Afsana pyaar ka part 27 pg98 updated

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Posted: 17 years ago

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oh dont worry dear take own time ....we will wait yaar🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: starpisces123
oh dont worry dear take own time ....we will wait yaar🤗

awwwwwwww thanxxxxxx nisha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: annie20
awwwwwww.....veer aur dharam ki ladhai....oh thanx twinkle for bringing back old memories🤗🤗🤗.....loved reading ur fanfic......plz continue soon....

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rash2cool
😍yeah update it soon 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: ashah03
heyyy... looking forward to ur fanfic... a request.. could u pls update the title so we know which part has been updated???
thxxx

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: anupode
tooo goood
keep going....

thanxxxxxxx a lot dear

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hey Twinkle !! I finally read all 10 of ur parts 😍 😍😍😍

Every part is funny n adorable 😳

I love ur anthra n sia n notty veer 😳 n poor dharam.. all of them get him in trouble 😆

update next part soooooooon !!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: bhuvana3
Hey Twinkle !! I finally read all 10 of ur parts 😍 😍😍😍 awwwww thanxxxx for reading at last dear
Every part is funny n adorable 😳 awwwwww so sweet thanxxxx once again

I love ur anthra n sia n notty veer 😳 n poor dharam.. all of them get him in trouble 😆hehehe😆 dats is true

update next part soooooooon !!will update asap

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey guys sry for the late update as i have not wriiten the story yesterday posting it now in 15 min

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Posted: 17 years ago

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part-11

kai din beet gaye veer bhi ab theek ho gaya tha.Antara ne veer ke puri tarah theek ho jaane tak uska dhyan rakh isi beech antara ko veer ke saath waqt guzrana achha lagne laga vo use pasand karne lagi thi par vo khud is baat se anjan thi aur aisa hi kuch veer ke saath bhi ho raha tha par abhi bhi dono ne jhagdana band nahi kiya tha dono baatein kam jhagda jyada karte the.
ek din dharam veer ke pass gaya aur

dharam:veer mein soch raha tha ki ............ mein soch raha tha ki.........

veer:dharam tum sochna band karo aur bolna shuru karo

dharam:veer mein soch raha tha ki kyon na sia ko........

veer:dharam tumne mujhe kahin muh dikhane ke layak nahi choda

dharam:ab aisa kya kar diya

veer:humare bhai hokar itna darte ho seedha seedha bolo na ki tum sia ko apne dil ki baat batana chahte ho

dharam:par tumhe kaise pata chala

veer:tum ye bhi bhool gaye ki mein tumhara bhai hoon aur tumhe tumse bhi jyada jaanta hoon aur humara log to humara naam bhi ek saath lete hai to tumhare dil ki baat humse kaise chupi reh sakti hai

dharam:veer par hum

veer:dharam ek kaam karo aaj raat ko use mahal ki chat par bulao aur keh dena jo bhi kehna hai

dharam:koi gadbad to nahi hogi

veer:are kuch nahi hoga

dharam antara ke through sia ko chat par bulata hai raat mein dhandi dhandi hawa chal rahi thi aur chand bhi aaj pura tha aisa lag raha tha jaise ye sabhi do pyar karne walon ki khushi mein sharik hone aaye hai

dharam chat par pahuchta hai aur sia ko wahaan par pata hai

sia:dharam aap gaye bolo kya kaam hai

dharam sia ke pass jata hai

aur sia ka haath pakad leta hai

sia:dharam ye kya kar rahe ho

dharam:sia hum aapse kuch kehna chahte hai

sia:haan dharam bolo

dharam:vo sia hum ............ hum ...................hum.......

sia:dharam aage to bolo

dharam:hum aapse bahut pyar karte hai kya aap..........

sia:haan dharam hum bhi aapse baahut paya karte hai

both of them sit there for the whole night with hands in hands aur khub baate karte hai

subhah dharam goes to meet veer and sia goes to meet antara

dharam:veer veer kahaan ho (dharam finds veer at his bed)
(man mein)abhi tak so raha hai ye kabhi nahi sudhrega

dharam:veer utho na hume zarrori baat karni

veer:dharam dekho hume sone do aur tum bhi jakar so jao vaise bhi tum raat bar nahi soe ho

dharam(surprised):tumhe kaise pata

veer(neend mein):are yaar mujhe sab pata hai aur mein tumahari aadat se vakif hoon

dharam:achha theek hai par suno to

veer irritat ho jata hai uth kar beth jaata hai

veer:bolo

dharam:veer rajkumari sia bhi humse bahut pyar karti hai usi ne kaha

veer:ho gaya ab hum so jae

dharam:jao so jao ab hum tumhe kabhi bhi koi baat nahi batayenge

veer:dharam bura kyon maan rahe ho hum bahut kush hai

same reaction was of antara after hearing sia

thodi der baad awadhi ke maharaj aryanagar aate hai

maharaj dono rajkumariyon ko wapas le jane ke liye aate hai

aryawardhan:aaiye maharaj aaj yahaan ka raasta kaise bhul gaye

maharaj:maharaj aisi koi baat nahi hai darasal hum dono rajkumariyon ko lene aaye hai

aryawardhan:par maharaj dono rajkumariyaan yahaan kush hai aur dharam veer ko bhi unke saath achha lagta hai dono hi bade kush rahte hai

maharaj:par vo dono itne dino se aapke paas reh rahi hai aise achha nahi lagta

aryawardhan:vaise maharaj hum soch rahe the ki kyon na humari dosti ko rishtedari mein badal diya jae

maharaj:aapne to humare man ki baat chin li

aryawardhan:to phir theek hai maharaj hum sia ka haath dharam aur antara ka haath veer ke liye maagte hai

sia apne pitaji se milne vahaan aati hai aur un dono ki baatein sun leti hai aur sia hawa ki tarah antara ko ye baat batane pahuchti hai aur dekhti hai ki dharam veer bhi vahin hai

sia:achha hua aap sab yahi mil gaye hume tum sab ko ek khushkabari sunani hai

antara:kya jaldi batao intezar nahi ho raha hai humse

sia:pitaji ne............pitaji ne..........pitaji ne.........

antara and veer: aage bhi bologi ya nahi

sia:pitaji ne humara rishta dharam ke saath tay kar diya hai

antara:kya sach mein humein lagta hai ki hum to aaj khushi pagal hi ho jaenge

sia:aage to suno

antara:aur bhi hai

sia:haan humare saath saath tumhara aur veer ka rishta bhi tay ho gaya hai

antara and veer:nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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Precap: Veer n Antara plans for something to escape from marriage n arrangement of veer antara dharam sia engagement

plzzzzzzzz do comment guys
n next update will be probably next week

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