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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

thanks Shaina😊😊
Vyom ne behoshi mein Naina ka haath pakda aur Naina chuda nahi payi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
yeah he was feeling comfortable with it.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Naina ko wahi ehsaas huya huya jo Raj ke chune se hota tha!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
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Naina ko lagta hai ke Vyom koi apna hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haan woh tumara apna hi hai Naina!!!😊 😊 😊
Haan nahi pata agar tum ko Naina to Shaina se poocho na.πŸ˜›
Yeh kaun log hai jo Naina ko marna chahta hai aur jinke liye usse marna itna zaroori hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Raj zaroor inke baare mein kuch toh janta hoga!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
kuch nahi bahut kuch jaanta hai bus aage aage dekho.πŸ˜‰
Karan ne kaha jaane ke liye par Naina jana nahi chahti!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Thats interesting!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
kahan?πŸ˜•
Vyom has the same smile as Raj!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina ab toh samaj ja!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Pata nahi kyoun sab k sab Vyom ko Raj bata rahe hain, mujhe kuch bhi nahi aa raha hai samjh.
Vyom ne uthkar darwaza kya khola Naina Karan ko kitna daat rahi hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›She cares for him so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yeah really😲
Vyom kehta hai woh pills nahi khaa pata aur Raj bhi nahi khaa pata tha!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›This is too much to be a coincidence!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina ko ab samaj jana chahiye!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
pata nahi kya ho raha hai na?πŸ₯±
Vyom ke haath mein laga gaya aur Naina ne usse kitne pyaar se daat ke pills khilaye!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
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Vyom kehta hai woh zyada der tak bed pe pada nahi reh sakta bimaron ki tarah!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina sochti hai Raj mein bhi yehi aadat thi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
Naina lay a trap and catch him red handed that he is Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Nice plan babes Naina ko bolti hoon mai.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Naina ne jab yeh kaha ki woh waha se Pune academy chali jayegi toh Vyom itna kyun chauk gaya??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Haan ye baat to maine notice hi nahi ki?
Finally Vyom bhi Ambala jaa rahe hai!!!!😊 😊 😊Sab usse dekhkar shock ho jayenge!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲
Bahut jyada shock.
Ambala ka naam aate hi Naina rone lagi!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Bechari!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Us ko Raj aur Naveen ki yaad aa jaati hai na.😭

Thanks for reply Shaina.😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: litika

hiiiiiiiiiii

Loved the update as usual.....yaar u keep making the interesting with each update and my suspicion that vyom is raj keeps increasing also,,,,,,but yeh naina ki jaan ke piche kaun pada hua hai all of a sudden and now i feel like the only reason that vyom is here because he might noe that nainas life is in danger.......it was so cute the way naina is worried abt vyom and it was funny when she yelled at karan cause vyom opened the door.......waiting for the next part...plz jaldi update karna.....
litika

Hello dear,😊😊
Good accha hai na, aisa hi pace hona chahiye ek fic me.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Nahi kuch aur bhi reason hai Vyom k yahan aane ka vo bhi jaldi hi pata chal jaayega, don't worry.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for liking Naina's concerned for Vyom and Karan's attitude.😊😊
Thanks for reply dear.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 16 years ago
when will u update
update soon long asap
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Posted: 16 years ago

Here comes the next part guys:-

"Tu bhi na Karan, jab bhagwan akal baat rahe the to pata nahi kahan tha tu tab." He was murmuring.

"Ab yahan aise hi khada rahega ki Naina ko mayega bhi." Vyom asked.

"Haan jaa raha hoon yaar." He said n left.

He saw Naina was talking with some one on phone. After some time she turned n found Karan standing there.

"Kya hua Karan?" Naina asked.

"Kuch nahi bus tum ko dekhne aaya tha." he replied lowering his eyes.

"Jaldi bolo kya baat hai?" Naina asked again.

"Sorry Naina mujhe nahi hurt karna tha tum ko par jaanti ho na mujhe mujh se ye sab kaise ho jaata hai mujhe bhi pata nahi chalta hai." He said making a sad face.

"It's ok Karan. I didn't mind." Naina replied.

"Haan vaise bhi mind kar ne k liye mind hona bhi to chahiye na jo ki tum ladkiyon k paas to hota nahi hai." Karan said and soon their fight started because of Karan's such statement.

Naina has already arranged all things and have done all packing. They brought Vyom to the airport and soon their flight started, Naina ki seat kuch aise thi ki us ko Vyom k bagal baithna tha aur Karan ko ek ladki k bagal ki seat mili thi.

"Excuse me mam, can I have a magazine?" Karan asked the airhostess.

"Offcourse sir." She handed over him a bunch of magazines.

"Thanks, Par kya aap mujhe bata sakti hain ki in me se sab se acchi kaun si magazine hai?" Karan asked her flirtlously.

She told him about each and every magazine and he was just enjoying flirting with her. Vyom showed Naina . Naina just smiled at him and said, "Ye nahi sudharega."

"U know Naina hum jab aa rahe the U.S.A. se India to plane me is ne har ek ladki se to nahi par mujhe lagta hai atleast aadhi ladkiyon k saath to flirt kiya hoga hi." Vyom told her.

"Ye humesha se hi aisa tha school me bhi kisi ladki se flirt karne ka mauka nahi chodta tha." Naina said smiling.

"Naina ek baat kahoon?" Vyom asked.

"Haan boliye." Naina said.

"Naina k naino me ansoon acche nahi lagte isliye humesha hasti raha karo." Vyom said.

Naina was taken a back. It reminded her of him who says that.(yaar agar aisa nahi tha to maan lo na ki Raj ne kaha tha aisa).

Karan was still flirting with all airhostesses but not with the gal sitting next to him. He tried very much to get a glimpse of her but all of his trails were in vain. She has covered her face with a magazine she was reading till the start of journey.

"Ms. Shreya aap ne ye mangaya tha na utarne se pehle so pls have it." A young man handed her over something.

"Haan maine mangaya tha and thanks for it." The girl replied.

When Karan saw her face he was lost by her beauty. She was none other than famous actrees Shreya Kapoor (imaginary)(Shraddha Nigam).

"Aap Shreya Kapoor hai na?" Karan asked.

"Yeah mai vahi hoon." She replied sweetly.

"Myself Karan Malhotra from U.S.A. I am son of Mr. Aditaya Malhotra." He introduced himself.

"Oh vohi Malhotra companies waale jin ki worldwide kaafi saari factories hain." Shreya asked.

"Yeah vahi", he replied.

"Glad to meet u Mr. Malhotra." Shreya said.

"Call me Karan not Mr. Malhotra, vaise bhi ye mere dad ko bulate hain sab." Karan said.

"Yeah glad to meet u Karan." She said.

Soon the announcement was heard of arrival at Chandigarh airport. They came downstairs. Naina has already booked a private cab for reaching Ambala though Yudi insisted to send a car but she denied.

"Ok Shreya I hope we will meet soon. Can I have ur cell number please?" he asked.

"Sorry but mai apna no. kisi ko nahi deti. Ok bye" She said sweetly and left.

"Kya hua?" Vyom asked Karan.

"Kuch nahi yaar bina no diye hi chali gayi." Karan said with sadness.

"Come on let's move. Vahan shaddi me abhi aap ko bahut log mil jaayenge flirt karne k liye." Naina teased him.

"Par yaar she was amazing. Pata hai maine aaj tak us se sundar ladki nahi dekhi apni life me."Karan said in a dreamy tone.

"Ab chalein ki yahin rehna hai tum ko us ki yaadon k saath." Naina asked.

"Haan chal vaise bhi tujhe kahan accha lagta hai ye sab." Karan teased.

"Shut up Karan chalo ab." Vyom said.

"Saale tum ladke bahut dhoke baaj hote ho apne dost ki taang kisi ladki k same impression jamane k liye jaroor keechoge." He said to Vyom.

All laughed at it and sat into the cab. The way was long. A song was coming on the radio.

(Gumsum Chaandani Ho, Naajani Ho, Ya Koi Hoor HoDilnashi Ho, Dilkashi Ho Ya; Jannat Ka Noor HoMaasha Allah, Maasha Allah, Maasha Allah.....) - 2 Tum Saba Ho Ya Ghata, Ho Kehkasha Ho Saayba HoSubah Ki Pehali Kiran Ki Jaisi, Bebaak Alhad Pawan Ki JaiseKhushbuyein Tum Lutaati Ho Masti Mein Chur ChurMaasha Allah, Maasha Allah, Maasha Allah..... Tum Haya Ho, Tum Rida Ho, Tum Wafa Ho, Tum Nasha HoKhaamosh Nazarein Sada Jaisi Tumhaari Baatein Duwaayon JaisiHar Nafas Mein Tum Samaayi Ho Phir Bhi Ho Itani DoorMaasha Allah, Maasha Allah, Maasha Allah.....Gumsum Chaandani Ho, Naajani Ho, Ya Koi Hoor HoDilnashi Ho, Dilkashi Ho Ya Jannat Ka Noor HoMaasha Allah, Maasha Allah, Maasha Allah....

This song was perfect for describing Vyom's feeling . Kya soch raha tha dil me is gaane se pata chal raha tha isiliye lagtaar Naina ko dekhe jaa raha the Vyom.

Naina noticed this so she found it hard to ignore his gaze. Pata nahi kyoun par us k dekhne ka andaaz bhi vaisa hi tha jaise Raj ka tha.

Hey bhagwaan tumne mujhe kis tarah ki situation me daal rakha hai mai kya karoon mai samajh nahi paa rahi hoon.

Tabhi Karan bola "Naina mujhe bahut bhookh lagi jara kuch kha lete hain."

"Ok cab rukwa lo kahin." She said.

Vyom was on back seat lying because he has a back pain. Karan looked a restaurant and made the cab stop.

They all came out and sat in the restaurant and have the food. When they were coming out from the restaurant Vyom noticed something. He indicated Karan to bring Naina out safely and come back soon.

"Chalo Naina ", Karan understood n brought her out.

How was the part guys pls reply soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys ye IF ka jo format hai na mai kya bataoo.
Aap log is ko copy paste kar k padh lijiyega.
Sorry for trouble guys.
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Posted: 16 years ago
damn cool
update soon long asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kar diya hai update yaar.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 16 years ago
That's ok mahak..nowdays IF format is irritating a lot...

the update was too good..karan is damn funny man.....oh god i am eager to know is vyom our raj...i am sure he is..naina was clsoe to raj is she feels he is raj then i am sure he is
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Posted: 16 years ago
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA HOW R U???????????
HOPE U R ROCKING
THE UD WAS FANTASTICπŸ‘
AWESOOOOOOOOOOMEπŸ‘
TOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOODπŸ‘
SUPERBπŸ‘
EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
WITH LOVE
DEEPA.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!Vertika!!!!!!!!!
Wow!!!!again a very nice one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the update was great.
to Ab Naina ko bhi lag raha hai ki Vyom hi Raj hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Too good.
Update soon.
take care.
love
Riya.

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