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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome dude!!!!!!!!!! will u pleeeeeeeeeeeez pm when u update?
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oh, did u ask a question...i can only find the one about the flashbacks? but some people seemed to have answered something about love....

well, i think love can be the strongest force on earth if channelled properly. i have seen people change in love, i have seen people accept and adjust with what they thought they never could for love, people literally move mountains, cross seas and reach out to be with the one they love....not that being together is always perfect, but those who truly love, understand that being together doesnt always mean being in perfect agreement or even having a perfectly smooth ride all the time. rather it means accepting each other for better or for worse, with all of each other's faults and virtues, through thick and thin, through adversity and happiness, even through opposition and strife. to understand the worth of love and to be together, and to be ready to do anything to keep together...that is what love is about. and both people have to understand and work towards that. it cant be one-sided. its a feeling that no matter what is going wrong while u r together, if u were apart, life would just not be worth it. so its better to stay together and get the joy that only this one person can give you.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha10

Cool..... Luved it.. - thanks.😊😊😊Armaan already falling for her.. thts cute.,.....Plzz continue soon...😊😊😊😊😊😊

Originally posted by: nancy_009

lovely part - thanks. update soon

Originally posted by: *tiny*

awesome dude!!!!!!!!!! - thanks😊will u pleeeeeeeeeeeez pm when u update? - ya, sure

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *tiny*

oh, did u ask a question...i can only find the one about the flashbacks? but some people seemed to have answered something about love.... - ya, i asked 2 questions. but i removed my questions once everyone answered it. my question was - is it difficult to love or is is difficult to maintain love? and why?

well, i think love can be the strongest force on earth if channelled properly. i have seen people change in love, i have seen people accept and adjust with what they thought they never could for love, people literally move mountains, cross seas and reach out to be with the one they love.... - is it so? then i must say u r fortunate to see such people.😃😃😃. i do believe in love. i did see love marriages. but i never saw people changing in love.

not that being together is always perfect, but those who truly love, understand that being together doesnt always mean being in perfect agreement or even having a perfectly smooth ride all the time. rather it means accepting each other for better or for worse, with all of each other's faults and virtues, through thick and thin, through adversity and happiness, even through opposition and strife. to understand the worth of love and to be together, and to be ready to do anything to keep together...that is what love is about. and both people have to understand and work towards that. it cant be one-sided. its a feeling that no matter what is going wrong while u r together, if u were apart, life would just not be worth it. so its better to stay together and get the joy that only this one person can give you.

thanks for your peply. u r right. being in love is the most wonderful thing one can experience. can i ask u one question. do u believe in love at 1st site or love in a span of few days?? i dont believe it. you can answer it only if u wish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry, sorry, sorry. I am very very sorry for the late update. I was lazy to update. I will update soon from next time😊. I hope u like this update.😕 Plz leave your honest comments. Plz forgive me for my spelling mistakes and my bad hindi.😭😭😭

PART 3
Raj was following Armaan to steel his bike, but after some time Armaan was out of site and he lost his way.

Raj to himself – are ye bike wala kaha chalagaya?? Ab mai usko kaha dhoondu??😕 Mujhe kisibhi tarah us bike ko churana he hi. chal raj pehele ek chai hojaye. Baad me sochenge ki aage kaya karna. (Raj stopped near a tea stall. He decided to have tea and then start searching for Armaan.)

In the tea stall.

Raj : bhayya ek tea dena.

P : 2 min. tum vaha pe bito.

Raj sits on a bench near the tea stall. He was watching all the people around that place. After 2 min

Person : tea lelo.

Raj : he takes the tea, pays money and sits on the bench, drinking tea.

Raj spots a purse at a little distance from the bench. He goes near the purse and looks around the place to see if any one was watching him. Finally satisfied that no one saw him, he took the purse.😊😊😊 He came back and sat on the bench and again started drinking tea.

Raj to himself : are raj, aaj to tere kismet bahut hi acha hi. subah subah bina chori kiye hi purse milgaya aur ab to bike bhi milne vali hi.😃

He was eager to open the purse and see what is there in the purse. He opens the purse. There was no money in the purse.😡 He searched the whole purse but couldn't find a penny.😡 He found a letter inside the purse.

Raj to himself : ye bekaar ki purse kiski hi. ek pisa bhi nahi hi.😡 Bina pise ki purse kyu hote hi?? Ab is letter me kya hi?? mai ye kise padhu?? Mujhe to panda nahi aata. Ab kya karu?? 😕😕

He sees a person reading news paper. He decides to go and ask that person to read the letter for him. He goes near that person and asks him to read the letter for him.

P : ye letter kya hi??

Raj : kuch bhi hi. Usse tumhe kya matlab. Chup chap letter padh ke sunao.

The person reads the letter and is shocked.😲

P : ye letter tumhe kaha mili?

Raj : (irritated with his questions) tuko padhna aata hi ki nahi?? Kyu mera dimak khata hi tu?? Chup chap padh, varna pata nahi mai kya karunga.

Person : 😆😆😆controls his laughter and reads the letter to raj.

Lets see what is written in the letter.

This letter is in the name of god. It is written to make everyone know the power of god. Blabh bhabh bhabh……

Who ever gets this letter has to write 1000 copies of this letter and distribute them within 10 days. Otherwise he will start having lot of problems in his life. Don't ignore it. if u ignore the concequences will be very bad. God will make u suffer severely. (dont take this seriously, i included the letter concept just for fun)

(NOTE : I DON'T BELIEVE IN THIS KIND OF LETTERS AND I DON'T WANT ANY OF U TO BELIEVE IT. I WANT TO TELL U THAT ALL THESE LETTERS ARE FAKE. WE SHOULD NEVER ENCOURAGE SUCH THINGS. I GOT MANY MAILS AND MESSAGES OF THIS KIND AND EVEN WORSER BUT I NEVER SENT THEM TO ANY ONE. AND I AM VERY MUCH FINE. I KNOW MANY PEOPLE WHO BELIEVE IN SUCH THINGS, SO I AM TELLING U THIS. ALL I WANT TO SAY IS DON'T BELIEVE IN SUCH MAILS OR SMS. SORRY IF I BUGGED U ALL. I JUST WROTE GOD, BUT I DIDN'T MENSION ANY NAME. I DID THIS INORDER NOT TO OFFEND ANYONE.)

Raj was shocked after knowing what was written in the letter.

P : laughing.😆😆

Raj leaves from there. He thinks – ye sab mere saath hi kyu hota hi. mujhe in sab se kitana dar hi. ye sab mujhko hi kyu milte??😕😕 Ab mai inka kya karu. Kya raj purse churane chale to ye sab gadbad hogaya. Ab bike churare keliya chale. Pata nahi kya hoga. 😕😕😔

Mera kismet hi kharab hi.😔😔😔 Ab to bike wala bhi miss hogaya.😔 Me ek aakhri baar use dhoondne ki kosish karta hoon. Bhagvaan ji, bas aap mujhe is bike churane me madat kijiye na. Mera life set hojaye ga. Bhagvaan ji, aap mujhe is me madat karenge to hum pise 50-50 karlenge. Aur is letter ko bhool jayiye na. jab mujhe pise miljayenge, tum mai letters likh ke sab ko dunga.

Raj again starts his search for bike wala (Armaan)😆😆

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Now let's see what Armaan is doing.

Armaan sees children's cultural programs going on. The cultural program was organized for the fund rising of the orphan children. Armaan immediately remembers Ridhima seeing orphan children. He decides to watch the program and donate to the orphanage. He enters the auditorium and sits at a corner seat. Seeing the children dancing, he remembers his 2nd meeting with Ridhima.😊

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'''' Flash Back '''''

Armaan and Rahul were supposed to attend a cultural program which was organized to raise funds for the small children suffering from cancer. Armaan's dad was invited but he was busy. So he sent Armaan and Rahul on his behalf to attend the program and donate money.

Armaan : why did dad ask us to come here😡. I just hate coming to this kind of programs. You know me right. Why did u agree to dad that you will bring me here??😡😡

Rahul : relax Armaan, once the minister comes you can give the cheque to him and leave. We don't need to stay till the entire program.

Armaan : ya, and when will the minister come??😡 At the end of the program?? If he doesn't come in 20 min, I am going to leave. Let dad come and take care of all this.

Rahul : ok, ok. For now sit and watch the program. However we already came right??

Armaan : you want me to watch this stupid classical dance?? Forget it. I am sleeping. 🥱🥱 Wake me up when that minister comes.

After 5 min,

Voice : now u r going to see a classical dance by Dr.Ridhima who is also the organizer of this show.

We see Ridhima dancing. Rahul wakes up Armaan.

Armaan : what??😡

Rahul : see. That doctor who did dressing for u on that day is dancing. Come on wake up and see.

Armaan : sees Ridhima and remembers their first meeting. Though he was not interested in classical dances, he felt that Ridhima's dance was mesmerizing. He couldn't take his eyes off her.😊 He felt like seeing her😊😊😊. He came to this world hearing the claps from the audiences. He felt a bit embarrassed that he was unaware of his surroundings. 😳😳😳

The minister didn't come even after that dance. He came after an hour. But Armaan didn't bother about him anymore. Neither did he want to leave from there. Rahul was surprised to see that Armaan was not complaining to leave.

Rahul : Armaan, the minister came. We can give him the cheque and leave.

Armaan : but I don't want to leave now. We will wait till the end of the program.

Rahul : Armaan, are u ok? It was u who wanted to leave early. Now why are u speaking this way?

Armaan : shows Ridhima. He says that he wants to talk with her.

Rahul : oh! So this is the matter!! She doesn't look your type. I don't think she will fall for your charms.

Armaan : no one can resist me. I will make her fall in love with me within 10 days. Bet???😉

Rahul : bet!!😉

The program was over. The minister praises Ridhima for services towards children. Ridhima says that it is her duty as a doctor to take care of patients. He gives some donation. He assures Ridhima that he would do any help she requires. And now it was Armaan's turn. Armaan comes to the stage.

Armaan to Ridhima : hi, I am Armaan.

Ridhima : I am Ridhima.

Armaan : You dance very well.

Ridhima : thank you.

Armaan : and you are really beautiful.

Ridhima : smiles😊. Thanks.

Armaan : gives a check of 25lakhs. Ridhima, if u are free now, would u mind having a cup of coffee with me?

Ridhima : umm sure.

Armaan, Ridhima were having coffee.

Armaan : do you believe in love at first site??

Ridhima : shocked😲. Stops drinking coffee.

Armaan : may be not first site. Love at second site??

Ridhima : coughs😕😕

Armaan : its ok. Have some water. He controls his laughter seeing Ridhima's reaction.😆😆

Armaan : ok, now I don't like to drag things. I am a very strait forward person. I want to say u something. I LOVE YOU.

Ridhima : she almost choked drinking water.😲😲

Armaan : grins at her reactions. It's ok. You don't need to answer immediately. At first we can be friends. Later you can start loving me.

Ridhima : still in shock.😲😲

'''' Flash Back Ends'''''

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He could still remember the expression on Ridhima's face when he first told her that he loved her. That time he didn't tell it from his heart. He didn't love her then. May be he loved her but didn't recognize his love. But now?? He loved her more than anyone else in the world. He was ready to do anything to get her back into his life. He felt himself very lonely without Ridhima. His love. His life was missing.😭
He came back to the present hearing the claps. He met the person who was running the orphanage and gave him some donation for his orphanage. He left the auditorium😔.
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Let's see where raj is.

Raj could finally spot Armaan's bike near the auditorium.

Bhagwan ji ne mere baat sunli. Mujhe bike milgaya. Thank u bhagwan ji. 😃😃😃

He understood that the person must have gone to watch the cultural programs. So he decided to take the bike and leave before the person (Armaan) comes. He tries to unlock the bike, but he couldn't do so. He was still trying to unlock, he hears 2 children fighting. He goes near them and tries to help the children. There were 2 boys. 1 boy had ice-cream and other boy had balloon in his hand.

Raj : tum dono kyu ladrahe ho?? Tumko kya chahiye??

Boy (B1-he has ice-cream) : mujhe balloon chahiye.

Boy (B2-he has balloon in his hand): mujhe iske ice-cream chahiye.

Raj : to isme kya problem hi.

Raj to boy1 : tum use ice-cream dedo aur balloon lelo.

B1 : nahi. Mujhe ice-cream aur balloon dono chahiye.

Raj gets one idea. He takes ice-cream from boy1 and eats it off. Then he takes balloon from the boy(B2) hits it and makes the balloon to burst.

Raj : ab tum dono ladna band karo. Na rahi ice-cream aur balloon, na hoga koi jhagada.😆 Hahaha…..

Boy (B2) starts crying – tumne mera balloon to mardala. 😭

B1 also starts crying. – tumne mera icecream khaliya.😭

B1 - 😭😭 mujhe mera ice-cream wapas dedo😭😭😭
B2 - aur mujhe mera balloon dedo 😭😭😭
They start crying soo loudly that their parents come. They start scolding raj.

P1 : tumko sharam nahi aati😡😡. Bacho se ice-cream aur balloon lete hue. Tum to itne bade ho. Gadhe jise dhikte ho magar, Kuch kaam ki nahi ho😡😡. blabh blabh bhah….(continuously shouts on raj.😡😡 Poor raj closes his ears unable to hear any more. )

Raj thinks : aaj mera din hi kharab hi. mujhese koi bhi kaam nahi ho raha hi.

He sees Armaan coming out of the auditorium and starting his bike. Raj bahut muskil se us boys ki parents ka picha chudakar bhag jata hi. He starts following Armaan.

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Thanks for reading. I think it was boring. Sorry if I bored u.
Edited by sonia-kashian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi!!!!!!

nice update yaar!!!!!

raj epi is funny n ammy epi is cuteeeeeeeee!!!!!!

Ar scene in program n ammy expressing his love is simply superb n funny!!!!!!

n once again the letter scene is complete funny!!!!!!

n i agree with ur note... i too don't believe such stuff!!!!!!!!!

n overall this part is soo nice!!!!!!

update the other ASAP!!!!!!!

can't wait 2 read the other!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi sonia

thks for the pm dear

it was lovely

well written

but every scene is cut and paste

plzz yaar as i already saw the movie it wil be boring for me to read it

try to change a little bit of scenes

donot think that ur ff is not nice it is wonderul

update sooooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Hi!!!!!!

nice update yaar!!!!! - thank u soo much😊😊

raj epi is funny n ammy epi is cuteeeeeeeee!!!!!!

Ar scene in program n ammy expressing his love is simply superb n funny!!!!!!

n once again the letter scene is complete funny!!!!!!

n i agree with ur note... i too don't believe such stuff!!!!!!!!!

n overall this part is soo nice!!!!!!

update the other ASAP!!!!!!!

can't wait 2 read the other!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sony_123



thanks for your peply. u r right. being in love is the most wonderful thing one can experience. can i ask u one question. do u believe in love at 1st site or love in a span of few days?? i dont believe it. you can answer it only if u wish



hey sonia

no, yaar..i didnt mean to say that people change there basic character in love. but yes, they do become much more flexible, much more willing to accept and adjust, and much more well, tolerant towards an opposing way of thinking. but of course, the basic underlying philosophies and beliefs have to be the same. eg if one person thinks honesty is the highest priority and the other thinks its totally not, then its not going to be very easy. but a lot of things can be adjusted and tolerated...

and yes, first sight love is a misnomer. i think it is possible to feel attraction, a certain pull, or interest or even a premonition that u r meant to be together or that you might fall in love with this person or this is THE person. but that bond exists even if u havent met the person. but i dont think that it is possible to realize love at first sight. coz love is a lot of things....unless in the first meeting itself someone does something that has to make you fall in love. i dont know if i am making sense, but even if we fall in love at first sight deep inside, we will never allow ourselves to do that coz love is also about thinking and understanding and doubting our own reactions.

and yeah, i dont think good marriages have anything to do with being love marriage or arranged. a lot of love marriages are not really based on love but on other things, so better to call them just 'not arranged by parents' and a lot of arranged marriages have a lot of love. but yes, i have seen true love in relationships, i have seen people willing to bend backwards to stay with the person they love and face every adversity for that and i have seen people make it last for years. and not just one couple. of course, i dont say this from first hand knowledge ...lol...but this is my obervation and my belief at this stage of life.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: saridena

hi sonia

thks for the pm dear

it was lovely

well written

but every scene is cut and paste - is it so???😕😕😔
i changed almost all scenes. i kept that dance scene, bet because that is the most important part of the story and my FF has the same concept. other than that what else is copied??😕😕😕 raj part was not there in the movie right??😔

plzz yaar as i already saw the movie it wil be boring for me to read it - i will try to write it beter next time. thanks for giving ur honest comments😊😊

try to change a little bit of scenes - i thought i changed the scenes😭😭😭

donot think that ur ff is not nice it is wonderul - thank u😊

update sooooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

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