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Posted: 16 years ago
brilliant prt.. atlast little confusion is solved.. now major confusion wil cum.. waitngg 4 d b'day.. thnxx, 4 d pm.. update sssoon
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Posted: 16 years ago

awsome part 👏 but plz plz plzzzzzzzzzz bring armaan and ridz face to face at the party

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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing part aimee👏!
hope you cont. soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
yippeeeeeee Aimee you updated🤗, sach bataon toh yesterday I waited and waited for an update from you like anything, even thought of Pming you but then I thought stop it simran aur kitna tang kare gi bechari ko tu lucky hai maine tujhe baksh diya😆
good good that Atul & his pop know Ridz and Rahul are bro and sis the suspense was killing me, and it's nice to know Atul knows Ridzie's story maybe he can later tell Armaan about it so Armaan might cool down his anger and have a soft spot for our Makhi I mean Ridzie😆 (and am glad I can help with the nickname😉)
So Ridz is coming to the party wooohooo OMG maybe Armi will surprise Vibhi and show up too and then bump into Ridz ahhhhhh was that the surprise OMG Aimee I am getting hyper just thinking about it. I love the bacha party "bache mann ke sache"😆
alright I must go now bro is about to come home toh abhi mujhe khana pakana hai, just dropped mum and dad off at airport so now I will be cooking everyday for the next 3 weeks
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice update.......keep it up..............thankc 4 the pm.........
❤️MONA
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyyy im bac.... readin dis update ive dis goofy smyle which doesnt seem 2 budge.... 😃
riddhima sure has made a place in every1s heart... jus w8in 4 d day wen she mkes a 'special' place in my armaans heart... sigh
Atul n rahul mde me laugh... bt im glad dat neither omang or rahul mentioned nefink 2 atul... she proved herself wivout d recommendation bt her capability.... u tend 2 gain more respect dis way dan sum1 recommending u....
kya yaar, armaan ka koi part hi nahi tha.... im already heartbroken as i wnt b seein him in dmg nxt week... 💔
wow muskaans pregnant...!!!! AR ka kab milan hoga... n dat 2 on a gud note...
i wonder wht riddhimas reaction wud b finding out hu armaan is... coz at d moment she seems quite impressed.... wiv d office n all
will armaan b surprising vaibhav on his birthday or is he nt goin 2 b dere... i hope he does....
im so in luv wiv ur ff dat i feel incomplete nt reading ur updates... n also commenting.. i reali shud gt goin since ive gt loadsa wrk piled up.... ive bin tryna avoid it bt cnt anymore...🤓
plz do update soon... im glad u wernt upset bout my late comment last tyme.... it wnt hapen again!!!!! i pwomish 😆
tke cre
luv sana
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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 part
atul-rahul scene was funny
glad to know that ridz has make place in so many hearts
now just waiting when ridz will make a special place in armaan heart
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey silent reader here. i love ur fanfic and u write very well. i hope the happy atmosphere continues on in the fanfic. have you write many more fanfics. update soon.
best wishes.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Friends. Noone else is responding. Whats this???😭
Edited by Wild.Aimee - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Aimee,
1st of all I am very sorry for not commenting on your parts, bad bad girl jyoti! I had 4 days of off for Eid & no access to Internet, so am letting you know in advance that this is gonna be a long response, be prepared:
part 21
Arman's past was quite bad, I mean, he found that Manvi was just behind him for money, thats bad enough, but again he had to go through the same heartbreak, for some stupid revenge...no wonder that guy isn't into girls...but you said he has a GF, who is she???
Ridz's boss is a very sleazy man, I thought Arman would be the knight in shinning armour to save her, but pata chala he will come to save her & she will be figthing with him only....lol! glad Rahul came at the right time
Ridz is so naive, gave in her resignation, without even knowing the real reason.....such a baby!
Rahul & Atul seem to have bonded really well, I mean Atul opening up about Arman's past & same with Rahul, telling about Ridz, wonder when they will look at them togather....
part 22
Boogadhi was funny, no need to ask but I presume that was AR fighting as usual...
The temple scene was very touching, the way you explained everything was good, even a layman can understand, the kalawa, blessing it, doing puja everything was in order, the women have already seem to have bonded
so so his secret is now out, of course, he is a normal guy with feelings, even he wants someone to love him unconditionally, I wish Vibhi wouls have spoken more about our Angel, but Anjali had to come that time, I am waiting for the moment, they get introduced, am sure, both will have a heartache! loved Angie's nagging poor guy, they don't spare him a minute at all, do they???
part 23
Ridz's interveiw at the Marvels, how long I waited for this moment....Ridz helping the old women to cross the road& then helping another person, during his attack was too good, just shows how nice natured girl she is, even though she was getting late, she still helped Omang, & that too not knowing him, the way you described that whole scene was so touching, cos I have Asthma, so can imagine Omang's plight, if there is no one to help, its really difficult & pump does get empty at such times only, I have being in similar situations...
Atul taking interviews & selects Ridz after Omang's word was nicely put, specially, the fact that Omang didn't tell Atul that this girl had helped him, cos he didn't want a biased decesion, nicely done....Rahul pulling Atul's leg was hilarious, specially cos we can picture Pankit acting just like that
now, the moment has come that Arman & Ridz are formally introduced, am sure intially, they will hate each other, all due to Minne's lecture, liked the fact how you slowly got all the family members to know each other
I hope you haven't slept off reading my long comment....do continue, as I am eager to know what happens next.....

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