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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

nice start..very interesting..👏do continue soon..😊

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meghap90

@meghap90

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#12

great concept!! very different from the usual.... cant wait for the next part... continue soon and please pm me thanks!!!

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

nice concept

quite different

cont soon

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Yamini

@yamnovbloom

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

wow mast concept yaar can't wait continue soon and Pm me

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purplelolo

@purplelolo

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

CHAPTER [1]

I never said love was a commodity .To me love is everything.Not particularly love of your life being the opposite gender and wanting-to-marry-each other love , but plain unmitigated love.Love is never limited to only "that: person love is happiness its passion .It is a feeling an emotion one feels towards their parents their family and dear ones.Love is the sound of pitter patter on the window sill in the season of monsoon, love is watching a baby laugh , love is helping an elderly love is simply everything in the world one just has to feel it and realize it.That love obviously does include "that love" the love us humans are always hungry for and in in that hunger we fail to recognize the cherubic love.

But I am not saying that it is something to be ashamed of because it is ever so natural to feel that way, because that person would be you soulmate.Your better half, the other bread of the sandwich and salt in the food of your life.That one person who you would share your inner most feelings with.Who you would show all your fears and tears to.The one who you would love like you havent loved before.

Pleased with the journal entry,wrapping her insides in a blanket of warm pride and delight she secured the wooden notebook inside her burgundy-colored drawer. Switching off the white seashell lamp sat up straight on her bed ,kept still for a few long moments.Reveling the glow inside her.she smiled and lay down to start a bright new day .

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How was it??... replies ... ill be waiting for them
take care
adieu
hug

Edited by purplelolo - 14 years ago

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sehar

@sweet honey

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

hy...interseting part...hmm so is dat kripa riting in the joournal....cont soon

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

nice start

i guess kripa must have written it

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

amazing part

i really liked the way u described love

i think the girl might be kripa

👏

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 17 years ago

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~suzie~

@~suzie~

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Hey Hania, just read the intro and chapter 1... - must wonderful plot and the way you captured the different types so to say of love was brilliant. Know I just want to know why the perfect girl and perfect boy don't want to marry each other hmm.

I'm guessing this was Kripa's journal entry, she appears to love life like no other, but will life love her back I wonder 😳