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just_in

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Posted: 16 years ago

#181

What r those two upto?😉 Can't wait for the next part. Hurry up 😛 And yes ranny shaitain hi acha hain, who else is going to provide the comedy.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#182

hmm really nice, commenting after a long time TT, cant wait for the next part to see what cooking

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talkativetaurus

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Posted: 16 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: just_in
What r those two upto?😉 Can't wait for the next part. Hurry up 😛 And yes ranny shaitain hi acha hain, who else is going to provide the comedy.

lol see the next part for tht .. hehe ... oh yeh i ll keep him shaitan okies ... much shaitani left of tht guy!

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talkativetaurus

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Posted: 16 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: pinkykhan
hmm really nice, commenting after a long time TT, cant wait for the next part to see what cooking

thanks pinky for ur comments 😃

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talkativetaurus

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Posted: 16 years ago

#185

Part 8

Sadhana opens the door, Aalekh gets up from the sofa, Ranveer turns to see her, Ragini goes to her.

Ragini: Sadhana tum thik to hona? (she wipes sadhanas tears)

Aalekh: (with her head fully down) i m really sorry sadi ... main tumhe promise karta hu main aisi galti kabhi nahi karunga. i promise.

Sadhana just lks at him. Looking at both Ragini and Aalekh, Ranveer feels the main culprit were neither Ragini nor Aalekh it was himself. He goes towards Sadhana.

Ranveer: Bhabs, mujhe bhi maaf kardo. Actually asli gunehgaar to main hu. maine hi AB ko jhooth bolkar party me le gaya. saari galti meri hai.aapko chahiye to mujhse naraz ho jao. mujhe jitna maarna hai maro.

Sadhana: (lks at Aalekh) lekin dance karna ... (ranveer interrupts)

Ranveer: woh bhi maine hi majboor kiya. woh to bilkul nahi aa rahe the dance karne. chalo ab apna gussa bhool jao aur muskurao.

he takes sadhanas hand and smiles at ragini giving her a sign to do something who is angry nw with ranveer. ragini takes aalekhs hand and they both keep their hand on each other. sadi lks at this and goes in her room. meanwhile ranveers phone rings. its from sharmas house.

Koshi: arey ranveer beta tum ghar aa gaye. ye ragini kahan reh gai.

Ranveer: arey haan aunty woh yahi hai. aap fikar na kare main use chod dunga. hamara assignment baki reh gaya tha. sorry aunty.

Ragini: (thinks) oh no! maa bauji kya sochenge. mujhe nikalna hoga. (she just bids Saalekh. but does not say anything to Ranveer n starts rushing when..) OUCH! (ranveer holds her hand tightly from behind) ranny mera haath chodo.

Ranveer: nahi chodunga. chalo main tumhe ghar chod du.

Ragini: koi zarurat nahi hai. main akeli chali jaungi. mujhe tumhari koi zarurat nahi hai.

Ranveer: ok come on rags i m sorry . bas.

Ragini : (makes faces immintating him) i m sorry hmph.. isse kuch nahi hota. galti khud karte ho aur gussa mujh par. (she got little tears from her eyes)

Ranveer: hey rags.. ab rona nahi .. pls (wipes them) bola na i m sorry... tum mujhe maf nahi karogi to mujhe neend nahi aayegi yaar. chalo ab smile karo

Ragini got a small smile on her face n they hugged like grt friends.

Next day after lectures in the college:

Ragini and Ranveer are just moving to the car, Ragini is walking very slowly.
After his 'so called important phone' ranveer looks at her. She is thinking something and is in her own world.

Ranveer: rags? kya hua. what r u thinking man?

Ragini: haan?! oh sorry. kuch nahi. ranny mujhe lagta hai jiju aur sadhana ke beech ki problem ab bhi khatm nahi hui hai.

Ranveer: oh comeone rags. hamne kal un dono ko milwa diya. ab woh chapter khatm. bhabs ab maan gai.

Ragini: tum hamesha buddhu hi rahoge. sadhana mani magar phir bhi us tarah nahi jis tarha hona chahiye. ek kaam karo tum mujhe ghar le jao. mujhe jiju se milna hai.

Ranveer: par AB to ab office me hai.

Ragini: oh right! to office me phone laga do. atleast pooch to lu .. aaj sub kuch thik tha ki nahi.

Ranveer was about to call aalekh when his phone rings and it was aalekh.

Ranveer: oh wow. rags tumne AB ko yaad kiya aur unka hi phone. ek min .. (to aalekh) hello AB. kaise ho. rags ko ? ek mins.

Ragini: namaste jiju. kaise hai aap.

Aalekh: main thik hu ragini. tum zara kahim kone me akele aa jao to.

Ragini: jiju main akele hi hu. ranveer apne dost ke saath busy hai. aap pehle mujhe bataiye ki aaj ghar me sadhana ke saath sab kaisa tha.

Aalekh: ragini woh to mujhse gairo ki tarah baat karti hai. aisa lagta hai meri padosi hai.

Ragini: haha. jiju aap fikar na karo.

Aalekh: fikar hai isliye to tumhe phone kiya hai. suno meri baat dhyaan se.

The voice goes MUTE.

Ragini: arey waah jiju yeh to badi kamaal ki cheez hai. aap tension nahi lo. Main ghar jakar ye kaam kardungi. bas aap ready rehna raatko. baki ki zimmedari meri.

Aalekh: thanks ragini. aur haan tumhari ye chillar party se bhi help chahiye ho to bata dena.

Ragini: chillar party ?😕 oh Ranny ,rocky aur angel?😆😆😆

Aalekh: haan . main rakhta hu. apna khayal rakhna.

When Ranveer comes.

Ranveer: ho gai jiju saali ki baatein.

Ragini: haaan... ab chalo ghar .. aur Sadhana se kehna ki shaam ko koi program na banaye main ghar aaungi. thik hai?

Ranveer: ok babaa.. ab chalo.

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End. Can u guess what is the suspense? Pls leave ur comments.

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@born-leader

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Posted: 16 years ago

#186

Oh...!!! The part was great...!!! 👏 I wasn't that much the last week, I thought I have missed a part....!!!! Anyways, RagVir were sweet....!!!! "Chillar Party" 😆 Nice....!!!! Hmm, what is the plan??????????? A part by Alekh....!!!

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sumeya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#187

hey nice

so much suspense cnt wait

wat is goin to happen

pls cont soon

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talkativetaurus

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Posted: 16 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: born-leader
Oh...!!! The part was great...!!! 👏 I wasn't that much the last week, I thought I have missed a part....!!!! Anyways, RagVir were sweet....!!!! "Chillar Party" 😆 Nice....!!!! Hmm, what is the plan??????????? A part by Alekh....!!!

thanks a lot sis!
i m gonna post the next part soon. cos its going to be vacation na. and i want to open this suspense. not like the time i took for the last few parts... keep reading... 😃