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Posted: 16 years ago
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Raj aur Naina ke relationship mein sab kuch theek tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Magar dono yeh bhool gaye ke they have to make sacrifices for each other when they live together!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Naina socks ko lekar ladh rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Raj wants to tell her to go and stay where she likes!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Things are clearly not going well!!!!
Naina is crying because this is not what she dreamt of!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Love is falling short to maintain a healthy and peaceful relationship!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Na Raj badla hai aur nahi Naina!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Unka rista badal gaya hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Naina neither has her mom nor Raj's parents to help her out!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Bahut akeli padh gayi hai Naina!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Pehle do maheene tak sab theek tha but then differences started coming out!!!!
They made up but still failed to understand that when you live with someone you have to accomodate the other person's thoughts and way of life!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Their relationship had taken the next step but they were obviously not prepared fot it!!!! Their relationship is going to the dogs!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Their ego and pride messed up everything!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’
Sonali dono ko dekh ke hi sab samaj gayi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Aisa lag raha hai Sonali inki teacher hai aur yeh dono school mei padhte bacche hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Sonali ne aake bataya then it rang a bell!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina and even Raj yeh sab khud nahi soch sakte kya??πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’
They patched up again and swore that they would give it a try!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
They had seriously tried and things were actually working out!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj was also helping her with the cleaning!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj called that he will just be supervising from now onwards and he is arriving the next day!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Naina was so contented but then she got the shock!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”She is pregnant!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!!
This is reminding me of Salaam Namaste!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Just when things were settling down yeh kya ho gaya!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Naina ne toh candelight dinner pe Raj ko batane ki taiyaari kar rakhi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Pata nahi ab kya hoga!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
I think Raj will now force her to get it aborted as its too early in their relationship!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
The way you described relationships you deserve a standing ovation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Deeya,

Thanx for informing dear..Update was really gud..πŸ‘..Watever u wrote is exactly happening these days in relationships...Dat is whu dere r so many break-ups n divorces..We have become far more egoistic n want to chage the other person for our sake..Thats wat happened in Raj n Naina's case..They were not giving each other dat space dat is required..Both wanted to change the other without wanting to know the other person's choice..Sonali is was right...

I really like dis line of yours
"if a person truly loves u, u have to adjust with the person, if you are rich and successful you can get any tom dick harry to love u and who will dance according to your wishes but that will not be true love…."
Naina is pregnant n i dont think dat she'll go for abortion..But it may b dat Raj forces her to do so.πŸ’”
Bcos its too early in their relationship..
u r ending this fiction...😲😲😲
Do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Deeyu, this was by far the most mature and well written part in ur fic. Im surprised to see the levle of maturity ur fic has, its difficult to believe its coming from a 16 yr old.Uv portrayed an adult relationship extremely well.Its not a happy go lucky teenage fling and this is what surprises me, its coming from you, i mean considering ur age.
Disappointed that u wont be writing the lrl fic and even more disappointed that this one os ending, why such a short fic? U can update at ur own convinience, thats not a problem but please dont end it so soon.
RN fighting over such small things- socks, clothes etc its wierd but completely natural in such relationships. I feel couples love the idea of moving in together without releasing that theyr being too hasty, living in seems the trend now a days, its more of a fad than a neccessity.
Marriage is what teaches couples to compromise, u may not agree one one thing but things change to a great extent when ur married and this is what couples learn once they enter matrimony, these small things take a backseat.
lol, im speaking like a marriage expert. Shud stick to the fic , it was beautiful as always, infact this was by far the best part!
continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
just too good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi deeya
thks for the pm dear
naina is pregent
raj and naina silly fights
update sooooooooooooooooon
waiting to see the reaction of raj when naina says that she is pregent
update sooooooooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Deeya,

truely Owsome dear...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ i felt really bad for both of them but u have done marvallous job.....u said the big thing about relationship.dear n m totally agree with u n thats y m also aginst this type of relationship but no complain for ur story it surely aware atleast who read ur fic....so keep it up.
now Naina is going to tell Raj about her pragnancy n m also fear like Naina about it outcome or i say i knew it.....n that's y m waiting for it more urgely

Namita.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello!! Deeya!!!!
Thanks for info....
Wow!! Lovely update...dear!!!!
Very maturely handled πŸ‘
Loved the way Sonia tried to settle the differences....πŸ‘
oops so Naina is pregnant......πŸ˜ƒ
I am eager to see how Raj reacts
Too good!!!
Brilliant dear.....
Continue soon...
Take care.



love
Riya.


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Posted: 16 years ago

very nice updateπŸ˜›.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
abhi doosre part ka comment baad me ok.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! thak u so much sweety.....
Raj aur Naina ke relationship mein sab kuch theek tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 hmmm..
Magar dono yeh bhool gaye ke they have to make sacrifices for each other when they live together!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” yeah the main thing...
Naina socks ko lekar ladh rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Raj wants to tell her to go and stay where she likes!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Things are clearly not going well!!!! sagar mein toofan aa raha hai
Naina is crying because this is not what she dreamt of!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Love is falling short to maintain a healthy and peaceful relationship!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” it is....
Na Raj badla hai aur nahi Naina!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Unka rista badal gaya hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” the truth of life...
Naina neither has her mom nor Raj's parents to help her out!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Bahut akeli padh gayi hai Naina!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” ziindagi mein kabhi hamare bado ki zaroorat toh padhti hi hai
Pehle do maheene tak sab theek tha but then differences started coming out!!!! pehle pehle sab thik lagta hai
They made up but still failed to understand that when you live with someone you have to accomodate the other person's thoughts and way of life!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” true
Their relationship had taken the next step but they were obviously not prepared fot it!!!! Their relationship is going to the dogs!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” hasty decision
Their ego and pride messed up everything!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ both of them were successful
Sonali dono ko dekh ke hi sab samaj gayi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Aisa lag raha hai Sonali inki teacher hai aur yeh dono school mei padhte bacche hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† lolz...
Sonali ne aake bataya then it rang a bell!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina and even Raj yeh sab khud nahi soch sakte kya??πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ kya kare... dono ke dono duffer hai
They patched up again and swore that they would give it a try!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 koshish karne se hi sab kuch theek hota hai
They had seriously tried and things were actually working out!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj was also helping her with the cleaning!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 lolz...
Raj called that he will just be supervising from now onwards and he is arriving the next day!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ it truly is
Naina was so contented but then she got the shock!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”She is pregnant!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!!
This is reminding me of Salaam Namaste!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 many people have told me this... but realli i hadnt thgt of salaam namaste wen i wrote this...and i dint like tht film too... it was too kiddish
Just when things were settling down yeh kya ho gaya!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”yeah kya hua kaise huaa
Naina ne toh candelight dinner pe Raj ko batane ki taiyaari kar rakhi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Pata nahi ab kya hoga!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” hoga kya??? wait karna padega
I think Raj will now force her to get it aborted as its too early in their relationship!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” hmmm wait and watch
The way you described relationships you deserve a standing ovation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ thank u so much sweety

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