she spoke all those nasty things just to provoke her parents... wow... so now her parents are back together... 👏 wonderful...

And yes the last scene was the BESTEST... Rahul BROKE ANDY'S CAMERA... THE NEW ONE...😆😆😆 i could clearly imagine the expressions in Andy and Rahul's face... but mostly on Armaan's face...

Absolutely WONDERFUL 😆

I will wait for the next part ever so eagerly as always...

Love

- Sheetal