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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#761

kitna sweet precap tha, Vyom ko ehsaas ho gaya ki vo Naina se pyaar karne laga hai.

ab jaldi se aage likh detail.

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#762

abb jaldi se iss interesting precap ko updt kar dijiye.......

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#763

nice precap yaar,

par ab ye batane k kasht karengi ki update kab hoga fic?

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#764

ab aap hume ye bataye ki is ka update kab aayega?

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Star

@starasdf

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Posted: 15 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

thanks that u r still replying on RN fics 😆 😆 😆

lol dun worry i do remember you guyz i noe it must be annoying i pop in n out but dun worry i will remember u guyzz

I have to update ma fic but i have nooo time n i rite now i feel the story is messed up a bit so i am think i will one other ff i have on hold and type in a new fresh story and start posting it i dunno yet but wat do u thinkk?

lol srry for dumping my problems on u but it would be nice if u give advice as a writter :)

n about the promo

Aww thier love story is moving forward and i am still wondering abt Raj...lol

Edited by starasdf - 15 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#766

Time for update,

Dear friends,

Mujhe pata hai ki aap sab ne pata nahi kitna patience rakh k is fic k update ka wait kiya hai. To ab mai jyada time nahi lete hue is ko update karne jaa rahi hoon kyounki mera mood aaj is ko update karne ka hai.

Aage kab karoongi keh nahi sakti.

Thanks and love u all.

Part 22:-

Karan stopped doing it. He made a sad face n said, "Pls yaar ab mujh se ye mat kehna ki Shreya mujhe pasand nahi karti hai aur tu us ko pasand karne laga hai. Kyoun ki tu jaanta hai agar aisa hua to mere dost mai jee nahi paaonga. Tujhe meri dosti ka vaasta dost." Karan said all this dramatically.

"Oho yaar yahan mai pareshaan hoon aur tujhe mazak lag raha hai." Vyom was finally irritated.

Ab Karan ko laga ki situation samajhne me us se galti hue hai, "Kya hua yaar?" he asked.

"Yaar pata nahi kyoun mera dimaag mera saath nahi de raha hai aur mujhe kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai ki mere saath kya ho raha hai." He was unable to think n understand.

"Mujhe bata hua kya hai?" Karan insisted again.

"Yaar mujhe Naina me aisa kuch lagta hai jo mujhe us ki or keehchta hai aur mai nahi samajh pata hoon vo kya hai? Jab se us ko pehli baar dekha hai mujhe aisa lagne laga hai vo koi khaas insaan hai jo mere dil k bahut kareeb hai. Mera dil kehta hai vo apni hai aur mera dimaag yaad nahi kar paa raha hai ki aisa kyoun hai?" he was now in tears.

Karan knew somewhere what he wants to say but he was unable to understand the rest.

"Mujhe ye sab yahan tak ki Alekh, Huda ye sab aise lagte hain jaise mai in ko barson se jaanta hoon par yaad kuch nahi aata mujhe, kyoun?" ab us ka dard badta jaa raha tha.

"Pyaar karta hai Naina se tu?" Karan asked directly.

Karan k is direct se sawaal se Vyom kuch had tak shock hua but he knew that kabhi na kabhi us ko is sawaal ka saamna karna hi hoga.

"Pata nahi Karan mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai." He cursed himself.

"Tu jyada jor mat daal apne dimaag par kyounki mujhe lagta ?? nahi lagta nahi hai, I am shure that u love her." Karan tried to made him relax.

"Par kaise yaar? Tujhe lagta hai Naina kabhi bhi Captain Rajveer ko bhula k kisi aur ko pyaar kar paayegi." He asked in confused way.

"Tu rehne de tujh se kuch nahi hoga mujhe hi kuch karna hoga." Karan relaxed him.

"Par mujhe kyoun lag raha hai ki agar mai aisa karta hoon to mai kahin Naina ko khod na doon." Pehli baar Vyom k face par dar dikh raha tha.

"Kya yaar ek Army ka Captain ho kar tu ek ladki se darta hai. Sharm aani chahiye tujhe." Karan teased her.

"Par kya vo mujhe accept karegi?" abhi bhi Vyom k dimaag me ye sawaal chal raha tha.

"Tujhe bus ek kaam karma hai us ko apne pyaar ka ehsaas dila aur ye dikha ki us ko bhi apni zindagi me ab aage badhna chahiye kab tak vo aise karegi? Us ka hak hai tera pyaar bus ko ye ehsaas karane ki jaroorat hai aur kuch nahi." Karan ne Vyom ko samjhaya.

"Tu mera saath dega na?" Vyom asked him.

"Mere dost mai humesha tere saath hoon. Bus kar ab chal ready hona hai ya nahi?" aur sab ready hone lage.

Soon they all started getting ready for barat when a loud noise is heard of Dhol.

"Ye kaun hai yaar jo is waqt bhi chaloo hai yahan?" Karan said.

"Bhai hum ko bahut pasand hai ye dhol aur dhol waale ka song." Shreya winked Naina because he was Vyom who was on dhol.

Naina smiled only n didn't say anything. Vyom was looking extremely handsome on his cream sherwaani n maroon stole.

"Oye chalte hain hum sab bhi na join karte hain in ko." Karan said n all of them rushed to join Vyom for another dance.

Vyom:- Dholak Mein Taal Hai Paayal Mein Chan Chan
Dholak Mein Taal Hai Paayal Mein Chan Chan
Ghoonghat Mein Gori Hai Sehre Mein Saajan
Jahan Bhi Yeh Jaayen Bahaare Hi Chaaayen
Yeh Khushiyaan Hi Paayen Mere Dil Ne Duayen Di Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai

Vyom n the rest of the gang were started dancing at this song when Huda too joined them who was just watching them all firstly.

Huda:-Dholak Mein Taal Hai Paayal Mein Chan Chan
Ghoonghat Mein Gori Hai Sehre Mein Saajan
Jahan Bhi Yeh Jaayen Bahaare Hi Chaaayen
Yeh Khushiyaan Hi Paayen Mere Dil Ne Duayen Di Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai

This was time for Alekh n Ali to join both of the guys.The dhol's tunes were getting louder and it was creating a magic in people or v can say the excitement to dance more.

Alekh:-Pyaar Mila Preet Mili Mere Yaar Ko
Badi Pyaari Jeet Mili Mere Yaar Ko
Pyaar Mila Preet Mili Mere Yaar Ko
Badi Pyaari Jeet Mili Mere Yaar Ko

Ali: - Khush Hai Jo Dil Maine Mehfil
Khush Hai Jo Dil Maine Mehfil
Jeeto Se Saja Di Hai

They brought Naina, Shreya and Pooja with them. Neelu couldn't dance much so she was just hopping after regular intervals.

All in chorous:-Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai

Huda was unable to avoid the look which was given by Vyom to Naina continuously. Naina was also feeling something very different in Vyom today.

Yudi:-Haar Nahin Jeet Nahin Yahan Pyaar Hai
Jis Main Haar Jeet Ho Woh Kahan Pyaar Hai
Haar Nahin Jeet Nahin Yahan Pyaar Hai
Jis Main Haar Jeet Ho Woh Kahan Pyaar Hai

This was Yudi who was trying his best to control the desire of dance but when he failed he also joined them.

Vyom to Huda:-Lag Ja Gaale Yaar Mere
Lag Ja Gaale Yaar Mere,-2

Maine Dil Se Sada Di Hai

Huda smiled at his friendly call n both hugged each other to which two ppl smiled broadly Naina n Alekh.

Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai

Here in Shalu's house:-

Saathi Sakhiyaan Bachpan Ka Yeh Angna
Gudiya Jule Koyi Bhi To Hoga Sang Na
Chupaungi Aasoon Kaise Bege Ge Kangna
Saathi Sakhiyaan Bachpan Ka Yeh Angna
Gudiya Jule Koyi Bhi To Hoga Sang Na
Chupaungi Aasoon Kaise Bege Ge Kangna
Saathi Sakhiyaan Re...........

Anvesha n her mom realized a pain in her voice of missing her parents home after marriage so Anvesha tried to change the mood.

Saathi Sun Le Bole Jo Yeh Angna
Yeh Mann Jeevan Pyaar Ke Hi Rang Main Rang Na
Has Degi Teri Chudi Khankegi Kangna
Saathi Sun Le Re

At last all gals circled Shalu n started dancing the same song.

Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai
Mere Yaar Ki Shaadi Hai

And at last all gathered in a big circle in centre Yudi and Mr. n Mrs. Sahini joined them too.

When the song finished Naina called Vyom.

"Haan Naina jee boliye." He asked naughtily.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#767

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Vyom pareshan hai and Karan is being dramatic and talking about Shreya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Vyom ka dil kehta hai ke Naina uski apni hai magar uska dimaag yaad nahi kar paa raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Usse lagta hai ke woh Aalekh, Huda aur baaki sab ko woh barson se jaanta hai par usse yaad kuch nahi aata hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

I think Raj had lost his memory and became Vyom!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Karan directly asked Vyom ke woh Naina se pyaar karta hai na!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Vyom is confused and is not able to understand his feelings about Naina!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

He is in love with Naina but he thinks Naina will never forget her love for Raj!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is afraid that if he confesses his feelings to her then he will lose her!!!

Karan Vyom ko samjhata hai ke usse bas Naina ko apne pyaar ka ehsaas dilana hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Usse yeh dikhana hai ke usko bhi apni zindagi mein aage badhna chahiye!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Naina ka hak hai Vyom ke pyaar par!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Karan is a good friend and promised to help Vyom!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Vyom is looking very hansome!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

They all joined Vyom and started dancing to this song!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Vyom is continuously looking at Naina and Naina is feeling something different in Vyom today!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Yeh Huda abhi bhi unke peeche pada huya hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Yudi tried to control but failing he also joined in the dance!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Accha huya Huda and Vyom hugged each other and Naina and Aalekh smiled seeing this!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

There was a pain in Shalini's voice of missing her parents' home!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Anvesha tried to change the mood and all the girls danced around Shalu!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

I wonder what Naina wants to say to Vyom!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way Vyom said naughtily haan Naina jee boliye!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#768

hi Vertika!

finally tumne chahat ko UD kiya!😃 I'm very happy!😃

The UD was fantastic !

you know jab Vyom aise signals de raha tha ki he loves Naina...mujhe bilkul achcha nahi laga!

Aur main yeh tumse kehne ka soch bhi rahi thi,par mujhe tumpar pura BHarosa tha! Ki jaroor tumne bahot hi zabardast kuch socha hoga!

And see...iss UD mein kuch kuch dekhne mila!

So Vyom is unable to understand his pull towards Naina and he feels like he knows Aalekh, Huda and everyone too!

Main koi guess nahi karungi, coz I know tum usse negate hi karogi 😆..but kuch kuch samajh aa raha hai...I hope waisa hi ho!

good to see Karan helping Vyom, but yeah...Naina Rajveer ko nahi bhool sakti, Vyom is right about that😉

The song was nice..

UD soon...lambe se UD ke saath!😊

Edited by manatated - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#769

Hey lovely part. Vyom ko kuch yaad nahi? Well kehna to nahi chahiye par ye ek khush khabri hi hai....hehe. Of course bcoz we want him to be Raj only.....but then lets c wats going on in ur mind. The song was nice n I loved imagining Rajeev in this.....beautiful!!!

Karan is a gr8 frnd.....Vyom ko kitne achhe se samjhaya usne....and the first bit was also funny.

Pls try to continue soon.....I am actually very fond of this fic.