Hi Aimee,
1st of all I am very sorry for not commenting on your parts, bad bad girl jyoti! I had 4 days of off for Eid & no access to Internet, so am letting you know in advance that this is gonna be a long response, be prepared:
part 21
Arman's past was quite bad, I mean, he found that Manvi was just behind him for money, thats bad enough, but again he had to go through the same heartbreak, for some stupid revenge...no wonder that guy isn't into girls...but you said he has a GF, who is she???
Ridz's boss is a very sleazy man, I thought Arman would be the knight in shinning armour to save her, but pata chala he will come to save her & she will be figthing with him only....lol! glad Rahul came at the right time
Ridz is so naive, gave in her resignation, without even knowing the real reason.....such a baby!
Rahul & Atul seem to have bonded really well, I mean Atul opening up about Arman's past & same with Rahul, telling about Ridz, wonder when they will look at them togather....
part 22
Boogadhi was funny, no need to ask but I presume that was AR fighting as usual...
The temple scene was very touching, the way you explained everything was good, even a layman can understand, the kalawa, blessing it, doing puja everything was in order, the women have already seem to have bonded
so so his secret is now out, of course, he is a normal guy with feelings, even he wants someone to love him unconditionally, I wish Vibhi wouls have spoken more about our Angel, but Anjali had to come that time, I am waiting for the moment, they get introduced, am sure, both will have a heartache! loved Angie's nagging poor guy, they don't spare him a minute at all, do they???
part 23
Ridz's interveiw at the Marvels, how long I waited for this moment....Ridz helping the old women to cross the road& then helping another person, during his attack was too good, just shows how nice natured girl she is, even though she was getting late, she still helped Omang, & that too not knowing him, the way you described that whole scene was so touching, cos I have Asthma, so can imagine Omang's plight, if there is no one to help, its really difficult & pump does get empty at such times only, I have being in similar situations...
Atul taking interviews & selects Ridz after Omang's word was nicely put, specially, the fact that Omang didn't tell Atul that this girl had helped him, cos he didn't want a biased decesion, nicely done....Rahul pulling Atul's leg was hilarious, specially cos we can picture Pankit acting just like that
now, the moment has come that Arman & Ridz are formally introduced, am sure intially, they will hate each other, all due to Minne's lecture, liked the fact how you slowly got all the family members to know each other
I hope you haven't slept off reading my long comment....do continue, as I am eager to know what happens next.....
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