Another Great update Aimee and thank you for clearing out a few things, even though there still seems to be come suspense. Firstly I wanted to say that your diction of Shudh hindi and urdu is simply mind blowing great job!!
The Armi-Ridz scene was my favorite especially the Ri-ddhi-ma part too cute I am glad that Ridz can bring a smile to Armi's face and that they share a cute nokh-jokh waali relationship. Aur kitna intezaar karwao gi yaar I am waiting anxiously for the sparks to fly, well you did give a little hint of Armi feeling something when Ridz walked away smiling.
Armaan is such a nice guy to help out Kabir Khan even at the tender age of 19, poor guy had to grow up so fast I hope him and Ridz can fall for each other soon so Ridz can be there for him and make him feel better. Thanks again for the PM Aimee hope you update the next part soon as you said.
I always tell myself that I will not write so much but every time I end up writing you an essay worth of comments which mostly consist of my feelings, oh well I guess better luch next time.
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