'Beete Lamhe'..ff..AR..pt7pg1.13/10

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heyy guyzzz i'm gonna start a ff...buh buh buh before that i m only givin u the

storyline n u gonna tel me how is it den nly i'll continue further...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

SO IT GOES LYK THIS::::

"RIDZI DI,RIDZI DI" , ANJALI CAME IN THE ROOM SHOUTIN, LUKIN 4 RIDHIMA...

"NOW, ANJALI IS RIDZI'S SMALL SIS N LUVD HER ALOT..RIDZ IS THE ADOPTIVE

DAUGHTER OF DR.SHASHANK(OWNED THE HOSPITAL,SANJEEVI) N DR.SMRITI

(WAS THE SENIOR MOST DOC OF SANJEEVENI) ...BOTH THEM HATED RIDHIMA..

SHE WAS BROUGHT INTO THE HOUSE BCOZ OF NANI AND NANI LUVD RIDHIMA

MORE THAN HER LYF N PIDZ TOO LUVD HER ALOT...RIDZI ALWAYS TRIED TO

ADJUST IN THE FAMILY......BUT NEVER SUCCEEDED...."๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

PART 2:

"Di aap kahan ho????"anjali said peepin into the room...

"anjie i m here"ridz said ,comin out of the bathroom with her towel on her head..

"hmmm...lukin gud in purple suit"

"thanx anje"

"oh mein to bhul hi gayi....vo actually i came to call u ..umm...niche vo humare new neighbours aaye hain.vo humse milne aaye the to nani aapko bhi bula rahi thi.."

"oh no mera dance room bilkul samne hi hai,unke ghar se to sab kuch dikhega"ridzy said li'll worried..

(ridz dance room was made of glasses with wodden floor n mirrors on the other 2 sides...)

"yeah,but no probss ..evry1 shud know ki aap kitna acha dance karti ho....

"anjieeeeeeee"

"diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii""acha common ,niche chalo"

"but my hair r wet"

"koi baat nai"

"ok chalo"

(she removes the towel from her hair n dries her hair with the towel n leave them curly n wears her sandal n goes with anjie)

PART 3:

wen ridz go downstairs,she sees 3 ppl sittin in the drawing room..SHASH N PADDY EXCHANGED LUKS SEEIN RIDHIMA COMIN...

NANI::"AAO BETA RIDHIMA.."

"namaste aunty "

"namaste beta"

"namaste uncle"

"jeete raho bache"

hmmmm...third 1 was a cute n handsome guy..blue eyes..dark coloured hair...a killin smile on his lips...he was in blue jeans n white sleeveless shirt...

"hi I M ARMAAN "

ARMAAN said..givin a huge smile..

"hi"..ridzy said givin a smile..

""SHE'S LUKIN BEAUTIFUL YAR BUT ..hmmmm...NOT MY TYPE...""ARMAAN THOUGHT ,STARIN AT HER...

"Y IS HE STARIN AT ME LYK THIS"THOT RIDZY,WHILE SITTIN ON THE SOFA...

ALL WERE SITTIN N TOKING BUT ARMAAN ,RIDHIMA N ANJIE WERE GETTIN BORED OF ELDERLY TOKS ...

NANI:ARY BACHON TUM LOG BAHAR JAKE KYUN NAHI GHUMTE..BAATE VAATE KARLO THODI BOHOT...

all of them left as quickly as possible...

anjie(an):phew....mein to bethe bethe so(sleepin) rahi thi...

ridz(r):kyaaaaa...ankhen khol ke...

an:hmmm...majboori thi..

r:hehe...(laughd at the way she said)

am:hey girls,i'm also there..

r:Oops!sorry.,.

an:we forgot(said immidiatly after ridhima)

am:i'll forgive u only if u'll become my friend..

anjie's phone rings n ..

an:sorry guyzz bye ..meet u later...

an:umm umm...di idhar aana zara...

r:hmm..

an:mein usse milne jaa rahi hoon ...plzzzz mumma ko sambhal lena..plzzz plzzz..

r:anjie no ,no no...

an:di plzzzzz....plzzzzzzz

r:umm..ok..go..but come early..

an:thanxx...Ii luuvvvv u...u the best...byeeeee.....byeee armaan(lukin at him)

ar:byee...

anjie left..

ar:umm kya hua..

r:no-nothin..

ar:i think ur not comfortable with me...

r:no no its nothing lyk that...

ar:then friends..(movin his hand towards her)

r:hm..frienz(shakin hands with him)..........

PART 4:

Ridhima was in her room thinkin about her meetin wid armaan...they have got to know

so much bout eachother n dat too the first day..she also came to know bout his

hobbies: adventers,horse riding...

r:hmm..nice guy ...actuaaly cute hai...Oops!!its 7...tym to change..

she went to the bathroom to change her clothes...

Armaan was lying down on his bed THINKIN ABOUT RIDHIMA..

ar: mmmm...she lykes dancin..good hobby...wow we'll be working

together in sanjeeveni...will get to know her better...i think she's sweet..

then hears a faint music comin from the opposite house n the sound was increasing...

there house was connected in such a way that the dance room cud be seen from

armaaan's bedroom..n the door was also interconnected....lolzzz....

armaan went upto his window n saw RIDHIMA in cut sleeves top n shorts..she was

practising on the song"tune kya kardala mar gayi mein mit gayi mein"...

nobody was there at ridhimas home except nani as they went out in a party...

KNOCK..KNOCK

r:aa rahi hoon nani..(lowered the volume n wore a long gown ova her dress n opened the door)

r:jee nani..

nani:beta mein na kal subah lonavla jaa rahi hoon..soch rahi hoon iss baar thode jyada din

rehkar aayun..mein subah jaldi nikaljaungi to socha abhi bata dun..

r:nani aap vaapas kab aaoge..

nani:beta jaldi aajaungi..aapna khyal rakhna..

r:jee nani..

nani:acha aab mein chalti hoon..packin bhi karni hai..

r:mein help karoon..

nani:nai bache mein kar lungi..tu aapne dance practice par dhyan de..tujhe

apni dream bhi to puri karni hai na..

ridz dream was to win the dance competition which held in every 4 years n in that the

performers had to dance continuously for 8 hours...different days of performance was given to them..

nani left after kissin ridhima on her forehead...

armaan was watchin all this but cudnt hear nything...BUT WAS AMAZED THAT WEN RIDHIMA

LOCKED THE DOOR ,SHE BURT INTO TEARS!!!!!!!!!!...

PART 5:

NANI left early morning for lonavla ...

shash n smriti went to hospital...

ridz in anjie's room...

r:get up sweety..

an:sone do na di..

r:utho na plzzz...

an:kyuuuu...

r:ary kitna soyegi...dus ghante ho chuke hai tujhe sote hue..

an:bas..

r:ye bas hote hai..

an:di next month se to vaise bhi jaldi uthna parega,sanjeeveni jo jana hai..

r:hmmm...par ATULLLLLL se bhi o milna hai(wispered ino her ear)

an:(got up immidiately)OMG!!its 11 already...

r:hmm...hehe..dekhna atul ke naam se kaise uthke beth gayi..

an:diiii(blushed)

r:acha jao tayar ho jao mein tumhara breakfast bana deti hoon..

an:ok di..(hugged n kissed ridz on her cheek)

r:hugged her back n kissed her on her cheek..

ANJIE LEFT AFTER HAVIN BREAKFAST ....

'KNOCK KNOCK'...

ridz opened the door n found armaan standin at the door...

ar:hiii..

r:hiii...common in..

ar: kya ho raha hai..

r:nothin..bas t.v. dekh rahi thi..u tell..

ar:abhi baas mom dad ko airport chodke aaya tha..

r:airport..

r:vo kahin jaa rahe hain..

ar:nai aise hi maan kar raha tha isliye chodke aa gaya..

r:armaaannnn...

ar:ab ridhima tum bhi to aisi baat kar rahi ho..

r:acha sachi sachi batao..

ar:actualy dad ko business ki vajah se abroad jana tha aur vo mom

ke bina reh nai sakte to vo mom ko bhi le gaye...

r:okeyy....

ar:where's anjie..

r:gone for shoppin..

ar:okk..by the way u dance very well..

r:thankss...WA-H --WAT...WEN DID U SEE ME DANCIN..

ar:yesterday..

r:huh..wen..

ar:come i'll show u..(holds her hand n takes her to his room)

r:(felt like heaven wen he held her hand..she was completely lost wen..

ar:ridzyyy..

r:ha..haa haan...

ar:may i cal u by that name..

r:of-of course u can..

ar:see..

she saw that it was armaan's room only from where her dance room cud be seen...

ar:ab mein tumhe roz yahan se dekhunga..(n gave her a childish hug..)

r:(felt very gud wen he hugged her n smiled)

r:armaan but u'll make me feel concious..

ar:(showing that he's sad)okey den i'll not see..(inside :acha bachoo itna

acha chance kaise miss kar sakta hoon,kya karoon u were lukin so sexyyy baby)

r:armaan..(feelin guilty)(keeping her hand on his shoulder)i m sorry but..

ar:(cuts her sentence)no ridhima u r rite..u can practice freely..i'll go in the otheer

room wen u'll practice but only on 1 condition..

r:wah wat condi-tion..

ar:u have u dance with me once..

r:sure..

ar:tomorrow..

r:okey...

"SOME WHERE OUT THERE ,I KNOW THERE IS SOMEONE..

WHO IS WAITIN JUST FOR ME MAHIYA

HE'S GONNA SET ME FREE MAHIYA"

ridz took out the cell from her purse..

anjie(an),armaan(ar),ridz(r)

r:hello

an:hello di..

r:bolo..wen u comin back..

an:di ek problem hai..atul ki bike kharab ho gayi hai aur ghar pe mom dad lunch

ke liye aane waale hain..ab mein kya karoon..

r:acha thik hai ..mein aati hoon..where r u..

she tells her the place..

r:ok ,i m comin..

they hang up..

r:umm..armaan i hav to go..

ar:ok..no probs..

r:c u later ..bye..

ar:bye..

ridz leaves n reaches the place where anjie was

N FIRST SHAKES HAND WITH

ATUL N ATUL GAVE HER A HUG N ALL THIS WAS SEEN BY

SHASHANK N SMRITI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PART 6:

RIDHIMA N ANJALI WERE SITTIN AT THE BACK SEAT OF THE CAR..

SHASH WAS DRIVIN N SMRITI WAS GIVIN BAD LUKS TO RIDZ..๐Ÿ˜•

shash(sh),smriti(sm)

an:pa-pa v-vo

sm:shut up anjli..๐Ÿ˜ก

an:mumma suno toh..

sm:i said shut up..๐Ÿ˜ก

ridz squeezed anjie's hand n anjie stopped..

they reached home..

anjie n ridz got down of the car..

sh:mein abhi thod der mein aata hoon..vo actually mr.sharma se kuch

baaaten karni thi..aur haan deal with ridhima..๐Ÿ˜•

sm:ok..

IN THE HOUSE..

smriti beating ridhima..๐Ÿ˜ญ

sm:humaare khandan ka naam duboegi tu ek din..tu agar chup chup

ke ladko se mil sakti hai to pata nahi aur kya kya karke aati hogi..๐Ÿ˜ก

ar:MUMMA..(IN A LOUD VOICE)๐Ÿ˜ฒ

sm:TU CHUP KAR ..ISKE SAATH REHKAR TU BHI AISI HO GAYI HAI..

AGAR ISSE BAAT KARTI HUI DIKHAI BHI DE GAYI TO HAATH- PER

TOD DUNGI TERE ..SAMJHI..๐Ÿ˜ก

ridhima was cryin as smriti had a tight grip of her hand n her(smriti)nails

were hurting ridz..๐Ÿ˜ญ

sm:aur tu to aaj (lukin at ridhima in great anger)kamre mein bandh rahegi ..๐Ÿ˜ฒ

khana vana kuch nahi milega tujhe..๐Ÿ˜ฒ

smriti dragged her to her dance room((SMRITI HAD NEVER ENTERD

RIDZ BEDROOM AFTER HER 8TH CLASS))n locked her there..๐Ÿ˜•

ridz was beatin the door..๐Ÿ˜ญ

r:mumma kholo ..mum-ma..mum-ma.....(n slided down cryin)๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

IN ARMAAN'S HOUSE..

ARMAAN WAS WHISTELING AROUND IN THE HOUSE ..(hum to chale the dost banke...)๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

N TALKIN TO HIMSELF..๐Ÿ˜†

ar:ary yaar kya karoon ,bore ho raha hoon..yahan pe kisi ko janta bhi nahi

hoon except ridz n anjali.. started takin out different type of voice(hehe..)

ummmmmm...hummmm...huuuhh....ooooo...aaaa..๐Ÿ˜†

.haaannnn net pe surfing karta hoon..n went into his room..from there he saw ridz cryin..๐Ÿ˜•

ar:huuhh..ye roti kyun rehti hai..mujhe to lagta hai ki ye ekta kapoor ๐Ÿ˜†ke

serials se bahut inspired hai.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.heehhaaaaaaa..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..lekin yaar y is she cryin n that too so badly..๐Ÿ˜ฒ

how can i ask her..phone..na dun know her number..ghar jakar...na bad idea..

ghar pe abhi uske mom dad honge...

IN GUPTA'S HOUSE:

smriti had a phone call about emergency in hospital n she left quickly..

sm:anjali mein jaa rahi hoon ..aur agar tumne ridhima ko bahar nikala to mujhse

bura koi nahi hoga ..aur haan raat mein band karke so jana hum log late ho jayenge..

ARMAAN,FROM HIS WINDOW, SAW HER GOIN ..

AS SOON AS SMRITI LEFT ANJALI WENT TO RIDHIMA...

WEN SHE OPENED THE DOOR ,SHE SAW HER LYIN ON THE FLOOR N CRYIN VERY BADLY..

ANJALI'S EYES MOISTENED UP N SHE ENTERD THE ROOM..

an:di..(almost into tears)๐Ÿ˜ญ

an:di(kept her hand on ridz forehead)๐Ÿ˜ญ

ridz got up n hugged anjie tightly..๐Ÿ˜•

an:i m sorry di..๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜”

ridz was cryin..

an:i m sorry..plzzz mujhe maaf kardo..

ARMAAN ARIVED(...lolz)

ar:knocked at the room door..

an:huh...come inside..

ar:y is she cryin(in sign language)๐Ÿ˜ฒ

an:nothin(nodded her head left n right)๐Ÿ˜•

ar:hey sweetie ,kya hua...(to ridzz)๐Ÿ˜ณ

r:was sobbin uncontrollably..๐Ÿ˜ญ

an to ar:i'll get some water 4 her..plzzz(whispered)

ar:ok go...

ar:(puttin his hand around her)hey cutie pie..my kuchi-coo..wat happened...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

r:nodded her head left n right..๐Ÿ˜ญ

ar:(moved her hair behind her ear)kya hua..(sweetly)๐Ÿ˜ณ

r:mum-ma n-ne*sob* daa-ta(said in a very low voice)n started cryin again..๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

ar:ok ok but don't cry plzz..n wiped her tears with his thumbs..๐Ÿ˜›

ridz kept her forehead on his shoulder..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

armaan smiled wen she kept her head on his shoulder..๐Ÿ˜›

ar:ary yaar mumma ne daata hi to hai na..pata hai mujhe to roz daat parti

hai..(tried to distract her mind)

r:kyun..

ar:kyun ki mein shaitani hi itni karta hoon(hehe..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†)..pata hai ek baar na meine

mumma ne aapne liye tea banai aur phir table pe rakh di ..meine na usme salt

mila diya tha..aur phir to baad mein mujhe itniii daat padi ki mujhe aaj tak yaad hai..๐Ÿ˜†

r:aur kiya kiya kara..

ar:(in her ear)khubsurat ladkiyon ko pareshaan karta hoon ..๐Ÿ˜ณ

r:huh..(luked at him but at the same tym a lone tear escaped from the corner of her eye)

ar:(wiped her tears again)

MEANWHILE ANJALI WAS STANDIN IN THE KITCHEN N THINKIN SOMETHIN..

an:y does mumma do this??..cant she consider ridhima as her second daughter..

y does she hate her..di is so cute..she always take care of me..she's always in

trouble b'coz of me(A TEAR ROLL DOWN HER EYE)..now i'll never hurt her again..

she IS the elder daughter of this house n she WILL get that respect..i promise..

her thots were interupted by armaan calling her name..

anjali goes there with a glass of water n saw that ridz was happy with armaan ..

.................................................................................................................

PART 7

smriti's anger was cool by now n shash n she went to sanjeeveni according to their routine..here ridhima n armaan became very good friends as if they knew eachother from years..they got to know each other more deeply..

Ridhima came to know that armaan, besides being very cute n caring ,is also a short tempered person n in his anger he does not realise wat is he sayin to the other person n if he starts hates a person then its for lifetime..... she actually didnt like HIS this kind of nature but she cudn't understand y is attracted to him..she wants him,needs him 'all the time..she also started halusinating about armaan..whenever she listened to any romantis song ,she tried to relate every line with armaan n herself..

AT GUPTA'S RESIDENCE::::

anjie:di..hehe.. mujhe choro ,mujhe..hehe ..par-esh-aan heeheee.. mat..haha.. karo..

ridhima was tickling anjali..n she was really very ticklish so she was rollin on the bed laughing away away to glory...

r:nai pehle meri personal diary do..

an:nai..hheeeee...dungi..

now anjie was lyin on the bed upside down n was hiding the diary under her n ridhima was on top of her tryin to snatch the diary..

r:anjie do na..

an:na..

r:snatched the diary ...haaahaaa..i got it..(in a cheerful voice)

an:doesnt matter.(tryin to speak in the same tone)..i have read all ur secrets..(whispered)

r:wat???wich secrets??
an:dat...

r:speak up..

an:(goin closer to her)dat...

r:bolo na..

an:(reachin upto her ear n shouted)MEIN NAI BATAUNGIII...heheeehee..n ran away fron the room..

r:(running after her)ruk ..abhi batati hoon tujhe...

an:nai..di..no..

r:wat no no..anjali ki bachi ruk..

an:mere bache nai hue hain abhi..

r:pata hai..

an:to kyun keh rahi ho..

Suddenly armaan entered.. saw anjali n ridhima coming towards him.

ar:oye tom n jerry stop STOPPPPPP...NOOOOOOOOOOOO

anjali managed to change her track suddenly but RIDHIMA BUMPED INTO ARMAAN

N BOTH WERE ON THE GROUND ...BOTH WERE STARING AT EACH OTHER..

Armaan was looking at the anjelic face blushing constantly..

she was lost in his hazel eyes n was not aware of the surroundings..she was in her own dreamyland..

armaan luked deep into her eyes takin her into his spell completely..

great going armaan ,she's falling for u...excellent..ur plan is working..SHANKY will be happy..poor girl doesn't hav any idea where's she goin to land up after fallin for me..luk at her how's her cheeks are red like tomato..but sorry ridz i hav to do this as its very essential for me..he smirked seein her...

ohh my god!!!! ridzz i think u r fallin for him..i think i m in luv with him..NO SHUTUP..are u mad!!!

how can u say that so early..i mean u hardly know him..just know little about him n u say...OHH GOD...

ridzz i know wat u thinkin..don't think too much darling u r really in luv with me AS I M HOT N HANDSOME ..but sorry sweetheart i have to do "this" to achieve my ambitions n "somethin more"...BUT GOT TO SAY THAT UR DAD REALLY HAS BRAINS,SENT ME TO .....

sorry for this very late update guyzzz...actually i had my examzz n so dint really get any time to update..please leave ur frank comments (negative or positive) or just press the thank u button...will be very grateful to u....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow really goood concept
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooon
and PM me the next parts
swanzzy
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: swansea

wow really goood concept

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooon
and PM me the next parts
swanzzy

THANXZ SWEETY...
I SURELY PM U WEN THE NEXT PART COMES UP...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx guyzzz for ur lovely comments..๐Ÿ˜‰

Edited by princessnaina - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey naina !
u have started anoder FF....tht souds kool
plzz do PM me wen u update the next part n plzz let it may be a longer one...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'LL SURELY PM U N THANX FOR ENCOURAGIN ME..๐Ÿ˜›

Edited by princessnaina - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar...not fair zyada lamba bilkul bhi nai tha
next time i want a veryyyyyy long update......samjhe?
bck 2 the part hmmm.nice one so they finally got sumtime alone....hun n lookz like anjie is already in love wid sum1...cont soon will be waitin fr yo next PM
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheena_12

yaar...not fair zyada lamba bilkul bhi nai tha

next time i want a veryyyyyy long update......samjhe?
bck 2 the part hmmm.nice one so they finally got sumtime alone....hun n lookz like anjie is already in love wid sum1...cont soon will be waitin fr yo next PM

yar i'll try to give a longer part...๐Ÿคข
samajhgayi madam....
hmmm...wil spend tym alone only par pehli mulakat hai na...๐Ÿ˜ณ
yup..she's in..๐Ÿ˜ณ
i'll surely PM u...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwsomeโญ๏ธ too gud๐Ÿ˜Š really a nice one๐Ÿ˜‰ plz continue it soon๐Ÿ˜Š and plz pm me when u update it๐Ÿ˜ณ if u dont hv any problem๐Ÿ˜ณ

"Zindagi aisi ho jo jine ko majboor kare,
Rahein aisi ho jo chalne ko majboor kare,
Khushboo kabhi dosti ki kam na ho,
Dosti aisi ho jo milne ko majboor kare."


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Naina Wen Will u Continue????????????
m waitin fr the next part yaar
plzz be quick na....

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