Afsana pyaar ka part 27 pg98 updated

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Day Dreamer.

@SilverMugdha

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#211

its hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n weri odd(veer marriying antra!) but still g888

Quote

Twinkle

@Twinkle23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: SilverMugdha
its hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n weri odd(veer marriying antra!) but still g888

thanxxxxxx a ton dear

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

niti

@junglli billi

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#213

Waiting badly fr ur next part dear

Quote

Twinkle

@Twinkle23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#214

lolzzzzzz hopefully will update today

Quote

Twinkle

@Twinkle23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#215

sry frnds i was about to update on wednesday but not written the part but will update tommorrow for sure by 3 pm plzzzzzzz wait till that time as soon as i update will pm u all

Quote

Twinkle

@Twinkle23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#216

guys forgot to inform u me decided the name of this ff its

Afsana pyaar ka

do tell me how it is😃😃
😃

Quote

Twinkle

@Twinkle23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#217

hey frnds me back with me update
here it goes

Part-13

dharam:veer kahaan jaa rahe ho

veer:mein kahin bhi to nahi

dharam:tumhe kya lagta hai hume kuch dikhai nahi deta

veer:tum kya keh rahe ho hume kuch samajh nahi aa raha

dharam:achha bete vaise ek baat batao dekho mein to sia se pyar karta hoon to us se nazar nahi hata paya par tumhe kya hua ....................

veer:dharam chup ho jao.............aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jaisa tum soch rahe ho

dharam:par hum to kuch soch hi nai rahe

veer:..........................dharam ab chalo sagai ka mahurat nikal jaega............

dharam:haan haan chalo ha ha ha

sabhi ikadhe hote hai aur phir dharam aur sia ek doosre ko angudhi pehnate hai phir

nivriti:veer tum bhi antara ko angudhi pehnao

veer:ji maa

jab veer antara ko angudhi pehnane wala hota hai tabhi antara apni angudhi gira deti hai aur sabhi angudhi doodne lagte hai

antara jaldi se apni angudhi uthati hai

antara:veer jaldi karo jaldi se angudhi pehno

dono apni apni angudhi khud pehn lete hai

antara and veer:pehan di hume pehna di

uske baad thoda naach gana hota hai

par jaise hi nach gana khatam hone wala hota hai koi wahaan lage jhomar ki rassi ko kaat deta hai us waqt antara jhomar ke neeche hoti hai jhomar jhab neeche gir raha tha to veer ka dhyan us par jaata hai aur ek hero ki tarah vo jump karta hai antara ko wahaan se le jaata hai (i am not able to describe the scene properly but kuch dv ke scene jaisa hi hai)phir veer antara ke neeche aur antara uske upar dono ek doosre ki aankho mein kho jaate hai

sia:antara tum theek to ho

antara:haan sia hum bilkul theek hai

sia:bhagwan ka lakh lakh sukra hai ki tum bach gayi aur tumhe kuch nahi hua

dharam:veer tumhe to chote lagi hai

sia:haan veer ............................... antara veer ko andar le jao aur dawa laga do

antara:theek hai sia .........veer chalo hum dawa laga dete hai

veer:nahi mein theek hoon is sab ki koi jaroorat nahi hai

antara :jaroorat kaise nahi hai (aur uska haath pakadti hai aur use le jaati hai veer bhi use mana nahi kar pata aur bas use hi dekhta rehta hai)

in the room

antara:tumne ye sab kyon kiya agar tumhe kuch ho jata to

veer:aur agar tumhe kuch ho jaata ...................mera matlab hai ki agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to sia aur dharam ki shaadi bhi toot jaati na

antara:acha hota

veer:acha hota matlab

antara:kuch nahi ab tum aaram karo

veer:tum bhi thak gayi hogi tumhe bhi aaram kar lena chahiye

antara aur veer apne apne kamaro mein so jaate hai aur tabhi dharam veer ke kamre mein aur sia antara ke kamre mein jaati hai

sia:antara utho hume ek jarrori baat batani hai

antara abhi bhi so rahi thi

sia:antara utho na hume baat karni hai

antara:sia abhi hum bahut thak gaye hai subah baat kaenge

sia:nahi bahut jaroori baat hai

antara beth jaati hai:bolo kya baat hai jaldi karo hume phir se sona bhi hai

sia :pehle jaldi se humare saath veer ke kamre mein chalo

veer ke room dharam us se uthane ki koshish karta hai par veer uthe to kaise kyonki dharam ke hiss se ki neend bhi to vo hi leta hai

dharam:veer utho na

sia:kya hua dharam

dharam:dekho na sia ye nalayak uth hi nahi raha

antara:dharam tum hato hum uthate hai ise

antara paas hi rakha paani us par daal deti hai

veer:dharam(he shouts)

dharam:humne kuch nahi kiya jo kuch kiya antara ne kiya hai

antara:aakhir sia ne humari neend kharab ki to hum tumhe kaise sone de sakte hai

veer:tumhari himaat ......

dharam :ladna chalu mat karna

sia:dekho hum dono ye baatana chahte the ki tum dono ki shaadi ki tarik tai ho gayi hai

antara:aur tumhari

dharam:humari bhi ho gayi hai par tum dono ki pehle hai

veer and antara:kabbbbbbbbbbbbb????????????????

sia:ek mahine baad sharad purnima ke din

veer:aur tum dono ki

dharam:humari us ke 15 din baad hai

sia:hume jo batana tha bata diya ab tum dono so jao

ye kehkar dharam aur sia chale jaate hai

antara:neend uda kar keh rahe hai so jao

veer:are meri to zindgi barbad ho jaegi tumse shaadi karke aur socho positive

antara:to tumhe kya lagta hai meri aabad hogi

Precap:RS thinking of making dv either of the two as maharaj sia antara leaving n veer selecting clothes for antara

next update as usual will be next week

guys do tell me if u like the name of the ff

Quote

sarika

@kiran99

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#218

nice update really like veer and antra geting married before

Quote

uighyuihui

@starpisces123

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#219

wow beautiful update....👏
ketne badmash hai VA apni anguti khud hi pehenli😲😆
antra caring for veer ,😍😍 soo sweet 😛....lagta hai aag dono taraph barabar lagi hai😉
i liked all the dias specially antra's...😛
atlast u decided a name for ur FF and its really nice👍🏼 Afsana pyar ka
precap seems to be intresting...veer selecting cloths 4 antra😍
will wait 4 ur nxt update...