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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 part as always
yaay they get contracts
loved the way how u show ridz after winning contracts she is so cute
ooh armaan find cute in ridz aww lol
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi amiee,
i am so sorry yar, i could nt type in my comment for epi 30 before, as u know na it diwali so was busy helping mum in making sweets yar. and i just saw ur have updated epi 31 as well. so i will comment on both epi 30 and 31 together i hope u do nt mind. i am sorry once again yar
epi 30
wow armaan is really very brave at age of 19 and helping kabir fly. It was so good to see and even moses is helping armaan & kabir fly. later on even armaan fly help to look after naazneen and kids when kabir was in the jail. atul also strated trusting kabir after he help him in finding out the truth about tt witches. i like the ending part when ridz sitting with driver instead of armaan 😊
Epi 31
see ridz see h well repected is armaan, yar u made me roll on the floor here with this sentence of ur "Miss. Gupta!" she looked up with a jerk as he called her "if you are done with your floor mining can we move to our place? The presentation program is about to start. If you want you can carry on with your research on 'floors' later on".
armaan is very impress by ridz knowledge on her work and he is happy tt she was with him, armaan beta u r falling for ridz (hahaha). finally they won the contract i am so happy just like ridz i want to jump as well.poor ridz can't jump as armaan had stop her i jump on her behalf 😆😆😆. now armman can give a very gd suprise to this workers on diwali. Armaan beta have a gd time with neha 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey aimee
plz keep pming me yaar
im a loyal reader of ur ff
but now since my coll has started it mite take some time to repl7y but ill do that so plz dont forget me
anyways this was a rocking epiu
both feeling for each other wow
upodate soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Aimee
A very Hapy Diwali
Thanks for the PM
Cant believe AR r still at loggerheads, well atleast he admitted tht Riddhima was intelligent and cute, thts a step in the right direction, but who is this Neha chick? and wht is she doing here? I thought his family wud try and set him up with Riddhima. Get them together ASAP dear, really wanna see some cute scenes between them plssssssss
Love Mini
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Posted: 16 years ago

Aimee really missed your updates, after a hectic weekend at the hospital it was so nice to read the next installment. Hope you are fit and healthy! How's the leg?

So sweet of the whole gang to help out Kabir from Omang to Shubu seems like everyone was involved in directing Kabir on the right path and I am glad because of his good behavior he was let out early.

I am loving the AR interactions with every part they are so innocent and sweet, Ridzie is a cutie pie and seems like Armaan thinks so too!! I am glad he did not in any way pressure or comment negatively on Ridz choice of clothes for the meeting and of course they got the contract!!

Ok Whose Neha? Grrr Armi better reject her what is it with everyone they have the perfect girl in front of their eyes yet they can't see

Thanks for the PM will be waiting for the next part and Happy Diwali!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Don't feel dishearten for the lack of comments for the previous part, we all love you!🤗

So this means no more pm's?, I do reply when u send me a pm!😕

OmG, Ami!, I loved how describe the presentation scene, it's definitely not that easy to do so, most probably u have experience!, I knew the marvels will win!

Hehe, totally loved the AR teasing scene of the plate!

Amii! You can't do this!!, Get this NEha chic OUT asap!😡

Btw do introduce Vibhi's GF to his chacu soon! 😆

Beautiful part, will be craving for more, like always.😛

-Natasha

P.S. Congrads on reaching an end of your 1st thread, it was well deserved!, see u in the 2nd thread of 'Mere Apne'👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: b.sandhu

hey u updated fast....holy crap

it's nice to see the AR track progressing and some development of Armaan's feelings..it's okay if you can't update quicker but don't compromise on the quality of the part.. plz PM the next part aswell.
😊

Hi Friend 😊
Yep... and as i said, the sideline story will be there, but now on AR's story will also start ACTUALLY moving. Dont worry, i guess you are the one regular responder, so i will PM you.

Originally posted by: aravi

heyyyyy amieee HAPPPYYY DEEPPAAWWAALIII to u toooooo!!!!!!!! finally AR spoke to each other 4 such a lonnnnggggg tyyymmm!!!!!!! hehe i meant dey together 4 a loonngg tym !!!!!! still armaan just noes to get on ridzy's nerves so vrryyy well yaar!!!!! knowinglyy he irritates her soo much n wen shez fuming wid rage he enjoys himself, doesnt he???????? he fell down frm his chair listening to her squeaking hmmmmm... n he alwaz finds her sooooo cutteeee!!!!!!!!! but dis NEHA AAARRRGGGHHHHHH wat r y planning now ????

luv aravi

Hi Aravi 😊
Thanks dear... Well AR were meant to speak some or the other day... Oh Armaan is just enjoying himself... She is eay to tease 😉... Its just a chair he has fallen from... lets see where and for what else he falls for...😛 Who is Neha? read d next part to find...

Originally posted by: hipreet

amazing part

love all the AR scene............ridz is so cute n armaan so naughty
gosh wonder what will happen with neha.....haha
cont soon

Hi Harpreet 😊
Thanks for the reply dear... Neha? Hmmm... wait for the next part...

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh👍🏼 its really a cool one⭐️ so armaan like her presentation😊😛 and her business knowledge gud😊😛 and he aslo like to irritate her so sweet😊😉 and when he fall from chair its mind blowing😆 i like it soo much😆 and now he has gone to seen a girl plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"ANYBODY CAN LOVE A ROSE BUT IT TAKES A GREAT DEAL TO LOVE A LEAF.....! DON'T LOVE SUMONE WHO IS BEAUTIFUL but LOVE 1 WHO CAN MAKE UR LIFE BEAUTIFUL"

"Har pal ne kaha ek pal se,
Pal bhar ke liye aap mere samne aa jao,
Pal bhar ka saath kuch aisa ho,
Ki har pal tum hi yaad aao"




Hi Nidha 😊
Awww thanks dear. Armaan was bound to fall, after all it was Riddhima 😆. He has gone to meet another girl, but lets see ho is gonna handle it.

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

hey aimee...
aww i loved this part...
atleast AR n can talk to each other without fighting hehe
and the food armaan stole..
LOL...
do cont soon... can't wait to c wat armi does to get rid of neha
thanks for the PM
happy diwali!

Sonia

Hi Sonia 😊
Armaan is always upto something when around Riddhima. He loves doing it, and so am i 😉.
Armaan is smart as you know, the question is how is gonna get out of this new Neha mess???😕
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

hey aimee😊
awesome update..👍🏼...really love the way the story is picking up..😉..
hmmmm.....so armaan loved her presentation huh???😳
thats a good sign....😳...
well i really loved the scene in which he calulates the total profit as 25.38% n helps her.....
their eyes met...😳😳..n he didnt notice that she is the same green-eyed girl he met in the party?????😔.....
loved the way u described riddhima's point of view of seeing him giving the presentation..😉.😉.😉.
the scene when they fight over the plate was so cute.😆.🤣.😆.🤣.😆.awww i loved it!!!!!!!!!
he thinks shes cute like a baby...☺️..
well i guess cupid has started its work on armaan..☺️..☺️..☺️..☺️..
n riddhima is such a darling..😉..the way she wanted to jump out of her seat on hearing the marvels got the project was so cute.😆.😆.😆.😆.😆
n the way she behaved in the office was just like a small kid..🤣...
no wonder her family calls her baby...😆😆....

hmmm....so armaan is meeting neha....he found her beautiful???????😔
hey nobody is more beatiful than riddhima dude!!!!!!😍wake up armaan ur dream girl is ur own ES-PA!!!!!!!!!❤️😍😍
hope he rejects neha.....😍😍😍

on the whole....epi was awesome...👏..a whole epi on AR.....
thanks a lot for ur pm!!!!!🤗🤗🤗

waiting for ur next update.........😃😉🤗

Hi Sunaina 😊
Awww... that is sooo sweet of you. Well they were professional at that time and appreciated each other's profession abilities, so he might havent actually noticed it. But dont worry... bachke kahan jayega un khubsurat aankhon se 😆. So you liked the Food scene, good. i am really relieved. Yes i guess the cupid is playing hide n seak, just started his work.😳
Dont worry Neha is nowhere close to Riddhima. The thing is lets see how Armaan is gonna shoo her away?

Originally posted by: suv.patki

Hey Aimee, wish you a very happy diwali. And a lovely part ... Ridz is all excited and Armaan finding her cute!!! ⭐️ Now thats something. But whats this??? I thought everyone in Armaan's family liked Riddhima ... so why are they not directly setting Armaan and Ridz? I'll feel very sad if Armaan gets hooked to this Neha female 🤢 Thanks for the PM and eagerly waiting to read on!!!

Hi Friend 😊
Thanks dear... Yes his family liked her, but i guess they just going to take a little longer to realize it. Cutely Stupid family...
Neha? wait n watch...

Originally posted by: 12kaler

awesome part loved it armaan is so falling in luv with ridzzz

thanx for pm
update soon
luv your ff
xoxo
gursimer

Hi Gursimer 😊
Yes i guess he is unknowingly. Thanks for the reply.

Originally posted by: dmglovernimisha

hey Aimee!...
first of all A VERY HAPPY DIWALI to you 2!...
may u hv a gr8 time!
then secondly,
omg!....hes finding her cute!
girl i think u shuld jump to AR's love story as soon as possible..
um lovin' it!
n that convo goin on in the conference wuz simply outstanding!
u r amazing!
thanks 4 the Pm...
n hey...
i read ur PM n decided 2 reply right away!...
plz next do PM me..
n if not possible then its ok..
i hv u in my fav list so no probs...
lolzz.....
upd8 ASAP plz!
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha

Hi Nimisha 😊
Oh dont worry, no on things will be completely to bring them along. Filler might be there, but thats just to justify ther characters as well. i cant just abandon them.
About PM... well it does take me time to do so, but i dont mind PMing people who are regularly replying (including you), coz i dont know whether the ones who arent responding are anymore interested in it or not. And i can spend my time to PM those who are supporting me here by spending their precious time to respond here, instead of uneccessarily bothering those who dont have time or you can say not liking the story. So dont worry you are there on the PM list. And thanks again for your support dear.

Originally posted by: princess4120

WOW!! JUST WOW!! The last 2 parts are awesome.. sorry i didnt respond earlier.. i read the other part from a different comp and was not signed into my account.. and totally forgot that i didnt respond.. my bad.. that part was just amazing.. the depth of his relationship with kabir bhai's family.. not only him.. but even atul.. falak was sooo cute.. she wanted to feel armaan chachu herself.. awww... i loved it.. you know we all want to read about AR and all that.. but i have to say.. your creative imagination is AMAZING about EVERY aspect of this ff.. like to be able to describe the relationships.. the situations in such detail.. is very commendable.. the last part about his observation of ridz smile. and all that.. and the presentation and all of that...he accepted it as is... i love her confusion about whether to sit with him or not.. and him looking for her when she didnt..

now about this part.. wow.. full of AR.. :) :) :) heheh.. this was just a perfect part.. loved her comfort with him.. his teasin her and then her being herself.. like getting angry with him and all.. also being all attentive about the presentation and being so smart and impressing mr. mallik.. that was soo cool.. he was all impressed.. with her work.. with her during the presentations.. her smile... her bieng CUTE..
i thought it was so funny .. she was semi jealous about him being with that micro mini skirt.. hehehe.. the food discussion.. hillarious.. he is soo teasing her..
i loved it that he is liking her company.. and all this..
hahaha.. he ended up going to the club.. to meet miss neha.. NO NO NO!! no neha.. only AR hahhaa.. na jaane kab anjali ki tubelight hogi.. ke ridz hai woh ladki.. yaa phir is it going to be mr. mallik himself.. huh!!?!
hey hey.. please please dont think that you are bothering me with ur pm.. and that i am not interested in ur ff.. if that was the case.. i wouldnt check everyday .. to see if u have updated.. or hope that when i log on.. i have a pm aboutthis ff's next part..
i just couldnt comment after the last part.. so wrote about the 2 together.. by the way... you surely compensated ... this part..c ame early.. and full on AR.. so it was just awesome.. hope you update again soon.. will be eagerly waiting for the next part..
thanks for the pm!!!!

Hi Princess 😊
Owww i was missing you dear. Hey i wont stop PMing you. You have been one of the most encouraging person over here, like my many other regular responders. i understand that its sometimes not possible for everyone to respond to every part every day. But i mentioned this thing just coz, there are so many people, who did asked me to PM them and after3-4 times they never responded back again. So i thought they might not be interested anymore.
So you liked Armaan and Atul's relationship with Khans. good.
I wont say that Riddhima was jealous, but she was annoyed for sure, maybe a glint of jealousy will start very soon. And thanks for so much love and support dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi aimee
ur ff is simply amazing .. seriously you pay attention to every little detail and make it sound so real ... ur an awesome writer !!! i've been reading ur ff since yesterday and finally finished it today i loved it !!!
i know it can get hard pming so many people at one go but if u can plz pm me .. i dont want to miss any parts of your FF .
plzz update soon cant wait to see A-R falling for each other
luv
aishah
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sadique137

awesome aimee

this is wht i was waiting for long scenes of AR
he finds her cute and the way he fell of his cair earing the girls squeal was funny when is vibhi going to introduce Riddhima as his GF
how will Armaan escape frm the new ristha? would love to c a get together of vibhi yash and AR
hey dont stop the pms please

Hi Shamla 😊
O i am soooooo happy that i could please you at last. I will try to keep doing so as much as possible. Armaan is finding her cute, that for sure. And he is smart. read the next part to see how he escapes.😃
Dont worry... you are the regular responder, so you will keep getting your PMs. i understand it that sometimes its not possible to reply on time. So i am fine with it. Thankx again dear.

Originally posted by: Robin_M

firstly i would like to wish you a very happy diwali!

now the epi, it was a real treat to read! had so much focus on armaan and riddhima! i really enjoyed it! was nice to see them appreciate each other as professionals! and i must add that you are very smart! the way you described everything about the busissness and presentations was very very good! you obviously know what you are talking about, and this whole things made the situation and plot more real and believable! so i appreciate you adding the details and facts about the buisness, its interesting and adds the right elements! so hats off to you!!!!!!!
and im happy they won the deal, it was so cute seeing ridz reaction!
and armaan is starting to find ehr cute! awww at least hes feeling something! they still have a long way to go!
and i just love the way armaan teases riddhim and how irritated she gets! its a lot of fun!
hmmm wonder how armaan is going to get out of this marriage set up this time! cant wait to see what happens next!
about the pms, its really nice to recieve them, but honestly if its that time consuming then i dont mind if you dont pm me. cuz i come on the ff section anyway daily to see all thats been updated, so i will see your ff if its updated anyway. its great enough that u update, thats all i need! i know life is very busy and i dont want you to spend so much on just pm'ing us. so you can skip me if that makes it easier :)

Hi Robin 😊
Thanks a lot for appreciating the Presentation scene. I am professional too, i guess it helped me here. 😆 I have a scratchy mind which keeps pushing me to maintain all the facts clear in place. Yes being a human being, i definitely make a lot of mistakes, but i try to make everything sound as realitic as possible. But again since its a fiction, so its bound to have imaginary fantasies, and i think i have few of the biggest examples in my FF like - having Kundali stuff, Riddhima meeting everyone coincidently and all liking her too, all these are a combination of something which may sound a little unrealistic and stupid as well. Life isnt that easy. Neither is it so dramatic in reality.
Armaan is finding Riddhima cute, thats true😃. He is smart, so he will find a way out. Thanks again dear.

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha

first of all A VERY HAPPY DIWALI to you 2!...
may u hv a gr8 time!

ur ff is jus awsum
have a safe diwli
n it was cho chweet dat arman has started feeling 4 riddhima

Hi Friend 😊
Welcome to my FF. Thanks a lot for appreciating. I hope to see you here in future as well.

Originally posted by: saridena

hi aimee

thks for the pm dear
thks u atlast exclusive AR scenes
armi is attracted to ridz ha
by her childlike behaviour
they r taking armi to some neha what is that yaar???
update sooooooooooooooooooooon
eagerly waiting foe it
and wish u a happy diwali
luv soumya

Hi Soumya 😊
Aww i owed this one to all of you. Armaan is liking her. He will be getting attracted towards her as well. Soon.😉 Ye he like her childish behaviour. Arey neha ko hum sambhal lenge. Dont worry.

Originally posted by: sneha0601

Hi Aimee... just started to read ur FF and finished it in 3 hours... Its amazing really.... I couldn't stop reading... please continue and if you could let me know (PM) when you update that would be great.... Actually am new to FF's as not been a long time I've joined... I don't really read all FF's because of time, but your concept's mindblowing really...take care
Cheers!!

Hi Friend 😊
Welcome to my FF. Thanks a lot for appreciating my story dear. Sure thing, i will PM you. I am really happy that you found my story to be worth reading. Thanks again. I hope to see you here in future as well.

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