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shalini jain

@yachna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#471

hey guys my college also started so i cn only update 2times in a week now i am continuing..........

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shalini jain

@yachna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#472

recap-r-or muma ke liye......
ar-muma keliy to papa jaldi ate hai nd he hug thm bth nd gave him gudbye kiss nd he go 2 sanjeevani..........
armaan reaches sanjeevani direct 2 dr keerti cabin he knock
keerti-come in
ar-gudmorning maam
k-gud morning dr armaan both smile so hows riddhima
a-yeah she is fine
k-apko to pata hi hoga aaj 3naye interns nahi 4interns arahe hai jisme e 1kal ayegi
a-ji mujhe pata hai kyunki jo kal ayegi she is my sis
k-ohhh chalo baki 2interns ane wale honge or unke incharge aap honge u'll gie thm duties kk kk u cn lave now...
a-yes dr keerti......nd he comes out
a-phewwww dekhte hai kaun kaise honge hmmmm chalo tab tak jaan se baat karleta hu nd he diald
r-heelo
a-hi jaan
r-kya baat hai badi yaa aa rahi hai pahunch gaye
a-hm bas abhi dr keerti ke cabin se aya aap batayi aap kya kar rahi hai or meri angel or baby zyada tang to nahi kar raha
r-nahi baby to nahi bas apki princss tang kar rahi hai armaan usko bola na doodh nahi pi rahi pareshaan kardiya nd he laugh
a-acha acha gussa mat karo princess ko phone do
r-yelo arima yelo papa se baat karo nd she without any min she take it
ar-hello papa
ar-aw mera bacha muma o pareshaan kal laha hai
ar-muma ko paleshaan kal raha hu
a-bacha gud girl ho na papa ki nd she nod yesto acha aap doodho pilo fir papa apke liy chocolates layge but he didn't know that ridz has put on speaker hehe
r-armaan dont u dare agar chocolates laye to tumne hi bigada hai
he scarda-vry bad papa or angel ki baatein sunti ho arima also laughing
a-acha jaan ab main chalta hu interns bhi ane wale hai baki dant ghar pe sunadena or princess ko dantna mat warna papa ake dantege tumhe
r-papa ki laadli k byeee tc i luv u....
a-luv u2....
nd thy both smile nd hang up.....
armaan at nurse station.... with 3interns.....
rohit,dr ronit,dr priyanka....(they have already sen sanjevani)
armaan-gud morning
all-gudmorning sir
ronit-excuse me sir
ar-yes
ro-if iam not mistaken 1 intrn is missing....
ar-dr ronit yes ur right but she will come tom
ro think-hm ladki hai...
ar-excuse apne kuch kaha
ro-no sir
ar-kk so now can i
ro-yeah sure
ar-thanku so dr rohit,dr priyanka,dr ronit i am dr armaan malik aaj se main hi apko duties dunga so be comfortable k nd he smile
pri-kitna smart hai
he explain evrything rules nd regulations no cell phones nothing
ar-apke duties dr rohit nd dr priyanka aap general ward
pri rohit-yes sir
dr ronit -aap opd
ro-yes sir
ar-so now u all can leave ..nd if u want any help u can ask me kk
all-yes sir nd thanku nd they leave.....it wasnt a hectic day for him but for interns they hv 2 now ar going fr his home missing both his jaans
r- hug him aw armaan a a gaye
ar-nahi mera bhoot
ar-papa
ar-mera princess aap kaise ho muma ko tang to nahi kara
r-tumhari beti hai kaise na kare acha tum jao fresh ho jao main tab tak dinner ready karti hu kkkkk
a-k jaan
nd he left nd come back aftr 10min nd thy both had their dinner nd retire 2 their rooms nd make arima sleep
10:30 ridz head on his chest
r-kaise hai interns
ar-hm they are gud first day tha baki baad mein pata chal jayga dedicate bhi hai lts see....
r-muje to apne din yaad ate hai hum kitna lada karte the....
a-hmm
r-kya hua mera jaanu thak gaya
a-nahi jab tumhare sath hota hu na to sari thakaan apne aap mit jati hai nd kiss her cheeks......i luv u jaan
r-luv u2....chalo ab so jao or sneha kab aa rahi hai
a-hmmm morning ki flight hai 9:30
r-k alarm laga diya hai acha armaan di ka phone aya tha
a-kya angie ka unka koi plan hai bhi wapis ane ka ki nahi she laugh
r-2din baad aa rahe hai
a-gud fir new year saath mein wowwwwww
r-hm chalo ab so jao.....gudnight
a-meri kissi
r-kaunse kissi
a-acha main btau naughty
r-now she is also in naughty mood hmmmmm
a he kiss her right on lips and it goes for 10min nd both sleep makin luv ........

morning-7am......
ridz opn her eyes nd what she saw like alwys arima sit on his chest waking him but he is koombkaran....
r-bacha gudmorning.....
ar-gudmolning.....kisses hr cheeks....
r-acha chalo utho papa ke uperse
ar-papa uth nahi le....
r-armaan
ar-hmmm plz jaan thodi der sone do
r-armaan 7baj gaye hai dr keerti ko bol to do ki tum thoda late ho jaoge
a-dont worry already told her
r-kkkk chalo utho ab sneha ko lene bhi jana hai....
a-jaan thodi der plzzzz
r-kkkk kisses his cheeks 15min kkk
ar-kkk nd he again fall asleep
ar-papa utho-
r-beta papa ne 15 in kaha hai muma fresh hoke ati hai tab utha dena kk
ar-kkkkk
r-aap tab tak apne toys ke sath khelo nd she goes come back in 15min nd when she come wht she saw she was shockd arima sitting near her dressing table nd put her lipstick all over her face doi drawing with it perfumes bottle lying over floor nd ridz ws fuming in nager nd she shout arimaaaaaa by which armaan also got scard nd he also shout
ar-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh whn he saw arima he burst out nd laugh so mch but whn he saw ridz he was scard if she scold arima
ar-omgg bhaag ar warna tu bhi gaya aaj
r-arima ye kya kiya apne apko kitna baar muma n kaha na lekin nahi or tum armaan aram se so rahe ho dhyaan nahi rakh sakte or dekho madam ne kya kiya nd she is coming towards her but armaan omes between nd take arima in his arms
arbacha ye kya kiya apne
ar-chollllly
ar-beta dekho muma ko itna gussa ho gayi aise thodi karte hai muma ki sari lipsticks apne apne uper laga li
ar-laga li
r-armaan do isko muje....
a-jaan tum abhi bahut gussa ho main baat kar raha hu
r-kya armaan tumne bigaad ke rakha hai ab sara saaf karna padega tum or ye kya karu main tum dono ka......nd she clean all her dressing r-ab do isko muje
a-jaan dekho tum joao main arima ko leke ata hu main naha ke ajaunga
r-thik hai or point towards arima agar apne koi or shaitani ki na fir dekhna main tab tak breakfast bana deti hu......
a-jaan tum kuch bhul nahi rahi
r-oh she come back nd kiss on his cheks.....
ar-cholly muma make jst like ar face which ridz also cnt resist
r-its kkkk nd she kisses her cheeks lekin dubara aisa nahi hona chahiye......kkk
ar-kkkk
r-or aap jaldi ayiye 8 yahi baj gaye all thnks 2 arima madam....
a-ek sec muje apne baby ko to gudmorning wish karne do nd he bent nd kisses on her stomach
a-gudmorning bacha ....nd again kiss it she smile
r-chalo ab jao nd she goes
nd both laugh
a-chalo nahi nahi karte hai
she clap yey nahi nahi klenge nd he also laugh nd thy enjoy theirbath nd ridz smile .....both have their breakfast nd leae for airport.......both wre happy to see her aftr long time nd sneha also nd armaan nd sneha give gudbye kiss 2 ridz nd arima nd leave for sanjeevani

k guys phew enough for today i am sory i cnt be able 2 cont
only 2times in weeks as my coll also has started but i'll try my best 2 cont..... nd plz do comment i know this 1 quite boring.......heheh.....i bore u all
luv yachna😛

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Aneesa

@Chiraiyya...

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#473

Great part yachna
You guys are lcuky that yachna wrote a part otherwise this ff was gonna clsoe. And come on you guys write parts only yachna has vbeen writing parts are you all jsut gonna depend on her for writing parts. You cant jsut let her do everyfiin.

x...Aneesa...x

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gia.khan

@gia.khan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#474

aww wat a cute part yachana... aneesa babe u need to understand dat exams are going on for most of the ppl this month is really busy u need to give it time lets jus wait for a few more weeks and hopefully ppl will be back with a bang! ... hope soo! lolzz.. miss u guys! aneesa update ur ff soon too!!!

Edited by gia0005 - 16 years ago

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#475

Aww nice part yachna

Yeah i agree with u gia...even my finals have started so thora time de do..i promise i'll try to continue after that

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Aneesa

@Chiraiyya...

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: gia0005
aww wat a cute part yachana... aneesa babe u need to understand dat exams are going on for most of the ppl this month is really busy u need to give it time lets jus wait for a few more weeks and hopefully ppl will be back with a bang! ... hope soo! lolzz.. miss u guys! aneesa update ur ff soon too!!!

I do understand coz i have exams aswell but we cant wait for a couple more weeks coz noones contiuin then theres no point of haviin dis ff. For soooooo long this ff was open but no1 continued and then no one ever continued. Me and swansea already decided b4 that we will clsoe this ff coz theres nuffin to write about coz in all the other SKL's we covered all the storied so we will end up repeating the same stuff. And also we decided to clsoe it coz we've gotr a new ff but no1's contiuin in tht.
But i told swansea not to clsoe the ff down coz people were wirting parts and for like atleast more than 1 mnoth no parts were up so it was obvious we had to clsoe this ff. But ive been giving you ber chances to keep this ff open.
And ive been polite and nice b4 coz i thought you guys wud listen and you hav but only yachna's been writing parts and she has exams aswell. Now i do have to be a little rude to get ma message across to you guys.
Now the rest is up to you guys if you want this ff to stay or go

x...Aneesa...x

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Misha Rai

@DMG4EVER

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#477

IIt felt like Armaan had been away from Riddhiam for 2 yrs but no it was only 2 hours. He-he .. he was missing her so much. He wanted to see that sparkle in her eyes. He wanted to feel her but alas, that was not possible as he had a surgery scheduled at 2pm .. But he didnt give up, he got out his phone

" Shit! Battery nahn hai"

After a long minute of thought

" Its ok bachuu, reception kiske liye hai"

H dashed out of the locker room and by the rception he made a call to Riddhima

At home Riddhiam was takign a bath as she felt hot and stiffy so se thought ahe would feel good after a bath. Her radio was on loud and the maid was palyign with Arima as she heard the giggling sounds when she turned off the radio.

" Mann toh nahin kara ke bahar ao..... chalo tora aur same bidadeti hoon"

She continued spalishign water over herself. The music on her adio was so cute, it reminded her of the time Armaan ha spent with her just a couple of days ago and th song continued to play.

It was the song Guzarish and it felt so good listneing to it whilst she was atign a bath. Then she hard a knock on the door.

" Mem saab, ji voh saab ne ohone kiya hai"

" Achha theek hai aati hoon"

She dashd out of the bathroom coverd with a towel, as she was dryign her hair

" Hello?"

"Hi jaan, what are you doing"

"Armaan pucho mat, kitni garmi hai aaj, i wa in th shower, bahar aana hi nahin chahta ta, lekin janaab ne phne kiya toh aan para"

" Oh sorry, aap phrse shaam ko shower karlena, you no to make up for it, aur haan from my side i will come in to"

" Badmash, kaho kya kaam ta"

"Voh actually i was missing you isiliye"

" Aur mein avah par araam se naa raha ta aur tumne disturb kardi" She was showing her fake anger at him

"Thek hai" " Mein tang nahin karunga

" Armaan sory! .. I love you my cute .. er my cute and sexy hubby"
"Yeh hui na baat"

She blushed red

"Byexx"

She put down the phone without no response formAmaan .. sh buried her fac in her hands and blushed.

On the other hand Armaan was smilign hsi crooked smile which made him look so fine! ..

"Oyye Hoyy"

Thats' it form me .. maybe i wil update tomorw

Edited by DMG4EVER - 16 years ago

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Aneesa

@Chiraiyya...

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#478

Great part DMG4EVER i was soo addicted to Guzarish thrn stopped lsitening tyo it now you've got me bakc to listening it.
Lol how can Armaan come inot the shower when he's all the way in the hospital.
I mite write a part 2morz well it depedn on hu's at home and huever is at home mean either i have a short time on the cmoputer or a long time.
The lesser the people in my house the more time im on the cmoputer.
And it will be a romantic part 😳

x...Aneesa...x

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#479

8:30 PM, Sanjeevani..

"Yes Madam boliye.."Armaan smiled .."Kaise yaad kiya humein?.."

"Tum ghar kab aaoge Arma..Armaan.."She said dimly..

"Riddhima?..Hey kya hua?..You..you are crying..!!"He's alarmed..

"Nahin baba..I..I am fine..tum ghar kab aaoge?.."She wiped the tiny pear drops, emerging from the corner of her eyes..

"Riddhima?..baccha..aap theek toh ho na?.."He was worried sick..

"Armaan..tum batao na.."she continues..

"Bas mein abhi nikal raha hun..ye maine labcoat utar diya..aur keys utha li gadi ki hmm??.."He does so..

"Armaan..please jaldi aa jana.."She pleads..

"Aapki tabiyat kharab hai na?.."He asks softly..

"Nahin....nahin toh..bas missing you.."She lies, but not so conviniently..

"Ok..am just reaching..ab rakhoon?.."

"Hmm.."

Before actually driving, he calls Madhav Kaka..

"Kaka..Riddhima theek toh hai na?.."

"Nahin Armaan beta..wo..abhi kuch der pehle..kitchen mein kaam karte waqt chakkar aa gaye they..wo toh bhagwaan ka shukr hai ki usi waqt Muskaan beti kuch files dene aayi hui thi..usne sambhal liya.."

Armaan's really feeling anxious to see her now..Without wasting a moment he rushes to the parking lot to meet his beloved.

Edited by sumitwadhwa - 16 years ago