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Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

thanks Shai yaar.😊😊
Vyom ne Naina ko Raj ke baare mein poocha aur woh rone lagi!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Yeh Raj kyun usse aise sawal poochta hai??😑 😑 😑 😑
pata nahi Vyom aise cheejen poochta hi kyoun hai jis se Naina hurt hoti hai.😑
Vyom toh Naina ko dekhe hi jaa raha hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Usse Naina ka usse gale lagana bahut accha laga tha!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Aur uska dil Naina ki ankhon mein doob jaane ka karta hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Mamla bahut serious hai!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
haan yaar love at first sight ka mamla hai ye, kya kar sakte hain .😳😳😳
Vyom Naina ke uper gira!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
it was just a coincidence that's it.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Vyom toh Naina ki tareef kar raha hai aur Naina ko bilkul accha nahi lag raha hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
kaise lagega ye tareef vo Raj k alawa kisi se nahi sunna chahti hai na.
The flashback was very cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 Naina aur Navin kitna ladte thhe!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
sab se acche bro n sis the na isiliye.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Vyom kuch dhundh raha tha aur kisi ne goli se Naina ko marne ki koshish ki!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Thats very interesting!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
us ko shayad pehle se pata tha ki aisa kuch ho sakta hai.🀒🀒
Karan ne bhi kaha ke Vyom ne jo kaha tha wahi huya!!!!
kuch hota hain na intitution.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
This amounts to only one thing which was very obvious from the very beginning!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊That Vyom is Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
tum ko pata hai, par mujhe nahi pata.πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
Vyom ne goli chalayi ush admi ke pairon mein aur goli nishane pe!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Waise uske paas gun kaha se aayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Aur Raj ka nishana bhi kabhi nahi chukta tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
rakhta hoga saath me.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Too bad uske sar pe kisine mara aur woh behosh ho gaya aur woh admi bachke nikal gaya!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
sar par nahi maari thi na, vo us aadmi ko zinda pakdna chahta tha.Taki ye pata chale ki kaun pada hai Naina ki jaan k peeche.πŸ₯±πŸ₯±
Par woh admi tha kaun jisne Naina ko marne ki koshish ki??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Obviously it is connected to her mission but who are they??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
abhi kuch bhi nahi hai clear, aage dekhte hain.😲😲
Bechara Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭Naina ko bachate huye ghayal ho gaya!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭Kya pyaar hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Kaisa ye pyaar haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Raj behoshi mein bhi Naina ka naam le raha hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Karan knows everything tabhi toh usse cover up kar raha hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
Karan to hai hi poora naughty na.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Naina toh har pal uske paas hi bethi rahi!!!!😊 😊 😊Aur ek pal ke liye bhi nahi uthi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats sweet of her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳
kya kare aakhir Vyom ne jaan bachai thi us ki.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
I hope Naina finds out soon that Vyom is Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Waise uske baad Raj ki khair nahi!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
pata nahi kya hai sach.πŸ˜•

thanks for reply darling.πŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: litika

Hiiiiiiiiiii

I am so sorry i am commenting so late...but i loved the update...it was really interesting...Mujhe kyun lag raha hai ki Vyom is Raj and Karan noes that too i think....Awwww Vyom saved Nainas life and he was fast and everythin that shows that he could be raj only but maybe cause of a mission he cannot reveal his identity...And obviously he was taking nainas name when he was behosh...
Well i really cant wait till the next update....i hope u will update it asap..
TC
LitikaπŸ˜ƒ

Koi baat nahi kudiye tanu comment kar de bus itta hi kaafi hai na.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Pata nahi kya confusion hai Vyom aur Raj meπŸ˜•πŸ˜•, abhi tak hai aur aage bhi hoga na.😲😲
ohooooooooooooooo, so sweet ho jee tussi.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
thanks jee.😊😊
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
update soon long asap

thanks Ritu mam.😊😊

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

it was fabulousπŸ‘

thanks Lipi dear.😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry 4 d late reply.nice udπŸ‘,cont soon...........
Edited by *Rajeevian* - 17 years ago
KRIZZY thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
superb dear
and really sorry for late reply actually i don't get enough time to be online so kyunki kuch dino me semesters ane wale hai to i hav to studu so jaldi jaldi me padh to mleti hoon par reply karna bhul jati hoon
realyy sooorrryyyy
vaise
mindblowing ud
i loved naveen and naina's teasings
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

superb dear

and really sorry for late reply actually i don't get enough time to be online so kyunki kuch dino me semesters ane wale hai to i hav to studu so jaldi jaldi me padh to mleti hoon par reply karna bhul jati hoon
realyy sooorrryyyy
vaise
mindblowing ud
i loved naveen and naina's teasings

Thanks Karishma Darling,😊😊
Koi baat nahi isiliye maine tujhe yaad dila diya na.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Navin aur Naina duniya k sab se acche bhai behan hai to un k scene to hone hi hain na kamaal k...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

sorry 4 d late reply.nice udπŸ‘,cont soon...........

koi baat nahi yaar thanks for reply.😊
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Here come the sixth part of fic.
Naina uthne lagi par Vyom ne behoshi me Naina ka haath pakad rakha tha.

Naina pata nahi kyoun us ka haath chuda nahi paayi. Shayad kaafi dino baad wahi ehsaas hua tha jo Rajveer k chune se Naina ko hota tha.

'Ye aisa kyoun lag raha hai ki ye koi apna hi hai jis k paas hoon mai abhi. Itna dard kyoun hua mujhe Vyom ko chot lagi to, aur mai kyoun is ki itni jyada care karne se apne ko rok nahi paa rahi hoon' Naina soche jaa rahi thi.

Idhar Dehradoon k hi ek kone me:-

"Kaise bach gayi vo................." a man screamed.

"Sir hum ne to koshish poori ki thi par............." us k aadmi bol bhi nahi paaya tha ki.

"Chup karo tum, chup karo; tum logon se ek kaam bhi theek se nahi hota hai." He screamed, "Pata nahi kya karte rehte ho tum log?"

"Boss hum ne............." he again tried to say this.

"Kya boss? Accha khasa plan banaya tha kahin se fail hone ki gunjayish nahi thi par tum log.................... Accha hua Ahmad sahi time par pahuch gayavarna pata nahi agar Khalid kuch bak deta to Chief mujhe zinda nahi chodte." His boss said with worried face.

They all remained silent for some time.

"Ab muh kya bana rakha hai? Batao mujhe hua kya tha?" he asked.

"Boss hum ne koi kami nahi chodi thi par pata nahi kahan se ek ladke ne dekh liya aur vo...." He could hardly say it.

"Kaun tha vo? Kis ne dekha wahan tum logon ko batao mujhe." He boss shook him badly holding him by his colors.

"Vo boss...........pata nahi kaun tha hum us ko pehchaante nahi hain. Vo ek ladke aur Naina k saath aaya tha vahan, pata nahi us ki najar kaise pad gayi Khalid par." He replied.

"Hmmmmmmmm. Dhyan rakhna agli baar ki kisi ki najar me aaye bina tum sab ko apna kaam khatam karna hai. Agli baar Naina bachni nahi chahiye." His boss instructed them n explained them another plan.

They all left after that. "Naina is baar to tum bach gayi par agli baar tum nahi bachogi aur humare liye ye jaroori bhi hai." The man said n laughed.

Here in room:-

Karan laut aaya tha doc ki batayi gayi pills aur baaki ka samaan le kar Vyom k liye. He saw Naina there who was just watching Vyom constantly. Karan smiled at her n came in.

"Naina I think ab tum jaao aur jaa k thoda rest kar lo." Karan suggested her.

"No I am fine Karan." Naina replied and she herself puzzled why did she say so.

"Nahi tum jaoo mai yahan hoon na." Karan insisted.

"Theek hai mai chalti hoon par agar koi jaroorat ho to mujhe bula lena." Naina ne finally kaha.

Karan nodded n Naina left. Karan closed the door.

Next day morning:-

Naina saw the room closed she knocked it. After knocking for 10 minutes some one opened it. He was Vyom.

"Are aap uth kar kyoun aaye? Aap ki tabiyat nahi theek hai na. Chaliye chal k lateiye. Karan kahan hai?" Naina asked. She had a tray in her hand carrying hot coffee mugs, she placed it at the table.

Vyom smiled first.

'My god same smile just like Rajveer Sir', Naina thought.

"Hey kya hua? Kab aayi tum yahan?" Karan asked coming out from wash room.

"Mai abhi aayi?" n said again, "Tum kahan reh jaate ho jaante ho inhone uth kar darwaja khola." Naina said in complaining tone.

"Are to accha hai na, abhi se uthta baitha rahega to koi aur problem nahi hogi is ko." Karan said in joking tone.

"Karan tum............." Naina gave an angry look to him.

"Ok.........ok I was just joking." He turned towards Vyom n said, "Kya jaroorat thi be uth k darwaja kholne ki mai aa nahi raha tha kholne darwaja." Karan said.

"Ab tum mujhe kyoun daat rahe ho? Itni der koi darwaje par khada rahega to accha lagega kya?" Vyom said with an innocent face.

"Haan us ko kyoun daat rahe ho? Saari galti tumhari hai." Naina said.

"Ye lo. Hey bhagwan, Naina tum meri dost ho ki is ki?" Karan asked in a helpless look.

Phir shuru ho gayi Karan aur Naina ki maar peet nahi bhai bus yuhi thodi bahut. Vyom was constantly watching her face. Kitna pyaar tha us ki annkhon me Karan k liye(as a frnd), aur kitni care thi Vyom k liye.

"Accha meri maa mai maan gaya ki ye meri galti hai theek hai ab to shaant ho jaao na." Karan ne apne dono haath Naina k saamne jod k jhukte hue kaha.

"Ok", she turned n said to Vyom ," Aap ki bandage ka time ho gaya hai. Chaliye change kar deti hoon aur ye lijiye apni pills khaiye." Naina gave it to Vyom.

"No Naina mai pills nahi kha paata hoon." Vyom said.

It again reminded Naina of Rajveer. Once he told it Naina. Naina sochne lagi ki kitna similar hai itna to possible nahi hai.

"Kya hua?" Vyom asked her waving both hands in front of her, "ouch".

"Kya hua aap ko?" Naina asked concerned.

"Kuch nahi aap ko day dreaming se bahar nikalte nikalte mai bhool gaya tha ki mera haath injured hai." Vyom replied with pain in his eyes.

"Aap bhi na, rukiye." Naina ne water me pills dissolve kar di aur Vyom se boli, "Now drink it fast." She commanded him.

"Par mai kaise?" is k pehle k Vyom kuch bol paata Naina ne aapne ek haath se Vyom ki naak pakdi aur doosre haath se glass lagaya muh se aur sab khatam.

"Baccho ki tarah jid nahi karte. Itne bade ho gaye aap aur pills se darte hain." Naina says smiling n in a childish way.

Vyom again smiled n said, "Haan mai pills nahi le paata aur mai jyada der tak aise bed par pada nahi reh sakta hoon bimaaron ki tarah."

Again same thing Naina phir sochne lagi ki ye aadat bhi thi Raj me.(Guys yaad hai Ritu ko maarne k baad kaise Raj hospital se wapas KMA aa gaya tha)

"Naina ab kya hua?" Karan asked it now "Kahan kho jaati ho tum baar baar?"

"Ummmm nahi kahin nahi. Accha tum ye batao kal chaloge na mere saath Yudi k yahan?" She asked Karan.

"Haan haan par Vyom ko is haalat me nahi le jaa sakte na." Karan was tensed about him.

"Don't worry u guys go mai yahan theek hoon." Vyom said as he himself not so interested to go there.

"Nahi hum aap ko aise yahan nahi chod k jaa sakte hain. U r mine guest n its bad manner." Naina said thoughtfully.

"To fir kya karein?" Karan asked.

"Maine kaha na aap log jaao. I am alright vaise bhi uncle aunty hain na yahan." Vyom tried to reason.

"Nahi .......... Kyounki mai wapas yahan nahi aa paaongi. Mai vahan se seedhe PuneAcademy chali jaoongi." Naina told Vyom.

"Kya??????????" Vyom replied in surprise.

"Hannnnnnnnnnnnnn aur mai bhi seedhe vahi se Pune aur Mumbai chala jaaonga." Karan also added.

"Tabhi to mai bol rahi hoon." Naina said n after thinking she again said, "Aap chal rahe hain humare saath."

"Par Naina is ko aise kaise le jaayenge?" Karan was again confused because of her decision.

"Hum log Ambala flight se jaayenge to in ko koi problem nahi hogi." Naina said thinking.

"Hey Naina Ambala wahi jagah hai na jahan Naveen posted tha aur jahan tune bhi apni training complete ki hai?" Karan asked.

Naina ne kuch kaha nahi hoton se bus sir hila diya aur us ki aankhein bhar gayi. Yahi kaafi tha Karan ko yaad dilane k liye ki Amabala yaad aate hi Naina ka dard aur badh jaata hai. She went from there almost crying n wiping her tears.

"Oh shit maine kya kar diya. Mujhe Naina se aise nahi poochna tha ye sab." Karan cursed himself.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey nice update yaar. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Naina ko Vyom ki har ek cheej se Raj ki yaad aa rahi hai na.πŸ˜›
Pata nahi aisa kyoun ho raha hai us k saath kitna tolerate karegi vo.😭
Karan bhi vakai me mindblowing hai yaar kya kya karta rehta hai na phir Naina ko rula diya na us ne,
Naina ki haalat mujh se nahi dekhi jaa rahi hai.😭
Naina ko kitna bura laga na jab Vyom ne khola tha na darwaja ab kya kare vo bhi.😲
So finally Vyom bhi jaa raha hai Naina aur Karan k saathπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ, jab vo vahan pahuchega to sab us ko dekh kar shock ho jayenge.πŸ˜‰
update soon darling.
Edited by varshita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hiiiiiii Vertika,

aaj to Suraj zarur east se nahi west se nikla hogaπŸ˜†matlab mein aur sabse pehla to nahi but itni jaldi reply kya baat hai?πŸ˜‰

well let's talk about update which is as usual nice n now am sure that Vyom is Raj but how's it possibleπŸ˜•chakkar kya hai ?
n now he is going Ambala to Yudi's place, that means lots off Shocks r going to get to our Super Six. opps sorry five naina already dekh chuki hai aur shock bhi hai........😲😲😲

waiting to know the reaction of our favorite one's.to see Vyom..........update soon.
Edited by vvdn - 17 years ago

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