~*~Dosti~ ❤️ AK~*~{Prt 1,pg.3}

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Intro: Page 1

chapter 1: Page 3

"Pata nahi log aisa kyun kehte hai ki ladka aur ladki dost nahi ban sakte. Woh L factor hamesha beech me aa jata hain. Par main garuntee de sakti hoon ki main aur Angad sirf dost hai, sirf dost, aur who bhi bahut ache dost." Kripa Kapoor.

Hi, I'm Kripa, Ms. Kripa Tanya Kapoor, to be exact. I name is quite unique, or so my mother used to say. She's no more. I was born after 38 hours of labor, even after being the second child. So you see, it was a miracle I even survived, but my mom didn't. Her name was Tanya Kapoor after marrying dad. I don't personally remember how she looked but I know she must have been beautiful, I have seen pictures. She had hazel eyes that changed colors with her mood, just as I do. Her thick, Mahogany hair fell to her mid- back, while I kept mine rather shorter, just past my shoulder. She had a beautiful smile, like my dad says I have. So basically I look like my mom's exact copy, just a younger version with more attitude. My mom had been a kind and loving person, I can tell just by the way everyone talks about her. But this tiny part of me always felt guilty because she wasn't alive anymore because she gave birth to me.

But enough of this stuff, I'm here to introduce my story to you. Like I said, I'm Kripa and I'm 16 years old. I have a older brother who's a year older than me, Josh. Josh is pretty much the only family I have, except for dad. But we rarely see him since he's always away, but I know that he does really love us. Then there's Angad, my best friend, my partner in crime. We've been friends before either of us could stand on two feet. Both Josh and Angad are very protective of me, sometimes it's kinda annoying, not that I would tell them. Angad is probably the only person that gets me. The only thing I need to mention about myself is that I'm a girl but I don't act like it, which makes it even harder for me to survive high school. Being a junior and all and now transferring to a new school, God, let the drama begin. I'm quite touchy on the subject of my appearance and my brother and Angad get that. It's probably because I've never had any woman role model in my life. My mom wasn't there and angad's mom, well that's an entire different story. Let's not discuss that, in case angad finds out. He doesn't like anyone in the house mentioning Naina Khanna, Opps, here I go again.

Oh, I forgot to mention this. We have, as in My family and Angad's family lived in Delhi our whole lives but thanks to our parents (notice the sarcasm) are moving us to Mumbai because of some business issues. But the good part is that we were neighbors then but now we'll be living in the same house, a friggin mansion to be exact.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice concept
i really liked it
cont....soon cant wait for the first part
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heyy...nyc concept...cnt wait 4 mre...cont soon
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gr8 concept...waiting to read the first part.
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awesome concept cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏
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great start continue soon😊
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nice concept
plz cont soon😊
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nice concept
waitin for the first part
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hey am totally luvin the concept and it's great dat angad and kripa are friends and i just cant wait till u start their actual love story cuz it's gonna be wierd for angad to fall in love with a guy - since kripa is more of a tom boy and one more thing don't u think that kripa is a lil young to fall in love well cuz she might get married na...but never knw wat u've planned so just wondering if it's gonna take leaps and stuff! Cuz i think that guys technically are not mature enough to fall in love at 16. well u havnt really mentioned angad's age here! ok now u might be thinking wat a crazy girl when will she shut up! srry for eating ur brain here but just totally luvin ur concept soo....hehe
anyways please pm me when you update...really looking fwd to reading a part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice concept...👏continue soon..😊

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