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Posted: 17 years ago
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love the new storyline cont soon plz!!!!!!!!👏
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

love the new storyline cont soon plz!!!!!!!!👏

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Om Bhu Bhuva Svah Tat Savitur Varenyam

Bhargo Devasya Dheemahee Dhiyo Yo Nah Prachodayaat

Anuradha Paudwal's melodious voice was chanting Vedic hymns.."Gayatri Mantra" in the music system.

"KRIPA!" Suryaban yelled indicating completion of his "Sandhya Vandanam' and ordering to get ready for Ganesh Prayers.

Ekadanta Mahakaya Surya koti samaprabha
Nirwighnam kurume deva sarvakaryeshu sarwada

Suryaban Sarma chanted Vigneswara Stotram aloud in the living room in front of the Lord Ganesha that decorated with garlands, lights, mango leaves around small platform to the idol.

Gayatri signaled Kripa to look into the matter. Kripa frowned and checked the clock on the kitchen wall. Gayatri tied her lips and sighed, "yeh tumhari Sapna bhi na har baar late aati hai. Ussey pata hona chahiye ki papa kitna gussa karengey."

Kripa nodded her head "ussey pata hai, mama! Kya karti hai bechari, raat bhar kaam karti hai."

Ding Dong!!!

Kripa's face lit up to hear the door bell "lo aagayi maharani!"

Gayatri laughed from behind as arranged all special dishes to be offered to Lord as part of the puja.

"Humesha late aati hai. Jao jaldi kapade badallo" Kripa secretly mouthed her friend, Sapna, before she would embraced her with festive greetings.

Sapna sighed "Ohh! touch me not?" She knew Sarma family wore silk clothes and didn't allow anyone to touch them till they finished their puja rituals.

Kripa nodded her head with a cheer and winked at her as directed her to the bedroom. "Jaldi jao. Tumhari kapade taiyyar hai. Papa gussa hongey," Kripa mouthed warning with her big eyes and walked to Suryaban Sarma. Sapna changed into long silk skirt and half sari with matching blouse and braded her lose hair.

Suryaban tied his silk angavastram (unstitched cloth draped over the shoulders by men along with dhoti around waist) around his waist nth time to suppress his impatience. Sapna faintly smiled at Suryaban who was staring at the girls for their indiscipline schedules, "Namaste uncle! Deir raat tak kaam karti rahi, isiliye subah jaldi uth nahin payi." Suryaban nodded his head seriously as settled his janeu over his bare upper body, at her usual excuse.

Gayatri interrupted to release the tension among the three "chalo, jaldi puja shuru keejiye abb Sapna bhi agayi hai." All the four spiritually performed the puja with aarati song at the end by Kripa and Gayatri.

Kripa and Sapna quickly got ready after lunch and went out to visit all Ganesh pandas kept in the streets. Gayatri smiled at their childishness "yeh bache pata nahin kab badey hongey."

Suryaban Sarma seriously looked at her "haan, yeh Sapna ko dekh kar Kripa aur bhi bigad jaati hai."

Gayatri pouted "wo bechari ko kyon dosh deraha hai? Kripa koyi kum saitani toh nahin! Waisey aap log humesha doosoron ko hi dosh detey hai."

Suryaban Sarma groaned noticing the sarcasm in Gayatri's tone, "tumbhi humesha humey taana maarney ki bahana doonditi hai."

Gayatri smiled to lighten the situation, "main kahan taana derahi hoon? Kripa abhi bhi bachi hai. Shadi ke baad yeh thodi aisey ghoomegi? Aaj Ganesh chaturdhi hai. Ghar jaldi hi laut aajayegi."

Suryaban still had not come out of his disturbed mood "ladkiyon ki deir raat tak ghoomna achi baat nahin hai. Tumhe maloom hai papa pur kya gujri thi. Wo apni behen ko itna laadpyar se pala posha. Phir bhi aakhri waqt tak uskey liye tadapta raha. Kripa ki padhayi ki wajah se hum Hyderabad shift hogaye thay. Gaon chodney ke saat saat hum humari reeti rivaazon ko bhulney ki koyi jaroorat toh nahin."

Gayatri tied her lips and pressed his hand as assuring about Kripa, "wo aapko kabhi disappoint nahin karegi. Usper bharosa rakhiye." She understood Suryaban became emotional as he remembered his father and aunt.

************

"BHAI!! CAN YOU HELP ME HERE, PLEASE! BHAI!! ARMAN!! "ARMAN!!"" Misthy yelled for help. Arman eagerly walked out with half foamed beard, holding the shaving brush in right hand, in bare upper body and pajama pant.

Misthy adorably laughed at him "Bhai! I really love you so much. Jab bhi main pukarti hoon tum humesha waise ki waisey hi chala aata hai. I love your care."

Arman frowned "Misthy! Tum aise bulati hai ki tum kuch danger mein ho. Anyway bolo kya baat hai kyon subah subah itna chilla rahi hai?" Misthy was pestering him since they woke up in preparations for Ganesh puja. He tried to calm her down every time.

Misthy smiled "yeh mala yahan hang karney ke liye help karo na. I'm not able to reach it. Ghar mein koi step stool bhi nahin hai." She held a garland tied with flowers and mango leaves and looked desperately at him. He sighed "bhai hai toh issi liye na. Step stool ki kya jaroorat hai? Dedo main band deta hoon. Tum kuch aur kaam karlo."

Misthy watched him without leaving the place. He looked at her and pinched her cheeks, "Itna trouble leney ki kya jaroorat thi, Misthy! Hum mandir cheley jaatey.""

Misthy smiled "ek achisi bhabhi ko lekey aao aur main aram se kha peekar enjoy karungi." He sighed and shook his head "tum ghuma firakey wahi per aajati hai. Main toh khubsurat biwi ki khwaab dekh raha hoon. Aur khubsurat ladkiya kaam todi karengey? Aur sabse pehle tumhari shadi hogi."

Misthy smiled and folded her hands at elbows "bhai! Aaj kal ladkiya har kaam kartey hai. Yeh tumhara vehem hai ki padhi liki khubsurat ladkiyan kuch kaam hi nahin jaantey. Whatever main toh aisi ladki ko doondkar laaongi ki wo khubsoorat ho padhi likhi ho aur ghar bhi achi tarah sambhali. Aur baat aayi meri shadi ki- meri kanyadan toh tum bhabhi ke saat hi karega."

He smiled and patted her head and walked into bathroom to finish his half finished shaving and shower. Misthy checked the hanged garland once again and walked into kitchen.

"HELLO!!! HELLOOO! Koyi hai ghar mein? Anybody home??"

Misthy from kitchen and Arman with towel around his waist walked out at the impatient sweet voice at the door.

Both surprisingly looked at each other and glared at the young beautiful lady at the door. She wore light sky blue dotted 'anarkali' style chudidhar, left hair lose till waist, matched blue tickli at the forehead, dark eyeliner showed her big expressive eyes, exchanged looks innocently at the two siblings "hi! I saw you moved two days ago and thought of inviting you for Ganesh puja in the evening in the grounds. I'm one of the organizers of all celebrations in these apartments. We celebrate it in grand way every year. I wish you both enjoy our company." She explained the reason behind her surprise visit in one stretch. She checked Arman from head to toe as admired his half bare physic. He was embarrassed to show off his half bare physic in front of a stranger woman.

Arman was about to turn to leave and Misthy smiled at the girl "Thanks, I'm Misthy and he is my older brother, Arman. Dr.Arman." Arman shook his head as introduced himself to her.

The beautiful girl tapped her eyelids and looked at him with mischief "I know. I saw the name plate outside the door! Nice name. Nice to meet you. I'm Ridhima. Ridhima Gupta, Pados mein rehti hoon." She stepped inside and held her hand to shake with Arman. Misthy and Arman exchanged looks at each other for the strange woman's boldness. Misthy raised eyebrows at him with naughty smile. Arman sighed inside and rolled his eyes.

"Hum jaroor ayengey. Thanks for inviting us." Misthy came forward to shake her hand with Ridhima. Ridhima tucked her lose strands behind right ear and gave side glances at Arman. Arman excused himself "tum donon baatey karo'."he searched for words as his heart started leaping at Ridhima's sharp looks. "Main bhi chali. Shaam ko jaroor ayiyega. Aap bhi Arman!" she begged Arman with eyes as patted Misthy's shoulder in friendly manner.

Arman sighed as Ridhima left "toofansi ladki!!"

Misthy chuckled "looks like mera bhai ka khubsoorati pur fida hogayi hai!!" she teased remembering Ridhima's constant stares at Arman. Arman sighed "tumhey toh hur ladki aisi hi dikhti hai. Chalo shuru karo puja. Did you finish cooking?"

Misthy shook her head "it is not their fault, Arman! Tum hai toh itna handsome," she walked inside to arrange everything for puja.

********

Khanna family finished Ganesh puja with Devyani singing "Vatapi Ganapatim Bhajey'." Keertana. She wiped her tears at the end of song and walked into her room to give aarati to Pundit Ram Narayan's enlarged photo in the room. Everyone silently folded arms in front of photograph.

After lunch Devyani was checking the album and was recollecting her days before marriage.

"Dadi! Kya kar rahi hai?" Aaliyah entered and circled her hands around Devyani's shoulders to lean into album. "Aap phir se aapki bachpan yaad kar rahi hai? How cute! Dadi! Kya aapke brother ka family bhi aise hi unka yaad karte rahengey?"

"Why not Aaliyah! After all they lived more with him than dadi. Hai na dadi!" Kartik and Anittah touched Devyani's feet and silently checked the album.

Devyani adorably smiled and pinched both granddaughters' chin "haan! Wo bhi yaad karte hongey."

Dilip came and touched Devyani's feet "mama! aap kabhi aaj ka din maama ji ko yaad karna bhoolti nahin".

Devyani wet her eyes "kaise bhooloon, Dilip! Aaj ka din bhai ka janam din tha. Khaash wo abb bhi jinda hota."

"Jinda hota toh bhi kya hota, aap toh uske saat kabhi nahin hongey na," Naina taunted Devyani as she entered to take her blessings. She never forgot to touch Devyani's feet after wore new cloths on special occasions like festivals, wedding anniversaries. Devyani smiled and blessed her only daughter-in-law.

Naina fumed "mama! Humara families ke beech toh koyi aana jaana toh nahin tha." Devyani silently shook her head.

Angad entered "Hi everyone! kya ho rahi hai yahan?" he hugged Devyani with one hand and kissed her temples. He pulled the album from Anittah "hmm, dadi! Aap koyi latest photos collect nahin kiya?" Everyone looked at him with warning expressions.

"We were not having any contacts with them. How could dadi collect any latest photos, Angad?" Naina sarcastically warned.

"Yeh photos bhi Gayatri ne diyi thi 25 saal pehle," Dilip sadly recollected the past.

Whole family wore new clothes and gathered in Devyani's room on this day every year without fail as Devyani became emotional for the whole day by remembering her brother. They all tried to cheer her up as they knew what she went through after broke the relations with Pundit Ram Narayan Sarma.

"Humey yeh bhi pata nahin ki uss ghar mein kaun kaun hai," Anittah blamed in general.

"Koyi toh hoga humara tarah, Surya uncle ke betiyan, bte," Aaliyah said being optimistic.

Devyani smiled and turned to Angad as wanted to lighten up the situation. "kiski photo dekhna chahta hai tu?"

Angad blushed "It's not like that, dadi! Main yoohin poochliya tha."

Aaliyah secretly raised her eyebrows at him and he secretly warned her with his eyes. Anittah and Kartik giggled as noticed the curiosity in his enquiries. Dilip and Naina walked out as someone came to visit them. Anittah walked out to attend call on her mobile.

"Bro! Surya uncle ke ghar mein jaroor ek ladki hogi aapke liye!!" Aaliyah teased Angad. Kartik joined her "haan puja bhi karti hongi tumhare liye."

Angad frowned "why for me? Tumhare liye bhi ho sakti hai!"

Devyani laughed at their naughty conversation "Kartik ke liye toh choti padh jayegi. Agar koyi hoti toh tumhare liye layak hogi. Aur mein chahti hoon uski wajah se phir se humare donon pariwar ek hojaye." Devyani built up hope of reunion with her maayka again.

***********

Sapna and Kripa had settled at one of the benches on Tank Bund road with corn kernel on each hand. Kripa was humming and was in good spirits as usual. Sapna gave side glances at her and smiled, "Kyon rey, Kripa! Tumhara papa ko kabhi heart attack toh nahin dogi na?"

Kripa pouted and raised eyebrows as she need explanation on her doubts. Sapna chuckled as remembered Suryaban's disciplined nature "I felt your dad didn't like us going out like this."

Kripa smiled "Haan, he is scared if I go with some guy like naani did long ago. kaun jaaney kabhi humarey dil bhi koyi chura lega?"

Sapna laughed, "tumhara dil toh kabki tumhara cousin churaliya hai. How do you address him? Haan, 'baava' (addressing related to bua's/mama's sons)!! Agar wo tumhay bhagake legaya toh?"

Kripa sighed "abb uska yaad mut dilao. Main toh pehley bhi tumko bata diya tha. I don't love him. Na jaaney wo kaise dikhta hai. Main toh uska nam tak nahin jaanti. Main ek hi baat jaanti thi, Naina auty was 4th month pregnant with a boy when she met dada 25years ago."

Sapna unbelievingly looked at Kripa "something is really wrong today. Kahin Suraj pachim se toh nahin nikla na? Kripa saying 'no love to HIM!!" Sapna dramatized her disbelief on Kripa's statements.

Both laughed and Sapna chided Kripa "Tum kuch bhi kaho, Kripa! I don't believe ki tum kabhi tumhari 'baava' ko yaad nahin karogi."

"NAHIN" Kripa immediately blushed, "Haan, sapne toh jaroor dekhti hoon. I don't even completely know about him. Mama toh kabhi kabhi baat karti hai unke barein mein."

"Don't worry. Aaj raat main tumhari maa se Khannas ke barein mein sab kuch pooch kar hi rahoongi. Agar wo kuch nahin bata sakey toh main doondh kar laaoongi. Wo Mumbai mein hi toh rehta hai na."

Kripa smiled "baba ke samney mut poochna gussa hojayengey. Agar mom ko pata hota toh kabki batadeti. She lost touch with them 25 years ago. They changed their houses and phone contacts too."

"It won't be big deal, Kripa! Mera family toh wahi rehti hai na. Jab tum meri shadi mein aaogi tab donon milke pata lagayengey." Sapna assured Kripa.

"Acha yeh batao kab hai tumhari shadi?" Kripa changed topic from her life to Sapna's. Sapna sighed "both families are just in talks. Wo dulha toh abhi tak London mein hi pada huva hai. He might be coming by this month end." Sapna giggled.

Sapna was studying in Osmania medical college and was staying with her aunt who had renowned business in Hyderabad near Sarma's house. They met 4years ago on the same day while visited Ganesh idols. Now they both referred each other "best friends".

**********

"Hi Arman!" Ridhima stopped Arman in the parking lot while he was walking towards elevator, "we are waiting for you. Hum aapke hi raah dekh rahey hai. Abhi puja shuru honey waala hai." Arman glanced at her from head to bottom. She looked more stunning now than in the morning. She wore pink and red mixed colored lehenga set with matching jewelry. "Yeh ladki ko sajke sawarne ke alwa kuch aur bhi kaam aata hai?" he unknowingly thought inside as her hungry eyes disturbed him with mixed feelings.

"Main Misthy ko lekar aata hoon." He tried to excuse himself.

Ridhima stopped him immediately, "Misthy mere saat hai. Aap bhi chaliye."

Arman felt trapped as noticed Misthy walked to them. He exchanged looks at both ladies. Misthy wore blue gagra and took really great care to match with Ridhima. "yeh ladki itni jaldi Misthy pur influence kardiya?" He was surprised as swallowed his irritation. As much as he knew Misthy always preferred western clothes. He had no option than to follow them but still he tried his best to avoid the new girl. "Misthy! Main fresh hokar aata hoon. You carry on with your pujas."

Misthy affectionately stared at the way Arman left and smiled as gave explanation to Ridhima "bhai ko puja path mein itna shradha toh nahin hai. Mere liye hi puja mein kuch time bitata hai."

Ridhima nodded her head as disappointed at Arman's exit.

Next part : Past between khannas-Sarmas; How long Arman resist Ridhima??

Edited by vallanki - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey...awesome part...hmm so angad and kripa ave herd about each other from their familes..... and they both blush while tlking bouh each oder even doe they dnt know the others names....ridz is very bold hehe....has armaan strtd to get attracted to ridz...cont soooon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great fanfic. It's very different. In a good way. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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the first part is amazing
i love the way kripa and angad think about each other but dont know each other.😆
riddhima reminds me of Kajjal from the show woh rehne waali mehlon ke.
cant wait untill armaan falls for riddhima....
i wonder since you put Prithvi in your character sketch is he going to be the one sapna marries?
cant wait to know the past between the two families cont....soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part
aww ak remeber each other but dont even know each other lol
ridz is very bold lol
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful beginning from our Guru of ffs 👏👏👏
Love dthe way u introduced all trhe families with Ganesh chaturthi as background.
So AK already have some idea about each other😳
Ridz is def a bold girl- good description of her looks and clothes👏
Armaan...oh boy...a good bro and seedha saadha types in this one or he is just being shareef for the moment😃
Naina is her usual self😡
Nice description of friendship between Kripa and sapna😊
Edited by bheegi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome introduction!
loved the way u introduced all the families
looks lie angad is one of the shy types or does he only blushed at kripa's mention?
and about armaan and ridhimma, don't they already know each other as armaan's brother and ridhimma's sister are married to each other so these two must be knowing each other already!

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