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prerna1 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was so nice
waiting for Raj Niana meeting
plz continue soon
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

Yaar mai kya kahoon mujhe accha nahi lag raha hai yaar.

Mr. Bajaj waala ye turn story ka mujhe bilkul bhi nahi pasand aa raha hai.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey yaar srry for the l8 reply didnt noe u updated
👏👏👏omg great twist in the story👏👏👏
😲😲😲intresting mr.bajaj and kaja(naina) are married and they have son😲😲😲
😃😃😃that is clearly not possible cause rohan is 5 and naina accident was 5 years ago so is probably not naina son😃😃😃
😊😊😊i dun think i can guess whats gonna happen next though i am sure that naina and mr. bajaj r not married😊😊😊
😊😊😊w8ing to see raj's reaction when he sees naina😊😊😊
👏👏👏cont. soon plz oh yea i read ur dil ka kya kusur ff and it is simpaly amazing so i would want u to cont. soon👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

mr bajaj ghar ate ha

n-aap aa gaye
mr bajaj-hmm
rohan-papa mere car
mr bajaj-yeh lijie aapke car
rohan-thank u papa
n-aap bohot khush nazar aa rahe ha ajj
mr bajaj-ha main aaj bohot khush hu aaj main mr r se mila
n-mr r
mr bajaj-ha mainne bataya tha na ke hum saath main ek project kar rahe ha
n-hmm
mr bajaj-kajal mr r bohot aache insan ha
n-oh
next day
mr bajaj-ok kajal main office jaa raha hu
n-mr bajaj aaj saturday ha
mr bajaj-ha toh
n-mr bajaj aaj aapko karan aur mihika ko hostel se laana ha
mr bajaj-ha kajaal main toh bhul he gaa sach agar tum nahin hote toh kya hota
n-thik ha
mr bajaj office jaate ha
n karan aur mihika ka ke liye khana bana rahe ha
rohan-mama
n-ha beta
rohan-karan bhaiya aur mihika didi kab aayenge
n-shayam ko beta
n the evening
mr bajaj karan aur mihika ke school jaate ha
mr bajaj-karan mihika
karan-dad
mihika-dad
mr bajaj-chalo beta tumhare mama tumhara intezar kar rahe ha
karan-mama
mihika-mama
n hugs karan and mihika
n-kaise ho tum dono
karan-hum thik ha mama
n-karan mihika jao beta jaake fresh ho jao main khanna lagate hu
karan-ok mama
n-karan mihika aao dinner kar lo
mihika-hi rohan
rohan-hi mihika didi
mr bajaj-karan tumhare parai kaisa chal raha ha
karan-nice dad
mr bajaj-karan is bar tumhare board exam ha
karan-ha dad
mr bajaj-karan tumhare test ke result aache nahin ha
karan-dad woh
mr bajaj-karan tum parai main bilkul bhi dhaan nahin dete
n-off aap bhi na khanne dihiye
mr bajaj-good night beta
n-suniye
mr bajaj-ha kajal
n-monday ko karan ka birthday ha
mr bajaj-hmm
n-toh party toh hoga na
mr bajaj-ha kajaal tum party ke taiyar kar lena
n-jee
n party ke taiyar kar rahe ha
n-yeh kya aap aaj bhi office jaa rahe ha
mr bajaj-ha kajaal woh office main
n-off aap aur aapka office hamesha ready agar ek din nahin jayenge toh kya hoga
mr bajaj-kaajal main jaldi chala aayunga
n-thik ha
mr bajaj office jaata ha
r-mr bajaj
mr bajaj-are mr r aaye
r-mr bajaj woh
mr bajaj-ha
r-kya hua mr bajaj
mr bajaj-woh aaj mujhe jaldi jaana ha
r-kun
mr bajaj-mere bete ka birthday ha
r-oh
mr bajaj-aap bhi aayega party main
r-main
mr bajaj-plz mr r aap zarur aayega hume bohot khushi hoge
r-thik ha
mr bajaj ghar aate ha
n-aap aa gaye
mr bajaj-hmm
n-jae aap fresh ho jaye
sab gests aana suru ho gaye
karan aur mihika aapne friends ke saath busy ha
mr bajaj guests ke sath baate kar rahe ha
r aata ha
r-mr bajaj
mr bajaj-are mr r aaye thanks for coming
mr bajaj-karan
karan-jee dad
mr bajaj-mr r my son karan
r-happy birthday karan
karan-thanks
mr bajaj -aae
karan cake cutne jaata ha
karan ruk jaata ha
guys-hey karan kya hua yaar
karan-mama
n comes
r is shocked to see n
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Posted: 16 years ago

nice but Mr. Bajaj ko hatao Raj aur Naina k beech se.

update soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!
Rohan car paake kitna khush ho jata hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Mr.Bajaj ke do bacche hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Karan ke board exams honewaale hai aur dono hostel mein padhte hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yeh dono toh Rohan se bahut bade hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Yehi dono Mr.Bajaj ke baache hai aur Rohan Raj ka beta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Yen dono Kajal ko mom mante hai magar woh hai nahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Karan ka birthday hai aur Mr.Bajaj ko ush din bhi office jana hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
Raj party mein aata hai and finally he sees Naina!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj toh shock ho jata hai!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲
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Posted: 16 years ago
Grt yaar👏👏👏
finaly raj sees naina😃😃😃
old old r these other 2 kids?😕😕😕
plz cont soon👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

karan cake cutta ha

karan-mama yeh first piece aapke liye

n-happy birthday beta

karan aapne friends ke saath dance karne lagta ha

mr bajaj-kajaal

n-jee

mr bajaj-aao tumhe kisi se milane ha

n-jee

mr bajaj-mr r eh ha mere patni kajaal

mr bajaj-kajaal yeh ha mr r

r -hello mrs bajaj

n-hello

karan-mama dad plz come and dance
mr bajaj aur n dance kar rahe ha
r sharab pi raha ha aur mr bajaj aur n ko dekh raha ha
after the party
sab guests aapne ghar jaate ha
r fully drunk
mr bajaj-mr r aj aap ahaan rk jae
mr bajaj-kaka mr r ko room main leke jaye
next day
mr bajaj office jaata ha
karan aur mihika hostel jaate ha
rohan-mama
n-ha
rohan-woh uncle ko ka hua ha
n-mujhe nahin pata
rohan-mama main pucchu unse
n-koi zarurat nahin ha
rohan dheere se r ke room main jaata ha
r ke body se abhi bhi sharab ke bu aa raha ha r so raha ha
rohan r ko dekh raha ha
r aapne akhen kholta ha
rohan jaake curtains ke picche chup jaata ha
r uthta ha
r rohan ko pass bulata ha
rohan aata ha
r-aapka naam kya ha
rohan-rohan
r-aacha
rohan-aapka nam kya ha
r-mera naam bhi rohan ha
rohan starts laughing
r-are aap toh has rahe ha sach mera naam bhi rohan ha
n-rohan
rohan-are mama bula rahe ha main jaa raha hu
r fresh up hoke neeche aata ha
rohan-are uncle aaye
n-r aur rohan ko lanch serve karte ha
r aapne haath se n ke waist par rub karta ha
n looks at r
n-rohan chalo room main
n rohan ko leke room main jaate ha
n the evening
mr bajaj delhi jaate ha
ghar main sirf n rohan ha
after 2 days
rohan school jaata ha
n rohan ko school se laane jaate ha
n-guard rohan
guard-rohan baba toh chale gae
n-kya kis se saath
guard-r sir ke saath
n ghar aate ha
n bohot pareshan ha shayam ko rohan r ke saath aata ha
n-rohan kaha gae the tum
r-rohan mere saath gaya the mrs bajaj
n hgs rohan
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Posted: 16 years ago
sach kahoon mujhe is story ka koi bhi point samajh hi nahi aa raha hai khair it's ur fic.
update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

that was good but Raj ka itna thanda response Naina ko dekhke thats strange

plz continue soon

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