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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: pritib0
HIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA............
HOPE UR FINE DEAR.............

THE UD WAS.............

AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOME.............

ROCKING................

SUPERB...............

WONDERFUL...............

AMAZING..............

JUST TOO GOOD............

TAKE CARE............

WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.

thank u,bus abhi aa raha hai majedaar sa update.😊😊😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985
Hello!! Vertika!!
A big sorry for replying late dear.....
Hello,It's all right sweety, i don't mind.😊😊😊

waise once again a rocking update......

thank u.😊😊😊

Vyom is flirting with other girls!!!!!!
interesting.....

kuch shaitaani to karega na Vyom.😆😆😆

Naina is jealous!!!!!

Kaisa ye pyaar hai............................😉😉😉

Once again a very nice part.....
Continue soon...
take care....

love
Riya.

thank u,bus abhi aa raha hai rocking sa update.😊😊😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Yaar kitne saare fics likhe hain tune?😕

Itne saare ek saath manage kaise kar leti hai yaar?😛

Nice story 👏i will give my comments soon.😃

Bus ho jaata hai manage............😉😉😉

well thanks dear.😊😊😊

thank u,bus abhi aa raha hai jhakaas sa update.😊😊😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#324

kitna haseen chehra,

kitni pyari aankhen - 2

kitni pyari aankhen hai,

aankhon se chhalakta pyar

kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar - 2

kitna haseen chehra,

kitni pyari aankhen - 2

kitni pyari aankhen hai aankhon se chhalakta pyar

kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar - 2

When she looked him, she feels herself melting by his gaze. He was constantly gazing her with his lovely eyes. She doesn't know y she was feeling butterflies in her stomach when he looked her.

teri nazar jhuke toh shaam dhalen

jo uthe nazar toh subaha chalen - 2

tu hase toh kaliyan khil jaaye

tujhe dekh ke hoor bhi sharmaye

teri bikhri bikhri zulfen teri mehaki mehaki saansen

teri koyal jaisi boli,

teri meethi meethi baaten

jee chahe mera main yu hi tera karta rahu deedar

kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar - 2

kitna haseen chehra kitni pyari aankhen

He was just speechless to see that goddess of love in front of him. He doesn't y but he felt a special attraction in her comparing to rest of the gals. She was special and really so pretty among all.

(duniya mein haseen aur bhi hain

hoga na koi tere jaisa haseen) -2

rangeen jawan madhosh badan

tu husno shabab ka hain gulshan

tere ang se khusbu barse pariyon si sundar kaya

jo kutch socha tha maine woh sab kutch tujhmein paya

teri ek adaa pe main sadke jaaun sau baar

kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar - 2

kitna haseen chehra kitni pyari aankhen

kitni pyari aankhen hai aankhon se chhalakta pyar

kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar - 2

She was Naina. She was in her purple dress matching to his shirt. She has worn purple saari with light embroidery. Her hair were tied n she wore matching ear rings n some matching bangles in her both hands. She was looking goddess of love n beauty.

He was looking extremely dashing in that suit. Naina remembered the night of Valentine's Day party when Raj was in that suit. For once she thought kaash vo Raj hota aur Naina se aakar kehta 'Naina tum jaanti nahi ho ki kitni khoobsurat lag rahi ho aaj tum. Mera man kehta hai ki mai bus yu hi tum ko dekhta rahoon humesha bus tumhe.'

She couldn't look into his eyes directly n her eyes dropped down. Vyom came to her slowly and her heart started beating faster n faster, she doesn't know why but she was feeling butterflies in her stomach when Vyom was coming to her. Now he was very very close to her.

"Aise nahi is tarah," saying this he opened her hair.

Naina blushed when he opened her hair she remembered the same thing that Raj likes. He also likes her hair left open. Naina and Vyom looked at each other and she lost in his eyes.

Suddenly Alekh came there and saw this moment. He smiled and left from there.

Yahan neeche:-

That gal was the bride's younger sis Anvesha . Huda saw her unblinkly. He was really mesmerized by her beauty.

"Aise kya dekhe jaa rahe ho? Pehle kabhi ladki nahi dekhi hai kya?" she asked him.

Huda came back in his senses and said with a flirt in his voice, "O ji dekhi hai par aap jaise nahi dekhi abhi tak na."

"Oye hoye''''." All guys clapped at Huda's statement.

"Mujhe bhi lagta hai kuch aisa hi varna koi aisa bhi nahi hai jo aksar ladkiyon ko dekhta ho aur phir bhi itna bada muh khol k dekhta ho." Anvesha commented.

"Oooooooo", all gals clapped for Anvesha this time.

This fight goes on for at least 15 minutes when Yudi interrupted them. "Ok, ok bus bhi karo tum dono." He requested both of them.

"Oye kya hai Yudie humesha kabab me haddi banta rehta hai." Huda gave him an angry look.

"Wait bro she is my saali to tum ko koi bhi hak nahi hai is se aise baat karne ka samjhe ya nahi?" Yudi warned him.

"Oho badi acchi saali mile hai yaar tujhe to." Huda teased him.

"Haan par tere liye nahi hai samjha ya nahi." Yudi again warned him.

"Offo aap dono ladna band bhi karenge ya nahi?" Ali asked coming and no need to tell I think he was looking gorgeous in the sherwaani.

"Oye usool aaj to tu mujhe bhi takkar de raha hai yaar." Huda said.

"Humari aap se koi takkar nahi hai Huda bhai par kya aap hum ko batayenge ki aap log jhagada kyoun kar rahe the?" he asked.

Aur bus poochne ki hi der thi sab k sab fir se shuru bechara Ali kabhi Huda ko samjhta aur kabhi Yudi ko. Anvesha was also surprised by this act of both of them.

"Oye missed calls tum sab aapas me kyoun call divert kar rahe ho?" Pooja asked coming from front door.

Ali saw her and really after so much time he could hold himself. She was looking gorgeous in her maroon lehnga and same as Ali wore the maroon sherwani.

"Kya yaar tu kahan khoya tha kitne der se tujhe tere dreamland se bahar lane ki koshish kar rahe hain." Yudi asked Ali.

"Nahi vo kuch nahi Yudi bhai aap boliye." He said feeling embarrassed.

"Oye tu hut mai batai hoon Ali, tune kahin Naina ko dekha hai mai pichle aadhe ghante se dhoondh rahi hoon us ko par us ka koi pata nahi hai." Pooja asked.

"Are haan hum ko to yaad hi nahi aaya humne un ko kaafi der se nahi dekha hai." He said.

"Dekhega bhi kaise usool apni punjaban ko hi dekhta reh gaya hai na." Huda teased Ali n he blushed.

"Vaise maan na padega bro aaj sab k pairs ne matching pehan rakha hai, par yaar Huda tune ye blue kis k liye pehan rakha hai?" Yudi asked Huda for his blue sherwani.

"Tere saali k liye oye." Huda teased him n the Tom n Jerry chase begun in the party hall.

Pooja was waiting to hear a compliment from Ali. Par apna Ali bhi na itna sharmata hai ki kya kahein? Fir bhi is baar apna saara courage collect kar k Ali ne kaha. "Pooja aaj aap vakai me bahut acchi lag rahi hain." Looking at her.

"Thanks Ali," she blushed at his compliment this time. "Tub bhi aaj bilkul mera ranjha lag raha hai." n she left the place.

Ali smiled and watched her going tabhi vahan Alekh aa jaata hai, "To kab bolega tu us ko?" he asked.

"Kya Alekh bhai?" Ali asked.

"Yahich ki tu us ko bahut love karta hai." Alekh said.

Ali took deep breath n smiled, "Pata nahi Alekh bhai Pooja ko dekhte hi hum kamjor pad jaate hai aur kuch keh nahi paate hai us se." he said.

"Abe kahin aisa na ho jab tu kehne jaaye to us ki shaadi kisi aur se honewaali ho." Alekh said n left.

Here Pooja was searching Naina and she found Vyom n Naina lost in each other's eyes. She smiled at them n thought, 'Mujhe lagta hai ki is Simran ka Shahrukh yahi hone waala hai.' n called her, "Naina chal neeche sab tera intezaar kar rahe hain."

They came out of their thought and both felt it a littlie awkward in front of Pooja. Pooja was still smiling at them.

"Haan chal" saying this she left with Pooja and Vyom stood there thinking something.

'Ye kya ho raha hai mujhe, Naina jab mere saamne hoti hai to bus mera man yahi karta hai ki us ko dekhta hi rahoon bus yu hi humesha.' Vyom thought in his mind.

Par jyada sochne se kuch nahi hota hai so he proceeded towards the party hall.

"Are Naina kaha thi tum yaar?" Neelu asked her.

"Ladies and gentleman pehle mai aap sab ka shukriya karna chaoonga ki aap sab mere bete ki engagement me aaye aur ab mai apne bete aur hone waali bahu ko bulana chaoonga stage par taaki engagement ceremony start ki jaaye." Mr. Sahini announced.

Soon the bride and groom both were brought at the stage. All were getting impatient to see the bride asap. Par kaha jaata hai na wait and watch bus ab sabar nahi ho raha tha kisi se.

Jaise hi bride ka ghoonghat hataya gaya sab k sab( our LRL team only) buri tarah chak gaye.

"Aap yahan?" all asked in chorus.

Guys I think aap sab ka man kar raha hoga ki mujhe mare pakad k par mai kya karoon next update tak thoda suspense bhi hona chahiye na bus isiliye maine yahan choda.

So pls. don't kill me for that.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#325

sorry guys ye IF na aap sab pls thoda copy paste kar k padh lena.

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Shree85

@Shree85

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#326

Hi Vertika

Sorry for not replying to previous update but this time I m the first one to reply. The update was as usual awesome and a bit romantic too. Vyom finds Naina different compared to other girls hmmm interesting. As far as Yudi is concerned I think that I know who his fiance is. I think its Shalini. Do correct me if I m wrong but I also know that u will save this for next update by not disclosing it to anyone. Anyways keep up the good work and do update soon.

With Lots of Love and Wishes

Shree

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#327

Hi Dear

Read the update ..It was just too gud..Love the scene where Vyom untied Naina's hair n they both were lost in each others eyes..😉😉😉..Huda is always flirting with some or the other girl..Now its Yudi's

sis-in -law.😆.

Pooja n Ali really make a cute pair but when will Ali propose to her?????

Pooja bhi na Vyom or Naina ka concentration game kharab kar diya😆

But who is yudi's to b wife..I guess Shalini..

Do update soon to reaveal the suspense😛😛😛

Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago

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Rituka

@rituka7

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#328

sorry for not replying previously ,actually net is not working properly these days
coming to update ,it was superb
damn cool
update soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#329

Hiiii vertika!

mujhe lagta hai ki yeh vyom hi apna raj hai........😕

woh scene mujhe bahat achha laga jab vyom ne naina k hair ko untied kiya & that eye lock scene also too gud.

are....yaar! mujhe lagta hai k yeh huda bhi na kabhi nahin sudhrega...khubsurat ladki dekhi nahin ki line marna chalu. ab yudi k sis-in-law k sath bhi. yeh jarur kisi din pitega😆

pooja aur ali ki chem. mujhe hamesha achhi lagti hai. just perfect for each other.par ali hamesha itna shy kyoun rahta hai yaar...!! pata nahin kab woh pooja ko confess karega.....!!!!😕😕😕

yeh....pooja bhi na!!!! kar diya na kabada....naina aur vyom k concentration ka.

tune abhi tak yudi ki wife ko ghunghat main chupa rakha hai hamare liye.....!!!! un logon ko to dikha diya ab hamain bhi to darshan kara de.....!!!!

ok ab tere ud par aati hoon. is baar ka ud bahat achha nahin tha yaar.....!!!! balki bahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhat achha tha.👏

luv.....priya😊

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago