A RAHUL MUSKAAN STORY! - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx for the update!! loved it!! hehe Rahul flirting :P
LOVE mayank!! lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx 4 da pm....
it waz really too small to digest..
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon.
take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey.....very nice....thanx fr the pm!! please continue soon!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome!!....so sry i didnt reply so soon.......but all the parts were AMZAING!!....hehe....n the cockroach scene was too funny!.....loved the storeroom scene....very cute!.....pls continue soon.....thank u very much for the pm.....n good luck for ur exams!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow what a wonderful update aww! I could imagine the scene happening to cutee
update soon!dats if u can lol gud luck for your exams :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey it was awsome..............ihope creatives show more RM scenes

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey appy that was gr888👏........i checked out all the updates today..........i didn't get any update alert pm......😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nice updates....but only if u could make them a little bigger.....no compulsions though ....
and yes another suggestion.....for every update name it as SCENE # .....OR PART # ......in this way it will b easier for readers to identify new udates and keep track of the updates they have read ....
anyways thanks for PMing me😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Chapter - 12 ( I think )

* RM's duty ends *
* Muskaan is just trying to keep away from Rahul...while Rahul is just trying to do the opposite *
* Muskaan while walking in a corridor she bumps into someone....Jai *
Jai - hi muskaan....
* No reply from Muskaan.....and she keeps on walking *
* Jai follows her ...*
Jai - dekh Muskaan....tu jaise soch rahi hai...aisaa kuch nahi hai ! please meri baat sunoo !
Muskaan - dekhiye...abb hum dono ki kahaani khatam ho chuki hai ! plase leave me !
Jai - lekin Muskaan......
* Muskaan walks away *
* Meanwhile....Muskaan had been assigned evening duty and all the other interns had gone back home *
* Meanwhile Muskaan was just taking a litle break from her duty and sat down in the canteen for a small break...The canteen was empty *
* Jai sees Muskaan going inside the anteen and follows her *
* Muskaan is itting on the chair and silently sipping her coffee when Jai comes up behind her *
* He takes the coffee from her hands...puts it on the table...pulls her up to a standing position and he himself stands on his knees *
Muskaan ( shocked and srprised ) - Jai tum yeh kya kar rahe ho ?
Jai - Muskaan...mujhe pataa hai ki tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karti ho jitnaa main tumse kartaa hu...
Muskaan - Jai...yeh tum...
* Jai pulls out a small box from his lab coat and opens it...there was a beautiful diamond ring in it *
Jai - Muskaan.....will u marry me ?
* But before Muskaan could say anything ----- *
A Voice from the door of the canteen - KYA ??
* Muskaan and ai turned around to see whose voice it was...and the voice turned out to be....MUSKAAN'S FATHER ! *
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CHAPTER - 13

Muskaan - papa....aap yahan kya kar rahe ho ?
Muskaan's dad - oye ! main toh yahan tujhe waaa lee jaane aaya tha...lekin abb lagtaa hai ki main ek son - in - law ko bhi waapas lee jaaungaa !
Muskaan - SON - IN - LAW ??? papa...app galat samjh rahe...
* But before Muskaan could protest or argue about it...Muskaan's dad had started hugging her and Jai *
Muskaan's dad - oye muskaan ! tunne kyu mujhe nahi baataya ki tu iss ladke ko pasand karti hai ? abb teri shaadi isse hi hoogi...
* Jai bends and touches Muskaan's dad's feet *
Muskaan's dad - jeeta reh puttar ! ( pulls jai up ) wah ! kitnaa sonaa mundaa hai ! Muskaan ki pasand hamesha acchi hi hoti hai !
* Muskaan was stunned...speachless...she dint know wht to say *
* Then suddenly she saw an another figure near the canteen door...RAHUL ! *
* Rahul apparently had heard everything and walks away fron there angrily *
* Muskaan follows him *
Muskaan - Rahul ! ruko ! tum galat soch rahe ho !
* But Rahul was really angry and upset...he dint want to talk to her....infact he dint even want to see her *
thts it 4 today guys...!
How was it guys ?


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Posted: 16 years ago
AWESOME!!....nice twist in the story......really not liking Jai......hopefully Muskaan does something about this soon!!!.......pls continue.....cant wait to read the next part........thank u for the pm.........good luck for ur exams!

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