Unleashing Wat Remaind Unsaid-Pt19/pg144/note-p151

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Ria

@hibos1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Hey Naseem,....

thanks for gracing us,...the wait has been long and I am sure will be worth it!!!! Loved the intro.....ok just for the record, he is married to Lovely....I am upset right here.....but there is a saving grace,.....he is a bengali....married to one I know how wonderful people they are,....

did u say u are not gonna update every day,...sad:( anyways waiting for the parts........

love -Ria

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey,

congrats on starting ur 3rd ff 👏. i'm sure it'll be another surefire winner like perfect imperfection and newton's laws. btw, saw u became the writer of the week as well. way to go!!! ⭐️

can't wait for the next part, the intro really caught my attention yaar. i 1st thought ridz and armaan were married and they had some problems so when i read the last bit to say i got a shock is to put things mildly😲

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@-Facetious-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Another one!!! Thank you 🤗

WOHAA!! I got a heart attack reading the last line. Are u serious?? Armaan n lovely 😲😲 Well as your title suggests, there's lot to be spoken and i'm desperately waiting for the part. U said this one was for the competition so u must be having a lot more already written, right? Please update...the intro is so interesting that i'm already hooked to it from the start, well when i'm not....lol..ok bad joke..

Awesome start👏👏 just love the bengali touch u gave to it.....cont soon..😊

Luv

Shivani 😳

P.S. I'm still battling with my questions to grill u. I think u were rite i should save them for the next WOTW only coz with my snail's speed of thinking i'll definately be able to post it then..😕😆😆

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gurpreet

@preet916

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

ur new ff sounds really interestin

plz continue soon

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sasya

@sasya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

it was great👏👏👏.intro was gud and very different.armaan is a bengali and armaan and lovely are married for 5 years!!!!!!!! i am shocked with the last line😲.i dont think armaan loves lovely. i loved ur first 2 ff and i am sure this will also be great,congrats for the new ff.cant wait to read the coming up parts.continue soon..............

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

oooppsss i must b dreaming????????? NJ u back wid another ff haannn?????? i think WOTW di sum wonders here????????????? ohk i 'm shocked beyond ne limits u got armaan n lovely married haila!!!!!!!!! but wat an intro yaar !!!!!!!!!!!! dis one's def gng to b a bumpy ride ,haina!!!!!!!!! newaz me hoookkkeedd as usual ....... luv aravi

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

NASEEEM!!

i was gonna pm u soon to see when another one of ur creatios was gonna come up...

u saved ur self the long pm and lecture... lol...

very good start...

and i must say something totally diff...

am in love with all ur other ff;s why not this one?

do cont sooon...

cant wait!!

Sonia

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gari14

@gari14

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

omggggg yr third one!!!!.....yeaaahhhhh u definately made my day!!!.......have always loved yr writing n am eager to get to know more abt this one!!!....seems veryy intresting...n cant wait to read more!